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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。ItwasarainySaturdayafternoon,and16-year-oldMiasatontheporch(门廊),staringattherainformingpuddlesinthedriveway.Herdad,asingleparent,hadlosthisjoblastmonth,andtheircarhadbrokendownthatmorning.
“Weneedtogettothehospital,”Dadhadsaid,hisvoicetight——Mia'slittlebrother,Leo,hadahighfeverandwasstrugglingtobreathe.Butwithnocarandnomoneyforataxi,theywerestuck.Miawrappedherarmsaroundherself,listeningtoLeo'sweakcoughsfrominside.She'dcheckedtheirsavingsjarearlier—only$12.Notnearlyenoughforevenashorttaxiride,letalonethehospitalbillssheknewwouldcome.Theraintappedharderontheroof,asifaddingtotheirworry.Justthen,Mr.Carter,theirelderlyneighbor,appearedatthegate,holdinganumbrella.He'dlivednextdoorforyears,alwayssittingonhisporchreadingnewspapers,sometimeswavingslightlyiftheypassedby,butthey'drarelyspokenbeyondaquick“hello.”“Heardthelittleone’ssick?”heasked,raindrippingfromthebrimofhisoldcanvashat.Mianodded,bitingherliptoholdbacktears——shehatedfeelingsohelpless.Mr.Cartersteppedcloser.“Mycarisinthegarage.It'sold,butitruns.Let'sgethimtothedoctor.”Mia'seyeswidened.“Really?Buttherain——”“RainneverstoppedaCarterfromhelpinganeighbor,”hesaid.Withoutanotherword,heturnedandhurriedtowardthegarage.Momentslater,theoldcarrumbledtolifeandpulleduptothecurbinfrontofthehouse.DadhurriedoutwithLeoinhisarms,andMr.Carterhelpedtucktheboyintothebackseat.Bythetimetheyreachedthehospital,Leo'sfeverhadgonedownalittle.Nursesrushedhimtoasmallexaminationroom,askingDadtostaybyhissidetoanswerquestions.Miawaitedinthelobby,herhandsshakingasshethoughtaboutthemoneytheydidn'thave.Shedecidedtogetacupofwatertocalmherself,steppingtowardthewaterdispenser(饮水机)nearthereceptiondesk.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Gettingwater,shesawMr.Carter,whowaswiththereceptionist,pullingouthiswallet.
Laterthatnight,Leorecoveredfromhisillness.
文本分析1.角色:_____________________________2.视角:第________人称3.时空线:fromtherainySaturdayafternoon(Mia'sporch)---______________---Laterthatnight4.请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。HowdidMia’sfamilygetstuckandneedtogotothehospital?:______________________________________________WhatdidMiafindwhenshecheckedthesavingsjar?:____________________________________________WhatwasthepreviousrelationshipbetweenMia’sfamilyandMr.Carter?:____________________________________________WhatinnerconflictorworrydidMiahavewhilewaitinginthehospitallobby?:____________________________________________WhatdidMr.CarterdotohelpMia’sfamilywhenheknewaboutLeo’sillness?:____________________________________________HowdidthesituationofLeochangewhentheyreachedthehospital?:____________________________________________情节线:Mia’sfamilywasintroubleonarainySaturday(dadunemployed,carbroken,Leosickwithnomoneyfortaxi).→_________________________→Theyarrivedatthehospital,Leowassentforexamination,Miawaitedandworried.→(续写)______________→(续写)Laterthatnight,Leorecovered,andrelevantinteractionshappened.6.情感线:Mia:___________(ontheporch)→____________(whenMr.Carterofferedhelp)→_______________(waitinginthehospitallobby)→_______________(seeingMr.Carterwithwallet)→_______________(afterLeorecovered)Mom:______________(notmentionedinthegiventext,canbeinferredorsupplementedincontinuation)→(续写)Mr.Carter:_________________(basedonhisactions)→(续写)7.综合以上信息,请用3-4句话概括文章大意。(中英各一个)中文:____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________英文:____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________句式:____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9.主题(本文属于人与他人):_______________________情节构造第一段提示句:Gettingwater,shesawMr.Carter,whowaswiththereceptionist,pullingouthiswallet.衔接句1———对“stood/watchedwhileseeingthisscene”提问“HowwasMiafeelingwhenshesawMr.Carterwiththereceptionistandpullingouthiswallet?”:____________________________________________过渡句推演:衔接1→←衔接2衔接句2———对“Mia’sinteractionwithMr.Carterafterseeingthis”提问“WhatmightMiasayordowhenshegoestoMr.Carter,andwhatmightMr.Carterrespond?”:________________________________________第二段提示句:Laterthatnight,Leorecoveredfromhisillness.衔接句3———对“Mom/Dad/Mia’sreactiontoLeo’srecovery”提问“WhywouldMiaandherfamilyhaveacertainreactionwhentheyknowLeorecovered,andwhatmighttheythinkofMr.Carter?”:__________________________________________过渡句推演:衔接3→←主题主题:___________________________段落构思第一段:Gettingwater,shesawMr.Carter,whowaswiththereceptionist,pullingouthiswallet.→①__________________→②__________________→③__________________;英文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二段:SeeingKarie’scomingback,Mompointedatthefridgewithconfusion.→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________。英文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案文本分析1.角色:Mia(16岁主人公)、Mia的爸爸(单亲家长)、Leo(Mia生病的弟弟)、Mr.Carter(Mia家年长的邻居)、医院护士、接待员2.视角:第三人称3.时空线:fromarainySaturdayafternoon(Mia家porch)---Mr.Carter用旧车送Mia一家去医院---Mia在医院大厅---Laterthatnight(Leo康复后)4.请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。HowdidMia'sfamilygetintotrouble?:Mia的爸爸失业,家里汽车故障,弟弟Leo发高烧且呼吸困难,却没钱打车去医院,储蓄罐里只有12美元,远远不够。HowdidMr.CarterhelpMia'sfamily?:Mr.Carter听到Leo生病的消息,主动提出用自己虽旧但能开的车送他们去医院,还帮忙把Leo安置到车后座。WhatwasMia'sstateofmindontheporch?:Mia感到无助,抱着自己,听着弟弟微弱的咳嗽声,强忍泪水,因无法解决家庭困境而焦虑。WhatwasMiaworriedaboutinthehospitallobby?:Mia担心家里没有足够的钱支付医院账单,双手颤抖,想通过喝水平复心情。HowdidMr.Carteractunexpectedlyinthehospital?:Mia去接水时,看到Mr.Carter在和接待员交谈,还拿出了钱包,可能在为他们垫付费用。WhatwastherelationshipbetweenMia'sfamilyandMr.Carterbefore?:他们是邻居,Mr.Carter多年来常坐在门廊看报纸,偶尔相遇会简单挥手,除了简短的“你好”很少交流。5.情节线:下雨天Mia家陷入困境(爸爸失业、车坏、弟弟重病没钱就医)→邻居Mr.Carter主动开车送他们去医院→到达医院后Mia担心医药费,去接水时看到Mr.Carter与接待员及拿出钱包的场景→(续写)Mia了解到Mr.Carter帮忙垫付费用,之后Leo康复,家人向Mr.Carter道谢,邻里关系变得更亲近。6.情感线:Mia:无助焦虑(家遇困境时)→惊喜(Mr.Carter主动帮忙)→担忧(在医院担心医药费)→感动(看到Mr.Carter可能垫付费用/续写中)→感激(Leo康复后)Dad:焦急(Leo生病时)→感激(Mr.Carter帮忙)Mr.Carter:友善热心(主动帮助邻居)7.综合以上信息,请用3-4句话概括文章大意。(中英各一个)中文:一个下雨的周六下午,Mia家遭遇困境,爸爸失业、汽车故障,弟弟Leo发高烧却没钱打车去医院。多年来交流不多的邻居Mr.Carter主动开车送他们去医院,到达医院后Mia担心医药费,接水时看到Mr.Carter在接待员旁拿出钱包。英文:OnarainySaturdayafternoon,Mia'sfamilywasintrouble—herfatherwasunemployed,theircarbrokedown,andherlittlebrotherLeohadahighfeverbuttheyhadnomoneyforataxitothehospital.Mr.Carter,theirneighborwhohadn'ttalkedmuchwiththemforyears,offeredtodrivethemtothehospitalinhisoldbutworkingcar.Whentheyarrivedatthehospital,MiaworriedaboutthemedicalbillsandsawMr.Cartertakingouthiswalletbesidethereceptionistwhilegettingwater.8.句式:时间状语从句(ItwasarainySaturdayafternoon,and.../Bythetimetheyreachedthehospital...);现在分词作状语(listeningtoLeo'sweakcoughsfrominside/raindrippingfromthebrimofhisoldcanvashat/askingDadtostaybyhissidetoanswerquestions);转折连词(butwithnocarandnomoney.../butthey'drarelyspoken...)9.主题(本文属于人与他人):邻里之间的善意与互助,在困境中陌生人(邻居)的援手能带来温暖与希望情节构造第一段提示句:Gettingwater,shesawMr.Carter,whowaswiththereceptionist,pullingouthiswallet.衔接句1———对“sawMr.Carter,whowaswiththereceptionist,pullingouthiswallet”提问“Mia看到这一幕的反应是什么?”:Miawasshockedandstoppedinhertracks,wonderingwhatMr.Carterwasgoingtodo.过渡句推演:衔接1→MiawalkedoverquietlyandheardMr.CartertellthereceptionisthewantedtopaypartofLeo'smedicalfees←衔接2衔接句2———对“MiaheardMr.Carter”提问“Mia听到后有什么举动和想法?”:Mia'seyesfilledwithtears,shewalkeduptoMr.Carterandthankedhim,sayingtheywouldpayhimback.第二段提示句:Laterthatnight,Leorecoveredfromhisillness.衔接句3———对“Leorecoveredfromhisillness”提问“家人得知Leo康复后的状态是怎样的?”:Miaandherdadwererelievedandhappy,andtheycouldn'tstoptalkingaboutMr.Carter'skindness.过渡句推演:衔接3→Thenextday,MiaandherdadwenttoMr.Carter'shousewithahomemadecaketoexpresstheirgratitude,andtheirrelationshipbecamecloser←主题主题:邻里间的善意互助能化解困境,温暖人心,拉近彼此距离段落构思第一段:Gettingwater,shesawMr.Carter,whowaswiththereceptionist,pullingouthiswallet.→①Miafroze,thewatercupinherhandalmostslipping.②ShetiptoedoverandclearlyheardMr.Cartersay,“I’llcovertheinitialexaminationfeesfortheboy.”③Miarushedover,tearsstreamingdownherface,andsaid,“Mr.Carter,wecan’tletyoudothat!”Mr.Carterpattedhershouldergently,“Neighborshelpeachother,kiddo.”;英文:Gettingwater,shesawMr.Carter,whowaswiththereceptionist,pullingouthiswallet.Miastoodthere,herheartpounding.Shemovedalittlecloser,notwantingtodisturbbutcurious.ThensheheardMr.Carter'ssoftvoice:"Pleasechargethefirstconsultationfeetomyaccount."Mia'seyeswateredinstantly.Shewalkedov
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