高三英语读后续写专项复习为承诺奔跑的力量续写导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Mike,Icouldwalkfasterthanthosewomenrun.”Imademyusualment(评论)afterwatchingmysonMikeruninarace.HelaughedasheknewIwasn’tarunner.“Listen,Mom,howaboutrunningwithmenextyearinthisrace?”Withoutthinking,Iagreedtothischallenge.Ifeltit’sapieceofcake!NeverdidIimaginewhatthenextyearwouldbring.Whenitwasalmosttimeforthisracetohappen,Mikediedinacaraccident.Afewofhisfriendsknewthis“challenge”IhadagreedtowithMike.Theystartedtoencouragemetoruntherace.Honestlyspeaking,IhadalmostforgottenwhatIsaid.Thinkingdeeply,IdecidedIshouldkeepmypromisetoMike.ThefirstthingIdidwasbuysomerunningclothes.Imightlookgood,eventhoughIhadn’ttrained.Thedayoftheracecame.Ifeltprettysad,butIstartedoff.Itwasn’tlongbeforeamanstartedtorunnexttome.Themanwasverytalkative.Hekeptsayinghowtiredhewas.Thechatterwentonandon.Theracewasover,andthisman’swifewon!IwasjusthappytofinishandkeepmypromisetoMike.Icamehome,andmyneighboraskedabouttherace.Itoldhimwhathadhappened.Myneighborlaughed,“Kay,don’tyouknowwhatthisguywasdoing?Hethoughtyouwerethepetitionbythewayyouweredressed.Hewantedhiswifetowin.”“Ohreally!?”ThefollowingyearIdidtrain.Ievenboughtsometapescalled“WinAtSports”andlistenedtothemdaily.IfthismanthoughtIwasthepetition,youcouldbetIwasgoingtobethepetition.Hisattitudeinthatracebuiltafireinme!Theracewason!注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。TheracebeganandIwasalldressedandready.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Istayedbehindthisman’swifealmostthewholerace.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、文本分析1．角色：_____________________________2．视角：第________人称3．时空线：frommentingonMike’sraceandagreeingtorunwithhim______________preparingforthenextyear’srace4.请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。WhatmentdidKaymakeafterwatchingMike’srace?：______________________________________________WhatchallengedidMikeputforward?：____________________________________________Whatunexpectedthinghappenedbeforethenextrace?：_______________________WhydidKaydecidetoruntherace?：___________________________________HowdidKayprepareforthefirstrace?：_______________________Whathappenedduringthefirstrace?：__________________________________________________Whowonthefirstrace?：___________________WhatdidKaylearnfromherneighbor?：_______________________________________HowdidKayprepareforthenextrace?：_______________________________________情节线：凯看完儿子迈克比赛后随口评论，答应次年和他一起参赛→___________________________________→____________________________________→_________________________________________→（续写）TheracebeganandIwasalldressedandready.→（续写）Istayedbehindthisman’swifealmostthewholerace.6．情感线：Kay：casual&overconfident(whenagreeingtothechallenge)→_________________→_______→__________________（续写）→_______（续写）7.综合以上信息，请用34句话概括文章大意。（中英各一个）中文：_____________________________________________________________________英文：_____________________________________________________________________8.句式：宾语从句；非谓语；感叹句；同位语；完全倒装句；比喻；夸张________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________本文属于人与他人：_______________________________________二、情节构造主题：_________________________________第一段提示句：TheracebeganandIwasalldressedandready.衔接句1——对前面“preparingfortherace”提问“凯在比赛开始时状态如何？”：WhatwasKay’sstateatthestartoftherace?过渡句推演：衔接1→？←衔接2衔接句2——对后面“stayedbehindtheman’swife”提问“凯为何选择跟在男子妻子身后？”：WhydidKaychoosetostaybehindtheman’swife?第二段提示句：Istayedbehindthisman’swifealmostthewholerace.衔接句3——对“stayedbehindtheman’swife”提问“凯何时选择加速？最终结果如何？”：WhendidKaychoosetoaccelerateandwhatwasthefinalresult?过渡句推演：衔接3→？←主题段落构思第一段：TheracebeganandIwasalldressedandready.→①__________________→②__________________→③__________________；英文：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二段：Istayedbehindthisman’swifealmostthewholerace.→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________。英文：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案一、文本分析1．角色：I（Kay，主人公“我”）、Mike（凯的儿子）、atalkativeman（参赛的健谈男子）、theman’swife（男子的妻子）、Mike’sfriends（迈克的朋友）、neighbor（凯的邻居）2．视角：第一人称3．时空线：frommentingonMike’sraceandagreeingtorunwithhimMike’sdeathinacaraccidentencouragedbyMike’sfriendstoruntheracerunningtheracewithouttraining(disturbedbyatalkativeman)learningtheman’sintentionfromtheneighborpreparingforthenextyear’srace4.请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。WhatmentdidKaymakeafterwatchingMike’srace?：Shesaidshecouldwalkfasterthanthosewomenran.WhatchallengedidMikeputforward?：Runningwithhimintheracethenextyear.Whatunexpectedthinghappenedbeforethenextrace?：Mikediedinacaraccident.WhydidKaydecidetoruntherace?：TokeepherpromisetoMike.HowdidKayprepareforthefirstrace?：Sheonlyboughtrunningclothesanddidn’ttrain.Whathappenedduringthefirstrace?：Atalkativemanranbesideherandkeptplainingaboutbeingtired.Whowonthefirstrace?：Thetalkativeman’swife.WhatdidKaylearnfromherneighbor?：Themanthoughtshewasapetitoranddisturbedhertohelphiswifewin.HowdidKayprepareforthenextrace?：Shetrainedandlistenedto“WinAtSports”tapesdaily.5．情节线：凯看完儿子迈克比赛后随口评论，答应次年和他一起参赛→迈克意外车祸去世，在其朋友鼓励下，凯为兑现承诺决定参赛→凯仅买了装备未训练就参赛，途中被一男子干扰，最终男子的妻子夺冠→凯从邻居口中得知男子是故意干扰自己以助妻子获胜，决心认真备战次年比赛→（续写）比赛开始，凯整装待发→（续写）凯几乎全程跟在男子妻子身后。6．情感线：Kay：casual&overconfident(whenagreeingtothechallenge)→sad&determined(afterMike’sdeath,decidingtokeepthepromise)→calm&relieved(finishingthefirstrace)→angry&motivated(learningtheman’sintention,preparingforthenextrace)→focused&confident（续写，duringtherace）→proud&fulfilled（续写，aftertherace）7.综合以上信息，请用34句话概括文章大意。（中英各一个）中文：凯看完儿子迈克比赛后随口答应次年和他一起参赛，不料迈克意外车祸去世。为兑现承诺，凯在迈克朋友鼓励下参赛，虽未训练却顺利完赛，后从邻居处得知比赛中干扰自己的男子是为助妻子夺冠。这让凯决心认真备战，要成为真正的竞争者。英文：KaycasuallyagreedtorunaracewithhersonMikethenextyearafterwatchinghisrace,butunfortunately,Mikediedinacaraccident.Tokeepherpromise,KayparticipatedintheraceundertheencouragementofMike’sfriends.Shefinishedtheracesmoothlyevenwithouttraining,andlaterlearnedfromherneighborthatthemanwhodisturbedherduringtheracedidsotohelphiswifewin.ThismadeKaydeterminedtopreparecarefullyandbeearealpetitor.8.句式：宾语从句；非谓语；感叹句；同位语；完全倒装句；比喻；夸张宾语从句：Ifeltit’sapieceofcake!非谓语：Thinkingdeeply,IdecidedIshouldkeepmypromisetoMike.同位语：Ievenboughtsometapescalled“WinAtSports”,whichIlistenedtodaily.完全倒装句：NeverdidIimaginewhatthenextyearwouldbring.比喻：Hisattitudeinthatracebuiltafireinme!夸张：Icouldwalkfasterthanthosewomenrun.9.本文属于人与他人：本文展现了母子间的承诺与思念、他人的干扰与激励，核心是凯在承诺与挫折的推动下实现自我突破，传递出“承诺的重量与不服输的精神能赋予人强大力量”的主题。二、情节构造第一段提示句：TheracebeganandIwasalldressedandready.衔接句1——对前面“preparingfortherace”提问“凯在比赛开始时状态如何？”：WhatwasKay’sstateatthestartoftherace?Shewasdetermined(notsadlikelastyear),calmandwellprepared.Shefollowedthepacingskillsfromtrainingtapesandstartedsteadily.过渡句推演：衔接1→凯专注起跑，留意到男子和其妻子，保持节奏跟随←衔接2衔接句2——对后面“stayedbehindtheman’swife”提问“凯为何选择跟在男子妻子身后？”：WhydidKaychoosetostaybehindtheman’swife?Sheknewthemanonceregardedherasarival.Stayingbehindhiswifeallowedhertousethewife’spaceasareferenceandsaveenergy,avoidingdistraction.第二段提示句：Istayedbehindthisman’swifealmostthewholerace.衔接句3——对“stayedbehindtheman’swife”提问“凯何时选择加速？最终结果如何？”：WhendidKaychoosetoaccelerateandwhatwasthefinalresult?Heacceleratedwhentherewasonly100metersleft(noticingthewife’sstepsfaltered).Shepassedthewife,dashedacrossthefinishlineandwontherace.过渡句推演：衔接3→凯在终点前加速超越，赢得比赛，兑现承诺并实现自我突破←主题承诺是前行的灯塔，他人的轻视与干扰能化为奋进的动力；全力以赴的坚持，不仅是对承诺的兑现，更是对自我的超越。三．段落构思第一段：TheracebeganandIwasalldressedandready.→①我随着发令声冲出，耳边回响着训练时的节奏口诀，眼神紧紧锁定前方→②很快就看到了去年那对夫妻，男子依旧在妻子身边，不时看向我，眼神带着一丝惊讶→③我没有贸然加速，而是保持稳定步伐跟在他妻子身后，默默积蓄力量，心里默念着对迈克的承诺；英文：TheracebeganandIwasalldressedandready.→①Idashedout