Unit1Backtoschool俱乐部提案（单元写作讲义）英语译林版

必修第一册Unit1Backtoschool关于新俱乐部提案Writeaproposalforanewclub单元写作早知道写作任务本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于新俱乐部的提案。提案是一种正式的建议或计划，它的目的是让更多的读者同意并参与你的计划。提案的结构如下：第一段：引出话题，目的；第二段：提出具体建议；第三段：提出希望常用表达1.I’mgladtohearthenewsthatyouwantto….2.I’mwritingtooffermyproposalssinceyouareseekinghelpfor…3.It’simportanttoappealtomorestudentsto…4.It’sagreatideatomakethemostof…5….shouldbedesignedcarefully…6.Isincerelyhopethat…【必备句式】（1）活动目的①Tohelpthestudentsknowmoreaboutplants,wedecidetosetupaNatureClub.为了帮助学生更多地了解植物，我们决定成立一个自然俱乐部。②Toprovideanopportunitytomakefriends,wedecidetostartaFootballClub.为了提供一个交友的机会，我们决定成立一个足球俱乐部。③Toimprovereadingandwritingskills,aBookLoverClubwassetupbyourteacher.为了提高阅读和写作技能，我们的老师成立了一个爱书人俱乐部。（2）活动计划①We'llhaveanoutingtoourschoolbotanicalgardenandlearnthediversityofplants.我们会去学校的植物园郊游，了解植物的多样性。②ReadashortstorythatwelikeeverySaturdayafternoon每周六下午读一个我们喜欢的短篇小说。③MeetonweekendstomunicatewitheachotherinEnglish.周末见面，用英语互相交流。④Organizestudentstodosomevolunteerwork.组织学生做一些志愿工作。（3）宣传方式①Putupanoticeontheschoolwebsitetoinformtheballetloversofjoiningtheclub.校网站上张贴通知，通知芭蕾舞爱好者加入俱乐部。②Makepostersandputthemuparoundtheschool.制作海报并在学校周围张贴。【必背模板】模板1Dear______,Havingknownwithdelightthat____________.Iamwritingtooffermyproposals.Firstofall,Ithinkthepurposeoftheclubisto_________________.Besides,asforitsactivities,Ithinkitshouldcontainthefollowingparts.Itshouldoffer________________.Thereshouldalsobe____________.Bytheway,clubmembersshould_________________Lastbutnotleast,variouswaysshouldbemadethemostofto_________________.Atlast____________________________.Yours__________模板2ProposalforanewclubClubname：______________________________________________________________________Clubleader：_____________________________________________________________________Meetingtime：____________________________________________________________________Clubaim：_______________________________________________________________________Clubactivities：___________________________________________________________________Materialsneeded：_________________________________________________________________Planforfindingnewmembers：______________________________________________________Signed：________________________________________________________________________【升级策略】1.一份好的提案应该注意把握三点：（1）提案一般由标题、正文、结尾三个部分组成，正文包括提案的类型、目的、活动计划、注意事项、宣传方式等；（2）了使提案易于阅读，需要把不同类型的信息进行分类；（3）提案的语言表达要简短、真诚、正式；表达多使用祈使句和动词不定式等。2.写作流程图说明写信目的提案的类型、目的、活动计划、注意事项、宣传方式提出建议提出希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复为了丰富同学们的课外活动,校学生会决定成立一个自行车俱乐部(CyclingClub),现向全体学生征求建议。假如你是李华,请根据以下提示,用英语写一份关于自行车俱乐部的建议。1.自行车俱乐部的目的;2.俱乐部的主要活动内容:每周一次的基础训练,有教师辅导,安排在课外体育活动时间;3.其他事项:器材自备,俱乐部的宣传等。注意:1.建议应包括以上所有信息,可适当发挥;词数80个左右。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________审题1．文体：应用文提案（建立俱乐部）。2．时态：一般现在时和一般将来时为主。3．人称：第一人称。谋篇第一段：建立俱乐部的目的。第二段：主要活动的内容。第三段：其他相关事项，祝愿和问候。遣词造句【核心词汇】1.高兴地__________2.创立骑行俱乐部____________3．提供我的建议___________4.保持健康________________5．放松自己________________6.关于___________7.如果有可能___________8.顺便说一下___________9.充分利用___________10．帮助___________【答案】1.withdelight2.setupaCyclingClub3．offerone’sproposal4.keepfit5．8.byxoneself6.asfor/to7.ifpossible8.bytheway9.makethemost/bestof10．beofsomehelp【连词成句】I.完成句子thattheStudents’Union1.很高兴得知学生会已经决定建立自行车俱乐部。IknowthattheStudents’Unionhasdecidedto.

2.我写信提出我的建议。_____________________________.

3.它应该每周提供一次基础培训。Itshouldonceaweek.

4.基础培训将由老师指导。Thebasictraining.

5.我们应该充分利用各种方式使所有学生了解我们的俱乐部。Weshouldtomakeourclubknownbyallstudents.

【句式升级】6.用非谓语动词升级句1和句2___________________________________________________________________________________________7.用定语从句升级句3和句4___________________________________________________________________________________________8.用被动语态升级句5___________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】1.withdelight,setupaCyclingClub2.Iamwritingtooffermyproposals.3.offerbasictraining4.willbeguidedbyteachers5.makethemost/bestofvarious/avarietyofways6.Havingknown/KnowingwithdelightthattheStudents’UnionhasdecidedtosetupaCyclingClub,Iamwritingtooffermyproposals.

7.Itshouldofferbasictrainingonceaweekwhichwillbeguidedbyteachers.

8.Variouswaysshouldbemadethemostoftomakeourclubknownbyallstudents.

组句成篇用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】DearPresident,IamLiHua.HavingknownwithdelightthattheStudents’UnionhasdecidedtosetupaCyclingClub,Iamwritingtooffermyproposals.Firstofall,Ithinkthepurposeoftheclubistohelpusstudentskeepfitandrelaxourselves.Besides,asforitsactivities,Ithinkitshouldcontainthefollowingparts.Itshouldofferbasictrainingonceaweekwhichwillbeguidedbyteachers.Itcanbearrangedduringthetimeofafterclassphysicalactivities.Thereshouldbeanoutdoorcyclingtripifpossible.Bytheway,clubmembersshouldgettheequipmentreadybythestudentsthemselves.Lastbutnotleast,variouswaysshouldbemadethemostoftomakeourclubknownbyallstudents.Atlast,Ihopemyproposalscanbeofsomehelpforyou.Yours,LiHua【第一部分基础题】​​一、词性转换训练​​（一）将下列动词转换为名词或形容词，用于提案句式：1.propose→(n.)______2.improve→(n.)______（二）用括号内单词的正确形式填空：1.Theteacher​​(remend)thatstudents​​(take)​​notesduringlectures.2.It’s​​(essence)​​(balance)studyandrest.​​【参考答案】（一）1.propose2.improvementtive(adj.);2.improvement(n.)（二）1.remended,（should）take;2.essential,tobalance​​二、句子仿写改写​​​​基础层​​：结构调整1.原句：Youshouldjointheclub.Ithelpsyoumakefriends.→合并为复合句：______→用非谓语动词改写：______2.原句：Ithinkyoucanpracticemore.→转为委婉建议：______​​【参考答案】Youshouldjointheclub,whichhelpsyoumakefriends.Practicingmoreisadvisableforyou.Isuggestthatyoupracticemore./Whynotpracticemore?​​提分层​​：高阶句型1.原句：Youmustfinishtheprojectontime.→虚拟语气：______→倒装句：______2.原句：Readingwidelyisgood.→强调重要性：______​​【参考答案】1.Istronglyremendthatyou(should)finishtheprojectontime.Notonlyshouldyoufinishtheprojectontime,butalsoyoushouldcheckdetailscarefully.2.Thereisnodenyingthatextensivereadingplaysavitalroleinlanguagelearning.​​三、翻译句子​​​​要求​​：用提案常用句式翻译，注意语气委婉。1.得知你想创建一个新的俱乐部,我非常开心。.2.我写信是为了提供我的建议,因为你在寻求帮助来建立一个俱乐部。.3.吸引更多的学生参加活动是很重要的。.4.充分利用学校的资源是个好主意。.5.俱乐部活动应仔细设计,并为足够的材料需求做好充分的准备。.6.我真诚地希望得到您的批准和指导，使这个想法成为现实。.​​【参考答案】1．I’mgladtohearthenewsthatyouwanttofoundanewclub.2．I’mwritingtooffermyproposalssinceyouareseekinghelpforsettingupaclub.3．It’simportanttoappealtomorestudentstotakepartinactivities.4．It’sagreatideatomakethemostofschoolresources.5．Clubactivitiesshouldbedesignedcarefullywithgoodpreparationsforenoughmaterialneeds.6．Isincerelyhopeforyourapprovalandguidancetobringthisideatolife.【第二部分提升题】1．假如你是国际部学生李华，你和同学们准备创建一个传统文化社团，请给校长Mr.Mark写一封提案信，请求他的同意。内容包括：1.来信目的；2.社团规划；3.表达希望。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearMr.Mark,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourstruly,LiHua【佳作欣赏】DearMr.Mark,IamLiHua,astudentfromInternationalDepartment.IamwritingtoproposetheestablishmentofaTraditionalCultureClubwiththesupportofmyfellowclassmates.TheclubaimstopromoteChinesetraditionalculturethroughvariousactivitiessuchasworkshops,lectures,andculturalexchanges.Webelievetheclubwillenrichstudents'understandingandappreciationofourheritage.Isincerelyhopeforyourapprovalandguidancetobringthisideatolife.Thankyouforconsideringourproposal.Bestwishes.LiHua2．你代表学校参加青少年科技公益大赛，需以“ASmallInvention,ABigChange!”为题，写一篇提案介绍你设计的作品，内容包括：1.设计意图；2.功能特点；3.公益价值。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.按如下格式作答，题目已为你写好。ASmallInvention,ABigChange!___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣赏】ASmallInvention,ABigChange!I’mgladtointroducemyinvention,aSmartRecyclingBin,designedtoguideuserstosortwastecorrectlyandinspireecofriendlyhabits.EquippedwithacameraandAI,itidentifiestrashtypes(plastic,paper,glass)andlightsupthematchingbin.Avoicereminderteachesrecyclingrulesinfunways.Thisinventionsolvestwoissues:messypublicbinsandlowrecyclingrates.Byreducinglandfillwaste,itprotectssoilandwater.Forschoolsandparks,itturnsrecyclingintoaneducationalgame,raisingecoawareness.Lightweightandsolarpowered,itrequiresnoextraenergy.Smallactions,likedroppingabottleintotherightbin,canleadtocleanercitiesandhealthiermunities.Let’smakerecyclingeffortlessforeveryone!3.假定你是李华，你校英文社团正面向社团成员征集“快乐周末(HappyWeekend)”的活动方案。请你给社团指导老师Laura写一封提议信。内容包括：1.介绍你的方案；2.说明你的理由。注意：1.写作的词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearMs.Laura,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestregards,LiHua【佳作欣赏】DearMs.Laura,Ihopethisletterfindsyouwell.Asamemberofourschool’sEnglishclub,Iamwritingtoproposea“HappyWeekend”activityforourclubmembers.IproposetoorganizeanoutdoorpicnicandEnglishspeakinggamesession.ItwillbeheldontheupingSaturdayatCentralPark.Firstly,thisactivitycanprovideanexcellentopportunityforclubmemberstoknoweachotherbetter.Then,byengaginginEnglishspeakinggames,wecanimprovespokenEnglish.What’smore,spendingtimeoutdoorscanhelpusreducestress,whichisbeneficialforourmentalandphysicalhealth.Iwouldbemorethanhappytotakechargeofthepreparationsforthisevent.Lookingforwardtoyourapprovalandsuggestions.Bestregards,LiHua（2025·江苏南通·高三模拟预测）假定你是李华，为配合学校将于下月举办的科技节，你校英语报设置了“科技节献策”栏目。请你以“MyProposalfortheScienceandTechnologyFestival”为题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1．你的献策；2．献策理由。注意：1．写作词数应为80个左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。MyProposalfortheScienceandTechnologyFestival___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】MyProposalfortheScienceandTechnologyFestivalAsagr