读后续写之如何延续故事高潮-2023年高考英语一轮复习考点突破

专题34读后续写之如何延续故事高潮

《考点•题型•技巧》

故事中的高潮(climax)也通常是故事的转折点(turningpoint),是指故事达到最紧张或扣人心

弦的那一部分,高潮有时候是剧情中的“危机”点。有时它只是达到关键时刻或者转折点时，

发生了一些事情，或者人物必须做出决定，从而导致一个结果或其他。营造故事发展的高潮

可以通过营造冲突实现。冲突带来紧迫感，因此营造冲突是一种有效地将故事推向情节发展

的高潮的方式。

一、高潮冲突思维1：.增加外部冲突增加外部冲突是一种明显有效的可以达到故事高潮的方

式。冲突带来紧迫感，将故事推向必要的解决或崩溃。

1.角色之间的冲突(人物观点差异，竞争需要等)

2.角色与环境之间的冲突

3.时间依赖的发展：决策变得紧急

4.增加的障碍：人物角色必须克服挑战，以达到他们的目标

二、高潮冲突思维2：放大内心冲突放大内心冲突(你的角色的内心斗争)也有助于建立

一个高度紧张和不确定的时刻。

三、高潮冲突思维3：使用环境描写增加不确定性充分利用环境描写可以起到烘托故事高

潮的作用，具体方法可以看上期读后续写微技能。当故事角色在碰到困难时候，我们往往要

加大笔墨来描丐故事环境的黑暗，恐怖和不祥。弼化环境描丐增强了高潮元素。我们感受到

了紧张的倍增。

【题型赏析】

1.常见故事高潮

Alittlegirlhasbeensearchingforherlostdog.Allofasudden,shehearsabarkingfrom

aroundthecorner,andshelooksaroundtosee...

Kevinhasworkedveryhardtotryoutforthesoccerteamatschool.Thecoachhaspostedalist

ofthisyear'steammembersonhisofficedoor.Kevinwalksforwardtolookatthelist....

Mary'sparentshavebeendiscussingwhetherornottomovetoanotherstate.TheycallMary

andhersisterdowntotalkwiththemabouttheirdecision

Loishasperformedinthestategymnasticsfinals.Shewaitsanxiouslytohearthenamesofthe

winners.Theannouncersays,"Andfirstplacegoesto…”

2.文学名著中的一些故事高潮

ThedeathsofRomeo（whokillshimselfbecausehethinksJulietisdead）andJuliet（whekills

herselfwhensheawakesardseesRomeodead）.RomeoandJuliet,Shakespeare（《罗密欧和朱

丽叶》）

WhenGastonandthetownspeopleetoattackthebeast,andBelleadmitsherloveforthebeast.

BeautyandtheBeast.Disney（《美女与野兽》）

In"TheThreeLilliePigs,"suspensebuildsupuntiltheconfrontationbetweenthethirdpigand

thewolf.Thisconfrontationistheclimax.（三只小猪）Howtocreateaclimaxofastory?

3.角色之间的冲突（人物观点差异，竞争需要等）

Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivingin

vainforsometime,Momsuddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidn'twefindahousewitha

likelylookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous.开

找旅馆徒劳无功母亲建议搭帐篷在他人后院David和我倍感紧张，心有不悦（母子的观点不

一）

4.角色与环境之间的冲突

ThenMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim........hesawinstantlythatitwasn'ta

dogatall,butawolf:quicklycatchingupwithhim.Mac'sheartjumped.........,hefiredthespray

alihcwolf.Abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andloMac'srelief,ilfellback,shakingits

head.Butaminutelater,........Thenit........,tearingopenhistentbag.Hefiredatthewolfa

second（ime,andagain,itfellback.......Mac骑车独自行，路遇饿狼，与之搏斗，险象环生。

（人（角色）狼（环境）大战）

5.时间依赖的发展：决策变得紧急

Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim."Getintothecar."PaulshoutedatMac.Mac

jumpedoffthebikeandslidintothecarwithoutdelayasthewolfwasjusttwostepsawayand

wasabouttotearMacintopieces.Whatanarrowescape!骑车突停面前急喊上车Max上车避

险饿狼近在咫尺（此情此景，刻不容缓）

6.增加的障碍：人物角色必须克服挑战，以达到他们的目标

Butbeforewejumpedoffthehorses,wefoundthatwehadbeenoffthebeatentrackandgot

lost.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Exhaustedandhungry,Iwonderedifwe

couldfindourwayback.小兔突现马儿受惊草原迷路（障碍1）天色渐黑（障碍2）又累又

饿（障碍3）心理恐慌（障碍4）

1、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

TheMeredithfamilylivedinasmallmunity.Astheeconomywasindecline,somepeoplein

thetownhadlostiheirjobs.Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet.Peoplewere

trying（ohelpeachothermeetthechallenges.

Mrs.Meredithwasamostkindandthoughtfulwoman.Shespentagreatdealoftimevisiting

thepoor.Sheknewtheyhadproblems,andtheyneededallkindsofhelp.Whenshehadtime,she

wouldbringfoodandmedicinetothem.

Onemorningshetoldherchildrenaboutafamilyshehadvisitedthedaybefore.Therewasa

mansickinbed,hiswife,wholookcareofhimandcouldnotgoouttowork,andiheirlittleboy.

ThelittleboyhisnamewasBemardhadinterestedherverymuch.

“Iwishyoucouldseehim,“shesaidtoherownchildren,John,Harry,andClara.44Heissucha

helptohismother.Hewantsverymuchtoearnsomemoney,butIdon'tseewhathecando.”

Aftertheirmotherlefttheroom,thechildrensatthinkingaboutBernard.*1wishwecouldhelp

himloearnnioncyjsaidClara."HisfamilyissufRningsomuch.''

“SodoI,“saidHarry.uWereallyshoulddosomethingtoassistthem.^^

Forsomemoments,Johnsaidnothing,but,suddenly,hesprangtohisfeetandcried,4<Ihavea

greatidea!Ihaveasolutionthatwccanallhelpacplish（完成）

Theotherchildrenalsojumpedupallattention.WhenJohnhadanidea,itwassure（obea

goodone.UItellyouwhatwecando,MsaidJohn."YouknowthatbigboxofcomUncleJohnsentus?

Well,wecanmakepopcorn（爆米花.），andputilintopaperbags,andBernardcantakeitaroundto

butasmallpieceofwhitecolorcrayon.Mymotherhadasaying:"Fools,namesandfacesalways

appearin.publicplaces.^^Ineverunderstoodfiillywhatitmeantbefore.NowIdid!Mykneesfelt

weak.WhatwouldMrs.Eifflcrdotome?Andtheteacherwouldbereturningsoon.

注意：

L续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1

“Quick,let'sgetsomewetpapertowels,^saidJudy.

Paragraph2

Wewerejustslippingintoourdeskswhenthebellrang.

3、阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

AVacalionwithMyMother

Ihadaninterestingchildhood.Itwasfilledwithsurprisesandamusements,allbecauseofmy

motherloving,sweet,yetabsentmindedandforgetful.Onestrangefamily(ripwelookwhenIwas

eleventellsalotabouther.

MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedto

spendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayof

ourtripapproached,David,myeightyearoldbrother,and1unwillinglysaidgoodbyetoallotour

friends.Whoknewifwe'deverseethemagain?Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,and

weloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andatentintothecarandbravelydroveoff.

Wcbravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe'dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveler's

checksMomhadforgotten.

DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdriving

whileDadslept:"Youstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookout（放哨）whileIgo,andI'llstand

outsidethedoorandplayloakoutwhileyougo."Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind:"Honey,where

arethekids?”“What?!Oh,Gosh...Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet.”Wewerenever

actuallyleftbehindinastrangecity,butweweren'tabouttotakeanychances.

Onthefourthorfifthnight,wchadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvain

forsometime.Momsuddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidn'twcfindahousewithalikclylooking

backyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous.Toourgreatrelief.Dad

turneddowntheidea.Momnevercouldunderstandourobjections（反对）.Ifastrangefamily

showeduponherfrontdoorstep,Momwouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinkseveryoneintheworld

isasniceassheis.Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttown.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

4.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文，

Father'sDayChess

ItwasDale'sthirdSundayvolunteeringal（heretirementhome.Hehadthoughtitwouldbe

agoodwaytogiveback.Buttodayhejustfelttired.Whileonashortbreak.Dalelookawalk

throughthegarden.Therewerepeoplesittingonbenches,chattingtogether.Awomansat

knitting,lookingverypleasedwithherself.Thestrandsofbrightlycoloredyarndisappeared

quicklythroughherhands.

Acrossthecourtyard,therewasamansittingalonealatablewithachessboardinfrontof

him.Dalewatchedwithcuriosityasthemanwouldstareatthepieces,thenmovethem,and:hen

woulddothesamefromth?othersideoftheboard.Onhiswayhomeafterthedayhadended,

Dalefoundhimselfthinkingabouttheman.Howhewashunchedoverindeepthought,playinga

gameagainsthimself.Howodd,hethought.

EachSunday,Dalewouldseethemandoingthesamething.Whileeveryoneelsetalked

withoneanotherorhappilycarriedon,themanwouldsit,slightlybentoverandscratchinghis

chin.Hiseyesrarelycameoffofthechessboard.OneSunday,Dalewenttothegardenonhis

breakexpectingtoseethemanathisnormalspot.Buthewasn'tthere.ItwasFather'sDayand

thereweremanyvisitorsatthehome.Daleshruggedandthoughtthemanmustbebusywithhis

family.

Thatafternoon,Dalewasmoppingthehallwayswhenhehappenedtopassbytheman's

room.Thedoorwasslightlyopenandhecouldseethemansittinginachairnexttothewindow,

peeringoutatthecourtyard.Daleknockedlightlyandaskedtoein.

Themannodded.Dalesawacollectionofframedphotographsonthebedsidetable.4*Are

thoseyourchildren?”heasked.

“Yes,they'reallgrownandlivefaraway.Theyhavetheirownkidsnow,“hereplied.Dale,

notwantingthemantobealoneonFather'sDay,hadanidea.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Para.I:

Hewentoutsideandgotthechessboardfrointhetable.

Para.2:

Dalewasgladthathevolunteered.

5、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

“Pickupthepace!"saidAmy'shusband."ButIcan't!"Amysaid,herheartbeatingquickly

inside."Ican'tgoanyfaster!Herhusbandencouragedher."Yes,youcan!You'remakingprogress

everyday.^^

TohelpAmystayhealihy,herhusbandhadbeenrunningwithherforoverIwoyears.Several

yearsago,Amycoukibarelywalkdownthestairsofherapartmentbuildingduetofatnesscaused

byeatingdisorders.Sherealizedtheproblemafterafailedjobinteniewandbeganwalkingto

improveherabilitytomove.Atfirst,shecouldwalkforonly15minutesatatime.Butshepushed

herselfeveryday,walking5minuteslongerthanshedidthedaybeforeuntilshewalkedforanhour

andeventuallytwo.Forthreeyears,Amykeptherwalkinghabit,slowlyandpainstakinglybuilding

herbodyshape.Thenshechangedherwalkingshoestorunningshoesabouttwoyearsagoand

becameanexcellentrunner.

InMarch2001,anadvertisementinvitedpeopletonominate（提名）anordinarypersonwho

inspiredthemtobringtheOlympicflametoSaltLakeCityastorchbearers（炬手）orsupport

runners.（Supportrunnersserveas"guardiansoftheflame"andrunwithtorchbearersalongthe

juumey.）Amy'scxpciicuccsluuchcdhcihusband,sohenuiiiinalcdhcilubea15clibcaici.The

possibilitytobeselectedwaslow,butAmywantedtotry.

RunningtaughtAmy（heimportanceoftrainingforarace.Shepicturedherselfrunningarace

andcrossingthefinishline.Formonths,sheranthroughherneighborhoodcarryingabrokenoff

broomhandle,feelingtheweightofthetorch.Shewavedatherneighbors,pretendingtheywere

cheeringcrowds.Shealsoprintedapictureofatorchbearerwearingthewhiteuniform,replacedthe

facewithapictureofhers,andputitontoherrefrigeratordoor.

Everyday,Amyimaginedherselfasatorchbearer.Shewastrainingforahistoricrunning

event.OnSeptember26th,whileonherdailyrunthroughherneighborhood,anexpresspackage

arrived.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

ParagraphI:

AmyopeneditandfoundaletterandabookontheOlympics.

Paragraph2:

"Oneoftoday'storchbearerscan'trunherpart."announcedtherelayorganizer.

6.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文，

Likemostchildren,1tookmyparentsforgranted.Itwasn'tuntil1becameanadult:hatI

realizedtheirdesiretomakeadifferenceinthelivesofothers.MamaandDaddyperformedtheir

angelmagicwithneitherfanfare（炫耀）noradesireforrecognition.Becausetheirkindnessto

otherswassomethingIacceptedasamailerofcourse,Imightneverhaveevaluatedthisaspectof

theirpersonalitieswereitnotforaneventthatmymothermentionedinpassing.

ArizonainJulyusheredin（hemonsoon（季风）season,whichwasinfullswingandjust（hat

morninghadhittheSouthernArizonadesertwithseverethunder,lightining,rain,andhighwinds.

MamaandDaddychoselospendthedaywanderingthedry,aircondilionudinalhhavingabileto

eat,andtakinginamovie.ItseemedanicewaytospendaSaturdayafternoonwhileleavingthe

stormoutdoors.

Theychoseacasualrestaurantforlunchandwerereadingthemenuwhentheirwaitress,a

youngwomaninhermidlwenties,approachedthetabletointroduceherselfandtaketheirorder.

MamaandDaddynotedthatherhairwasdamp,aswereherclothes.Shewasfriendlybutseemed

tobequitetired.

Drawingherintoconversation,theylearnedshewasasinglemotherandacollegestudent

workingtwojobs.Thatpaniculardayhadbeenunkindtoher.Hercarbrokedown,forcingherto

walktoworkintherainandwind.Shewasconcernedabouthowbeingwithoutavehiclewould

affectherabilitytocareforherdaughterandgotocollege.Herfrustrationwasobvious,andthe

day'seventshadcertainlyleftherinacertainamountofdespair.Yet,hermentscenteredonideas

forsolvingherproblemsrather(hanplainingaboutthem.Herattitudearousedmyparents'

interest.

WhenMamaandDaddyfinishedwithlunch,theysaidgoodbyetotheirwaitressandwished

herwell.Herplight(困境)andattempta(apositiveattitude(ouchedthem,andtheywondered

whattheymightdotohelp

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Theyhadtimebeforethemoviestartedtodosomeshopping;so(heywalkedintoa

bookstore.

Thewaitressopenedthebagandfoundsomebillsinabook.

7.阅改下面材料，根据具内界和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Ihavekeptawatchfrommygrandfather.WhenIwasaschoolboy,thewatchhungbymy

grandfather'sbed.ThefacewasmarkedwithelegantRomannumeralsandthecasewasgold.It

wasasplendidwatchandIoftenstaredatitlonginglysittingwithmygrandfather.Hewouldoften

askaboutmyprogressatschool.ThedayItoldhimmysuccessintheexaminations,hewasovere

withpleasure."You'llbegoingtoanewschoolnext.Andthenyou'llgotouniversity,will

you?”heasked."Butyou'llneedplentyofpatience.Patienceandhardwork.That'sthewayto

succeed.”

Hetookoffthewatchandwoundit."Itwasgivenmefbrfiftyyearsoffaithfulservicewith

myfirm,“hesaidproudlyFinally,hehandedme(hewatchdueto(heprogressinschool.Iheld

it,feelingitsweight.AsIwasleavinghim,hesaid,“Andyou'llnotforgetwhatItoldyou?"I

wassuddenlyverymoved.uNo,Granddad,MIpromised,"I'llnot.”

Arrivinghome,mymotherwastoholditintrustuntilsheconsideredmeoldenoughtclook

afterit,butIprotestedsostronglythatshefinallyagreedtohangitwhereIcouldalwayssecit.

Thesummerendedanditwastimeformetoenterthenewschool.Inevermadefriendseasily

there.Oneboy,Crawley,wasawell-to-dofellowwhosewayofimpressinguswas(oshowoffhis

possessions.Hisbicyclewasnew；hisbootswereofthebeslhide；everything,infact,wasbetter

thanours—untilhebroughtawatch.Crawleysaidhiswatchwasabsolutelythefinestwatch.

haveabetterwatch,Iannounced.4tWell,showittous,"Crawleysaidsneeringly(讽巾1」

土也).'THbringitthisafternoon,“Isaid.“Thenyou'llsee?'1rodemybikehome,wonderinghow

Iwouldpersuademymothertoletmetakethewatch.Luckily,shesteppedoutsideandIslipped

thewatchintomypocket.

I.续写词数应为150左石：

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paiagiapli1：

Irodemybikefasttoschoolafterlunch,excitementthroughme.

Paragraph2：

WhenIsaidmymothercouldn'tletmebringthewatch-theyburstintolaughter.

8.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文,

InDecember2020,FloresGonzalezhadher4yearolds.LunaandGianella,tietheirliststo

twoballoonsandreleasethemintotheskyabovetheirhomeinLiberal,Kansas.Itwastheirway

ofreachingSantaClaus.

FloresGonzalezthoughtitwasimportanttodosomethingspecialforherdaughtersbecause

ofthehardyeartheyhadduringthepandemic（大流行病）.Theschoolswereshutdownandshe

wasoutofworkformorethantwomonths.Everyoneseemedtobeinlowspirits.Shewantedto

cheerthefamilyupandwantedthegirlstofeelthat2020wasanotheryearspentwithmom

makingbeautifulmemories.Itwasneverwiththepurposethatsomeonewouldfind（heballoons.

Shethoughttheballoonswouldjustfloatawayanddisappearsomewhereinatreenearby.

ButoneoftheballoonsdidmakeittoAlvinBamburg,whowasdeerhuntinginGrandCane,

Louisiana,inla（eDecemberwhenhespottedaballoontangled（纠缠）inatree.Hetoldhimselfhe

neededtogetthetrashoutofthewoods.However,whenhegotit,henoticedafoldedyellow

pieceofpaperscaledwitharedstarandilwasaChrislmaslistfromagirlnamedLuna.Shehad

askedSantatobringhercandy,aSpiderManball,aFrozendollandadachshund（腊肠狗）puppy,

whichwashermostdesiredpresent.

TheholidayskeptAlvinBamburgandhiswifebusy.Theyhadfamilyreunionsandorganized

severalcharitypartiestohelpwhoeverneededhelpbuttheydidn'tforgetaboutthelist.Inearly

January,BamburgsharedhisdiscoverywithfamilyandfriendsonFacebook."Iwouldloveto

knowwhenitwaslaunched.Itlookslikeittravelled600miles,“hewrote.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

SomanypeoplesharedthepostthatiteventuallyreachedFloresGonzalez.

Aftermonthsofmunication.itwastimefortheBamburgstogivethemonelastpresent.

9.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文，

PamBalesplannedasixhourhikethroughNewHampshireAMount.Onthedashboard（