48 第三部分 读后续写 第二节 第6讲 续写热点话题 人与动物 课件-《高考快车道》2026版高三英语一轮总复习 北师大版

第三部分

写作专题突破读后续写第二节

热点突破第6讲续写热点话题人与动物(2023·浙江1月卷)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Iwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriend'sfarminwesternWashington．Iparkedmycaroutsidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmanyyears．Anoiseatawindowcaughtmyattention，soIenteredit．Itwasahummingbird(蜂鸟)，desperatelytryingtoescape．Shewascoveredinspider-webs(蛛网)andwasbarelyabletomoveherwings．SheceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup．Withthebirdinmycuppedhand，Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin．Thebrokenwindowglasswasthelikelyanswer．Istuffedapieceofclothintotheholeandtookheroutside，closingthedoorsecurelybehindme．WhenIopenedmyhand，thebirddidnotflyaway；shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes．Iremovedthestickyspider-websthatcoveredherheadandwings．Still，shemadenoattempttofly．Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolongandwastootired？Ortoothirsty?AsIcarriedheruptheblackberry-linedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawaterbottle，shebegantomove．Istopped，andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediatelyflyaway．Hovering(悬停)，sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface．Foraverylongmoment，thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes，turningherheadfromsidetoside．Thensheflewquicklyoutofsight．Duringthecookout，Itoldmyhostsaboutthehummingbirdincident．Theypromisedtofixthewindow．AsIwasdeparting，myfriendswalkedmetomycar．Iwasstandingbythecarwhenahummingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupandbeganhovering．Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntilshecametome．Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes，thenletoutasqueakingcallandwasgone．Foramoment，allwerespeechless．Thensomeonesaid，“Shemusthavecometosaygood-bye．”注意：续写词数应为150个左右。Afewweekslater，Iwenttothefarmagain．____________________________________________________________________________Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared．_________________________________________________________________Ⅰ．梳理原文细节，厘清篇章结构。Ⅱ．依据首句提示，构思后续情节。第一段：由续写第一段及续写第二段的提示语可知，该段应该描述我途经那间挤奶房时回想起上一回拯救蜂鸟的经历，以及享用烧烤的过程。第二段：由续写第二段的提示语可知，该段应该描述两方面的内容：一是蜂鸟与我之间的互动交流；二是关于人与动物关系的启示。A

few

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later，I

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farm

again．Havingparkedthecar，Iwanderedontheblackberry-linedpathagain．Istillrememberedmyfriends'promisesoIwentpasttheabandonedmilkinghousetoseeiftheyhadfixedthebrokenwindow．Tomysatisfaction，noothertinycreatureswouldmeetthistroubleanymore．AsIapproachedthefarm，myfriendsinvitedmetothecookout．Withthesmellofroastingmeatfloatingintheair，wechattedandlaughedmerrilyaroundthepicnictabletillthesunset．Theeveningglowspreadingacrossthefarm，itwastimeforustosaygoodbye，sowewenttotheparkinglottogether．I

was

just

about

to

leave

when

the

hummingbird

appeared．Withasqueakingcall，shedivedtowardsme，hoveredbeforemyfacelookingatmewithherbrighteyes，andthenstoppedonmyleftshoulder．Ipattedheronthebackwhichwascoveredbycolorfulfeathers．AndItookoutmywaterbottle，tryingtogivehersomewater．Contentandjoyful，sheflewabout2metersabovetheground，turningherheadfromsidetosideasifexpressinghergratitudeforsavingherlifetomeagain．Atthatmoment，Ifeltamixtureofhappinessandexcitementwellingupinmyheart，tearsrollingdownmycheeks．Thesinkingsuncastawarmglowovermeandthebird，witnessingthewonderfulconnectionbetweenhumansandanimals．1．Thedogturnedaround，watchingus，withhistailswingingupanddown．这只狗转过身来，上下摆动着尾巴，注视着我们。2．Atfirstthebirdstuckhisheadoutofhiscagejusttotakeasipofwaterandfillhismouthwithfood．起初，这只鸟把头探出笼子，只是为了喝一口水，往嘴里塞满食物。3．AfraidImighthurtthelovelysmallcreature，Iautomaticallyletoutacrytostopmyhorse．害怕会伤害这个可爱的小生物，我不假思索地发出一声喊叫来阻止我的马。4．Confusedandfrightenedatmyapproach，thewolfbackedoff，pullinghardthechain．狼被我的靠近弄得既困惑又害怕，向后退却，使劲地拉着链子。5．Birdsweresinging，theairwasfi