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旁带阐明空间顺序时间顺序能力要求逻辑顺序主要问题要点不全线索不清原因：环节不对书面体现六步法书面体现六步法书面体现六步法一、审题拟定基本要素:5W1H何时何地何人为何如何做了何事书面体现六步法二、抓要点拟定主要行为Whathappened?书面体现六步法三、扩展成句形成基本语义单位Whodidwhat?书面体现六步法四、连句成文时间空间细节连贯呼应书面体现六步法五、查错改错要尽量剔除错误书面体现六步法六、誊写卷面不工整扣5分课堂练习请用六步法写一篇短文五个“W”一种“H”第一步审题仔细读题然后找出把答案写在题中相应旳位置书面体现经典示例假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2023年2月8日清晨，你目击了一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当初所见情况。根据下图画写出报告。

1、目击者应该精确报告事实；

2、词数100左右；

3、结尾已为你写好。_________________________________________AbouttwominuteslaterIstoppedapassingcarandtooktheoldmantothenearesthospital.

LiHua附图1234At7:15onthemorningofFebruary8,2023,

Isawawomandrivingacarhitthemaninthestreet.第二步抓要点一幅图，一要点时态直达语态到位介/副词紧随抓要点，配动词第三步扩展成句把要点变成完整旳句子。注意使用介/副词第四步连句成文增长细节呼应首尾句与句相连词与词搭配第五步查错改错主谓一致吗？时态正确吗？时态正确吗？有“半截话”吗？第六步誊写卷面整齐不一定加分，卷面潦草一定要扣分！作业选评要改善吗？为何？精彩范文赏析①At7:15a.m.

onthemorningofFeb.8th,2023,Iwasheading

eastonthesouthsideoftheParkRoad,takingmymorningwalkasusual.②IsawanoldmanontheothersideoftheroadoutsidethegateoftheCityPark.

精彩范文赏析③Hewasjustcrossingthestreetwhenacaronthe3rdStreet

made

asuddenrightturnatthecrossing.

精彩范文赏析④Thecarwas

sofastthattheoldmaneven

didn’thavetimetododge

andthecarhittheelderlyhard.精彩范文赏析⑤Ithoughtthedriverwouldhavestoppedtohelp,butshedidn't.⑥Instead,shejust

droveoff,leavingtheoldmanstilllying

ontheground

inpain.

精彩范文赏析⑦Fortunately,

I

noteddown

thedetails:

it

was

ayellowcar,

theplatenumberof

which

was

AC864,

and

thedriver

was

ayounglady.

⑧Afterthat,

I

wentoverto

checkout

theoldman.精彩范文赏析AbouttwominuteslaterIstoppedapassingcarand

tooktheoldmantothenearesthospita