人教英语中考复习书面表达专题课件

书面表达审题与句意表达

抄改连扩列审书面表达如何组织作文书面表达六步法审：认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心及要求,确定人称和时态。书面表达第一步：审范文：节约资源,保护环境,从我们身边的小事做起。LiMing是一个注重“低碳”生活的中学生，假设你是他,请以“MyLow-carbonLife”为题，写一篇80-120词的短文，简单描述自己的“低碳生活”。要点：(1)每天步行上学;(2)离开教室时，关灯、电扇、电视等；（3）不用水时,记得关水龙头，循环使用水；（4）充分使用纸张（5）不使用塑料袋。参考词：onfoot,turnoff,tap(水龙头),reuse,makefulluseof,plasticbag写作要求：（1）内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译；（2）不得透露考生姓名、学校等信息。审列如何列提纲：Para1:Para2:Para3:

MynameisLiMing.Iamamiddleschoolstudent.Ilikehavingalow-carbonlife.

It’simportantforustolivealow-carbonlifetoprotecttheenvironment.

（综述）开门见山，表明观点。根据提示，概述事件。给出评论，发表己见。e.g.Igotoschoolonfooteveryday.扩WhenIamnotusingwater,Ialways

turnoffthetap.Ioften

reusewater.forexample,whenIfinishwashingtheclothes,Iusethewatertocleanthefloorandwaterflowers.

扩就是把提示信息扩写成句子，在适当的地方添加事例,使文章内容完整，要点全面，是写作的关键步骤。不用水时,记得关水龙头，循环使用水；连合理恰当地运用关联词和过渡句是英语写作的制胜法宝。它们不仅使你的文章结构紧凑，衔接自然，而且可以有效地提升作文档次。1.WhenIamnotusingwater,Ialways

turnoffthetap.Ioften

reusewater.forexample,whenIfinishwashingtheclothes,Iusethewatertocleanthefloorandwaterflowers.2.Ithinksavingpaperisnecessary,soImakefulluseofpaper.改格式是否有错拼写有无错误语言是否用错时态、语态错误标点错误人称是否用错改短文改错my

nameisLiMing.Iamamiddleschoolstudent.Ilike

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alow-carbonlife.Igotoschoolby

footeveryday.Ialwaysrememberturning

offthelights,theTVandthefanswhenIleavetheclassroom.WhenIwas

notusingwater,Ialwaysturnoffthetap.Ioftenreusewater,forexample,whenIfinishwashingtheclothes,Iusethewatertocleanthefloorandwaterflower.Ineveruseplasticbags.Ithinksave

paperisnecessary,soIoftenmakefulluseofpapers.It’s

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Iamnotusingwater,Ialwaysturnoffthetap.Ioftenreusewater,forexample,whenIfinishwashingtheclothes,Iusethewatertocleanthefloorandwaterflowers.Ineveruseplasticbags.Ithinksavingpaperisnecessary,soIoftenmakefulluseofpaper.It’simportantforustolivealow-carbonlifetoprotecttheenvironment.anicehead(总)anicebody（分）aniceending（总）将检查后的作文整洁地抄写在横线上

书面表达第六步：抄Howtowriteagoodcomposition开头:开门见山中间结尾:书面表达六步法抓要点,列短语短语扩句找连接词连句成段与主题相呼应，紧扣主题1、turndown调低（音量）2、toomuchrubbishandwaste太多垃圾和废物3、turnoffthelight关灯4、alotofblacksmoke大量的浓烟5、stopdoingsth停止做某事6、loudmusic嘈杂的音乐7、throwaway扔掉8、recyclingpaper循环使用纸张9、savetheearth挽救地球10notridingincars不开车11takepartin参加12remembertothrowrubbishinthebins

记住把垃圾扔进垃圾箱有关环保的词、短语13keeppublicplacescleanandbeautiful

保持公共场所的干净美丽

14bringabagtogoshopping带口袋去购物15cutdown砍倒16inpublicPalace在公共场所17callon呼吁18reuse再利用19protecttheenvironment保护环境20stoppouringwastewaterintoriversandlakes禁止往河里、湖里排放废水21cutdownthetrees砍树22usebothsidesofpaper用纸的两面23reduce再循环

24cleanup打扫（或清除）干净有关环保的词、短语1.Ifwetryourbesttoprotecttheenvironment,theworldwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.2.Don’twastewater.3.Takeouttherubbishandthrowitintodustbins.4.It’sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.5.Weshouldplantmoretreesandflowersaroundus.常用环保句子积累6.Inaword,ifeveryonepaysmoreattentiontoourenvironment,therewillbelesspollutionandourlifewillbebetter.7.Weshouldnotcutdowntrees.8.Ithinkoneproblemisthattheairisbadlypolluted.9.Weshouldtakethebusorsubwayinsteadofdriving.10.Ithinkit’smydutytolivealow-carbonlife.11.Today,thequalityofourenvironmenthasbecomeanimportantproblem.常用环保句子积累怎样学好英语是我们一直在探索的问题。几年的学习经历你一定积累了许多经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议.以“HowtolearnEnglishwell”为题用英语写一篇短文谈谈你的建议。要点提示:1.听录音﹑英语