2026年高考总复习优化设计一轮复习英语（北师大福建专版）-Step 5　第2讲　记叙文

写作专项提升第二讲记叙文英语2026高中总复习优化设计GAOZHONGZONGFUXIYOUHUASHEJI记叙文主要用于记叙过去发生的事件或经历,以写人、叙事为主要内容,应用广泛,写作形式灵活多样。活动报道和人物介绍是高考书面表达的主要考查方式。写作模板1活动报道活动报道是新闻报道的一个方面,是对举行的活动进行报道。第一句话通常为全文主旨句,包括时间、地点、人物和事件四个方面。后文对整个事件的过程和细节进行详细的叙述。活动报道的语言平实客观,不追求过于复杂的句式。典例示范(新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.参加人员;2.跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下;3.活动反响。注意:写作词数应为100左右;范文欣赏A

Cross-Country

Running

Race

LastSundaywitnessedanextraordinarycross-countryrunningrace,whichnearlydrewtheattentionofeverystudentandteacherofourschool.Thestudentsselectedfromeveryclasstookpartinthecompetition.Theroutemeasuredfivekilometers,fromourschoolgatetothefootofNanshanMountain.Everyrunnertriedtheirbesttofinishthetask,withtheirclassmatesalongthewaygivingthemnecessaryhelpaswellasencouragement.Atlast,alltherunnersmanagedtoarriveatthefinishline,receivingcheersfromalldirections.Theactivitywashighlyspokenof,becausenotonlydiditprovideachanceforustoexercise,butalsomadeusmorecohesive.范文赏析文章开门见山,一句话说明活动的人物、时间、地点;然后详述经过、结果;最后对事件进行评价。语言丰富,使用了如witness,extraordinary,whichnearlydrewtheattentionofeverystudentandteacherofourschool(非限制性定语从句),receivingcheersfromalldirections(现在分词短语作状语),becausenotonlydiditprovideachanceforustoexercise,butalsomadeusmorecohesive(部分倒装句)等高级词汇和句式,提升了文章的写作档次,也显示出了作者较强的语言运用能力。增分佳句开头说明事件来龙去脉的常用语:1.Inordertoraiseawarenessofenvironmentprotection,theEnglishClubofourschoolorganizedavoluntaryactivitythisSundaymorning.为了提高环境保护的意识,本周日上午我校英语俱乐部组织了一次志愿者活动。2.DuringtheLabourDayholiday,myparentsandIclimbedMountTaishan.Wewereluckythattheweatherwasfinethatdayandwewereabletoseethesunrise.劳动节假期期间,我和我的父母一起去爬了泰山。我们很幸运,那天的天气很好,我们看到了日出。3.TheChineseAncientPoetryCompetitionwillbeheldinourschoolconcerthallthisFridayafternoon,from2pmto5pm.本周五下午2点到5点,中国古诗词大赛将会在我校音乐厅举行。4.Lastweek,whenIwasonmywayhomesomethingterriblehappened.上周,当我走在回家的路上时,可怕的事情发生了。中间详细叙述活动过程和细节的常用语:5.We'rescheduledtogatherattheschoolgateat9:00am,andtakeabustotheWestLake,whichwilltakeabouthalfanhour.我们计划上午9点在学校门口集合,乘坐公交车去西湖,这大约需要半小时。6.Whilewalkingonthecountryroad,weenjoyedthewarmsunshineandthebeautifulview.走在乡间的小路上,我们享受着温暖的阳光和美丽的风景。7.Activitiesincludeputtingupposters,tellingthecitizenstheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironmentandpickinguprubbishinthepark.活动包括张贴海报、为市民讲述保护环境的重要性以及在公园捡垃圾。8.Attheendoftheactivity,wetookapicturetomemorizetheunforgettableday.活动结束时,我们合影纪念了这个难忘的日子。结尾简要总结或者评价该活动的常用语:9.ItisthemostexcitingmomentthatIhaveeverexperienced.这是我所经历过的最激动人心的时刻。10.Notonlydiditmakeusclosetonature,butitalsogaveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolwork.这次活动不但让我们接近大自然,而且让我们从繁重的课业中得到放松。11.Thecompetitionwillprovideanopportunityforustohaveabetterunderstandingofourtraditionalculture.这次竞赛将给我们提供了更好的理解传统文化的机会。12.ThecompetitionbroadenedmyknowledgeontheSilkRoadandencouragedmetolearnmoreaboutourownculturalknowledgeinthefuture.这次比赛不仅拓宽了我关于丝绸之路的知识面,而且激励我以后更多地学习关于我们的文化知识。热点演练假定你是李华,你们学校近期开展了以“十八而志,感恩与责任”为主题的十八岁成人礼仪式(AdultCeremony),请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.参加人员;2.活动目的与内容;3.活动反响。注意:1.写作词数应为100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。OurschoolhasrecentlylaunchedanAdultCeremonytoencourageustolivewithgratitudeandresponsibility.Attendingtheceremonywereschoolleaders,teachersandstudentswhoare18yearsold.Thepresidentonbehalfoftheschoolexpressedhiswishesthatweshouldstayhungryforknowledgeandneverletdownthehighexpectationsofteachers,parentsandothersinsociety.Afterthespeechofthepresident,westudentstookacollectiveoathandwrotedownourdreams.Thiseventturnedoutagreatsuccess,convincingusthatit'sourdutytoaimhighwhiledoingsolidwork.写作模板2人物介绍人物介绍的内容通常包括人物生平、性格特点、业余爱好以及取得的成绩。高考对人物介绍的考查通常与书信、电子邮件等结合起来,是书信或者电子邮件中的一部分内容。有时候也要求按照汉语提示对名人进行介绍。典例示范(全国Ⅰ卷)你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:1.人物简介;2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。注意:1.词数100左右;2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。The

person

I

respectTherearemanyrespectablepeoplearoundus.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文欣赏The

person

I

respect

Therearemanyrespectablepeoplearoundus.Mr.Zhang,aged50,ismyfavoriteEnglishteacher.Heissoknowledgeable,humorousandresponsiblethatIrespectandlovehimsomuch.

Honestlyspeaking,hisgreatpatienceandassistancehaveagreatimpactonme.ItwasMr.ZhangwhomademeperceivetheimportanceoflearningEnglishwell.Haditnotbeenforhisguidanceandencouragement,Icouldn'thavewonfirstprizeintheEnglishcontest.Withouthisaid,Iwouldn'thaveboostedmyintegratedskillsinEnglish.I'lldefinitelyrememberhiskindnessandhelpforever.Mr.Zhangisaveryrespectableteacherindeed!Idothankhimforwhathedidforme.范文赏析文章开篇点明尊敬的人。随后介绍尊敬和爱戴该人物的原因。最后进行评价。范文语言丰富,使用了大量亮点词汇和句型,如knowledgeable,humorous,responsible,haveagreatimpacton,definitely等,体现了作者扎实的语言功底。句中使用了状语从句“thatIrespectandlovehimsomuch”;强调句型“ItwasMr.ZhangwhomademeperceivetheimportanceoflearningEnglishwell.”;虚拟语气“Haditnotbeenforhisguidanceandencouragement,Icouldn'thavewonfirstprizeintheEnglishcontest.”和“Withouthisaid,Iwouldn'thaveboostedmyintegratedskillsinEnglish.”提高了表达难度和写作档次,增加了文章的亮点。增分佳句开头介绍人物基本信息的常用语:1.MyfriendLiHua,aged27,graduatedfromPekingUniversityfiveyearsago,andhasjustreceivedhisdoctor'sdegree.我的朋友李华,今年27岁,5年前从北京大学毕业,又刚刚拿到了他的博士学位。2.LiMingismybestfriend.Helookshandsome.Heistallandstrong.李明是我最好的朋友。他长得很英俊,人又高又壮。中间介绍具体个人事迹的常用语:3.Heisgoodatsportssuchasrunning,football,basketballandtabletennis.他擅长运动,例如跑步、足球、篮球、乒乓球等。4.Beingkind-heartedandeasy-going,hefitsinwellwithotherseasilywhereverhegoes.由于心地善良,性情随和,他每到一处总会很容易地与他人相处融洽。5.Wehavemuchincommonregardingourstudy,interestsandhobbies.我们在学习和兴趣爱好方面有许多共同之处。6.Withtheirhelp,Iregainedmyconfidenceandbegantomakesteadyprogress.在他们的帮助下,我重获信心,并且开始取得稳定进步。对该人物进行评价的常用语:7.Truefriendshiplastsalongtime.IbelievethefriendshipbetweenLiMingandIwilllastforever.真正的友情是持久的。我相信我和李明之间的友谊会到永远。8.Inmyopinion,distancecan'tcutoffthefriendship.Onlyifwemisseachother,ourfriendshipwilllastforever.在我看来,距离不能阻断友谊。只要我们彼此想念,我们的友谊就会永存。9.Hedevotedhimselftoscientificresearchandmadegreatcontributionstothecountry.他致力于科研工作,为国家作出了巨大贡献。10.Consideredtobeoneofthegreatestwritersintheworld,hewasawardedtheNobelPrizeinLiterature.他被认为是世界最伟大的作家之一,被授予了诺贝尔文学奖。热点演练假定你是李华,你校英文报正在征稿,题目是TheMostImpres