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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Inthecornerofourbasementsitsashelffilledwitholdradios—woodenboxeswithmetalbuttonsandantennas(天线),whosecolorsfadedwithtime.Tomost,theymightseemlikewaste.Buttomygrandfather,theyweretreasurechestsofstories.
Mygrandfathergrewupinasmallmountainvillage,wheretheonlywaytohearnewsoftheoutsideworldwasthroughanold,noisyandunclearradiothathefixedbyconnectingwiresunderhighheat.“Ididn’tunderstandmostofthewords,”heusedtolaugh.“Butthemusicspoketome.”Fixingradiosbecamemorethanahobby—itwashowhereachedouttotheworld.Helearnedeverythingthroughrepeatedtrials,untilbrokensilenceturnedintosoundagain.
Mymotherneverplannedtokeepthishabit.Asateenager,shepreferredtapeplayersandmusicthatshecouldcarrywithher.ButwhenGrandpapassedaway,shecouldn’tthrowawayhistoolsortheradiosheleft.“They’repartofhim,”sheoncesaid,gentlyturningaroundmetalbuttonononeoftheradios.Slowly,shebegantryingtofixafewofthem,notasanexpert,butwithcareandcuriosity.
BythetimeIwasten,Ihadwatchedmymotherspendmanyweekendssurroundedbysmallpartsandwires.“Comeandtrywithme,”shesaidoneSaturday.“Let’sseeifwecanfixthisonetogether.”Ididn’tknowwhattodo,andIdidn’tevenlikemachines.Ienjoyedreadinganddrawing.Butwhensheturnedthebuttonandajazztunestartedplaying,Ifeltsomethingtouchedme.
Soon,fixingradiosbecameourweeklyactivity.Sheshowedmehowtolookcloselyateverywireandtinypart,andhowtobepatientandlistencarefully.“Sometimestheproblemisn’twhatyousee,”shesaid.“It’swhatyouhear—ordon’thear.”Unlikemymother,Ifellinlovewithitquickly.Ibegancollectingoldradiosfromneighborsandeventriedfixingonesthatnolongerworked.Ididn’tjustwanttomakethemwork—Iwantedtobringbacktheirsound.
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请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Onewinterevening,asuddenpowercuthitourvillage.___________________________________________________________________________________________Whenthepowerwasrestored,everyonethankedmeforbringingthemmusic.___________________________________________________________________________________________文本分析1.角色:_____________________________2.视角:第________人称3.时空线:from祖父在山村靠旧收音机了解外界(过去)---______________---Onewinterevening(突发停电时)4.请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。Whatweretheoldradiostograndfather,andwhy?:______________________________________________Howdidgrandfatherusetheoldradiowhenhegrewupinthemountainvillage?:____________________________________________Whydidmotherstartfixingoldradiosaftergrandfatherpassedaway?:____________________________________________Howdid“我”getinvolvedinfixingoldradios,andwhatwas“我”sinitialattitude?:____________________________________________Whatdidmotherteach“我”whenfixingradiostogether?:____________________________________________Howwas“我”sattitudetowardsfixingradiosdifferentfrommother’slater?:____________________________________________5.情节线:地下室的旧收音机对祖父是“故事宝箱”,他曾靠旧收音机了解外界,修理收音机是他接触世界的方式。→______________________________→“我”与母亲每周一起修收音机,“我”逐渐热爱并开始收集、修理旧收音机。→(续写)____________________→(续写)电力恢复后,大家感谢“我”,“我”有了怎样的感悟。6.情感线:祖父:_________________(对收音机)→________________(从“收音机是接触世界的方式”推测)母亲:(对祖父的收音机)不舍→_____________________(尝试修理时)→_____________(教“我”修理时)“我”:不感兴趣(起初)→__________________(被音乐触动时)→_________________(热爱修理后)→(停电时/大家感谢时)7.综合以上信息,请用3-4句话概括文章大意。(中英各一个)中文:__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________英文:__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________句式:____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9.主题(本文属于人与自我/人与他人):_______________________情节构造第一段提示句:Onewinterevening,asuddenpowercuthitourvillage.衔接句1———对“suddenpowercut”提问“Howdidthevillageand‘我’reacttothepowercut,andwhatmade‘我’thinkoftheoldradios?”:____________________________________________过渡句推演:衔接1→“我”找到修好的旧收音机,想办法让它工作起来,给村民带来了什么←衔接2衔接句2———对“‘我’sactionwitholdradiosduringpowercut”提问“Whatdid‘我’dotomaketheoldradiowork,andhowdidvillagersrespond?”:____________________________________________第二段提示句:Whenthepowerwasrestored,everyonethankedmeforbringingthemmusic.衔接句3———对“everyonethankedme”提问“Howdid‘我’feelwhenbeingthanked,andwhatdid‘我’realizeabouttheoldradiosandgrandfather/mother?”:____________________________________________过渡句推演:衔接3→“我”更明白修理收音机不仅是修复机器,更是传承什么,之后“我”对收音机有了怎样的新认知←主题主题:_________________________________段落构思第一段:Onewinterevening,asuddenpowercuthitourvillage.→①__________________→②__________________→③__________________;英文:____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二段:Whenthepowerwasrestored,everyonethankedmeforbringingthemmusic.→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________。英文:____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案文本分析1.角色:“我”(逐渐热爱修理旧收音机,传承祖父与母亲情感的晚辈)、祖父(生前靠修理旧收音机接触外界,视收音机为“故事宝箱”的长辈)、母亲(因不舍祖父遗物尝试修理收音机,后教“我”修理的中间人)、村民(停电时受“我”用旧收音机播放音乐帮助的群体)2.视角:第一人称3.时空线:from祖父在山村靠旧收音机了解外界(过去)---祖父去世后母亲尝试修理收音机,“我”十岁起与母亲一起修收音机并爱上这项事(现在)---Onewinterevening(突发停电时)4.请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。Whatweretheoldradiostograndfather,andwhy?:Theyweretreasurechestsofstories.Becauseinthesmallmountainvillagewherehegrewup,theoldradiowastheonlywaytohearnewsoftheoutsideworld,andthemusicfromit"spoketohim";fixingradioswasalsohowhereachedouttotheworld.Howdidgrandfatherusetheoldradiowhenhegrewupinthemountainvillage?:Heusedanold,noisyandunclearradio(whichhefixedbyconnectingwiresunderhighheat)tohearnewsoftheoutsideworld,andhelearnedthingsthroughrepeatedtrialsoffixingradiosuntiltheycouldplaysoundagain.Whydidmotherstartfixingoldradiosaftergrandfatherpassedaway?:Becauseshecouldn’tthrowawaygrandfather’stoolsortheradiosheleft—shethought"they’repartofhim",andshediditwithcareandcuriosity(notasanexpert).Howdid“我”getinvolvedinfixingoldradios,andwhatwas“我”sinitialattitude?:Motherinvited"我"totryfixingradiostogetheroneSaturday;"我"initiallydidn’tknowwhattodoanddidn’tevenlikemachines(as"我"enjoyedreadinganddrawing).Whatdidmotherteach“我”whenfixingradiostogether?:Shetaught"我"tolookcloselyateverywireandtinypart,tobepatientandlistencarefully,andtold"我""Sometimestheproblemisn’twhatyousee—it’swhatyouhear,ordon’thear."Howwas“我”sattitudetowardsfixingradiosdifferentfrommother’slater?:Unlikemother(whofixedradiosoutofcareforgrandfather’s遗物andcuriosity),"我"fellinlovewithfixingradiosquickly,begancollectingoldradiosfromneighbors,andeventriedfixingonesthatnolongerworked(notjusttomakethemwork,buttobringbacktheirsound).5.情节线:地下室的旧收音机对祖父是“故事宝箱”,他曾靠旧收音机了解外界,修理收音机是他接触世界的方式。→祖父去世后,母亲因不舍留下收音机并尝试修理,“我”起初不感兴趣却被收音机播放的音乐触动。→“我”与母亲每周一起修收音机,“我”逐渐热爱并开始收集、修理旧收音机。→(续写)冬日夜晚村庄突发停电,“我”搬出修好的旧收音机(无需通电),播放音乐缓解村民的无聊与焦虑。→(续写)电力恢复后,大家感谢“我”,“我”意识到旧收音机不仅是机器,更是祖父精神与家庭情感的传承。6.情感线:祖父:(对收音机)→cherishedanddependent(从“收音机是接触世界的方式”推测,视其为了解外界的重要工具,修理时充满热情)母亲:(对祖父的收音机)不舍→carefulandcurious(尝试修理时,带着对祖父的思念认真探索)→patientandguiding(教“我”修理时,耐心传授技巧,传递对收音机的情感)“我”:不感兴趣(起初)→touchedandsurprised(被音乐触动时,感受到收音机的魅力)→enthusiasticanddevoted(热爱修理后,主动收集、修理,渴望恢复收音机的声音)→proudandinsightful(停电时/大家感谢时,为能帮到他人自豪,领悟收音机的传承意义)7.综合以上信息,请用3-4句话概括文章大意。(中英各一个)中文:祖父生前视旧收音机为“故事宝箱”,靠它了解外界;祖父去世后,母亲因不舍尝试修理其留下的收音机,“我”起初不感兴趣,后被收音机播放的音乐触动,逐渐热爱修理,还与母亲每周一起修收音机。英文:Grandparegardedoldradiosas"treasurechestsofstories"andusedthemtolearnabouttheoutsideworldwhenhewasalive.AfterGrandpapassedaway,Momtriedtofixtheradiosheleftoutofreluctancetothrowthemaway.Iwasnotinterestedatfirst,butwastouchedbythemusicfromtheradio,graduallyfellinlovewithfixingradios,andevenrepairedthemwithMomeveryweekend.8.句式:条件状语从句(Ifwecanfixthisonetogether,you’llprobablyfeelthemagicofradios.);直接引语(Grandpausedtolaugh,“Ididn’tunderstandmostofthewords,butthemusicspoketome.”/Momsaid,“Sometimestheproblemisn’twhatyousee—it’swhatyouhear,ordon’thear.”);现在分词作状语(Fixingradiosbecamemorethanahobby—itwashowhereachedouttotheworld./Gentlyturningaroundmetalbuttonononeoftheradios,Momoncesaid,“They’repartofhim.”);时间状语从句(BythetimeIwasten,Ihadwatchedmymotherspendmanyweekendssurroundedbysmallpartsandwires./Whensheturnedthebuttonandajazztunestartedplaying,Ifeltsomethingtouchedme.)9.主题(本文属于人与自我/人与他人):旧物件承载着情感与精神的传承,家人间的共同经历能传递热爱与责任,平凡的小事中蕴含着温暖的力量情节构造第一段提示句:Onewinterevening,asuddenpowercuthitourvillage.衔接句1———对“suddenpowercut”提问“Howdidthevillageand‘我’reacttothepowercut,andwhatmade‘我’thinkoftheoldradios?”:Thevillagefellintodarknessandsilence—neighborscomplainedaboutthecoldandboredom,and"我"felthelplesstoo.Then"我"suddenlyrememberedtheoldradios(whichdon’tneedelectricity)inthebasement—theycouldplaymusictocheereveryoneup.过渡句推演:衔接1→“我”rushedtothebasement,carriedawell-fixedoldradiotothevillagesquare,founditsbatteries,andturnediton—softmusicfilledtheair←衔接2衔接句2———对“‘我’sactionwitholdradiosduringpowercut”提问“Whatdid‘我’dotomaketheoldradiowork,andhowdidvillagersrespond?”:"我"putfreshbatteriesintotheradio(sinceitdidn’trelyonhouseholdpower),turnedthemetalbuttontofindaclearchannel.Villagersgatheredaround,sometappingtheirfeettothemusic,otherschattingwithsmiles—noonefeltboredanymore.第二段提示句:Whenthepowerwasrestored,everyonethankedmeforbringingthemmusic.衔接句3———对“everyonethankedme”提问“Howdid‘我’feelwhenbeingthanked,andwhatdid‘我’realizeabouttheoldradiosandgrandfather/mother?”:"我"feltproudandwarm,andsuddenlyrealizedthattheoldradiosweren’tjustmachines—theycarriedGrandpa’slongingfortheoutsideworldandMom’s思念forGrandpa;"我"waspassingonthiswarmthwithoutknowingit.过渡句推演:衔接3→Later,"我"toldMomaboutit,andshehugged"我"sayingGrandpawouldbehappy."我"thendecidedtokeepcollectingandfixingoldradios,notjusttobringbacktheirsound,buttoholdontothefamily’sloveandmemories←主题主题:旧物件是情感与记忆的载体,家人间的传承让平凡事物拥有温暖的力量,也让爱与责任在时光中延续段落构思第一段:Onewinterevening,asuddenpowercuthitourvillage.→①Thelightswentoutinstantly,andthevillagewasplungedintodarkness.Neighborsshoutedinconfusion,andthecoldwindseepedthroughwindows,makingeveryonefeelrestless.②Isuddenlyjumpedup—Grandpa’soldradiosdidn’tneedelectricity!Irantothebasement,draggedoutabrownwoodenradioI’dfixedlastmonth,andrushedtothevillagesquare.③Ipoppedinbatteries,twistedtheantenna,andsoonasoftfolksongplayed.Villagersgatheredaround,theirfrownsturningintosmilesastheylistened;someevensangalong.英文:Onewinterevening,asuddenpowercuthitourvillage.Theentirevillagewentdark,andIcouldhearneighborscomplainingaboutthecoldandtheboringnight.Iwassittingbythefireplace,feelinghelpless,whenIrememberedtheoldradios—theyranonbatteries,notelectricity!Ihurriedtothe
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