建议信 （应用文写作）-高考英语一轮复习提能训练（解析版）

专题02建议信

刷大题、提能力

1.（江苏省2023.2024学年高三学情调研试题）假定你是李华，你的笔友Tom给你来信说他下学期将到北

京的一所高中做交换生，向你请教如何提升汉语口语水平。请你给他回信，内容包括:

1.表示关注;

2.提出建议;

3.期待进步。

注意:

1.词数80左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

DearTom.

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearTom,

Howiseverythinggoing?KnowingyouwouldliketoimproveyourspokenChinese,Iamofferingyouthe

followingsuggestions.

Firstofall.tryexposingyourselftosomeChineseprogrammes,thusimprovingyourpronunciationgradually.

Besides,itisadvisabletoreadChinesenewspapers,magazinesornovelsinyoursparetime.Inthisway,youcan

notonlyenlargeyourvocabulary,butalsolearntouseChineseaswenativespeakersdo.Lastbutnotleast,you

shouldbebraveandmakeuseofeveryopportunitytopractisespeakingChinesealoud.

Lookingforwardtoyourprogress.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给笔友Tom写一封回信，就如何提升汉语口语水平给他一些

建议，并表达对他的期待。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：suggestion—»advicc

此外：besides—>what'smore

充分利用：makeuseof—>makethemostof

机会：opportunity—>chance

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：KnowingyouwouldliketoimproveyourspokenChinese,Iamofferingyouthefollowingsuggestions.

拓展句：BecauseIknowyouwouldliketoimproveyourspokenChinese,Iamofferingyouthefollowing

suggestions.

【点睛】【高分句型1]Firstofall.tryexposingyourselftosomeChineseprogrammes,thusimprovingyour

pronunciationgradually.（运用了现在分词短语作状语）

【高分句型2]Inthisway,youcannotonlyenlargeyourvocabulary,butalsolearntouseChineseaswenative

speakersdo.（运用了“notonly...butalso…”连接两个并列结构以及as引导的方式状语从句）

2.（重庆市南开中学2023・2024学年高三试题）假定你是李华，，尔的外国留学生朋友James想在中国进行社

会实践，现有如下两种选择：博物馆讲解员或乡村中学志愿者。James来信向你寻求建议，请你给他回信，

内容包括：

1.建议其中一项活动；

2.说明至少两点理由。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如卜.格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

DearJames,

Howiseverythinggoing?

Bestregards,

LiHua

【答案】

DearJames,

Howiseverythinggoing?Basedonyourinterests,Iwouldrecommendyoutobecomeamuscun:guide.

Firstly,workingasamuseumguidewillprovideyouwithauniqueopportunitytosoakyourselfinChinese

historyandculture,offeringinsightsintothecountry'spastandpresent.What'smore,byengagingindaily

conversationswithtouristsandexplainingtheculturalsignificanceoftheartifactsinChinese,you'llhaveample

chancetopracticeandenhanceyourlanguageproficiency.

Hopefully,mysuggestionswillbeofhelp(oyouandfeelfreetoreachoutifyouneedfurtherguidance.

Bestregards,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外国留学生朋友James写封信，给他提出在中国进行社会

实践的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

首先：firstly—>inthefirstplace

提供：offer—>provide

充当：workas—*scrvcas

另外：what'smore—inaddition

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原右J：Firstly,workingasamuseumguidewillprovideyouwithauniqueopportunity(osoakyourselfinChinese

historyandculture,offeringinsightsintothecountry'spastandpresent.

拓展句：Firstly,workingasamuseumguidewillprovideyouwithauniqueopportunitytosoakyourselfinChinese

histoiyandculture,whichwillofferinsightsintothecountry'spastandpresent.

［点睛］［高分句型1］Basedonyourinterests,Iwouldrecommendyoutobecomeamuseumguide.（运用了过去

分词作状语）

［高分句型2］Hopefully,mysuggestionswillbeofhelptoyouandfeelfreetoreachoutifyouneedfurther

guidance.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）

3.（广东省广东省四校联考2023-2024学年高三试题）假如你是李华，你的好友Caroline即将参加你们学校

举办的留学生中文写作大赛的决赛，写信询问你的建议。请你给她写封邮件，内容包括：

1.表达祝贺；2.提供建议；3.表达祝愿。

注意：

1.词数80左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。

DearCaroline,

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【答案】DearCaroline,

IammorethandelightedtoknowthatyouhaveenteredtheChinesecompositionfinal.Congratulations!To

helpyoudobetterinit,Tmwritingtooffermysuggestions,whicharelistedasfollows.

Firstofall.itisrecommendedthatyourhandwritingshouldbetidyandbeautifulsoastoleaveagood

impressiononthejudges.What'smore,inordertocatchthejudges5eyes,you'dbettermakeyourwritingcontent

asrealandinterestingaspossible.Iraddition,it'sagoodideaforthelanguagetobevividandhumorous,enabling

yourcompositiontostandouteasily.

Hopefully,youcanfindmysuggestionshelpful.Wishyouagreatsuccessinthefinal.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给即将参加留学生中文写作大赛的决赛的好友Caroline

写信，需向她表示祝贺，分享建议，并表达祝愿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：delighted—*happy,pleased,glad

建议：suggestion—>advicc

比赛：composition—>match,contest

给某人留下好印象：leaveagoodimpressiononsb—>makeagoodimpressiononsb,givesbagoodimpression

止匕外：inaddition—►besides,furthermore,additionally

使能够：enable—>allow

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：IammorethandelightedtoknowthatyouhaveenteredtheChinesecompositionfinal.

拓展句：KnowingthatyouhaveenteredtheChinesecompositionfinal,Iammorethandelighted.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Tohelpyoudobetterinit.I,mwritingtooffermysuggestions,whicharclistedasfollows.

（运用了不定式短语Tohelp…作目的状语、which引导非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]Inaddition,it'sagoocideafbrthelanguagetobevividandhumorous,enablingyourcompositionto

standouteasily.（运用了现在分词短语enabling...作结果状语）

4.（2024届云南省昆明市第一中学高中新课标高三摸底试题）假定你是李华，外教Mr.Smilh正筹划一场辩

论比赛，他向同学们征集建议以期有所创新，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：

1.辩论主题；

2.创新建议。

注意：

1.词数80左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

DearMr.Smith,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearMr.Smith,

Hoping(hisemailfindsyouwell.Ilwouldbedelightfulifmysuggestionsforthedebatecompetitioncould

help.

1propose“SocialMedia-ProsorCons”asthetopic.Giventhesignificanceofsocialmedia,thistopicwill

sparkinsightfuldiscussionsonitsimpactandconsequences,encouragingexplorationofvariousperspectives.Apart

fromregularargumentspresentinganddebatingrounds,Isuggestintroducingan“AudienceQuestions“sessionto

createaninteractiveatmosphere.

Thetopicandnovelsessionwillhopefullymaketheeventeducationalandengaging.Bestwishesfor

organizingit!

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，外教Mr.Smith正筹划一场辩论比赛，他向同学们征集

建议以期有所创新，请考生给他写一封邮件。

【详解】1.词汇积累

令人愉快的：delightful—►enjoyable

建议：suggestion—>advice

各种各样的：various—*avarietyof

除了，此外：Apartfrom—►inadditionto

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原右J：Giventhesignificanceofsocialmedia,thistopicwillsparkinsightfuldiscussionsonitsimpactand

consequences,encouragingexplorationofvariousperspectives.

拓展句：Giventhesignificanceofsocialmedia,thistopicwillsparkinsightfuldiscussionsonitsimpactand

consequences,whichcanencourageexplorationofvariousperspectives.

【点睛]（高分句型1]Itwouldbedelightfulifmysuggestionsforthedebatecompetitioncouldhelp.（运用\if

引导的条件状语从句）

[高分句型2]Giventhesignificanceofsocialmedia,thistopicwillsparkinsightfuldiscussionsonitsimpactand

consequences,encouragingexplorationofvariousperspectives.（运AJ了现在分词作状语）

5.（湖南省常德市第一中学20232024学年高三试题）假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Chris要私下存钱购买

智能手机，用于打游戏。请你给他写封信，指出他的错误并提出建议。

注意：L写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

DearChris,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearChris,

Iheardthatyouwanttosavemoneysecretlytobuyaphonefbrgaming.Ithinkit'snotagoodidea.It's

importanttoprioritizeyourneedsandmakewisedecisions.Spendingallyourmoneyongamingmaynotbe

beneficialinthelongrun.

instead,Isuggestconsideringotheroptions.Youcouldsavemoneyforsomething(hatcancontributetoyour

personaldevelopment,suchaseducationalmaterialsorahobbythatcanprovidevaluableskills.Ifsalsoimportant

tofindabalancebetweenleisureactivitiesandyourresponsibilities.Iencourageyoutoexploredifferentformsof

entertainmentthatdon'trelysolelyontechnology.Engaginginoutdooractivities,sports,orjoiningclubscan

provideenjoymentandhelpyoudevelopnewskills.It'salsoagreatwaytoexpandyoursocialcircle.

Ithinkifyoucanbealittlebitsmarternow,yourwillhaveabrighterfuture.Goodluck.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达是一封建议信。要求考生以李华的身份就美国笔友Chris要私下存钱购买智能手机并

用于打游戏一事，给他写封信，指出他的错误并提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

想耍：wantto—♦wouldliketo

攒钱：save—♦putaside

购买：buy—>purchase

提供：provide—>offer

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Youcouldsavemoneyforsomethingthatcancontributetoyourpersonaldevelopment,suchaseducational

materialsorahobbythatcanprovidevaluableskills.

拓展句：Itisadvisablethatyousavemoneyforsomethingthatcancontributetoyourpersonaldevelopment,such

aseducationalmaterialsorahobbythatcanprovidevaluableskills.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Spendingallyourmoneyongamingmaynotbebeneficialinthelongrun.（动名词短语

做主语）

[高分句型2]Iencourageyoutoexploredifferentformsofentertainmentthatdon'trelysolelyontechnology.（使

用了that引导定语从句,先行词为entertainment）

6.（海南中学白沙学校2023年试题）假定你是李华，你的同学Dave感觉学习压力大，焦虑，通过玩网络

游戏才能感觉到放松，你认为这存在问题。请你给同学写一封邮件，内容包括：L说明问题；2,提出建议。

注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右：

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

4.可适当增加细节使内容连贯。

DearDave,

Yours,

Lihua

【答案】

DearDave,

I'msorrytohearthatyouareaddictedtoplayingcomputergames.Icanunderstandhowupsetandstressed

youmustbe.butIthinkitwillsurelyharmtoyourhealth.Hereareafewthingsyoucando.

First,ifIwereyou,Iwouldtrymybesttolimitthelimespentonvideogameseachday,soIcou'dspendmore

timeonothermeaningfulactivitiesandhobbies.Anotherstepwouldbefindingpurposeinreality,fromenjoying

face-to-faccconversationswithyourfamilyandfriendstotakingawalkinthesunshine.Immerseyourselfinthe

pleasureofreallifeinsteadofavirtualworld.

Iamsurethatwithpersistence,you'lldefinitelygetridofyourvideogameaddiction.Lookingforwardtoyour

goodnews.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生给Dave写一封建议信，因为他感觉学习压力大，焦虑，通

过玩网络游戏才能感觉到放松。给他写信提出问题，并给予建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累：

伤害：harm—>doharmto/beharmfulto

使沉浸于：immerse—>absorb/bury

摆脱：getridof—»castoflVbreakawayfrom

焦虑的：stressed—>anxious/worried

2.句式拓展：

同义句转换

原句：First,if1wereyou,Iwouldtrymybesttolimitthetimespentonvideogameseachday,soIcouldspend

moretimeonothermeaningfulactivitiesandhobbies.

拓展句：First,wereIyou,Iwouldtrymybesttolimitthetimespentonvideogameseachday,soIcouldspend

moretimeonothermeaningfulactivitiesandhobbies.

［点睛］［高分句型I］First,ifIwereyou,Iwouldtrymybesttolimitthetimespentonvideogameseachday,so

Icouldspendmore（imeonothermeaningfulactivitiesandhobbies.（运用了虚拟语气和）

[高分句型2]Hereareafewthingsyoucando.（运用了倒装句）

7.（湖南省岳阳县第一中学2023・2024学年高三试题）假定你是红星中学的学生李华，你校来自美国的交换

生John在学校网站上发布了一份求助信，称自己由于中文不好，与同学们的日常交流存在障碍，想求助大

家如何学好中文。请你给他发一封邮件，给他一些学习中文的建议，内容包括：

1.自我介绍并表明写信目的；

2.提出学习中文的建议。

注意:

1.写作词数应为80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

DearJohn,

Bestwishes!

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearJohn,

I'myourschoolmateLiHua.IhavelearnedthatyouhavedifficultylearningChinese,andIwouldliketogive

yousomeadviceonthis.

Firstly,listen（oChineseasoftenaspossible.Thefirststepinlearninganewlanguageistogetaccustomedto

thepronunciation.Secondly,devotetimetomemorizingcharacters.CharactersaretoChinesewhatwcrdsareto

English.Spendatleasthalfanhourmemorizingcharacterseveryday.Thirdly,readalot.YoucanreacChinese

newspapersandmagazinesthatinterestyou.

Ihopethesesuggestionswillbehelpfultoyou.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】这是一封建议信。要求考生以李华的身份给你校来自美国的交换生John发一封邮件，给他一些学

习中文的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

得知：learn—>beinformedof

建议：advice—>rccommcndation

听：listen—>lendancarto

有益的：behelpful—>bebeneficial

2.句式拓展

同义句改写

原句：IhavelearnedthatyouhavedifficultylearningChinese,andIwouldliketogiveyousomeadviceonthis.

拓展句：Havinglearned（hatyouhavedifficultylearningChinese,Iwouldlike（ogiveyousomeadviceonthis.

【点睛】【高分句型I]Thefirststepinlearninganewlanguageistogetaccustomedtothepronunciation.（介词

短语做后置定语）

[高分句型2]YoucanreadChinesenewspapersandmagazinesthatinterestyou.（that引导的定语从句，先行

词为newspapersandmagazines）

8.（广东省河源市开学联考2023.2024学年高三联考试题）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Maigaux写信向

你询问如何平衡学习和摄影爱好之间的关系。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：

1.告知收到来信，得知情况；

2.洽出合理建议。

注意：

I.写作词数应为8（）左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

DearMargaux,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearMargaux,

Iheardthatyoulovephotographybuthavebeenstrugglingtobalanceyourstudywithpursuingyourinterests.

I'mgladtooffermyadvice!

Firstofall,you'dbetterprioritizeyourtime.Makealistofallthethingsthatyouneedtodo,assigneachtask

incrdcrofimportance.Additionally,scheduleblocksoftimeforstudyandphotography.Lastly,takeagoodrest.

Withthesetips,youcanfindabalancewhichwillallowyoutimeforyourclasses,hobbiesandrest.

1wishmysuggestionswouldbeofsomehelptoyou.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本文是应用文。假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Margaux写信向你询问如何平衡学习和摄影爱好之

间的关系。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：1.告知收到来信，得知情况；2.给出合理建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad—>happy

建议：advice—>suggestion/tip

此夕卜：Additionally—»Inaddition

有帮助的：ofsomehelp—>helpful

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Lastly,takeagoodrest.

拓展句：Lastly,takeagoodrest,whichcanmakeyouenergetic.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Iheardthatyoulovephotographybuthavebeenstrugglingtobalanceyourstudywith

pursuingyourinterests.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】Makealistofallthethingsthatyouneedtodo,assigneachtaskinorderofimportance.（运用Ythat

引导的限制性定语从句）

[高分句型3]Withthesetips,youcanfindabalancewhichwillallowyoulimeforyourclasses,hobbiesand

rest.（运用了which引导的限制性定语从句）

9.（安徽省池州市贵池区池州市第一中学2023年高三试题）池州口报创刊五十周年之际，向广大读者征求

增加栏目的建议。请你以李华的名义写一封信给编辑，内容包括：

I.写信的目的；

2.希望增加两个栏目及原因；

3.期望和祝福。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Deareditor.

Yoursfaithfully,

LiHua

【答案】

Deareditor,

Timefliesintheblinkofaneye!ItisfiftyyearssinceChizhouDailycameout.

Asafaithfillreader,TmwritingtorecommendtwosectionsIprefertobeincluded.Oneisthesayingsfrom

farriouspeople.Thesesayings,reflectingtheirwisdomoflife,canencouragepeopletobecomebetterpersons.The

othercanbestoriesofaveragepeople,whichwillsurelyappealtomorecitizens.

SincerelyhopingChizhouDaily,withmorevaluablearticlesandwonderfulcontent,willbecomeincreasingly

popular.

Yoursfaithfully,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。池州日报创刊五十周年之际，向广大读者征求增加栏目的建议。请你

以李华的名义写一封信给编辑。

【详解】1.词汇积累

出名的：famous—>wel1-known

鼓励：encourage—>hearten

忠实的:faithf