英语应用文教学课件

①Goodmorning!Welcometoourschool!I'mLiHua,thepresidentofourschoolstudentunion.I’mgladtomeetallofyouandtellactivitiesarrangement!First,I'llleadyoutotheScienceHallat9o'clock.Thereyoucanseelaboratoriesofourschool.Thenat10o'clock,youcangotovisitTeachingHallandknowaboutstudents'dailyclasses.Afterlunch,youcanwalkaroundthewholeschoolandexchangeyourideaswithourschoolstudents.Haveagoodtime!Hopethatourschoolwon'tletyoudown!语言较为自然，较符合此类文体要求，有些语言错误，但意义传达不受影响，二段活动安排不够饱满，有记流水账嫌疑②Ladiesandgentlemen,It'smyhonortostandhererepresentingthe

studentuniontoextendwelcometoyou.NowI'mofferingsomeinformationoftheactivityarrangements.Firstly,wewillshowyouaroundourschool,learningourschoolhistoryandculture.AndthenyouwillcatchaChineseopera,whichwillundoubtedlygiveyouatasteofthecharmofChineseculture.ThenyouwillvisittheTaiLakemuseumwhereyoucanexperienceancientfisherman'slife.Idohopetheseactivitieswillleaveyouafabulousmemory.③Distinguishedguests，I'mLiHua,it‘smyprivilegetostandhere,representingourschool,conveyingmycordialwelcometoyou.Alecture,aimingtointroduceChinesehistorywillbeconductedatthebeginningofyourvisit.Inthefollowingdays,colorfulcourseswillserveasplatformswhereyoucanattendin-depthcomprehensionofChineseschoollife.It'searnestlyhopedthatwecouldfeastyoureyeswithfruitfulactivitiesandestablishintimatefriendship.Hopingyoucanenjoyyourvisithere!Thanksforlistening.要求的内容均已经包含，意义传达清晰，但文风与该题文风要求不符。（12分）④Dearfellowstudents，I'mLiHua,chairmanofstudentunion.It'sagreatprivilegeformetodeliveraspeechonbehalfofallthestudentstoextendoursincerestwelcometoexchangestudentsfromNewZealand.Nextweekwilldefinitelybeacolorfulandenjoyableweek.Awell-organizedEnglishrecitationcontestisarrangedfornextMonday,whichwillprovideuswithamarvelousopportunitytohaveatasteofthecharmofEnglishlanguage.Inaddition,it’sscheduledtoholdanexhibitionfeaturingtraditionalChineseart,includingcalligraphy,papercutting,andChinesebrushpainting.Wishyouafulfillingandfruitfulweekahead!（102词）（13-2）⑤Dearstudents,It’smyprivilegetostandhereandextendmycordialwelcometoallofyouonbehalfofourschool.We’vearrangedvariousactivitiesforyou.We’llshowyouaroundourcampusfirstandbriefyouonthehistoryofourschool.Afterthat,specialpaper-cuttingcourseswillbeheldtoofferyouaglimpseoftraditionalChineseculture.Also,aswithmusicfestivalrunninginfullswing，如火如荼进行中it‘shopedyouwouldenjoythefeastforyourearsandevensingwithourstudents.It'sgreatlyhopedthatyoucouldharvestapleasantandfruitfulexperienceinourschool.Thankyou.(109词）（13-2）⑦Tothenewstudents，I’mLiHua,chairmanofthestudentsunion,onbehalfofourschool,Iextendmycordialwelcometoyouandwishyouallthebest.Aimedatformingadeepinsightintoourschool,variousactivitieswillbeheldforyou.RangingfromlearningChinesecharacterstomakingdeliciousChinesefoodinperson.Additionally,thetraditionalChineseoperaisscheduledtobeheldnextweek,whichisboundtoaddfueltoyourenthusiasm.Makeyourlifeeasyandcomfortablehere.Now,let'sstartthejourney!Bestwishes,thanks.内容完整，言语有些许问题，称谓不当。（10分）⑧Dearfriends,I’mLiHua,onbehalfofourschool.Here,I’mshowingmywarmestwelcometoyoutocometomyschool.Now,I’mtellingyousomeinformationabouttheactivitiesinthefollowingdays.Tobeginwith,wewillhaveaspeechcompetitionabout“WhywelearnEnglish”intheafternoon.What’smore,asportsmeetingwillbeheldtomorrow.Andyourparticipationiswelcomed.Last,wewillshowyouaroundtheprettyschoolwhereweliveandstudy.

Ihopeyouwouldlovemyschool.Wishyouanicevisit.点评：覆盖了所有主要内容，语言简单，但不影响意义表达。次重点添加不够合理，语言不妥帖现象。（9分）⑨Dearteachersandstudents,I’mLiHua,I’mheretoexpressourheartfeltwelcometothestudentsfromNewZelandonbehalfofallstudents.Tostartwith,we’resodelightedforyourcomethatwehavearrangedmanymeaningfulactivities,whichincludesholdingaGala,eatingtogetherfordinnerandsinginganddancing.Moreover,asit’syourfirstthere,wewillsparenoefforttomakeyoufeelathome.Onnoaccountwillwedisappointyou!Hopefully,youcanhaveagoodtimethere.Wishyougoodluck.信息传达对象未正确对接，第二条不是具体的活动安排，语言表达错误。（8分）⑩Myfellowschoolmates,I’mLiHua,I’mheretoconveymyearnestwelcomeforyourvisitandbriefyouonthoseelabroate(elaborate详尽的）activitiesonbehalfofourschool.Asscheduled,afleamarketfeaturingChinesetraditionalculturewillbeheldtomorrow,whereyoucanbuysmallidemsatalowpriseaswellasgetaglimpseofsplendidculture.ItalsoneverfailstopracticeyourChineseduringthemarket.Besides,highrecommandedistheperformanceorganizedbystudentsfromtwoschools,includingrangingfromGuzhengtoorganperformance.Bestwishesforourfriendshipandenjoyyourself.点评：基本达到了预期的写作目的，没有遗漏主要要点，但称呼不妥，主要活动的安排衔接不太好，有几处表达和拼写错误8分。（8分）⑪Dearinternationfellows,Thrilledaboutyourvisit.I,onbehalfofourschool,wouldliketoextendmysincerewelcomeforyour