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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Manyyearsago,Iwasatagirls’schoolandourteachermadeallthegirlsintheclasssitnexttosomeonedifferenteveryday.Ononeofthedays,myteacherpairedMadhuri,whoIhadnevertalkedto,andmetositnexttoeachother.Inoticedthatsheseemedveryanxious.Iaskedherwhatwaswrong.Sheremainedsilentatfirst,buteventually,shetoldmethatshehadthreesistersinherfamilyandthatherfathercouldn’taffordschoolbooksforallofthem.Myprimaryschoolwasstrict,aswasthestandardthen,andifyoudidn’thaveyourschoolbookstheteacherwouldmakeyouleavetheclass.Madhuriwasveryanxiousthatdaybecauseshethoughtthattheteacherwouldtellhertoleavetheclass.Whentheteachersawthatshedidn’thavethebooks,hetoldMadhurithatshecouldn’tattendclassforaweek.Madhuriwasveryupset.IfeltsobadwhenIsawherpainthatIdecidedtohelpher.Iwenttospeaktoherandofferedtobuythebooksforher.Sherefusedmyoffertohelp.Shehadverystrongprinciplesandshewouldneveracceptthingsboughtbyothers.WhenIgothomefromschoolItoldmymomthestory.ShesaidthatitwasgoodthatIhadtriedtohelpbutIshouldstopworryingaboutitbecausetherewasnothingmorethatIcoulddoifshehadrefusedmyoffertohelp.Icouldn’tstopworryingaboutitthough.注意:1.续写词数共150左右;2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:ThenIhadanidea.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Thenextday,IgotupearlysothatIcouldgotoherhousebeforegoingtoschool.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文本分析角色:_____________________________视角:第________人称时空线:fromtheteacherpairing"me"withMadhuriingirls’school____________________________"me"offeringtobuybooksforMadhuriandbeingrefused"me"tellingmomthestoryandgettingheradvice"me"notstoppingworrying"me"havinganidea______________helpingMadhurisuccessfully请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。WhywasMadhurianxiouswhensittingnextto"me"?:______________________________________________Whatwastheschool’sruleaboutnothavingschoolbooks?:____________________________________________HowdidtheteacherpunishMadhurifornothavingbooks?:_______________________Whatdid"me"dofirsttohelpMadhuri?:___________________________________WhydidMadhurirefuse"me"'shelp?_______________________Whatadvicedid"me"'smomgiveafterhearingthestory?:__________________________________________________Howdid"me"feelafterMadhurirefusedandmomgaveadvice?:___________________HowmanysistersdidMadhurihave?_______________________________________Whycouldn’tMadhuri’sfatherbuyschoolbooksforher?____________________________________________________情节线:女子学校老师让每天和不同同学同桌→“我”与从未交谈过的玛杜丽同桌,发现她很焦虑→玛杜丽告知“我”父亲无力为她和三个姐妹买课本,担心被处罚→老师发现玛杜丽无课本,罚她一周不能上课→“我”提出帮她买课本,因玛杜丽原则性强拒绝接受他人购买的物品而遭拒→“我”回家告知妈妈,妈妈劝“我”别再操心,但“我”仍放心不下→(续写)“我”想到一个帮助玛杜丽的办法→(续写)第二天“我”早起去玛杜丽家,成功帮她解决难题。情感线:I("me"):curious(aboutMadhuri’sanxiety)→sympathetic(afterknowingthereason)→eager(tohelp)→disappointed(whenrefused)→worried(notstoppingcaring)→inspired(whenhavinganidea)(续写)→relieved&happy(whenhelpingsuccessfully)(续写)综合以上信息,请用34句话概括文章大意。(中英各一个)中文:在女子学校,因老师要求每天换同桌,“我”与玛杜丽同桌并得知她因父亲无力买课本而焦虑。老师罚无课本的玛杜丽一周不能上课,“我”提出帮她买课本却因她原则性强被拒。“我”回家告知妈妈后,妈妈劝“我”放弃,但“我”仍心系此事,决心找到其他帮助方式。英文:Atagirls’school,becausetheteacherrequiredchangingdeskmateseveryday,"I"satwithMadhuriandlearnedshewasanxiousbecauseherfathercouldn’taffordschoolbooks.TheteacherpunishedMadhuribyforbiddingherfromattendingclassforaweekfornothavingbooks."I"offeredtobuybooksforherbutwasrefusedduetoherstrongprinciples.After"I"toldhermotheraboutit,hermotheradvised"I"togiveup,but"I"stillcaredanddeterminedtofindanotherwaytohelp.句式:宾语从句;非谓语;感叹句;同位语;完全倒装句;比喻;夸张_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________本文属于人与他人:_______________________________________情节构造第一段提示句:ThenIhadanidea.衔接句1——对前面“被拒绝且妈妈劝放弃”提问“‘我’的办法要符合什么条件才能让玛杜丽接受?”:Whatconditionsshould"my"ideameettomakeMadhuriacceptit?过渡句推演:衔接1→“我”结合玛杜丽的原则,想到用自己闲置的旧课本帮忙,还做了准备→衔接2衔接句2——对后面“去玛杜丽家”提问“‘我’的办法具体是什么,做了哪些准备?”:Whatwas"my"specificideaandwhatpreparationsdid"I"make?第二段提示句:Thenextday,IgotupearlysothatIcouldgotoherhousebeforegoingtoschool.衔接3——对“gotoherhouse”提问“玛杜丽看到‘我’的准备后是什么反应,是否接受了帮助?”:WhatwasMadhuri’sreactionwhenseeing"my"preparationsanddidsheacceptthehelp?过渡句推演:衔接3→玛杜丽起初犹豫,最终接受帮助,两人关系发生变化→主题主题:_________________________________段落构思第一段:ThenIhadanidea.→①__________________→②__________________→③__________________;英文:ThenIhadanidea.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二段:Thenextday,IgotupearlysothatIcouldgotoherhousebeforegoingtoschool.→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________。英文:Thenextday,IgotupearlysothatIcouldgotoherhousebeforegoingtoschool.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案文本分析角色:"me"(主人公)、Madhuri(主人公同学)、theteacher(学校老师)、"me"'smom(主人公妈妈)视角:第一时空线:fromtheteacherpairing"me"withMadhuriingirls’school"me"askingMadhuriandknowinghertroubletheteacherpunishingMadhurifornobooks"me"offeringtobuybooksforMadhuriandbeingrefused"me"tellingmomthestoryandgettingheradvice"me"notstoppingworrying"me"havinganidea"me"preparinghelpmaterialshelpingMadhurisuccessfullyWhywasMadhurianxiouswhensittingnextto"me"?:Shehadnoschoolbooks(herfathercouldn’taffordthemforherandherthreesisters)andfearedbeingpunishedbytheteacher.Whatwastheschool’sruleaboutnothavingschoolbooks?:Ifastudentdidn’thaveschoolbooks,theteacherwouldmakehim/herleavetheclass.HowdidtheteacherpunishMadhurifornothavingbooks?:HetoldMadhurishecouldn’tattendclassforaweek.Whatdid"me"dofirsttohelpMadhuri?:"I"offeredtobuytheschoolbooksforher.WhydidMadhurirefuse"me"'shelp?:Shehadverystrongprinciplesandwouldneveracceptthingsboughtbyothers.Whatadvicedid"me"'smomgiveafterhearingthestory?:Shesaiditwasgood"I"triedtohelp,but"I"shouldstopworryingastherewasnothingmore"I"coulddoafterMadhurirefused.Howdid"me"feelafterMadhurirefusedandmomgaveadvice?:"I"stillfeltworriedandcouldn’tstopcaringaboutMadhuri.HowmanysistersdidMadhurihave?:Three.Whycouldn’tMadhuri’sfatherbuyschoolbooksforher?:Hecouldn’taffordschoolbooksforallofMadhuriandherthreesisters.句式:宾语从句:Shetoldmethatshehadthreesistersandthatherfathercouldn’taffordschoolbooksforallofthem.非谓语:SeeingMadhuri’ssadness,Idecidedtohelpher.感叹句:WhatstrongprinciplesMadhurihas!同位语:Madhuri,agirlwithstrongprinciples,refusedmykindoffer.完全倒装句:Inmybackpackweretheoldtextbookswithclearnotes.比喻:Madhuri’sanxietywaslikeadarkcloudhangingoverher.夸张:IwassoworriedaboutherthatIcouldn’tfocusonmyhomeworkatall.本文属于人与他人:同学间的善意互助,尊重他人原则的智慧帮扶,展现真诚关怀与尊严守护的价值。情节构造第一段提示句:ThenIhadanidea.衔接句1——对前面“被拒绝且妈妈劝放弃”提问“‘我’的办法要符合什么条件才能让玛杜丽接受?”:Whatconditionsshould"my"ideameettomakeMadhuriacceptit?Itshouldnotinvolveacceptingthingsboughtbyothers,fittingherstrongprinciples.过渡句推演:衔接1→“我”结合玛杜丽的原则,想到用自己闲置的旧课本帮忙,还做了准备→衔接2衔接句2——对后面“去玛杜丽家”提问“‘我’的办法具体是什么,做了哪些准备?”:Whatwas"my"specificideaandwhatpreparationsdid"I"make?TheideawastogiveMadhuri"my"usedtextbooks.Ispenttheeveningsortingthemout,wipingoffdust,andwritingnotesonkeypointstomakethemusable.第二段提示句:Thenextday,IgotupearlysothatIcouldgotoherhousebeforegoingtoschool.衔接3——对“gotoherhouse”提问“玛杜丽看到‘我’的准备后是什么反应,是否接受了帮助?”:WhatwasMadhuri’sreactionwhenseeing"my"preparationsanddidsheacceptthehelp?Shewassurprisedandtouched.Afterknowingtheywereused,shenoddedwithtears,acceptedthebooks,andthankedme
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