高考英语应用文写作专题课件 专题5 高考英语应用文写作之求助信

应用文写作求助高考英语写作系列信目录必备表达（词汇）必备表达（句型）范文实战练习PART1必备表达（词汇）必备表达-词汇1.寻求帮助 2.遇到一些困难 3.面临困难 4.提供一些有建设性的指导 5.因某事感激某人6…..有困难

seekforhelpencountersomeproblemsbefacedwithdifficultiesoffersomeconstructiveguidancebegratefultosbforsthhavetroubleinsth/doingsth必备表达-词汇7.提供帮助 8.给某人留下深刻的印象 9.设法成功做成某事 10.进一步消息 11.请某人帮忙12.一次难忘的经历offersbahandleavesbadeepimpressionmanagetodosthfurtherinformationasksbafavorunforgettableexperience必备表达-词汇13.做准备 14.收集素材 15.合适地 16.感激，欣赏 17.旅客 18.航空公司19.航班 20.姓名和地址makepreparationsforcollectmaterialproperlyappreciatepassengerairlinecompanyflightnameandaddress必备表达-词汇21.课程 22.口音 23.爱好 24.象征 25.运气和团结26.顾客 27.一份珍贵的礼物 28.邮资courseaccenthobbysymbolluckandunitycustomerapreciousgiftpostagePART2必备表达（句型）必备表达-直言目的我在做...方面有困难，这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向你求助。Ihavesomedifficultyindoing....whichbothersmealot.SoIhavenochoicebuttoturntoyouforhelp.Ihavesomedifficultyindoing....必备表达-直言目的困扰我的事是我不知道做什么。WhatbothersmeisthatIdon’tknowwhattodo.Whatbothersmeisthat…必备表达-直言目的我发现我的问题主要在两个方面。一方面……..另一方面……I’vefoundthatmyproblemlieschieflyin2aspects.Foronething,….,Foranotherthing…I’vefoundthatmyproblemlieschieflyin2aspects…必备表达-描述困难不幸的是，我在准备英语竞赛的时候遇到了一些困难。encountersomedifficultyin…Butunfortunately,IencountersomedifficultyinpreparingtheEnglishcompetition.必备表达-描述困难不仅在阅读而且在写作方面也有问题。NotonlydoIhavesomedifficultiesinreadingbutalsoinwritingNotonlydoIhave…butalso…必备表达-描述困难由于我是一个新手，我在处理这样的情况方面几乎没有什么经验。HardlyhadIhaveanyexperiencesincopingwiththesituationduetothefactIamagreenhand.HardlyhadIhaveanyexperiencesin…必备表达-描述困难情况是如此的复杂以至于我都不知道怎么去面对。SodifficultisthesituationthatIdon’tknowhowtofaceit.Sodifficultisthesituationthat…必备表达-希望得到帮助希望能够及时的得到你的宝贵意见。IbelieveIwillbenefitalotfromyourvaluableandtimelyadvice.IbelieveIwillbenefitalotfrom…PART3范文实战练习范文实战练习一实战练习一假设你是高三学生李华，今年的高考阅读量加大，而你的阅读能力较差，因此学习的压力越来越大。请你根据你下内容向你的前外教MrJackson求助。希望得到他的帮助。实战练习一过得如何？我正忙着准备全国大学考试。NationalCollegeexamHowisitgoing?IambusypreparingfortheNationalCollegeexam.实战练习一紧张和担心，我写信寻求你的帮助，在学习英语方面。StressedandworriedStressedandworried,IamwritingtoseekforyourhelpinlearningEnglish.seekforyourhelp实战练习一随着高考的临近，我感到压力比以往任何时候都要大。WiththecollegeentranceapproachingWiththecollegeentranceapproachingIfeelmorestressedthanever.实战练习一更糟糕的是，我们要在考试中多读文章，所有老师都非常重视阅读能力，要求学生扩大词汇量，多做练习。Whatmakesthethingsworseisthatwehavetoreadmorearticlesintheexamandalltheteachersattachgreatsignificancetothecapabilityofreading,askingstudentstoexpandvocabularyanddomoreexercises.attachgreatsignificancetothecapabilityofreadingWhatmakesthethingsworseisthat实战练习一虽然我努力了，但我仍然发现很难提高，这甚至使我无法入睡。HardasItry,Istillfindithardtoimprove,whichevenmakesmecan’tsleep.HardasItryhardtoimprove实战练习一每次我做英语练习时，我都感到绝望和无助。EverytimewhenIdotheEnglishexerciseIfeelhopelessandhelpless.Everytimewhenfeelhopelessandhelpless.实战练习一那我该怎么做才能改变呢？SowhatIshoulddotochangeit?实战练习一我相信你的宝贵和及时的建议会使我受益匪浅。IbelieveIwillbenefitalotfromyourvaluableandtimelyadvice.valuableandtimelyadviceIwillbenefitalot实战练习一如果你能给我一些建议/帮助，我将不胜感激。Iwouldbegrateful/thankfulifIwouldbegrateful/thankfulifyoucouldgivemesomeadvice/help.范文赏析DearMrJackson,Howisitgoing?IambusypreparingfortheNationalCollegeexam.Stressedandworried,IamwritingtoseekforyourhelpinlearningEnglish.WiththecollegeentranceapproachingIfeelmorestressedthanever.Whatmakesthethingsworseisthatwehavetoreadmorearticlesintheexamandalltheteachersattachgreatsignificancetothecapabilityofreading,askingstudentstoexpandvocabularyanddomoreexercises.HardasItry,Istillfindithardtoimprove,whichevenmakesmecan’tsleep.EverytimewhenIdotheEnglishexerciseIfeelhopelessandhelpless.范文赏析SowhatIshoulddotochangeit?IbelieveIwillbenefitalotfromyourvaluableandtimelyadvice.Iwouldbegrateful/thankfulifyoucouldgivemesomeadvice/help.Yourssincerely,LiHua范文实战练习二实战练习二假定你是李华，你正在为期中考试紧张复习，但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给学校心理老师Kate写了一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下:1.作业多，没时间运动；

2.压力大，难以入睡；

3.希望得到Kate的帮助实战练习二我叫李华。我写信是想问你能不能帮我准备考试。preparetheexamMynameisLihua.I’mwritingtoaskwhetheryoucangivemehelponhowtopreparetheexam.实战练习二期中考试快到了，我遇到了一些麻烦。Withthemid-examapproaching,I’mencounteringsomeproblemswhichtroublesmealot.encounteringsomeproblemsWiththemid-examapproaching实战练习二首先，由于作业太多，我几乎不参加体育运动。Tobeginwith,HardlydoItakesportsduetotoomuchhomework.HardlydoItakesports实战练习二而且，最让我烦恼的是我每晚都很难入睡。Moreover,whattroublesmemostisthatit’sdifficultformetofallasleepeverynight.Moreoverwhattroublesmemostisthat实战练习二更糟糕的是，父母对我的期望很高，让我感到压力很大。What’sworse,thehighexpectationfrommyparentsmakesmeextremelyfeelstressed.thehighexpectationfrommyparents实战练习二我真的希望你能给我一些关于如何学习英语的好建议。IreallyhopethatyoucangivemesomegoodadviceonhowtolearnEnglish.howtolearnEnglish.实战练习二我相信你的宝贵和及时的建议会使我受益匪浅。期待你的回信。IbelieveIwillbenefitalotfromyourvaluableandtimelyadvice.Expectingyourwritingbacksoon.Iwillbenefitalotfrom范文赏析MynameisLihua.I’mwritingtoaskwhetheryoucangivemehelponhowtopreparetheexam.Withthemid-examapproaching,I’mencounteringsomeproblemswhichtroublesmealot.Tobeginwith,HardlydoItakesportsduetotoomuchhomework.Moreover,whattroublesmemostisthatit’sdifficultformetofallasleepeverynight.What’sworse,thehighexpectationfrommyparentsmakesmeextremelyfeelstressed.IreallyhopethatyoucangivemesomegoodadviceonhowtolearnEnglish.IbelieveIwillbenefitalotfromyourvaluableandtimelyadvice.Expectingyourwritingbacksoon.其他典型例题英语角活动当主持（1）假设你是李华，下周你将为学校的英语角活动当主持。你写信给外教Ms.Jenkins,向她求助。要点如下。

1.当英语的主持应该注意什么

2.请帮她帮你修改发言稿。范文赏析DearMs.Jenkins,IamLiHua,Worriedabouthowtobeahost,Iamwritingtoaskforyourhelp.AnEnglishcornerwillbeheldinourschoolnextweek.IwillbethehonestbutIamnotsurehowtodoitwellbecauseitwillbethefirsttimethatIhavedonethejob.CouldyoupleasetellmewhatIshouldpayattentionto?Arethereanyspecialwaysofsayingthingsonthisoccasion?Besides.Ihavepreparedaspeech.ButIamafraidthattherearesomegrammarmistakes.SoIhopeyoucangivemesomeadvice.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldgivemesomeadvice/help.我会诚实，但我不知道如何做好，因为这将是我第一次做的工作。字典丢失，求助图书馆（2）假定你是英国某校留学生李华，昨天晚上在图书馆自习回来后，发现你的一本英语字典不见，现写邮件给图书管理员MsJenkins,请她帮忙寻找。要点如下：

1.写信的目的

2.英语字典对你的意义

3.如果找到请她帮忙管好范文赏析DearMsJenkins,IamLiHua,Istudiedinthelibrarylastnight.ButwhenIcamebacktomydormitoccurredtomethatIhadleftmyEnglishdictionarybehindinthelibrary.ItisapreciousgiftfrommyAmericanteacher.NowIwonderwhetherIcouldaskyouafavor.Wouldyoupleasebesokindastolookforthedictionaryforme?Ifyoucanfindit,pleasekeepit.AndIwillgetitbacktomorrowafternoon.Iwillappreciateitifyoucouldoffermeahand.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.AndIwouldbereallythankful.Yourssincerely,但是当我回到宿舍的时候，我突然想到我把英语词典落在图书馆了。你能帮我找一下字典吗？钱包遗失（3）假如你是李华，乘坐FL753航班抵达伦敦后发现钱包遗失。请给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括：1、行程信息；2、钱包特征；3、联系方式。范文赏析DearSir/Madam,IamLiHua,apassengeronyourflightFL753fromHangzhoutoLondonyesterday.Iamwritingtoreportthelossofmywallet.IclearlyrememberitwaswithmewhenIboardedtheplane.However,onarrivalinLondon,Ifounditgone.Itisablackleatheronewith500dollars,myIDcard,and2creditcardsinit.Alongwiththeitemsmentionedabove,thewalletcontainsafamilyphoto.Hasanybodyhappenedtofindit?Pleasee-mailmeatlihua@.Thankyouforyourtimeandsupport.除了上面提到的物品，钱包里还有一张全家福。搜集资料遇到困难求助（4）假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speechcontest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况；2.谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙；3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。范文赏析Howtimeflies!YouhavebeenstudyinginBeijingfornearlyamonth,duringwhichyoumusthaveachievedalot.Well,how’severythinggoing?Itisreportedthattheweatherthereisveryhotanddrythesedays,whichisverydifferentfromthatofyourcountry.Haveyouadaptedtoit?Inaddition,youoncecomplainedthatthefoodservedtherewasnottoyoutaste.Ihopethatshouldhavebeenimproved.你曾经抱怨那里的食物不合你的口味。范文赏析IamgladtotellyouthatIwillgotoBeijingtotakepartinanEnglishspeechcontestinJuly,whichisnotonlyanhonor,butalsoagreatopportunityformetoimprovemyself.AndnowItrymybesttomakepreparationsforit.However,Ihavesometroubleincollectingthematerialsrelevantandusingofthelanguage.Iwillappreciateitifyougivemeahandtosolvetheproblems.Afterthecontest,Iamtodropinatyourschooltovisityou.Pleasewaitingformyphone.收集相关资料和语言运用我很高兴地告诉你，我将在七月份去北京参加一个英语演讲比赛，这不仅是一种荣誉，也是一个提高自己的大好机会。白血病求助（5）假设你是李华，是一名高三学生。你的同班同学王强因患白血病(leukemia)而住院，目前已经花光了家里的所有积蓄，现在需要骨髓移植(bonemarrowtransplant)，需要20万元。请你帮他写一封求助信。要点如下：1.对病人的简单介绍；2.目前的困难；3.希望得到捐助。联系电话：白天5221600；晚上5221610。范文赏析I’mverysadtotellyouthatmyclassmateWangQiang,aSeniorThreestudent,suddenlyfeltfaintwhenhewaspreparingforthecomingCollegeEntranceExamination.Heissufferingfromaseriousillness"leukemia".Hehasbeeninhospitalforaboutthreemonthsandspentallthemoneyhisparentssaved.Hisparents,bothfarmers,triedeverymeanstosavehim.在准备即将到来的高考时，他突然感到头晕。范文赏析WangQiangisatopstudentinourclass,butheisinhospitalnow.Heisinurgentneedofabonemarrowtransplant.However,hisfamilyistoopoortoaffordtheexpenses,whichtotal200,000yuan.Howcanapoorfamilyaffordsuchhighexpenses?Buttimeislife.Wecan’twaittoseesuchasunshineboylosehislife.Soyourhelpisbadlyneeded.Let’sdowhatwecantosaveourfellowstudent.Thelifeofalovelyboyisinyourhand.Yourlovecansavealife.Youcancontact5221600inthedaytimeand5221610atnight.不能适应高中生活求助（6）假如你叫李华，上高中快一年了，发现自己还是不能适应高中的学习生活。现在请你就目前的情况给自己初中时最信任的老师写一封求助信，信的重要内容如下：1.高中生活基本情况：(1)有9门课程；(2)每天作业时间4—5小时，课外活动时间少；(3)睡眠时间不足，上课有时感到疲劳；(4)考试压力大，家长期望高。2.你目前遇到的最大问题以及现在的感受并希望得到建议。参考词汇：压力pressure;家长的高期望highexpectationsfromparents范文赏析I’mLiHua.Doyoustillrememberme?Howareyounow?Iamwritingtoyou,askingforyourhelpbecauseIfindI’mnotveryusedtotheseniorhighschoollife.WehaveninesubjectswhicharemorethanIhadinjuniorhighschool.EverydayIhavetospendfourtofivehoursdoingmyhomework,sothereislittletimeleftforafter-schoolactivities.Ihardlyhav