2024年托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分赏析TOEFL（共11篇）

2024年托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分赏析TOEFL

(共11篇)

篇1:托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分赏析TOEFL

托福写作难点话题一览

Bigcityorcountryside,whichisbetterforchildrentogrowupin?

Itisbetterforchildrentogrowupinthecountrysidethaninabigcity.Doyou

agreeordisagree?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestodevelopyouressay.

写作思路绽开结构分析

看到这道题目不要随意站队，否则就会中陷阱。这道题目的陷阱在于给出的观点无论单选哪

一边都是比较片面的，而且也不符合常理。大家须要明确一个观点也就是地点并不是影响孩子成

长的唯一因素，也不是众多因素中最重要的因素。之后大家可以再详细绽开，排列一些生活在城

市和乡村各自的优缺点。比如还有一个比较特殊的写法思路是用一系列"不肯定”的事实来反对

题目中观点，比如：在乡村长大的孩子不肯定比在城市长大的孩子淳朴(honest;simple;simple

sentiments);在乡村长大的孩子不肯定比在城市长大的孩子健康(healthy)。另外大家也可以从儿

童不同的阶段有不同的选择来写，比如学龄前儿童或是小学生在哪里都无所谓，但到了初中中学

以后就可能在大城市更好一点，因为教化资源可能会更好。

本话题高分范文赏析

Havinggrownupinthecountrymyself,IcansaywithoutadoubtthatIwantmy

ownchildrentogrowupinthecity.Lifeinthecityisincomparablybetterforchildren

thanlifeinthecountry.Thecityhasbetterschools,healthcare,jobs,andmore

exposuretotheoutsideworld.Thetwomostimportantthingsinanychild'slifeare

healthandeducation.Inthecountry,ifchildrengetsick,therearenogoodhospitalsto

takethemto.Familiesareoftensopoorthattheycan'taffordtosendalloftheir

childrentoschool,andtheschoolsareusuallyoflowqualityanyway.Inthecities,on

theotherhand,healthcarefacilitiesandschoolsareofexcellentquality.

Childrenfromcitiesalsohaveamuchhigherchanceofgettingintoexcellent

universities.Cityuniversitieshavelargenumbersofspacesreservedforlocalresidents

whiletheyhaverelativelyfewerspacesforstudentsfromthecountryside.IfIwantmy

childtohaveagoodchanceofgettingintoagooduniversity,Iwouldraisethemina

city.

Citysalariesaresignificantlyhigherthansalariesinthecountry.Jobsinthecityare

alsomucheasier,onaverage,thanjobsinthecountry.Aworkerinthecountrymight

spend14hoursadaylaboringoutdoorsinthefieldsandmakemuchlessmoneyper

monththanthecityworkerwhotypicallyworksonlyeighthoursaday.Iwantmychild

togrowupandgetagood,high-payingjob.Abetterplacetofindthosejobsisinacity.

Finally,Iwantmychildrentogrowupintoaworldthatislargerthanjusttheir

immediatesurroundings.Inacitytheywillhaveachancetomeetpeoplefromallover

thecountryandallovertheworld.Theywillhavechancestoabsorbhistoryandculture

fromthecitiesparks,theatres,andmuseums.Onlyinthecitywilltheyhavethechance

tobetrulyglobalcitizens.

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：causesofpeople'slongevitytoday

托福写作难点话题一览

Thecausesofpeople'slongevitytoday

Ingeneral,peoplearelivinglongernow.Discussthecausesofthisphenomenon.

Usespecificreasonsanddetailstodevelopyouressay.

写作思路绽开结构分析

首先供应一份数据给大家参考：20世纪初全球平均年龄(lifeexpectancy)大约45岁。到

20世纪末，这个数字已经增长到70岁左右。考生可以结合这份数据来做一些文章。然后要分

析人们越来越长寿的缘由，大家可以从这几点来绽开：越来越好的饮食条件，饮食卫生，越来越

科学的饮食模式;越来更加达的医疗技术、越来越完善的医疗保健系统;经济稳定、社会稳定。举

个极端一点的例子：前苏联(thepreviousSovietUnion)解体(disintegration/breakup)后,俄

罗斯的平均年龄大幅度下降。

本话题高分范文赏析

Amongvariousfactorsthatcontributetotoday'slongevityofpeoplearethree

mostobviousones:theimprovementoffoodconditions,thedevelopmentofmodern

medicaltechnology,andfinallycurrentstabilityofeconomyinourcountry.

Foodconditionsarebetterthanbeforeandarestillbeingdevelopedwitharapid

pace.Firstofall,foodsaremorehygienic.Peopletodaydrinkuntaintedmineralwater,

sterilizedskimmilk,whicharecheaplysuppliedinsupermarkets.Furthermore,foods

aremorenutrient.Nottomentionvariouscarefullydesignednutrientproducts.People

canjustignorethepossibilityofbeingdystrophic,sincetheycankeepnutrientbalance

bysimplytakingacheappillofvitamincompoundeveryday.Anotheressential

improvementthatcontributestopeople'slongevityisswiftlydevelopingmedical

technology.Developmentofmodernmedicaltechnologyhasalwaysbeenamazing.

Certaindiseasessuchastuberculosis,pneumonia,anddysenteryarenoweasyto

remedywithlowexpenses,butinthepast,theyareallprobablylethalones.Thedental

technologyseemsdevelopedlittleexceptitsexorbitantlychargedbill,yetthesimplest

technologycontributestopeople'slongevitymost.Itisnotdifficulttoimaginethatif

anindividualwholivedinthepastgotatoothache,withoutcertaindentalcarewhichis

commontoday,hewascertainlyinanawfulprospect:hemightevendieofatoothache!

Currentsocietalandeconomicstabilizationisalsoaveryindispensablefactor.

Peoplehavelesspressureinamorestablesociety,thelesspressuretheysuffer,the

healthiertheyare.Today'sidealstabilizationevenprovidespeopleanopportunityto

securetheirfuture—buyinsurances.Varioustypesofinsurancesarereadilyavailable,

whichmakepeoplefeelsafe,andhavetoalargeextentreducedpeople'anxieties,and

thereforeindirectlycontributesignificantlytothelongevityofpeople.

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：teenagestudenthavingapart-time

job

托福写作难点话题一览

Isitadvisableforateenagestudenttohaveapart-timejob?

Insomecountries,teenagershavejobswhiletheyarestillstudents.Doyouthink

thisisagoodidea?Supportyouropinionbyusingspecificreasonsanddetails.

写作思路绽开结构分析

这道题目大家首先要留意审题V题目中说的是teenager而不是collegestudents”

这明显是一个意指十几岁的孩子----岁或

Teenagershavejobs,BADidea0Teenager,16

者岁以下岁以上就是了，、的孩子往往被称之为雇用童工

18(18adult167youngadultso

(Employingchildrenlabor)目前在许多国家是非法(illegal)的。也违反国际儿童爰护条约

允许雇用童工,或存在童工现象，都是一个国家落后愚昧的表

(InternationalChildrenAct)0

现。所以大家不要说teenager打工可以熬炼自我,teenager须要的是接受教化，健康成长，

也不要说teenager打工可以相识社会,teenager还不具雀足够的心理承受实力(psychological

endurance)，过早步入社会(earlyexposuretotherealworld)，只能导致世界观、价值观(out

lookofworld,value,etc.)的扭曲(deteriorated;distorted),,

本话题高分范文赏析

Peoplewhoopposetheideaofstudentstakingparttimejobssaythatstudents

shouldusetheirtimetofocusonexclusivelyonstudying.Iwouldargueinsteadthat

part-timejobshelpsstudentsfocusontheirstudies,providesvaluablepractical

experience,andallowsthemafeelingofsuccessandindependencethatisaperfect

complementtotheiracademicpursuits.

ApopularcriticismofschoolsisthattheyareHivorytowers,“orplaceswhere

studyandresearcharedivorcedfromthe“realworld".Apart-timejobrelatedtotheir

majorgivesstudentsanexcitingchancetoapplythetheoriestheyhavelearnedin

school.Chemistryisarotoriouslyabstract,boring,difficultsubjectWhenastudent

takesapart-timejobinamedicalresearchlab,however,he/shemightdiscoverhow

importantstudyingChemistryisforsavingpeople'slives.Thisstudentmightthen

returntohis/herChemistrystudieswithrenewedvigor.Whatwasanabstractacademic

pursuitbecomesaconcreteandinterestinggoalwitharealrelationshiptothe

student'slife.

Part-timejobsalsohelpstudentsstrengthentheirresumes,buildimportant

contactswithcompanies,andfamiliarizethemwiththecontemporarystateoftheir

respectivefields.Nomatterhowhardtheytry,ComputerSciencetextbookpublishers

cannotkeepupwiththerapiddevelopmentofnewcomputerhardware,software,and

programminglanguages.C.S.studentswhowishtomaintainacompetitiveedgeinthe

jobmarketshouldfindpart-timepositionswheretheycanlearnstate-of-the-art

techniques.Aftertheygraduatefromcollege,theymightthenreturntotheirpart-time

employertolookforafull-timeposition,orapproachotheremployerswithgood

referencesandcutting-edgeworkexperience.

Finally,thefeelingofsuccessthatcomesfromholdingapart-timejobcanbuild

students'confidence.Knowingthattheycandoajobwellandbepaidforitisan

importantcharacter-buildingexperiencethatmanystudentsputofffortoolong.

Learningtomanagethemoneythattheymakewillbeacriticalpartoftheirfuturelives.

Iftheymakemistakeshandlingtheirmoneyincollege,theresultswillprobablynotbe

disastrous,butwillteachthemvaluablelessonsthattheywillbesuretorememberin

thefuture,whentheywillbetrulyindependent.

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：advantagesanddisadvantagesofmy

city

托福写作难点话题一览

Theadvantagesanddisadvantagesofmycity.

Apersonyouknowisplanningtomovetoyourtownorcity.Whatdoyouthinkthis

personwouldlikeanddislikeaboutlivinginyourtownorcity?Why?Usespecific

reasonsanddetailstodevelopyouressay.

写作思路绽开结构分析

这是一道关系到大家实际状况的题目，但同时这是一个探讨假设问题的题目。因此我建议大

家可以尽量绽开想象。留意：不要只说mycity,要指出你所在城市的名字，比如：Beijing,

Shanghai等等。一般来说，人们会喜爱城市的缘由有：女人喜爱商场;男人可能喜爱书店;大的

公园、动物园;名胜古迹;文化氛围。而人们会厌烦的缘由有：交通堵塞;空气不簇新;大城市的排外

主义(exclusivism)、不友善(unfriendly)等等。

本话题高分范文赏析

IfmyfriendJoeywantstomovetoBeijing,Ithinkeventhoughshemightfind

somethingshedislikes,shewillultimatelylikethisgreatestcityinourcountry.The

weathermightbeonethingthatshedislikes.TheweatherinBeijingischaracterizedby

dryclimateanditismuchwindyanddustythanthatofGuangzhoucity.Joeyisvery

sensitiveaboutherskin,soshewilldefinitelyhatedustywindsinBeijing.Moreover,

Beijing'swinterisfartoomuchcolderthanthatofGuangzhou,itmighttakeJoey,as

manyotherpeoplecamefromtheSouth,averylongtimetogetaccustomedto.

Nevertheless,shemightwellenjoywinterintheNorth,sinceshehasneverseen

snowflakesinrealitybefore.Irememberedtheshiningofyearningandeagerinher

eyeswhenIoncetoldherwhatthewinterintheNorthlookslike.

ShemightbealwaysirritatedbyheavytrafficinBeijing,thoughtaxisinBeijingcost

muchlessthaninGuangzhou.WhenIwasinGuangzhou,seldomwasItrappedby

trafficjams.Itmustberidiculousforhertohavespentmorethantwohoursandstill

didn'tarriveatthedestinationwhichismerely10kilometersaway.Andthemost

ludicrousthingis,evenifyoupossessaprivatecar,itismorelikelytobeuseless,for

parkinglotsarealwayscrowded,whichmeansmoretimeistobewasted.Goodnews

forheristhatthebussystemandthatofsubwayinBeijingarewelldevelopedand

moreconvenient,andshewon'thavetobearthatodorofbromhidrosisowingto

burningweatherassheonceexperiencedinbusesofGuangzhou.Whatshewill

definitelyloveistheculturalethosofthecity.Beijinghasahistoryprobablylongerthan

anyotherbigcityinChina.TovisitallhistoricallandscapesinBeijing,shewillneedat

leastthreeyears,nokidding!

Beijinghasthemostfamousandexcellentuniversities,thelargestlibraries,the

richestmuseums,yetmostimportantofall,herbestfriend!Amazingly,inthisagedcity,

peoplearesometimesmoreinternational.Joeyisespeciallyfondofart,andBeijingis

therightplaceforher,inwhichconcertsofinternationalsingersorothermusiciansare

muchfrequent,andshewillevenbeabletoattendCuiJian'scasualprivateconcertina

coffeeshoponarainyautumnweekend

篇2:TOEFL托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分

Liveperformanceortelevisionbroadcast,whichismoreenjoyable?

Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Attendingalive

performance(forexample,aplay,concert,orsportingevent)ismoreenjoyablethan

watchingthesameeventontelevision.Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupport

youropinion.

写作思路绽开结构分析

同意或者不同意都是片面的。大家可以先探讨现场的好处(比如气氛好airofexcitement;

投入感强gettinginvolved)和电视转播(televisionliveshow)的好处(比如，有解说

commentary/commentator;多镜头variousanglesofview;镜头组接montage)，至于选择

就要视状况而定了。以足球为例，假如是踢得匕徽烂的竞赛去现场看意义不大，但假如是一场比

如世界杯决赛或是欧冠竞赛的话，明显去现场看更有价值，同样的状况也可以适用于音乐会之类

的表演。

本话题高分范文赏析

Whilewatchingliveperformancesontelevisionisconvenient,itcannotcompareto

attendingaIliveperformanceinperson.Liveperformances,whetherartistic,sporting,

orentertainment,offeruniquesensationsapartfromtheperformanceitself,and

encourageagreaterlevelofparticipationIaswellasabetterunderstandingofthe

eventthanatelevisionbroadcastcould.Thewonderfulsensoryexperienceofasoccer

matchbeginsbeforethegamestarts.Thesmellofpopcornandstreetfoodwafting

throughtheair,thecrowdroaringandwavinglikeanocean,andtheexcitedsongsof

thefansareallpartoftheexperiencethataddstotheenjoymentofwatchingthegame

inperson.Arockconceitisnotjusthearingthemusic;itisthefeelingofstandingina

crowd:thatismovingtogetherlikeonelivingbodytothebeatofthedrums.These

experiencesareallimportantpartsoftheexperienceofanevent,andcannotbefelt

whenwatchingthesameeventontelevision.Whenwatchingaperformanceinperson,

aviewerfeelsaclosersenseofconnectiontotheevent.Everyfaninthestadiumwill

alwaysleaptotheirfeetwhentheyseetheirfavoriteteamscoreagoalinasoccer

match,whileonlyafewpeoplemightjumpupwatchingthesamegoalathome.

Watchingamusicperformanceontelevisionwouldn'tnecessarilymakepeoplewantto

startdancing,buthearingajazzbandplaylivewouldstarteveryfootintheroom

tapping,justitchingtodance.Liveeventsseemtoinvitetheactiveparticipationofthe

viewingaudience,whiletelevisionisamediumthatencouragespassivityonthepartof

theviewer.Theunderstandingofaperformanceviewedontelevisionisusuallylirrited.

Arockperformanceviewedlivehasear-shatteringlyloudmusic.Whilesomepeople

mightnotenjoythis,itisapartoftheexperiencethattelevisionfiltersout.Atanygiven

timeduringasportingeventtherearemanydifferentthingsgoingonatonce.Because

televisioncamerascanonlyfocusononeeventatatime;aliveviewercantakeina

largerfieldofvision,andpotentiallyunderstandmoreabouttheevents.Finally,live

viewers'understandingofliveperformancesisincreasedbecauseliveperformancesare

notinterruptedwithcommercialbreaksevery12minutes.

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：transportationvehiclechanges

people'slives

篇3:TOEFL托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分

Atransportationvehiclethathaschangedpeople'slives

Chooseoneofthefollowingtransportationvehiclesandexplainwhyyouthinkit

haschangedpeople'slives.Automobiles?Bicycles?Airplanes?Usespecificreasonsand

examplestosupportyouranswer.

写作思路绽开结构分析

没有明显倾向性的题目，选择3个都应当可以拓展出不少可以细说的点。这里我选择了

automobiles,留意，这里不是要你说这种交通工具的好处，重点在于怎样变更了人们的生活.

大家可以说汽车变更了人们的时间、空间观念，进而变更了人们的生活;汽车使货物的远程运输

成为可能，进而使人们可以购买更多的商品;汽车使汽油变得特别重要，干脆间接导致了许多中

东地区的斗争;汽车使空气污染更加严峻,导致人们的健康受到影响等等。

本话题高分范文赏析

Automobiles,astheexponentofmoderntransportationvehicles,virtuallyhave

contributedtomodernlifemorethanmostpeoplehaveimagined,eventhough

automobiles,asistrueofallothertechnologies,havealsocreatedmanyproblems.The

advancementofmoderntransportation,certainlyincludingthatofautomobiles.,has

mademoregoodsavailableinlocalmarkets.Forexample,inChina,somefruitsareonly

cultivatedinthesouthernpartofthecountryandnotinthenorthern,suchaslitchi,

sugarcane,pineapple—partlyduetosheergradientoftemperature.Thankstothe

advancementofmoderntransportationsystem,peopleinthenorthernpartofthe

countrycannowgetthosesoutherncultivatedfruitsreadilyavailableinalmostevery

localmarketInthefarpastwhensuchsystemdidn'texist,whengoodscouldbe

transportedonlybyprimitivetoolssuchascarts,somefruitssuchaslitchiwerethe

privilegeofimperialhousehold.Atthesametime,thedevelopmentofmodern

transportationhasalsomadegoodsinlocalmarketsmuchlessexpensive.Takelitchi

forexampleagain.Twodecadesago,litchiwasprettyexpensive,andwasaluxury.But

thedevelopmenthasmadethetransportationeasierandthecostlowerandlower.

Ontheotherhand,duetopreviousfactors,moremerchantsareengagedinthe

businessthatsimultaneouslyintensifiedthecompetition,whichcertainlyaffectedthe

prices.Thus,thepriceoflitchisubsequentlydropped.Thesamegoesforothergoods

aswell.Today,peopleareabletobuyalmostanygoodstheywantnomatterwherethe

originofthegoodsis,andtomakechoiceamongmorecounterparts,andthebestof

all,totakethegoodshomewithlessexpenditure.

Moreover,advancedtransportationvehiclessuchasautomobileshavetosome

extentmadepeoplemoreindependentthanbefore.Itisnothardtoimaginethat50

yearsagoayoungwidowwholivedinasmallvillageandwhosehusbandhaddied

whenshewas23hadlittlechancetogetmarriedagain,forthesakeofthetraditionor

culture,orwhatever.Butifthathappenedinthepresentday,thingswouldbeentirely

different.Advancedtransportationvehiclesbeingreadilyavailable,shecouldeasilyget

toanothercitywithinatmost2daysandbylowerexpenses,sayfromthesmallvillage

locatedinthenortheastofChinatothefarsoutherncity,Guangzhou-several

thousandsofmilesawa/.That'sabigcity,that'sanewcity,andnobodyknowsher

there;shehasabrandnewstart,andsheisentirelyindependent.

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：peopledothingsthattheydonot

enjoy

篇4:TOEFL托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分

Shouldpeoplesometimesdothingsthattheydonotenjoydoing?

Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Peopleshouldsometimes

dothingsthattheydonotenjoydoing.Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupport

youranswer.

写作思路绽开结构分析

大家要留意审题不是始终做自己不喜爱的事这个statement里面的限定词是sometimes.

所以这个话题其实两个观点并不是很对立。个人建议可以选择同意这个观点会比较好绽开。比较

经典的理由是Mostexperiencesinourlivesthatseemeddifficultatthetimebecome

valuablelessonsforthefuture。另外大家也可以从胜利学的角度去写，比如Mostsuccessful

peoplehaveonethingincommon:theyarecapableofdoingthingsthattheyvirtually

donotenjoydoing.

本话题高分范文赏析

Weliveinaworldinwhicheveryonewantstobesuccessful.Nothingiswrong

aboutthedesiretobeNo.Landthereisnodoubtthatbeingsuccessfulisenjoyable.

Nevertheless,itissomev/hatchildishtothinkwecanbefinallysuccessfulbyonlydoing

whatweenjoydoing.Peopleoftenareamazedbythegloriousappearanceofa

skyscraper,howevertheyatthesametimeforgetthefactthattheskyscraperhadtaken

alongtimetoconstruct,maybemuchlongertimetodesign,andpossiblyevencost

people'slivesduringtheconstructingprocess!Wemaycategorizethingsintotwo

groups,theenjoyableandtheunenjoyable;atthesametime,anothercategorycanbe

made:thenecessaryandtheunnecessary.Thepointis,thingsthatarenecessaryarenot

alwaysenjoyableandthingsthatareenjoyablesometimesmaybeunnecessary.Doing

thingsthatarenecessaryratherthanthosethataremerelyenjoyableisnotonlyhelpful,

butmightalsobeindispensableforindividualsuccess.Wealladmireevenenvythose

whonowhaveattainedgreatachievements,suchthosefamousstarsasJackyChen,Jet

Li.Weshould,however,beawareoftheexorbitantpricestheyhavepaidfortheir

presentglories.JackyChenoncetoldthatwhenhewasstillateenager,heandhis

partnerswererequiredtopracticemorethan12hoursaday;anditwassaidthatJetLi

wassenttobeanapprenticewhenhewashardlyfouryearsold!Apparently,those

seeminglycruelhardshipshaveturnedouttobethebestgiftsyearslater.Butfor

yesterday'sstruggle,today'sgloriescouldnotexist.Thingsthatarebothenjoyableand

necessaryorbothunenjoyableandunnecessaryvirtuallyseldomexist.Wemaydislike

somecurriculumsinuniversity,suchasmathematicsorhistory,buttheyarenecessary;

wemaypreferleisuretimestoworkdays,butthelatterareindispensable.Pursuinga

successfullifeisnothingmorethanmakingwisedecisions,andby"wise"wemean

thechoiceofdoingthenecessaryfirst.

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：personallivesoffamouspeople

篇5:TOEFL托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分

Isittruethatmediapaytoomuchattentiontothepersonallivesoffamouspeople?

Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Television,newspapers,

magazines,andothermediapaytoomuchattentiontothepersonallivesoffamous

peoplesuchaspublicfiguresandcelebrities.Usespecificreasonsanddetailstoexplain

youropinion.

写作思路绽开结构分析

这个观点是比较片面的，当中忽视了一个大众的需求问题，所以选择不能同意这个观点。有

些媒体(大众传媒massmed⑶表现得过于关注名人。但是真正的起因(therealcause)却是大众

(thepublic;thebroadmassesofthepeople)本身大众过于关注名人以及名人的私生活。

媒体不过是在迎合大众(catertotheneedsofcustomers;过去几年里，电视始终迎合大众的

口味。Inthepastseveralyears,televisionhasbeenplayingtothegallery.),因为媒体也

是商业机构(commercialorganization),也要盈利(profit-driving).不是全部媒体都在一味

迎合大众，也不是全部的televisionprogram,newspapercolumn都在关注名人。

本话题高分范文赏析

Itistruethattelevisionprogramsconcerningpersonallivesofcelebritiesalways

receivethehighestaudiencerating.Itisalsotruethatnewspapersandmagazinesare

constantlyreportingstories,whichareusuallybeyondconfirmation,aboutfamous

people,andthatautobiographieswrittenbypublicfiguresarealwaysonthetop10

best-sellers'list.Itseemsthatweliveinaworldwhereafewindividualsaredrawing

nearlyallattentions.Nevertheless,itisnotexactlyprecisetocriticizethemassmedia,

includingtelevision,newspapers,magazinesandsoforth,forpayingtoomuchfocuson

thepersonallivesoffamouspeoplesuchaspublicfiguresandcelebrities.Infact,itis

thepublic,toalargeextent,ratherthanmassmedia,thatispayingtoomuchattention

onpersonallivesofcelebrities.

Mostorganizationsofmassmediaindustry,beinginherentlycommercial；are

drivenbybusinessmotivations.Televisionprogramproducers,aswellascolumnists

andwriters,arealwaysawareofwhatthepublicwanttosee,thereforetendtopander

totastesofthepublic.Toputinanotherway,themassmediaisaudience-oriented.and

thephenomenoniswellinterpretedandmanipulatedthatwhenfamouspeoplesuchas

actors,athletesandrockstarsgivetheiropinions,manypeoplelisten.Itisthenatureof

thepublic,whoarecuriousenoughaboutpersonallivesoffamouspeople,sincethey

canneverbefamous.

Ontheotherhand,itisholisticallydetrimentalforthesocietyifthemassmediapay

toomuchfocusonfamousfewsoastoignoretherestoftheindividuals.Afterall,the

missionofthemassmediaisnotmerelytocatertotheneedsofcustomers,buthasa

muchwiderscope,suchastotellthetruth,todefinewhatisgoodandwhatisbad;to

promoteculturalvalues,andthelistcouldbeendless.Morepopularscienceprograms

shouldbeproducedbytelevision,morereportsonpoorrurallivesshouldbepublicized,

morebooksconcerningnotfamousbutrespectablepeoplesuchas,nurseswhoare

fightingSARSfearlessly,teacherswhoareperformingtheirdutiesregardlessofpoverty

ofremotev川ages,journalistswhopublicizetheirpiecesunderpoliticalmenace,and

thisisanotherendlesslistshouldbewritten.

篇6:托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分赏析

托福写作难点话题一览

Istravelinginagroipledbyatourguidethebestwaytotravel?

Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Thebestwaytotravelisin

agroupledbyatourguide.Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.

写作思路绽开结构分析

不能同意这个观点。因为题目中用到了肯定修饰词thebest.建议大家排列两三个除了用

导游之外的旅游方法：独自旅游;与同事、挚友相伴等等。或者根据不同的状况下有不同的选择

的思路来写也是不错的选择。

本话题高分范文赏析

Thoseluckyenoughtotravel,particularlythosefortunateenoughtovisitforeign

countries,facethedecisionoftravelinginagroupwithanexperiencedtourguideor

travelingbythemselves.Thechoiceisadifficultcneasbothwaysoftravelhave

advantages,personally,Ibelievethat,althoughtravelinginagroupwithatourguideis

obviouslyconvenient,thebenefitsareoftennotsignificantenoughandinmanyways

travelinginthiskindofwaycanlimitone'stravelexperience.

Theconveniencesofgrouptravelwithatourguideincludethefactthatoneeasily

meetsotherpeopleandthushasamoreenjoyableandcomfortabletravelexperience.

Thisisparticularlyimportantwhentravelinginaforeigncountrywherealanguage

barrierpreventsinteractionwiththelocalsandisolationcanbecomeaproblem.The

tourguideisoftenexperiencedingeneratingajovialatmospherewithinthegroupand

his/herknowledgeoftheforeigncultureandplacesofinterestprovidetravelerswitha

greaterappreciationoftheirtrip.Also,andmaybemostimportantly,whentraveling

withaguidetheindividualtravelernormallydoesnothavetoworryabouthotel

reservationsandtransportation.Thoseaspectsaretakencareof.

Ontheotherhand,conveniencemightnotbeimportanttoatraveler,andtraveling

aloneallowsfarmorepersonalfreedoms.Forexample,onecaneasilymakechangesto

thetravelitinerary.Thetravelercanchoosetostayincertainplacesormoveonmore

quicklythanotherwisepossible,becausehedoesnotfollowasetschedule.

Learningaboutcultureandplacesofinterestisalsoeasyasthatinformationis

readilyavailableinbooks.Furthermore,travelerstendtocongregate,anditisveryeasy

tomeetfellowvacationerswhomighthaveinsightfultipsasfaraswheretogoand

whattodo.Generally,basiccommandoftheEnglishlanguagesufficestohavesuch

informativeexchangeswithothertravelersandlocals,whoareofteneagertoshare

theircustomsandculture.

Therefore,travelingoutsidealargetourgroupcanresultinaricherandmore

genuineexperience,andIbelievethisexperiencetobemoreexcitingtome.

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：studentstakeclassesinsubjects

托福写作难点话题一览

Shouldstudentsberequiredtotakeclassesinmanysubjectsortospecializeirone

subject?

Someuniversitiesrequirestudentstotakeclassesinmanysubjects.Other

universitiesrequirestudentstospecializeinonesubject.Whichisbetter?Usespecific

reasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.

写作思路绽开结构分析

很难说哪一个比另外一个更好。It's