读后续写情感描写（1）导学案-高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

高考读后续写情感表达(一)班级：________姓名：________小组：________【考情分析】读后续写是高考英语难点之一，分数占比25分。考察形式是给定两段开头句，让学生续写内容，大概150字左右。要写好文章，学生需要描写主人公的情绪通过情绪和动作表达。所以，情绪表达在续写中是非常关键的。【课程标准】掌握情绪的相关表达的句型和短语。【学习目标】掌握情绪表达的相关句型。掌握情绪表达的相关词汇和短语。【重点难点】重点：词汇表达的相关词汇和短语。难点：情绪表达的句型。教学流程环节一预·筑基（20min)喜悦与兴奋句型1:无灵主语awave/surge/spark/flood/shiverofexcitement/thrill/delightovercame/overwhelmed/seized/overtook/tookholdof//tookpossessionof/settledover/washedover/sweptover/consumedsb一股兴奋的情绪席卷某人。例句：Whenshegotthenewsofherwinningfirstprize，awaveofthrillseizedhim.当他当她得知自己获得一等奖的消息时，一股兴奋的情绪席卷而来。句型2:形容词作状语Overjoyedandthrilled/Overthemoon/exhilarated,hebouncedupanddown.他兴奋地上蹦下跳。例句：Uponhearingthenews,overjoyedandthrilled,hebouncedupanddown.听到这个消息，他兴奋得跳上跳下。句型3:让步状语从句（as/though):情绪形容词+as/though+主语+谓语，sbsth........sth........尽管.....,但是某人.............Thrilledandoverjoyedashewas,hesoughttocontained/suppressedhisemotion.尽管很兴奋，他尝试控制住自己的兴奋。句型4:so....that....引导的结果状语从句:so+兴奋情绪形容词（excited/thrilled/overjoyed)+wassb+that+从句....某人如此.....以至于.......例句“Sothrilledwashethathegrinnedeartoearandbouncedupanddown.他如此的兴奋，以至于他笑地合不拢嘴并且跳上跳下。句型5:介词短语作状语:(much)toone’s+excitement/thrill,sbdidsth....令某人兴奋.的是.......Itwasmuchtoone’sexcitementthatsbdidsth就是令某人兴奋的是..........例句：Muchtohisexcitement,hewonthefirstprizeinthepetition.让他兴奋的是，他在比赛中赢得了一等奖。Itwasmuchtohisexcitementthathewonthefirstprizeinthepetition.让他兴奋的是，他在比赛中赢得了一等奖句型6:主语从句：Whatmadesbexcited/thrilled/overjoyedwasthat.......让某人兴奋的是..........例句：Whatmadehimthrilledwasthathewonthefirstprizeinthepetition.让他兴奋的是，他在比赛中赢得了一等奖。句型7:比喻的修辞：ahugesmilecrackedintoone’sfacelikeabloomingflower.某人脸上绽放出如花朵般的笑容。例句:Uphearingthenewsthathegotthefirstprize,ahugesmilecrackedintohisfacelikeabloomingflower.得知他在比赛中赢得了一等奖，他的脸上绽放出如花朵般的笑容句型8:独立主格：sbbouncedupanddown,hiseyesglittering/twinklingwithexcitement/thrill/exhilaration.某人他上跳下跳.他的眼睛闪耀着兴奋的光。例句:Whenheknewhewonthefirstprize,hebouncedupanddown,hiseyesglitteringwithexcitement.他得了一等奖，他上跳下跳，他的眼睛闪耀着兴奋的光。随堂练习句子翻译看到直升机,他高兴的上蹦下跳。（形容词作状语)______________________________________________________________________________________________他如此的兴奋，以至于他上蹦下跳，两眼发光。（so...that...的倒装句)_______________________________________________________________________________________________让他兴奋的是:他得到了期待已久的工作。（主语从句/toone’s+情绪名词）______________________________________________________________________________一股兴奋的涟漪席卷而来。（无灵主语）______________________________________________________________________________当他找到了他丢失已久的书，他的脸上绽放出如花朵般的笑容。________________________________________________________________________________________________幸福与感动句型1:无灵主语：awave/surge/spark/flood/shiverofjoy/happiness/warmthovercame/overwhelmed/seized/overtook/tookholdof//tookpossessionof/settledover/washedover/sweptover/consumedsb一股快乐//兴奋/温暖的情绪席卷某人。例句：Whenshesawthepreparedbreakfast,awaveofwarmthoverwhelmedhim.当他看见准备好的早饭，一股温暖席卷而来。句型2:形容词作状语：Moved(totears)/Touched,sbdidsth感到到落泪，某人......例句：Whenshesawthepreparedbreakfast,movedtotears,heembracedthekids.当他看见准备好的早饭，她感到到落泪，她拥抱了她的孩子。句型3:让步状语从句（as/though):情绪形容词+as/though+主语+谓语，sbdidsth........尽管.....,但是某人.............例句：Moved/touchedashewas,hesoughttoholdbackhistears.尽管被感动了，他尝试着屏住他的泪水。句型4:so....that....引导的结果状语从句:so+情绪形容词（touched/moved)wassb+that+从句....某人如此.....以至于.......例句:Sotouchedwashethathewalkedforwardandembracedthekids.他是如此的感到，以至于他走上前，拥抱了这些孩子。句型5:介词短语作状语(much)toone’s+happiness,sbdidsth....令某人幸福/快乐.的是.......Itwasmuchtoone’shappinessthatsbdidsth就是令某人兴奋的是..........例句：Muchtoherhappiness,thekidspreparedbreakfasttoheronMother’sDay.让他兴奋的是，孩子们在母亲节的这一天给他准备了早餐。ItmuchtoherhappinessthatthekidspreparedbreakfasttoheronMother’sDay.句型6:主语从句:Whatmoved/touchedhimwasthat.........让他感到的是........例句：Whatmoved/touchedherwasthatthekidspreparedbreakfastforheronMother’sDay.让他感到的是孩子们在母亲节的这一天给他准备了早餐。句型7:独立主格:sbfeltalumpinhisthroat,tearswellingupinhiseyes/delightfultearsstreamingdownone’scheek.某人如鲠在喉，泪水湿润了眼眶/脸颊。例子:Ifeltalumpinmythroat,tearswellingupinmyeyes.我如鲠在喉，泪水湿润了眼眶。句型8:比喻的修辞：a.Moved,sbembracedsblikeahappybird.被感动了，某人像一只快乐的小鸟一样拥某人b.Goldensunlightdancedinsb’slonghairandsb’slaughterfloatedintheair.金色的阳光在某人的长发上飞舞，某人的笑声在空中飘荡c.Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.(比喻句)她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。例子:Moved,heembracedhiskidslikeahappybird.被感动了，他像一只快乐的小鸟一样拥抱他的爸爸。随堂练习句子翻译我感到一股暖流流遍全身。(无灵主语)______________________________________________________________________________________________被感动了，小女孩像一只快乐的小鸟一样扑向她爸爸.(比喻修辞)______________________________________________________________________________________________小女孩如此地被感动了，以至于她像一只快乐的小鸟一样扑向她爸爸。（so....that.....的倒装）____________________________________________________________________________让她感动的是，孩子们在母亲节这一天给她准备了惊喜。（what...的主语从句)___________________________________________________________________________金色的阳光在她的长发上飞舞(dance)，孩子们的笑声在空中飘荡(float)._____________________________________________________________________________听到这个消息，我如鲠在喉，泪水湿润了眼眶。(独立主格)_____________________________________________________________________________________________惊讶句型1:无灵主语：asparkofsurpriseflashedacrossone’sface.某人脸上闪过一丝惊奇句型2:形容词作状语：Stunned/openmouthed,sbwasrooted/glued/frozentothespot.某人惊呆了，动弹不得例子：Hearingtheunexpectednews，hewasrootedthespot,stunned.听到这个消息，他惊呆了，动弹不得。句型3:让步状语从句（as/though):情绪形容词+as/though+主语+谓语，sbdidsth........尽管.....,但是某人.............例子:Stunned/numbwithshock/astonishedashewas,hesoughttocontainhisemotion.尽管他感觉很惊讶，但是他尝试控制他的情绪。句型4:so....that....引导的结果状语从句:so+情绪形容词（stunned/shocked/astonished/numbwithshock)+thatwassb+that+从句....某人如此.....以至于.......例句：Soastonished/numbwithshockwashethathewasrootedtothespot.他感到如此的惊讶，以至于他站着不动。句型5:介词短语作状语:(much)toone’s+astonishment,sbdidsth....令某人惊讶.的是.......例子：Muchtomyastonishment,heshouldbeathiswife.让我惊讶的是，他居然打老婆。句型6:主语从句:Whatastonished/shocked/surprisedsbwasthat.........让某人惊讶的是........例子：Whatastonishedmewasthatheshouldbeathiswife.让我惊讶的是，他居然打老婆。句型7:夸张的修辞：Whensb.......,hismouthopenedwideenoughtoswallowadentist.当某人.....,他的嘴张得大得足以吞下牙医.例句：WhenJoshheardwhatFranklinwanted，hismouthopenedwideenoughtoswallowadentist.(夸张)当乔希听到富兰克林想要的东西时，他的嘴张得大得足以吞下牙医。句型8:独立主格:sbfroze，sb’smouthsdropping/hangingopeninsurprise.例句：Wefroze，ourmouthsdropping/hangingopeninsurprise.我们呆住了，惊奇地张大了嘴。随堂练习句子翻译她呆住了，目瞪口呆地看着我。(形容词作状语)_____________________________________________________________________________当听到这个消息，他脸上闪过一丝惊奇。（无灵主语）______________________________________________________________________________当听到这个消息，我们呆住了，惊奇当张大了嘴巴。（独立主格）______________________________________________________________________________他感到如此的惊讶，以至于他站着不动。（so....that.....)_____________________________________________________________________________环节二学·精研（15min）句子翻译他激动得几乎说不出话来。(so....that.........)____________________________________________________________________________一阵兴奋席卷了我(无灵主语）___________________________________________________________________________爸爸紧紧地拥抱着我,如梗在喉，眼泪浸湿了眼眶。（独立主格）_______________________________________________________________________________得知他会帮助他们，双胞胎跳上跳下，眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒.(独立主格）______________________________________________________________________________一种快乐和幸福的感觉席卷了我。(无灵主语）______________________________________________________________________________我像一只快乐的小鸟一样哼着歌蹦蹦跳跳地朝家走去.(比喻句）______________________________________________________________________________我一次又一次地感谢他，喉咙哽咽，眼泪不由自主地滚落下来。(独立主格)_____________________________________________________________________________8.他兴奋地上蹦下跳。(形容词作状语)_______________________________________________________________________________9.使我感到惊讶的是，他终于按时完成了任务。（what引导的主语从句)______________________________________________________________________________我们呆住了，惊奇地张大了嘴。(独立主格)_______________________________________________________________________________环节三复·自测（30min）MOTHER’SDAYSURPRISEThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother’sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff’shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右。2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。参考答案随堂练习句子翻译Seeingthehelicopter,hebouncedupanddown,thrilled.Sooverthemoon/thrilled/exhilaratedwashethathebouncedupanddown,hiseyestwinklingwithexcitement.Tohisexcitement,/whatmadehimexcitedwasthathegotthejobhehadwishedforalongtime.Awaveofexcitementseizedhim.Whenhefoundhislostbook,asmilecrackedintohisfacelikeabloomingflower.随堂练习句子翻译Awaveofwarmthsweptoverme.Moved,thelittlegirlthrewhimselfintohisfatherlikeahappybird.Somovedwasthegirlthathethrewhimselfintohisfatherlikeahappybird.WhatmovedhimwasthatthekidshadsurpriseforhimonMother’sDay.Goldensunlightdancedinherlonghairandchildren’slaughterfloatedintheair.Onhearingthenews,Ifeltalumpinmythroat,tearswellingupinmyeyes.随堂练习句子翻译Shefrozeandstaredatme,openmouthed.Onhearingthenews,asparkofsurpriseflashedacrosshisface.Onhearingthenews,Ifroze/wasrootedtothespot,mymouthdroppingopeninsurprise.Sonumbwithshock/astonishedwashethathewasrootedtothespot.环节二学·精研（15min）句子翻译Sothrilledwashethatwordsfailedhim/hecouldn’tutteraword.Awaveofthrillseizedme.Myfatherhuggedmetightlyandhadaslumpinhisthroat,tearswellingupinhiseyes.Learningthathewouldhelpthem,thetwinsbouncedupanddown,theireyestwinklingwithexcitement.Awaveofhappinessmingled/mixedwithjoyovercameme.Ihummedandskippedtowardsmyhomelikeahappybird.Ithankedhimagainandagainandhadaslumpinmythroat,tearswellingupinmyeyes.Exhilarated,hebouncedupanddown.Whatmademeastonishedwasthathefinallypletedthejobonschedule.Ifroze,mymouthdroppinginsurprise.环节三复·自测（30min）

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