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专题17议论文

写作方法指导

议论文的行文结构往往是三段论，包括引言段、主体段、结尾段。其中引言段引出现象，

表达观点，开门见山，引起下文；主体段可以借助名人名言、举实例、打比喻、对比分析、

驳斥错误或用归纳、推理、总结等方法针对引言段的观点进行阐述，要求恰当使用过渡词，

层次清晰，引领读者一步一步地根据分论点走向最终要阐述的观点。结尾段需要用一两句话

来总结主体段、呼应引言段，做到首尾呼应。

写作模板

模板一不同观点列举型(选择型)

Thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethat_作文题目.Butitiswellknownthat

theopinionconcerningthishottopicvariesfrompersontoperson.Amajorityofpeoplethinkthat

_观点-.Intheirviewsthereare2factorscontributingtothisattitudeasfollows:in

thefirstplace,___原因一.Furthermore,inthesecondplace,___原因二.Soitgoes

withoutsaying(hat观点一.People,however,differintheiropinionsonthismatter.

Somepeopleholdtheideathat___观点二.Intheirpointofview,ontheonehand,___

原因一.Ontheotherhand,原因二.Therefore,thereisnodoubtthat___观点

AsfarasIamconcerned,Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat—观点一或二.Itisnotonly

because,butalsobecause.Themore,themore.

模板二利弊型议论文

Nowadays,thereisawidespreadconcernover(theissuethat)___作文题H.Infact,

therearcbothadvantagesanddisadvantagesin_题目议题_____.Generallyspeaking,itis

widelybelieved(hereareseveralpositiveaspectsasfollows.Firstly,___优点一.And

secondly___优点二.

JustAsapopularsayinggoes,"everycoinhastwosides",_讨论议题______isnoexception,

andinanotherword,itslillhasnegativeaspects.Tobeginwith,___缺点——.Inaddition,

缺点二.

Tosumup,weshouldtrytobringtheadvantagesof_讨论议题____intofullplay,andreduce

thedisadvantagestotheminimumalthesametime.Inthatcase,wewilldefinitelymakeabelter

useofthe讨论议题.

模板三答辩型议论文

Currently,(hereisawidespreadconcernover(theissuethat)_作文题目.Itisreallyan

importantconcerntoeveryoneofus.

Asaresult,wemustsparenoeffortstotakesomemeasurestosolvethisproblem.Asweknow

thattherearemanystepswhichcanbetakentoundothisproblem.Firstofall,—途径一.

Inaddition,anotherwaycontributingtosuccessofthesolvingproblemis___途径二.

Aboveall,tosolvetheproblemof___作文题目,weshouldfindanumberofvariousways.

ButasfarasIamconcerned,Iwouldprefertosolvetheprobleminthisway,thatistosay,

方法.

模板四谚语警句型议论文

Itiswellknowtousthattheproverb:"___谚语"hasaprofoundsignificanceand

valuenotonlyinourjobbutalsoinourstudy.Itmeans谚语的含义.Thesayingcan

beillustratedthroughaseriesofexamplesasfollows.(alsotheoretically)Acaseinpointis___

彳列子——.Therefore,itisgoeswithoutsayingthatitisofgreatofimportancetopracticethe

proverb谚语.

WiththerapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnologyinChina,anincreasingnumberofpeoplee

torealizethatitisalsoofpracticalusetosticktothesaying:谚语.Themoreweare

awareofthesignificanceofthisfamoussaying,themorebenefitswewillgelinourdailystudy

andjob.

常用表达

常用词语

...Second...Second,...Third,...首先，……其次，……再次

Firstly/Secondly/Thirdly首先/其次/再次

foronething...,foranother..一方面……，另一方面……，

inthefirst/second/thirdplace首先/其次/再次

ontheonehand/ontheotherhand一方面/另一方面

similarly相似地

inthesamemanner以相同的方式

onthecontrary恰恰相反

beparedto...把……比作

Bycontrast/parison对比之下

paring..with...与……相比

formypart至于我

lastbutnotleast最后一个同样重要的

eventually最后

finally最后

常用句型

01开头

1.Recently(hephenomenonhasbeeaheatedtopic.最近，这一现象成为了一个热门话题。

2.Recentlytheproblemhasbeenbroughtintofocus.最近，这个问题引发了关注。

3.Nowadaysthereisagrowingconcernover...现在，人们越来越关注..

4.Whatcallsforspecialattentionisthat...引起特殊关注的是..

5.Itismonknowledgethat.../Itiswellknownthat...众所周知..

6.Manynationshavebeenfacedwiththeproblemof...很多国家都面临这..的问题。

7.Accordingtoarecentsurvey...根据最近的研究..

8.Withtherapiddevelopmentof...随着..的快速发展。

02结尾

1.Fromwhathasbeendiscussed/mentionedabove,wemayconcludethat...综上所述，我们可

以得出……的结论。

2.Therefore,itisnotdifficulttodraw/etotheconclusionthat...因此，不难得出..的结论。

3.Asfaras1amconcerned,Iagreewiththelatteropiniontosonicextent.就我而言，某种程度

上我赞同后一种观点。

4.Fromallthereasons/considerationabove,itisclear!obviousthat...综上所述,很明

显，...

5.Takingintoaccountallthesefactors,wemayreachtheconclusionthat...综合考虑所有这些

因素，我们可以得出……为结论。

6.Giventhereasons/considerationIhavejustoutlined/discussed/presented,Istronglyremend

that...鉴于我刚刚所说的，我非常赞成……

7.Allinall,whatreallymattersis...总之，真正关键的在于..

8.Itisessentialthateffectivemeasuresbetakento...采取...的有效措施,非常有必要》

9.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayreasonablydrawtheconclusionthat...综上所

述，我们可以非常合理地得出……的结论。

9.Perhapstheprimaryfactoristhat...一个可能的主要因素是...

10.Butthefundamentalcauseisthat...但最基本的原因是...

名校模拟题提升练10篇

1.（2023秋•重庆•高三校联考开学考试）假如你是李华，最近你班将以“Willrobotstakethe

placeofhumanbeings?”为活题举办一个英语辩论会。请你写一篇发言稿，代表反方发言，内

容包括：

1.亮明观点；

2.陈述理由；

3.得出结论。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案］Robotshavebeemoreandmoreintelligentinrecentyears,sosomepeoplethinktheyarc

likelytotaketheplaceofhumanbeingsoneday.However,Ihavedifferentopinions.Myreasons

areasfollows.

Firstofall,robotsaredesignedbyhumanbeings,sotheirintelligenceislimited.Second,

robotsdon'thavefeelingsjustlikehumanbeingsthoughtheycanimitatehumanbeingsin:nany

ways.Mostimportantly,robotscan'tthinkbythemselves,whichmakesthemdifferentfrom

humanbeingsandputthematadisadvantage.

Inconclusion,althoughtechnologymakesitpossibleforrobotstodevelopbetterintelligence

anddoavarietyofthingsfbrus,theycan'treplacehumanbeings.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求作为辩论会的反方针对“Willrobotstakethe

placeofhumanbeings?”话题发言。

【详解】1.词汇积累：

首先：firstofall—*tobeginwith

使...不同于：…makesbdifferentfrom—>makesbtellapartfrom

代替：taketheplaceof—>rcplacc

句式拓展

简单句变复杂句

原句：Firstofall,robotsaredesignedbyhumanbeings,sotheirintelligenceislimited.

改写句：Firstofall,duetothefactthatrobotsarcdesignedbyhumanbeings,theirintelligenceis

limited.

【点睛】【高分句型1]Mostimportantly,robotscan'tthinkbythemselves,whichmakesthem

differentfromhumanbeingsandputthematadisadvantage.（运用which引导的非限定性定语

从句）

【高分句型2]Inconclusion,althoughtechnologymakesitpossibleforrobotstodevelopbetter

intelligenceanddoavarietyofthingsforus,theycan'treplacehumanbeings.（运用although弓|

导的让步状语从句）

2.（2023秋•宁夏银川•高三银川一中校考阶段练习）假如你是红星中学的高三学生李华。你

所在学校为了让高三学生有更多的时间备战高考，计划每周减少一节体育课进行数学测试。

请你写一篇短文表达你对这个提议的看法。内容包括：

1.你的观点；

2.你的理由。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】WearctotaketheentranceexaminationtouniversitynextJune.Inordertoguarantee

morestudytimeforSeniorThreestudents,ourschoolhasintendedtocutdownononePEclass

perweektomaketimeformathtests.Ilowever,Idon'tthinkitisbeneficialtousstudents.

AsfarasIamaware,takingexerciseisofequalimportancetoSeniorThreestudents.Firstof

all,doingsportscontributestobuildingupourstrength,thusincreasingourresistance.Moreover,

weurgentlyneedsportstohelptoenhancemunicationamongstudents,avoidingsome

psychologicalproblems.Inaddition,bytakingpartinphysicalexercise,ourmindscangetrelaxed

andrefreshed.

Inconclusion,IstronglysuggestthatourschoolshouldnotreduceourPEclasssoasto

promoteourallrounddevelopment.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生就学校为备战高考计划每周减少高三学生一节

体育课这一提议发表看法并阐明理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累

强烈地：strongly—>exceedingly

有益的：beneficial—>profitable

相等的：equal—>cquivalcnt

提高：enhance—♦improve

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：InordertoguaranteemorestudytimeforSeniorThreestudents,ourschoolhasintendedto

cutdownononePEclassperweektomaketimeformathtests.

拓展句：OurschoolhasintendedtocutdownononePEclassperweektomaketimeformath

tests,whichaimstoguaranteemorestudytimefbrSeniorThreestudents.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Firstofall,doingsportscontributestobuildingupourstrength,thus

increasingourresislance.（运用了动名词作主语以及现在分词作状语）

[高分句型2]Inconclusion.IstronglysuggestthatourschoolshouldnotreduceourPEclasssoas

topromoteourallrounddevelopment.（运用/that弓卜导的宾语从句和短语soasto）

3.（2023秋•黑龙江双鸭山•高三双鸭山一中校考开学考试）人们对于学生网上交友持不同意

见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。

注意：写作词数应为80左右。

【答案】Shouldstudentsmakefriendsonline?Somepecplesayyes.Theinternethelpsmake

manyfriends.Chattingonline,studentscanmorefreelyexpress（heirfeelingsandopinions,and

evengethelpwiththeirforeignlanguagestudies.Others,however,thinkstudentsshouldnot.

Theysaymakingfriendsonlineisawasteoflime,whichshouldbespentmoremeaningfullyon

study.Besides,somestudentsgetcheatedonline.Itismyopinionthatstudentsshouldplacetheir

study,healthandsafetybeforeotherthings.Asforfriendship,wecanreadilyfinditinour

classmatesandotherpeoplearoundus.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生用英语写一•篇关于学生网上交友的短文，

介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。

【详解】1.词汇积累

表达：express—>convey

观点：opinion—>view

此外：besides-whal'smore

找到：find—>discover

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Chattingonline,studentscanmorefreelyexpresstheirfeelingsandopinions,andevenget

helpwiththeirforeignlanguagestudies.

拓展句：Whenstudentsarechattingonline,theycanmorefreelyexpresstheirfeelingsand

opinions,andevengethelpwiththeirforeignlanguagestudies.

［点睛］［高分句型1］Others,however,thinkstudentsshouldnot.（运用了省略that引导宾语

从句）

【高分句型2］Theysaymakingfriendsonlineisawasteoftime,whichshouldbespentmore

meaningfullyonstudy.（运用了省略that引导宾语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句）

4.（2023・四川•模拟预测）2023年2月，被美国租借了20年的熊猫“乐乐”不幸辞世。当年

和“乐乐”一-起去到美国的还有“乐乐”的青梅竹马，大熊猫“丫丫”。但是美国动物园向于各种

原因没能照顾好两只国宝，丫丫瘦得皮包骨头。因此，这年3月出了一首火爆全网的动人歌

曲《丫丫回来吧》。请你写一篇文章，谈谈你对熊猫的认识和对于美国方面没能照顾好"丫丫”

的看法。词数：100词左右。

【答案】Apossibleversion:

Pandasareadoredworldwidefortheirgentlenatureandadorableappearance.Sadly,the

recentpassingofLele,amalepandaleasedtoUSAfortwodecades,highlightstheimportanceof

wildlifeconservation.Pandasareanendangeredspecies,andtheirsurvivaldependsoncollective

effortsofhumans.

TheheartbreakingstoryofYaya,whoisLele'sgirlfriend,isarefleclionofthechallengesof

caringforthesepreciousanimals.DespitebeingbroughttoUS,Yayawasneglectedandleft

malnourishedandsick.Thesong“BringYayaHome^^shinesalightontheneedforincreased

attentionandcarewhenitestopandas.

It'sabouttimethatnationsacrosstheglobetookcareoftheseinvaluableanimals.Let's

congregatewithunityandmakeallouteffortstosafeguardglobalwildlife.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文。要求考生就美国动物园囿于各种原因没能照顾好熊猫‘‘乐

乐”和“丫丫”这事，写一篇文章，谈谈自己对熊猫的认识和时于美国方面没能照顾好“丫丫”

的看法。

【详解】1.词汇积累

强调...的重要性：highlighttheimportanceof...—>stresstheimportanceof...

保护：conservation—»protection

依赖：dependon—*relyon

照顾：takecareof—>attendto

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Pandasareanendangeredspecies,andtheirsurvivaldependsoncollectiveeffortsof

humans.

拓展句：Pandasareanendangeredspecies,whosesurvivaldependsoncollectiveeffortsof

humans.

【点睛】【高分句型I]TheheartbreakingstoryofYaya,whoisLele'sgirlfriend,isareflectionof

thechallengesofcaringforthesepreciousanimals.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句,动

名词作宾语）

【高分句型2]It'sabouttimethatnationsacrosstheglobetookcareoftheseinvaluableanimals.

（运用了虚拟语气）

5.（2023・河南•校联考三校）假定你是李华，你班近期开展了以Whatmakesagoodteenagerin

theNewEra?为题的讨论。请你就此写一篇短文向英文校刊投稿，内容包括：

1.讨论结果；

2.你的观点。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

WhatmakesagoodteenagerintheNewEra?

【答案】WhatmakesagoodteenagerintheNewEra?

TothoroughlyunderstandwhatmakesagoodteenagerintheNewEra,studentsinourclass

heldadiscussionaboutthesubject.

Firstly,moststudentsagreethatagoodteenagerintheNewErashoulddevotehimselfto

study.Secondly,manystudentsconsideritnecessarytobepositive,kindandhelpfulanda

teenagerpossessingthetwoqualitiesalwaysrespectstheagedandlovestheyoung.Lastbutnot

least,agoodteenagerintheNewErashouldbefaithfultothecountryandpeople,whichisthe

basicprinciple.

Inmyopinion,apartfromwhatismentionedbymyclassmates,physicalandmentalhealthis

ofequalimportancetoagoodteenagerintheNewEra.

【导语】本文是一篇投稿。要求考生以李华的身份就你班近期开展了以Whatmakesagood

teenagerintheNewEra?为题的讨论写一篇短文向英文校刊投稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

理解：understand—►prehend

讨论：discussion—>conference

同意：agree—*consent

有益的:behelpful—*bebeneficial

2.句式拓展

同义句改写

原句：Firstly,moststudentsagreethatagoodteenagerintheNewErashoulddevotehimselfto

study.

拓展句：Firstly,whatmoststudentsagreeisthatagoodteenagerintheNewErashoulddevote

himselftostudy.

【点睛】【高分句型1]TothoroughlyunderstandwhatmakesagoodteenagerintheNewEra,

studentsinourclassheldadiscussionaboutthesubject.（动词不定式做目的状语）

[高分句型2]Lastbutnotleast,agoodteenagerintheNewErashouldbefaithfultothecountry

andpeople,whichisthebasicprinciple.（运用了which引导的定语从句）

6.（2023•辽宁大连•大连八中校考三模）学校英文报正在开展以“HowtoSpendOurNational

Holiday”为题的讨论。请杈据表格中的调杳结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

1.调查结果描述；

2.简单评论；

3.你的建议。

如何度过国庆节调查结果

方式学习娱乐社会实践，志愿活动

人数百分比60%15%25%

注意：

(1)写作词数应为80左右；

(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.

【答案】HowtoSpendOurNationalHoliday

TheNationalHolidayisaspecialtimeforusstudentstohaveourownlife.Astheformshows,

studentschoosedifferentwaystospendourNationalHoliday.Surprisingly,studentswhospend

theirholidayinlearningaccountfbr60%.15%ofstudentsthinktheholidayisanoccasionfor

themtorelaxthemselves,enjoyingmoviesorplayingputergames.Toourdelight,thepercentof

thestudentstakingpartinsocialpracticeorvoluntaryactivitiesis25%.Thefiguresintheform

showstudentsattachgreatimportancetostudy.Meanwhilemoreandmorestudentshaveinterest

inexercisingtheirabilityandservingothers.Frommyperspective,ourNationalHolidayshould

beameaningfultimeforusstudentstoenjoyourselvesorlearnsomethingbeyondtheclassrooms.

Takingpartinsomesocialactivitiesisagoodchoiceforusstudentstoimproveourselves.

【导语】本文是图表作文。要求考生结合表格中的内容写一篇英文短文，包括“如何度过国

庆节”的调查结果，并给予相关评论以及建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

在我看来：frommyperspectiveTnmyopinion

参力U：takepartin—►participatein

有意义的：meaningful—>fulfilling

提升：improve—*promote

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Toourdelight,thepercentofthestudentstakingpartinsocialpracticeorvoluntary

activitiesis25%.

拓展句：Toourdelight,thepercentof（hestudentswhotakepartinsocialpracticeorvoluntary

activitiesis25%.

【点睛】【高分句型I]Astheformshows,studentschoosedifferentwaystospendourNational

Holiday.（由as引导的非限定性定语从句）

[高分句型2]Thefiguresintheformshowstudentswhospendtheirholidayinlearningaccount

for60%.（由省略连词that引导的宾语从句和who引导的限定性定语从句）

7.（2023•四川成都•统考二模）你校英文报正在开展以“DiscoveringGoodBooks”为题的讨论，

请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括•：

1.描述发现好书的方式；

2.简单评论；

3.你的情况。

Howdoyouusuallydiscoverthebooksyouread?

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

DiscoveringGoodBooks

【答案】DiscoveringGoodBooks

Accordingtoarecentsurveyonhowpeoplediscoverbooks,wordofmouthisthemost

popularmethod,with38%ofrespondentscitingitastheirprimarysource.Thisisfollowedby

onlinesellersat22%,physicalstoresat16%,socialmediaat18%,andothermethodsat6%.

Whilewordofmouthremendationsareseenasthemostreliable,socialmediaandonline

sellersprovideawidevarietyofoptionsandeasyaccesstoreviews.Physicalstoresofferaunique

browsingexperience.

Personally,Irelyonwordofmouthremendations,butalsobrowseonlinesellersandvisit

physicalbookstoresfromtimetotimetodiscoverhiddengems.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生使用图表中的调查结果，并结合自身情况以

^DiscoveringGoodBooks”为题写一篇短文投稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

依据：Accordingto—>lnaccordancewith

各种各样的：avarietyof—►various

就我个人而言：Personally—*AsfarasI'mconcerned

依靠：relyon—>dependon

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Physicalstoresofferauniquebrowsingexperience.

拓展句：Itisphysicalstoresthatofferauniquebrowsingexperience.

【点睛X高分句型I[According（oarecentsurveyonhowpeoplediscoverbooks,wordofmouth

isthemostpopularmethod,with38%ofrespondentscitingitastheirprimarysource.（运用了

how引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】Whilewordofmouthremendationsareseenasthemostreliable,socialmediaand

onlinesellersprovideawidevarietyofoptionsandeasyaccesstoreviews.（运用while弓I导的

让步状语从句）

8.（2023•河南郑州•洛宁县第一高级中学校联考模拟预测）假定你是李华，学校英文报正在

开展以TheAdvantagesaixlDisadvantagesofUsingiPads为题的讨论，你在校园展开了调行。

现请你给学校英文报写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

1.学生对使用iPad的态度及原因；

2.你的看法及建议。

对使用iPad的态度原因你的看法与建议

1.用iPad进行学习；

40%的人表示支持

2.用iPad娱乐;听音乐,放松心情。

1.滥用iPad会影响他人;

60%的人表示反对

2.沉迷于iPad会影响学习。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.短文的题FI和首句已为你写好。

TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofUsingiPads

ItiswellknownthattherearcadvantagesanddisadvantagesofusingiPads.

［答案］TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofUsingiPads

ItiswellknownthatthereareadvantagesanddisadvantagesofusingiPads.Inarecent

investigationofstudentsoncampus,40%ofrespondentsexpressedsupportforusingiPadsfor

learningandforentertainmentpurposes,suchaslisteningtomusictorelax.Theother60%were

opposedtousingiPadsduetoconcernsaboutthenegativeimpactonothersandthepotentialfor

iPadstobeeasourceofdistractionfromstudying.

Despitethisdivisionofopinion,itisclearthatiPadscanbeusefultoolsforlearningand

entertainment.However,itisimportanttousethemresponsiblyandnotattheexpenseofothersor

one'sowneducation.Therefore,mysuggestionistoencourageabalanceintheuseofiPads,by

settingguidelinesforwhenandhowtheycanbeused.Forexample,iPads,whichcouldbeused

foralimiiedamounioflimeeachdayandonlyforcertainaciiviiiesihaisupportlearning,suchas

takingnotesoraccessingecucationalapps.

Inconclusion,whilethereareadvantagesanddisadvantagestousingiPads,responsibleuse

canleadtoapositiveandproductivelearningexperience.Itisuptousasindividualstomakewise

choicesandstrikeabalancebetweenusingtechnologyforourbenefitandavoidingnegative

impactsonourselvesandothers.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofUsing

iPads为题给学校英文报投稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

调查：survey—>investigation

影响：impact—>cflcct

尽管：Despite—Although

鼓励：encourage—>inspire

2.句式拓展

同义句替换

原句：Itisuptousasindividualstomakewisechoicesandstrikeabalancebetweenusing

technologyfbrourbenefitandavoidingnegativeimpactsonourselvesandothers.

同义句：Asindividuals,wehave（heresponsibilitytomakesmartdecisionsandmaintaina

balancebetweenutilizingtechnologyforourbenefitandavoidinganydetrimentaleffectsitmay

haveonusorothers.

［点睛］［高分句型1］Despitethisdivisionofopinion,itisclearthatiPadscanbeusefultoolsfor

learningandentertainment运用了Despite引导的让步状语从句，that引导主语从句，it做形

式主语）

【高分句型2】Forexample,iPads,whichcouldbeusedforalimitedamountoftimeeachdayand

onlyforcertainactivitiesthatsupportlearning,suchastakingnotesoraccessingeducationalapps.

（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

9.（2023•广东广州・统考三模）假设你是校报的小记者。最近校报针对学生使用手机的情况

进行了一次调查，结果如下表所示。请你参照表格内容，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，

介绍调查结果，并谈谈你的看法，将此文刊登在校报英文版上。

比例理由

45%手机主要是用来娱乐的，课余时间能用手机上网、玩游戏：

30%手机是与家人、朋友联系的工具；

25%使用手机会影响学习

注意:

1.词数100左右;

2.短文的题Fl已为你写好。

ASurveyontheUseofMobilePhones

【答案]ASurveyon（heUseofMobilePhones

Recently,ourschoolnewspapercaniedoutasurveyontheuseofmobilephonesamong

students.Theresultsshowthatstudentshavedifferentattitudestowardsmobilephones.

Accordingtothesurvey,45percentofthestudentsquestionedsaythattheyusemobile

phonesasameansofentenainment,withwhichtheycansurftheInternetandplaysmallgames.

30percentpreferthefunctionofcontactingwithfamilyardfriendsattherighttime.About25

percentthinkthatusingmobilephonescouldaffecttheirstudiesbecausetheymanyspendtoo

muchtimeusingit.

Inmyopinion,itisOKforsiudenistousemobilephonesasameansofmunication,aslong

aswedonotspendtoomuchtimeonit.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生介绍校报针对学生使用手机的情况进行的调

查结果，并谈谈自己的看法。

【详解】1.词汇积累

最近：recently—^lately

不同的：diflferentTdiverse

影响：affect—>influcncc

在我看来：inmyopinion—>asfarasI'mconcerned

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Recently,ourschoolnewspapercarriedoutasurveyontheuseofmobi