Unit2Sportsculture（人物描写）-高二英语单元写作深度指导（译林版2020）

Unit2Sportsculture单元写作深度指导（译林版2020）Makingafactfileaboutasportsperson（人物描写）单元话题真题展示考情预测人物描写2023全国甲卷“对社会有突出贡献的人物”是高中英语新课标主题语境内容要求之一，也是高考英语常考话题之一。它包括个人情况简介和名人事迹介绍两个方面,这类文章通常以人物传记和逸闻趣事为主，目的是培养学生高尚的道德情操和帮助学生树立正确的人生观和价值观。Thearticleofcharacterintroductiongenerallyadoptsthethreeparagraphmodeof"totalonepointonetotal".Thefirstparagraphisbriefandtothepoint.Getstraighttothepoint,gostraighttothetheme,brieflyintroducetheidentityofthecharactersandtheirachievements;Thesecondparagraphintroducesthemainexperiencesofthecharacters:Thethirdparagraphsummarizesthefulltextwithoneortwosentencestoachievethebeginningandendoftheecho,finishingtheeffect.你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.人物简介及事迹；2.意义或启示。段落内容句子设计开头段引入话题（介绍人物的基本情况，如外貌、年龄等）...sformyfavoritefigure,itmustbe

...至于我最喜欢的人物，那一定是......②

AmongtheoutstandingfiguresinChinesehistory,

...thepersonIrespectmostis...在中国历史上的杰出人物中，我最尊敬的人是

......。主体段具体介绍（包括人物的性格、事迹等）①Iadmirehimbecauseofhiscontributionstotheworld.因为他对世界的贡献我很钦佩他。②Infact,hewasamanfullofimagination,creationandwisdom.

事实上，他是一个富有想象力、创造力和智慧的人。③

Sheisof

mediumheight,withlong

and

blonde

hair.她中等身材，披着金色的长发。结尾段总结全文（对所介绍的人物进行整体评价）①Fromhim,Irealizethesecretofsuccessis

...,

Ido

thankhim

forwhat

hedidforme.

从他身上，我意识到成功的秘密是......，

我确实感谢他为我所做的一切。②Settingagreatexampletous

,shefullydeservesouradmirationandrespect.

她为我们树立了好榜样，完全值得我们的钦佩和尊敬。人物描写句式●Bornin…,hewasagreat…,who…●…,(whois)anoutstandingscientist,wasborn…●Whenhewasaboy,heshowedgreatinterestin…●Beingpoor,hehadtoleaveschoolattheageof...●Asateacher,sheiskind,patientandhelpful,soallofuslikeher.●Heisconsideredtobeoneofthegreatscientists.●Hewasconfidentenoughtosolvedifferentproblemsbyhimself.●Withhishardwork,heoncewon…●Asawarmheartedperson,healwaysdoeseverythinginhispowertohelpthosewhoareinneed.●Hedevotedhimselftoscientificresearchandmadegreatcontributionstohiscountry.●Hewillberememberedforhiscontributionsto…人物描写词句模板1.背景:....wasbornin/intoapoor/richfamilyin..;.when..wasyoung;attheageof..;...spentone'schildhoodin..;hisparentsarebothfamousmusicians...2.外貌:beautiful,pretty,goodlooking，ordinarylooking,oddlooking,handsome,strong,fat,thin..3.品质或个性:mitted,kind,determined，gentle,considerate，optimistic,easygoing，warmhearted,hardworking，responsible,patient,helpful,friendly,generous...4.爱好:begoodat;haveagreatgiftfor;bekeenon;beinterestedin;befondof;becrazyabout...5.教育背景:graduatedfrom;got/earneda(n)..degree;majoredin;wentabroadtofurtherone'sstudy...6.经历和成就:devoteoneselfto;dosthwithgreatdetermination;fightfor;makeupone'smindtodosth;bedeterminedtodosth;overemanydifficulties;tryone'sbesttodosth;enjoywidespreadpopularity;winfameas;makegreatcontributionsto...7.评价:oneofthebest;themostimportant;oneoftheheroesofthe20thcentury;setagoodexampleto;istheprideof;beregardedas...;berecognizedas..;berespected/honoredas.;sbstilllivesinone'sheart...话题词块1．bebornintoawealthyfamily出生于富裕人家2．attheageof

在……岁时3．inone’steens/twenties

在某人十多岁/二十多岁时4．a16yearoldgirl

一个16岁的女孩5．aboywithgreatability

一个能干的男孩6．apromisingwriter

一位有前途的作家7．sparenoefforttodosth.

不遗余力地去做某事8．haveawiderangeofinterests

兴趣广泛9．getonwellwith

与……相处融洽10．aconsiderateperson

体贴别人的人11．bewillingtohelpothers

乐于助人12．beexpertin/at

善于……13．beingoodhealth/shape/condition身体健康14．depend/relyon

依靠；依赖15．gainscholarship

获得奖学金16．gain/winthefirstprize/place

获得一等奖/第一名17．beawardedwiththetitleof

获得……的称号/头衔18．makegreatcontributionsto

对……做出巨大贡献19．setagoodexampletosb.

为某人树立好榜样20．toone’scredit

值得赞扬的是话题佳句1．Hisgreatpersonalityhasgainedtheirrespect.他伟大的品质赢得了他们的尊重。2．Shemakesapromisethatshewillbehaveherselfandsetagoodexampletoschoolmates.她承诺，她会表现好的，并为同学们树立好榜样。3．Mymother,ahousewifeof45yearsold,ismyfavoriteperson.Sheisalwaysdressedveryelegantlyandneatlywithasmileofcontentmentonherface.我最喜爱的人是我的妈妈，一个45岁的家庭主妇。她总是穿着整齐优雅，脸上带着满足的微笑。4．Afterreadingthepassage,Iwaslostinthought.Frommyownperspective，howeverbusyparentsare，theyshouldmaketimetoacpanytheirchildren.读完这篇文章，我陷入了沉思。从我个人的角度看，不管父母有多忙，他们都应该挤出时间陪伴他们的孩子。5．Itremindsmeofmymotherwhohasbeendoingwhatevershecouldtoletmehavethebest.这使我想起了我的妈妈，她总是尽她所能给予我最好的。人物描写微语境(微语境1：历史人物—孔子）ConfuciusisawellknownfigureinChinesehistory.Histeachingsemphasizedtheimportanceofmoralvalues,respectforelders,andsocialharmony.Confuciustraveledthroughoutthecountry,impartinghiswisdomtocountlessdisciplesandleavingaprofoundimpactonChinesesociety.孔子是中国历史上著名的人物。他的教诲强调道德价值、尊重长辈和社会和谐的重要性。孔子周游全国，将他的智慧传授给了无数的弟子，对中国社会产生了深远的影响。ThesignificanceofConfuciuscannotbeoverstated.HisteachingsshapedthemoralandethicalfoundationofChineseculture,fosteringrespectforauthority,harmoniousrelationships,andthepursuitofknowledge.Eventoday,hisideascontinuetoguideindividualsandmunitiesinChinaandbeyond.孔子的意义非常重大。他的教诲塑造了中国文化的道德和伦理基础，培养了对权威的尊重、和谐的关系和对知识的追求。即使在今天，他的思想仍然指导着中国和世界各地的个人和社区。Confucius'slifeoffersvaluablelessons.Hisemphasisonselfcultivation,respectforelders.andthepursuitofknowledgeservesasaguidinglightinourfastpacedandinterconnectedworld.Histeachingsremindusoftheimportanceofintegrity,passionandsocialresponsibility.孔子的一生提供了宝贵的教训。他对自我修养、尊重长辈和追求知识的强调，在我们快节奏和相互联系的世界中起着指路明灯的作用。他的教诲提醒我们正直、同情和社会责任的重要性。（微语境2：推荐科学家）TuYouyoudevotedmostofhertimetofindingthecureformalaria.In2015.shewasawardedtheNobelPrizefordiscoveringartemisinin,whichisthekeytothetreatmentofmalaria.Sogreatishercontributiontotheworldthatshehasbeeanidolofmanypeople,includingme.Inspiredbyherdevotionandpersistence,Idecidedtostudyhardertorealizemydream.屠呦呦将大部分时间都投入到了寻找疟疾的治疗方法中。2015年，她因发现青蒿素而获得了诺贝尔奖，这是治疗疟疾的关键。她对世界的贡献如此巨大，以至于她成为了很多人的偶像，包括我。受到她的奉献和坚持的激励，我决定更加努力地学习来实现我的梦想。BorninapoorfamilyinGuangxi,Yuanhadastrongwilltotacklethehungercrisiswhenhewasyoung.Aftergraduation,hedevotedallhislifeinthelaboratoryandfarmuntilhedevelopedthehybridricesuccessfully,Hismodestyanddiligence.whichIadmiremost,haveadeepimpactonme.ItisfromhimthatIrealizewhatIamstrugglingisnotjustformyself,butthehappiness/welfareofthewholeworld.袁隆平出生在广西的一个贫困家庭，年轻时就有着解决饥饿危机的强烈愿望。毕业后，他将自己的一生都投入到了实验室和农场中，直到他成功地开发出了杂交水稻。他的谦虚和勤奋是我最欣赏的品质，对我产生了深刻的影响。正是从他身上，我意识到我所奋斗的不仅仅是为了自己，而是整个世界的幸福。（微语境3：发言稿—艺术家）Itismypleasuretosharewithyoutodayaboutmyfavoriteartist,VincentvanGogh.VanGoghwasaDutchpostimpressionistpainter,bestknownforhisvividandexpressiveuseofcolor.Oneofhismostfamousworksis“StarryNight"whichdepictsthenightskyoveravillageinFrance.Theswirlingstarsandboldbrushstrokesmakethepaintingetolife,conveyingasenseofdynamicmovementandprofoundemotion.今天我很高兴与大家分享我最喜欢的艺术家文森特·梵高。梵高是一位荷兰后印象派画家，以其生动而富有表现力的色彩运用而闻名。他最著名的作品之一是《星夜》，描绘了法国村庄的夜空。旋转的星星和大胆的笔触使这幅画栩栩如生，传达了一种动态运动和深厚情感。IadmirevanGoghbecauseofhisabilitytoconveyintenseemotionsthroughhisart.Hehadatoughlife,strugglingwithmentalillnessandpoverty,buthefoundfortandmeaninginhispainting,Hisdedicationandpassionforartaretrulyinspiringtome.我钦佩梵高，因为他能够通过他的艺术传达强烈的情感。他生活艰难，与精神疾病和贫困作斗争，但他在他的绘画中找到了安慰和意义。他对艺术的奉献和激情真正鼓舞了我。（2023年全国甲卷）你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.人物简介及事迹；2.意义或启示。【答案】

ConfuciuswasaChinesephilosopherandeducatorduringtheSpringandAutumnperiod.HewasthefounderofConfucianism,asystemofethical,social,andpoliticalideasthathasdeeplyinfluencedChineseculture.Confuciusemphasizedmoralcultivation,familyvalues,andtheimportanceofbenevolentgovernance.Histeachings,collectedinTheAnalects,haveshapedChina’sethicalandsocialnormsforovertwomillennia.ThesignificanceofConfuciusstemsfromhisprofoundimpactonChinesesocietyandtheworld.Hiswisdomandteachingsonvirtue,respect,andintegritycontinuetoinspirepeopleintheirpersonalandprofessionallives.Incontemporarytimes,Confucius’teachingsencourageustoupholdstrongmoralvaluesandstriveforharmonyinourrelationships.Hisemphasisoneducationandselfimprovementservesasareminderoftheimportanceoflifelonglearningandpersonalgrowth.1.应用文写作前三步骤：（1）审题判定文体为投稿；（2）因文体是投稿，故作者身份在正文中不必交代；（3）因文本主体部分为介绍人物生平事迹，故本文总体时态定调为一般过去时，首尾两段采用一般现在时。2.本文的亮点：（1）tonamejustafew仅列举几例；（2）renowned=celebrated=famous著名的；（3）Especiallyadmirableare...形容词置于句首产生完全倒装结构；（4）aswellas=notonly...butalso...；（5）sticktoitforlife坚守终生。（2023上·安徽·高三校联考期末）假定你是李华，你们班本周将举行一次英文主题班会，介绍为人类做出突出贡献的人物。请你写一篇短文，内容包括：1.人物简介；2.做出的贡献；3.你的感想。注意：1.词数80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】TuYouyouTuYouyouisagreatChinesemedicalscientist.Determinedtohelpthosesufferingfrommalaria,TuYouyoudevotedmostofhertimetofindingthecure.Luckily,hereffortspaidoff.In2015,shewasawardedtheNobelPrizeinPhysiologyorMedicinefordiscoveringartemisinin,whichisthekeytothetreatmentofmalaria.Behindhersuccesswerenumerousfailuresandsetbacks,butneverdidshegiveup.Sogreatishercontributiontotheworldthatshehasbeeanidolofmanypeople,includingme.Inspiredbyherstory,Idecidetostudyhardersoastorealizemydream.【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文，介绍一位为人类做出突出贡献的人物，包括人物简介及其所做贡献并分享自己的感想。【详解】1.词汇积累下定决心的：determined→resolved幸运地：luckily→fortunately努力：effort→endeavor无数的：numerous→countless实现：realize→achieve2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Determinedtohelpthosesufferingfrommalaria,TuYouyoudevotedmostofhertimetofindingthecure.拓展句：Asshewasdeterminedtohelpthosesufferingfrommalaria,TuYouyoudevotedmostofhertimetofindingthecure.【点睛】【高分句型1】In2015,shewasawardedtheNobelPrizeinPhysiologyorMedicinefordiscoveringartemisinin,whichisthekeytothetreatmentofmalaria.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Behindhersuccesswerenumerousfailuresandsetbacks,butneverdidshegiveup.（运用了介词短语置于句首的全部倒装及否定词位于句首的部分倒装）【高分句型3】Sogreatishercontributiontotheworldthatshehasbeeanidolofmanypeople,includingme.（运用了so+形容词前置的倒装及so...that...引导的结果状语从句）(2023·浙江丽水·统考期末)假定你是李华，将参加学校举行的以“ThePersonIamEspeciallyMovedby”为主题的英文演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：1.人物介绍；2.感动原因；3.对你的影响。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dearfellowstudents,It’smyprivilegetodeliveraspeechhere.Ofallthemostrespectablepeople,IamespeciallymovedbyZhongNanshan.This85yearoldmanwithgrayhairworksreallyhard,forthepeople,forthemotherland,forhisresponsibility.HeisoneofChineseheroesvolunteeringmanytimestofightagainstpandemics.Thepictureofhimrestingonthehighspeedrailseatmadeustouchedandtearful.SuchgreatcontributiondidhemakethathewasawardedtheMedaloftheRepublic.Hisdeedsandspiritdomakeagreatdifferencetome.Thankyou.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生为即将参加学校举行的英文演讲比赛写一篇英文演讲稿，主题为“ThePersonIamEspeciallyMovedby”，内容包括：人物介绍；感动原因；对你的影响。【详解】1.词汇积累荣耀：privilege→honor发表演讲：deliveraspeech→makeaspeech祖国：motherland→homeland责任：responsibility→duty2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：This85yearoldmanwithgrayhairworksreallyhard,forthepeople,forthemotherland,forhisresponsibility.拓展句：This85yearoldmanwhosehairisgrayworksreallyhard,forthepeople,forthemotherland,forhisresponsibility.【点睛】[高分句型1]HeisoneofChineseheroesvolunteeringmanytimestofightagainstpandemics.(运用了非谓语动词做后置定语)[高分句型2]SuchgreatcontributiondidhemakethathewasawardedtheMedaloftheRepublic.

(运用了倒装句，即在“such…that+句子”句型中，such位于句首，该部分用部分倒装)（2023·湖南邵阳·统考二模）在2022年8月发生的重庆山火和2023年1月发生的泸定地震中涌现出了很多青年逆行者榜样人物：00后消防员，00后志愿者等。你校正在组织“WeShouldShouldertheResponsibility”英语征文活动，请你投稿。内容包括：1．青年榜样的突出品质；2．他们对你的影响；3．呼吁年轻人向他们学习。注意：1．词数80左右；2．参考词汇：00后：post2000sgeneration／post00s；3．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。WeShouldShouldertheResponsibility_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________