人与动物、人与植物 （读后续写人与自然）-高考英语一轮复习提能训练（解析版）

专题02人与动物、人与植物

刷大题、提能力

1.（2023•全国•模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短

文。

Thecottagewaslocatedneartheforestandduringthevacation,theMichaelisfamilyalwaysenjoyed

breathinginthefreshsmelloftreesandlisteningtothebeautifulsingingofbirdsoverhead.Itwasapleasant

WednesdayeveningwhenCrystalMichaeliswasbusybarbecuingwithhisfamilyintheircottagebackyardin

CedarHills,Utah.Thesausages,steakandburgerssizzled（噬噬作响）onthecookerwhilehiswife,Anna,was

makinghotdogsandsalad.Thefamilywassatisfiedwiththebarbecuedinnerandchattedintheyardtillseven.

Threekidsstartedtoplayhide-and-seekafterthedinnerwhilethecouplecleanedthetableandbackyard.

Suddenly,theirpetdogElla,aLabradorRetriever,actedprotectively,barkingloudlyandstandingneartheyard's

rockwall.Atfirst,theMichaelisfamilydidn'tthinkmuchaboutElla'sbehavior,butwhenthedogstartedlooking

backquicklyatthekidsandpushedoneofthemtogetaway,Crystalrealizedsomethingwentwrongandaskedall

thekidstogoinsidetheroomquicklywiththeirmom.

Ellaappearedverycautiousandcontinuedtobarkwhilecirclingaroundinthebackyard.Crystalthoughtit

wasveryconcerningandpickedupthestickbesidethedoor.Inthequietnight,helookedaroundandheardthe

soundofsomethingsteppingonleaves."Whoisthat?Hello?^^Allofasudden,Crystalalmostfrozeuponseeinga

hugeshadowjumpingdownintotheyardwherethefamilywasrelaxingjustmomentsago.

Itwasamountainlion.Ellabarkedevenlouderandchargedtowardsit.Themountainlionmovedforwards

suddenlyandattackedElla."Comeinside,Crystal!?,shoutedAnnadesperately.Thekidsalsosawthemountainlion

andwerefrightenedbythescene.Crystalfelthisheartseemedtostop.Afterthrowingthestickatthemountainlion,

heshoutedandranasquicklyaspossibletotheroom.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式作答。

WhileEllaandthemountainlionfought,Crystalcalledthepoliceforhelp.

CrystalquicklycheckedEllaandfoundover20bitesonherbody.

【答案】

WhileEllaandthemountainlionfought.Crystalcalledthepolicefarhelp.4tWewereattackedbyamountain

lioninCedarHills.Pleasecomeandhelp!^^TheMichaelisfamilysawthefightfrominsidetheroomintearsand

hopedthatthepolicecouldcomeassoonaspossibletorescuetheirbelovedpet.Ellabarkedloudlyandheldstem

eyecontact,tryingtoappearstrongerandbigger.However,facetofacewiththehorriblebeast,shecameoffworse.

Minuteslater,thepolicearrivedandmanagedtocapturethemountainlion.

CrystalquicklycheckedEllaandfoundover20bitesonherbody.Therewasbloodalloverthebackyardand

onElla'shead,legs,alongwithherneck.TheMichaelisfamilyhurriedtotakehertothevettohavethewounds

treated.ThedoctorexaminedEllacarefully,whowasastonishedtoseethesevereinjuries.Fortunately,noneofthe

biteswouldcausedeath.Whenaskedwhathappened,Crystalwasclosetotearsandsaid,“Ibelievewholeheartedly

shewasprotectingusfromalionattheriskoflosingherlife.Sheisourhero!^^

【导语】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了Michaelis一家在森林旁的小屋度假。一天晚上，Michaelis夫妇和

三个孩子在院子里烧烤，其后孩子们开始玩捉迷藏。突然，宠物狗Ella表现得异常警惕，还推揉一个孩子

离开，男主人意识到可能有危险来临，就让他的家人进屋。随后，一只美洲狮翻墙进来。宠物狗Ella勇敢

地与之搏斗。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句“在Ella和美洲狮打斗时，Crystal给警察打电话求助”可知，第一段可描写Ella和美洲狮的

打斗过程以及警察的救援。

②由第二段首句“Crystal赶紧查看Ella的状况，发现Ella身上有20多处咬伤”可知，第二段可描写警察抓走

美洲狮后的场景，可重点描述Michaelis一家带Ella就医及他们对Ella的感激之情。

2.续写线索：打电话求助——希望警察尽快营救宠物——警察到来，成功捕获美洲狮——匆忙带Ella就医

——医生对伤情感到惊讶——幸运的是，伤情不会致死——表示感激

3.词汇激活：

行为类

帮助：help/assist

希望做某事：hopetodo/expecttodo

到达：arrive/getto

成功做某事：managetodosth./besucceededindoingsth.

情绪类

惊讶的：astonished/amazed

幸运的是：fortunately/luckily

【点睛】[高分句型1]

TheMichaelisfamilysawthefightfrominsidetheroomintearsandhopedthatthepolicecouldcomeassoonas

possibletorescuetheirbelovedpet（运用了that引导宾语从句）

[高分句型2]

ThedoctorexaminedEllacarefully,whowasastonishedtoseethesevereinjuries.（运用了who弓|导非限制性定语

从句）

2.（2023•山东泰安•统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整

的短文。

Doraisaseven-year-oldgirl.Oneday,whenshevisitedherfriendAlice,shesawabeautifulbirdinacageon

thebalconyofthehouse.Alicetoldheritwashernewpet."Howbeautifulitis!”saidDora."Ialsowanttohave

suchabirdasmypet.”

ThatdaywhenDorareturnedhome,shetoldhermotheraboutAlice9sbird.Thensheasked,t4Mom,canIalso

getabird?”"Ofcourse,youcan,“saidhermother.t6ButyouneedtowaitbecauseI'venotimetovisitapetstore

thesedays."Doraagreed.Oneday,whenDorawasbackhomefromschool,shesawacageinthelivingroom.In

thecagewasabeautifulbluebird.Hermotherwasstandingnexttothecage,smiling.atOh,abird!”Dorashouted

happily.Sherantoitandlookedatithappily."It'sabirthdaygiftforyou,^^saidhermother“Thankyou,Mom.I

loveitsomuch!^^saidDoraexcitedly.

Thefollowingday,Dorainvitedherfriendstocomeovertoseeherbird.Allofherfriendssaiditwasareally

beautifulbirdandDorawasverygladtohearthat.Sheandherfriendsplayedwiththebirdforalongtimethatday.

Herfriendsallwishedtheycouldhavesuchabirdastheirpet.

Sadly,afewweekslater,Dorabecamesick.Thedoctortoldherparentsthatshegotthefluandhadtosayat

home.Inordernottomakeherfriendssick,herparentsaskedherfriendsnottocometoplaywithher.Dorafelt

verysad.Howshewishedherfriendswouldcomeandvisither!Butsheknewherparentswereright.She'dbetter

stayalone.SinceDorahadnoonetoplaywith,shecouldonlyplaywithherbird.However,shefeltthatherbird

didn'tseemtobehappyeither.

Paragraph1:

Dorawatchedherbirdinsilence.

Paragraph2:

Whenhermothercameinside,Doratoldhermotheraboutherdecision.

【答案】Paragraph1：

Dorawatchedherbirdinsilence.Shefoundherbirdkeptlookingoutofthewindow.Inthetreesoutside,

manybirdswereplayinggladly.Shethoughtthatperhapsherbirddidn'tlikekeptinthecageatall.Justasshe

missedstayingwithherfriends,italsowantedtogoouttoplaylikeotherbirds.Butbeforeshegotsick,shedidn't

thinkalotaboutherbird.NowDorarealizedsheshouldn'tselfishlytakeawayitsfreedomforherownenjoyment.

Paragraph2：

Whenhermothercameinside,Doratoldhermotheraboutherdecision.Shesaid,“Mom,canyousetmybird

free?^^Hermotherwassurprisedandaskedwhy."I'msureitalsowantsfriends,saidDora.Hermotheragreed.

Sheopenedthecageandthebirdcheerfullyflewoutofthewindowanddisappearedsoon.Afewdayslater,Dora

couldplaywithherfriendsagain.Howexcitedshewas!Andwhenshelookedoutatthebirdsinthetrees,she

knewherbirdmustbeveryhappyatthatmoment.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了七岁女孩Dora收到了一只鸟作为生日礼物，她邀请朋友来看这只

鸟，所有的朋友都说很漂亮，Dora非常开心，不幸的是，几周后Dora生病了，为了不传染给朋友，父母要

求她在家待着，Dora感到很难过，只能和小鸟玩，但她发现小鸟似乎也不快乐。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“Dora默默地看着她的小鸟。”可知，第一段可描写Dora看到鸟玩耍的场景意识到小鸟

也需要自由。

②由第二段首句内容“妈妈进来后，Dora把自己的决定告诉了妈妈。”可知，第二段可描写Dora将小鸟放生

及再次看到树上的小鸟时的感悟。

2.续写线索：发现小鸟往窗外看——意识到小鸟需要自由——告诉妈妈自己的决定——放生——感悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

①生病：getsick/fallill

②询问：ask/inquire

③同意：agree/approve

情绪类

①高兴：gladly/delightedly

②惊讶：surprised/astonished

【点睛】[高分句型1]Shethoughtthatperhapsherbirddidn'tlikekeptinthecageatall.（由连接词that引导的

宾语从句）

[高分句型2]Andwhenshelookedoutatthebirdsinthetrees,sheknewherbirdmustbeveryhappyatthat

moment.（由从属连词when引导的时间状语从句）

3.（2023•全国•高三专题练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整

的短文。

ALEXpedaledhisbikealongthecountrylanethatledtohishouse.Asheroundedabend,thetipsofthe

cattailsthatgrewaroundJohnson'sPondcameintoview.Hisdadtookhimcanoeingtheresometimes,andAlex

lovedit.Thepondwasalwayssoalivewithactivity.Frogscroakedalongtheshore,dragonflieshuntedamongthe

cattails,andsometimesAlexdiscoveredturtles（乌龟）basking（日西太B日）onsunnyrocks.

Alexwascuriousabouttheturtleshesaw.Oneweek,whenitwastoorainytogocanoeing,heandhisdad

wenttothelibrarytocheckoutbooksonturtles.Alexlearnedthatturtlesdon'thavewarmbloodlikepeopledo.

Thafswhytheyhavetositinthesuntowarmthemselves.Nowitlookedliketomorrowmightbeanothersunny

day.HedecidedhewouldaskDadiftheycouldgocanoeingandlookforturtlesagain.

JustthenAlexsawsomethingintheroadupahead.Itlookedlikeabiggrayrock.Butitwasafunnyplacefor

arocktobe.

Andthen,asAlexwatched,therockstartedtomove.

Whenherodehisbikeuptogetacloserlook,hesawthatitwasn'tarockatall.Itwasalargeturtlecrawled

itswayacrosstheroad.Ithadabony,beak-shapedmouthandalong,jaggedtail.Alexknewrightawayitwasa

snappingturtle.

Healsoknewnottogettooclose.Hehadreadthatasnappingturtlehasapowerfulbiteeventhoughitdoesn't

haveteeth.Itcouldevenbiteoffsomeone'sfinger.Hestoodatadistanceandwatchedtheturtlemoveslowlyover

theroad.

Outofthecornerofhiseye,hesawacarapproaching.Theturtlewasstillonlyhalfwayacrosstheroad.Alex

knewhecouldn'tpickituptomoveitsafelytothegrass.Whatcouldhedo?

注意：

L续写词数应为150词左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Thinkingfast,hestartedjumpingupanddownandwavingbothhandswildly.

Tomakethewarningsign,Alexhurriedbackhomeandstartedhisworkwithsomeleftoverwoodandpaint.

【答案】

Thinkingfast,hestartedjumpingupanddownandwavingbothhandswildly.4tStop!Stop!”hecried.Thecar

slowedtoastop,andthedriverstuckhisheadoutofthewindowwithapuzzledlook.Alexdartedforwardand

pointedatthemovingturtle.'Tmjusttryingtosaveit."heexplained.Withanunderstandingsmile,thedriver

applaudedhisefforts.Seeingthecarpullingaway,Alexwaslostindeepthoughts."MaybeIcouldputupasignto

warnpeopletherewereturtlescrossingtheroad,^^hesaidtohimself.

Tomakethesign,Alexhurriedbackhomeandfoundsomeleftoverwoodandpaint.Hehammerednailsinto

thewoodtomakeaflatboard,afterwhichhepaintedavividpictureofaturtleinthemiddleandadded"Slow!

TurtlesCrossing^^atthebottom.HehadcompletedallhisworkwhenDadarrivedhome,whoofferedtocarrythe

signtothespot.Togethertheyfixedthesignintothegroundbythesideoftheroad.Withtheirworkdone,they

bothbreathedasighofreliefandheadedhomewithgreatsatisfaction.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Alex沿着乡间小路骑自行车回家时，看到有一只啮龟在路上慢慢

移动，他在书上读到过，啮龟的咬合力很强，甚至能咬掉人的手指，所以他不能把它捡起来安全地转移，

这时一辆汽车驶来，啮龟还在半路上，他能怎么办呢？

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“他快速地思考着，开始上蹿下跳，疯狂地挥舞着双手。”可知，第一段可描写Alex示

意司机停车，并想出立牌子提醒人们的办法。

②由第二段首句内容“为了制作标牌，Alex匆忙赶回家，找到了一些剩余的木头和油漆。”可知，第二段可

描写Alex回家制作牌子并和爸爸一起钉在路边的地上。

2.续写线索：

司机停车一解释原因——想出办法一回家制作牌子一把牌子钉在路边一满足

3.词汇激活

行为类

①呼喊：cry/shout

②称赞：applaud/praise

③陷入沉思：belostindeepthoughts/falldeepintothought

情绪类

①困惑：puzzled/confused

②心y茜意足：withgreatsatisfaction/feelverysatisfied

【点睛】[高分句型1].Hehammerednailsintothewoodtomakeaflatboard,afterwhichhepaintedavivid

pictureofaturtleinthemiddleandadded"Slow!TurtlesCrossing^^atthebottom/由“介词after+关系代词which^^

引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2].HehadcompletedallhisworkwhenDadarrivedhome,whoofferedtocarrythesigntothespot.

（由从属连词when引导的时间状语从句和关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句）

4.（2023•全国•高三专题练习）阅读下而材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整

的短文。

TheBiggestDogontheMountain

Welikedhikingtogether.Today,wewerelookingforatrailoverWallaceMountain.

“It'sbeenoveranhour,^^saidJesse,mynineteen-year-oldson."Doyouthinkthetrailstillexists?”Wehad

exploredseveralpathsbutwithnoluck.Wepushedthroughweedsmid-calfhighforus,butneck-highforour

rusty-browndog,Shadow.Onceinawhile,wewouldcallShadowbackwhenshewasattractedbythepleasant

smellofflowers.Nolongerslimandbouncingwithenergy,Shadowwasthesizeofalargehousecat,andalways

contenttocurluponthecouchbesideoneofus.

Suddenly,weheardwhatsoundedlikemanydogsbarkinginthedistance,anunusualsoundinthewilderness

aroundus.Curious,weclimbedtheridge（山脉）,onlytofindwhatseemedlikeadogfactory.Smalldogs,bigdogs,

browndogs,anddogsIcan'tevendescribepouredout.Thehounds（猎狗）hittheground,sniffingtheairand

turningtofaceus.Beforelong,theywentdownfromtheirsideofthemountain.Jesseshotanalarmedglanceatme

beforeturningtocallinafirmvoice,“Shadow,comehere,stay.^^

Ipattedmypockets,feelingforthepepperspray（防才良喷雾），sosmallitwouldneverworkagainstsomany

animals.Iturned,surveyingthenearbybrushforapotentialweapon.Withthehelpofadrenaline（肾上腺素），I

brokeofftwothickbranchesfromatreeandrushedtoJesse'sside,“Hereyouare!”"OK,"hesaid,“Dad,theyare

comingtous.”My-mouthwentdry.IglancedoveratJesse,hislipspinched（夹紧）tight.

Thepackemergedfromthevalley,marchingstraighttowardus.Thedogsintheleadwerenowcloseenough

forustoseethatmostofthemwerethreetimeslargerthanShadow.Withdeepgrowls（怒吼声），theyranstraight

forus.Jesseswallowedhardandlookedatme.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Shadow'sbackfurrose.

Surprisingly,theentiremassofdogsturnedtailandfled.

【答案】

Shadow'sbackfurrose.Downcamethegroupofdogstowardsus,roaringangrily.Justasoneofthem

approachedus,Iraisedthepeppersprayandspraytheliquidtoit.Luckilyitjumpedaside.However,moredogs

chargedatme,whichmadethepeppersprayuseless.Justthen,Jessewentupbravelyandthrewthethickbranches

aroundus,makingitdifficultforthedogstomovenear.Meanwhile,Shadowshoutedatthedogsaggressivelyinan

attempttoscarethemaway.

Surprisingly,theentiremassofdogsturnedtailandfled.Iwasgladtoseethemdisappear.IthankedJessefor

herbraveryandIpattedShadowonhisback.Whilehewasbiggerthanthosedogs,hewasnotafraidinfaceofthe

massofdogs.Wecontinuedtosetofftosearchforourtrail.Thistime,withShadowleadingtheway,wewouldnot

getlostandsoonwefoundtherighttrail.Aftertheadventure,wereturnedhomesafeandsoundthankstomybrave

sonandthebiggestdog.

【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者，他的儿子和狗一起探险的故事。他们一起徒步旅行，在华

莱士山寻找一条小径。因为迷路，遇到一群狗攻击，在危机时刻，他们的狗Shadow勇敢吓退一群狗，而保

护他们的故事。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“Shadow的背部毛发立了起来。”可知，第一段可描写他们和Shadow在遇到这一群狗

之后的表现。

②由第二段首句内容“令人惊讶的是，整群狗都掉头逃跑了。”可知，第二段可描写那群狗退去，他们脱险后

的回家以及他们的心理活动。

2.续写线索：徒步旅行一探索——发现一群狗——遭攻击——Shadow吓退狗——回家

3.词汇激活

行为类

寻找：lookfor/search/seek

回家：gobackhome/returnhome

爬：climb/ascend/mount

情绪类

感谢：thank/showourappreciation/showourgratitude/begrateful

害怕的：afraid/dreadful/horrible

【点睛】[高分句型1]Justasoneofthemapproachedus,Iraisedthepeppersprayandspraytheliquidtoit.（由连

接词as引导的时间状语从句）

[高分句型2]However,moredogschargedatme,whichmadethepeppersprayuseless.（由关系代词which弓|导

非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型3]IthankedJesseforherbraveryandIpattedShadowonhisback.（由省略that引导的宾语从句）

5.（2023•全国•高三专题练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整

的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

Myhusband,Donald,tookourdaughterSarahoutforsomeicecreamthenightbeforedrivinghertocollege.

Astheywerewalkingbacktothecar,theysawayoungmansittingonthegroundandgivinghispuppyacone.

“Acutedog,“Donaldsaidastheywalkedby."Afreedog,“theyoungmanreplied.Donaldaskedhimwhathe

meantbythatandthemanexplained.HewasmovingawayfromVermontanddidnotthinkthetravelwouldbe

goodforthedog.Hehadraisedherfromasmallpuppy.Themansaidshewasa6-month-oldcrossbetweenthe

DobermanandtheLabradornamedRhubarb.Donaldtookhisphonenumber.Therest,astheysay,ishistory.

Rhubarbwasasweetdogandveryfriendlyandlovedeveryone.Wheneversomeonecametothehouse,she

wasalwayshappy.ShealsogotalongwithWillie,anolderSamoyedwehad.Williewasnotwellanddiedabouta

yearlater,but,fortunately,Rhubarb'scompanyhelpedhimkeepgoingforlongerthanthatifhehadbeenalone.But

theinterestingthingaboutRhubarbwasthatsheneverbarked.Shewouldsometimesgetexcitedwhenshesawa

chipmunk（花栗鼠）andmakealittlecryingsound.

Onehotnightwhenshewasabout4yearsold,wewenttobedwiththewindowsopenandthedoorsunlocked.

Atabout3a.m.,IwokeuptothesoundofRhubarbbarking.IwokeDonaldandwegotoutofbed.

Rhubarbwascomingtowardus.Weturnedonthelightsandnoticedthedoortothekitchenwasopen.Then

wesawthedoorleadingintothehousefromthegaragewasalsoopen.Wequicklylockedallthedoors,andwedid

notgetanysleepthatnight.Itwasdeepintothenight,sowedidn'tcallthepolice.

Paragraph1:

Thenextdaywenoticedtherewascigaretteashonthefloor.

Paragraph2:

Mypursewasrightnexttothedoor.

【答案】

Thenextdaywenoticedtherewascigaretteashonthefloor.Actually,itwasathiefwhoenteredourkitchen

andgarage.Muchtoourrelief,thankstoRhubarb,thethiefstolenothing.Icalledthepolicetoreportthebreak-in.I

alsotoldthemnothinghadbeentaken,buttheysentapoliceofficerovertotalkwithusanyway.Infact,recently

manylocalhomeshadbeenbrokeninontheweekend.Mostpeople'swalletsandpurseshadbeenstolen.

Mypursewasrightnexttothedoor.However,Rhubarbhadscaredthethiefawaybeforeheorshecouldsteal

it.Whenthepoliceofficerleft,hesaidweshouldrewardRhubarbwithabigsteakdinner.Rhubarblivedtobe

almost12yearsold,butthatnightwastheonlytimeshebarkedinherentirelife.Fortunately,sheneversawthe

needtowarnusofanyotherdanger.WewereverythankfultoRhubarb.Welovedherlikeamemberofthefamily.

【导语】本文以作者家里的一条狗为线索展开，讲述了作者收养了一条名叫大黄的拉布拉多杂交犬。这条

狗和家人相处愉快，在她大约4岁的时候，她成功吓跑了小偷，保护了作者一家的财物的故事。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“第二天，我们注意到地板上有烟灰。”可知，第一段可描写作者一家发现晚上有人闯入，

随后报警的过程。

②由第二段首句内容“我的钱包就在门边。”可知，第二段可描写作者一家发现并没有丢失财物，更加感激狗

狗大黄。

2.续写线索：发现有人闯入——报警——警员查看——财物没有丢失——对大黄充满感激

3.词汇激活

行为类

①进入：enter/breakinto

②打电话：call/ringup/phone

③把……吓跑：scareaway/scareoff

情绪类

①感激的：thankful/grateful

②幸运地：fortunately/luckily

【点睛】[高分句型1]Actually,itwasathiefwhoenteredourkitchenandgarage.（运用了强调句型）

[高分句型2]Whenthepoliceofficerleft,hesaidweshouldrewardRhubarbwithabigsteakdinner.（运用了when

引导的时间状语从句和省略连接词的宾语从句）

6.（2023•安徽•安庆一中校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成

一篇完整的短文。

Wespentthewholeweekendwatchingtheospreysastheyflewaroundgracefullyandfishedinthepools,and

wewereverygladaweeklaterwhentheEasterholidaysstarted.

Wespenteverydaythere,cyclingoutwhileitwasstilldark,makingnotes,doingdrawings,taking

photographs,recordingthebirds'activities,andsoonwerealizedthattheywerestartingtomakeanest.

Wedecidedthatitwouldbebettertokeepthewholethingasecretbecauseweknewtherewerelotsofegg

collectorswhowouldliketohaveanosprey*seggintheircollection,eventhoughitwasillegal.Sowesaidnothing

tothefewpeoplewemetthere-theoccasionalfishermanorwalker.

Butoneeveningwhenwegotbackfromadaywatchingourospreys,myparentsaskedlotsofquestionsabout

whatweweredoing.

“Shallwetellthem,Mike?”Iasked.

“Well,wellneedthemtopromisenottotellanyone,9,heanswered,onlyhalfjoking.

Sowetoldthemallaboutitandtheywereveryimpressed.

Theholidaysended.Bythentheospreyshadfinishedbuildingtheirnestatthetopofonepinetreeonthe

islandinthemiddleofBigPool.Ofcoursewestillwenttowatchthemeveryweekend,andacoupleofnightsafter

school.

OneSaturdayweweresurprisedtofindawhitevanparkedontheroadsidenearthetrack,andamiddle-aged

manlookingatus.Asweapproachedhesaid,“Aha,andherecomeourtwobirdexperts!,?

MikeandIexchangedglancesthatwerebothpuzzledandworried.ctDonandMike,Iguess.PmMrRoberts.

Well,whicheverofyouisDon...,“hereInodded,64Ihavetothankyourfatherfortellingmeaboutyoursplendid

find.PHjustwanderaroundandseewhatIcansee.Pleasedtomeetyou.^^Thenheturnedandstartedtowalk

aroundthelake.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右。

2.请按如下格式作答。

Therestofthedaywasverytense.

BythetimeIgothomethatevening,Iwasreallyangry.

【答案】

Therestofthedaywasverytense.Mr.Robertsappearedfromtimetotimeondifferentsidesofthepool,

watchingtheospreysandtakingphotographs.Hourslater,hecameovertowhereMikeandIweresittingwatching

thebirds.'Tmoffnow,^^hesaid."Thankyouandgivemybestwishestoyourfather."Soonhisvandisappearedin

thedistance.Thankfullytheospreysweresafeandsound!Butwhydidmyfatherbetrayourtrust?

BythetimeIgothomethatevening,Iwasreallyangry.Istormedintothehouse.^tDad,^^Ishouted.caWhat

haveyoudone?WhoisMr.Roberts?^^Myfatherlookedabitembarrassedandexplained,6Tmsorry.IknowI

shouldn'thavetoldhimabouttheospreys,butIwassoproudofwhatyouandMikearedoing.Don'tworry,love.

Mr.Robertisjustabirdwatcherlikeyou.^^Iwalkeduptomyroom,relieved.

【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和朋友发现了鱼鹰的巢穴，担心鱼鹰的蛋被蛋收藏者拿走，

于是决定保密。假期结束时，鱼鹰们已经在大池塘中央岛上的一棵松树顶上筑好了巢，却来了一个名叫

Roberts的中年人，声称是作者的父亲告诉了他关于鱼鹰的发现。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“这一天剩下的时间里气氛都很紧张。”可知，第一段可描写Roberts观察鱼鹰的经过,

以及作者内心的疑惑。

②由第二段首句内容“那天晚上当我回到家时，我真的很生气。”可知，第二段可描写作者回家告诉了父亲这

件事，得到父亲的回答，得知Roberts先生也是个观鸟者，作者送了口气。

2.续写线索：Roberts观鸟的经过——作者困惑父亲的背叛——作者生气地回家——得到父亲关于Roberts的

解释一作者松了口气

3.词汇激活

行为类

观察：watch/observe

给某人某物：givesth.tosb./offersth.tosb.

消失：disappear/vanish

情绪类

自豪：beproudof/takepridein

尴尬：embarrassed/awkward

【点睛】[高分句型1]Mr.Robertsappearedfromtimetotimeondifferentsidesofthepool,watchingtheospreys

andtakingphotographs.（运用了现在分词作状语）

[高分句型2]Hourslater,hecameovertowhereMikeandIweresittingwatchingthebirds.（运用了where弓|导宾

语从句和现在分词作状语）

7.（2023•浙江宁波•镇海中学阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成

一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

SaraSavickremembersonespecialEasterwhenshewasnineyearsold.Herparentsgaveherababyduckling

inayellowbasket.

“Momsaidlaterthatsheboughtthelittleduckbecauseshefeltsorryforit,“recalledSara.Thepeopleatthe

petstorecoloredthefeatherspinkforEaster.SaranamedtheduckPinky.

Sara'smotherreallydidn'tthinkthebabyduckwouldsurviveverylong.Buttohersurprise,Pinkygrewand

gotstrongerandstronger.Soon,thelittleducklingwasahealthy,hungryduckwithwhitefeathers.

“WefedPinkyoatmeal,cookedanduncooked,andsmallpiecesofvegetables,9,saidSara.Pinkylivedinside

thehousewithSaraandherfamily.ShespeciallyfanciedtakingbathswithSara.EveryonetreatedPinkyasa

familymember.

Butjustwheneverythingappearedtobeperfect,thenightofthe"talk"came.Sara'sMomandDadsather

down,explainingthatthebestthingforPinkywastoliveanormalducklife,withotherducks.Itwasnotnatural

forduckstoliveindoorswithafamily,herfathertoldher.HeaddedPinkyneededtoswiminpondsanddoallthe

samethingsthatducksinthewilddo.

Sarastartedtocry,knowingwhatwasgoingtohappen.Sara'sparentsdecidedtotakePinkytoapark,which

wastwomilesaway.Therewasapondwithalotofotherducks.Pinkywouldhavethechancetoliveanaturallife

andSaracouldstillvisither.

Thebigdaycame,SaraandherparentsputPinkyinaboxanddrovetothepark.SarasaidthatPinkydidnot

lookhappy;maybePinkywasconvincedthatshewasahuman,notaduck.

注意：

所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好；

Paragraph1

EveryonewassadwhentheyleftPinkyatthepond,evenSara'sfather.

Paragraph2

Thenextmorning,whenlookingoutofthekitchenwindow,Saracouldn'tbelievehereyes!

【答案】

EveryonewassadwhentheyleftPinkyatthepond,evenSara'sfather.ButhetriedtoconvinceSarathat

Pinkywasfine.Walkingtowardsthecar,SaralookedoverhershoulderandsawPinkystandingalone.Theother

duckswereswimmingaroundincircles,lookingatPinky.ToSara,itseemedthattheyweretryingtoidentifythe

strangeanimal.Theydidn'trecognizePinkyasaduck.WorriedaboutPinky,SaradreamedofPinkybeingbullied

byotherducksthewholenight.

Thenextmorning,whenlookingoutofthekitchenwindow,Saracouldn,tbelievehereyes!TherewasPinky,

happilywalkingaroundonthegrass.Thrilledatwhatshesaw,shekeptaskingherself,9,Howdidshemakeit?”

Afterall,itwastwomilesawayandhemanagedtowalkbackthroughthecitystreet.Incredible!Butherparents

drovePinkybacktothepondagainregardlessofherrequest.Thefollowingmorning,therewasPinkyagainonthe

grass!SeeingPinkyagain,herfather,wavinghisarmsaboutwildly,movedhislipswithoutsayinganything.

Meanwhile,Sarah,oveijoyed,huggedPinkytightly,tearsstreamingdownhercheeks.

【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。SaraSavick九岁时的复活节，父母送给她一只小鸭子Pinky,在他们的

精心照顾下Pinky渐渐长大，有一天父母告诉Sara,Pinky必须回到野外和其他鸭子过一样的生活，他们决

定把Pinky带到附近公园的一个池塘，那一天到来了。

【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：当他们把Pinky放到池塘离开时，每个人都很难过……所以应

该写Pinky第一天到池塘发生的事情，即他们依依不舍里离开池塘，其他鸭子看到Pinky后的反应及Sara

对Pinky的担心等内容。第二段开头是：第二天早上，当向厨房窗户外面看时，Sara不敢相信自己的眼睛……

本段应该写Sara看到的情况，即Pinky回到了家里，Sara不知道它是怎么做到的，父母看到后把Pinky放

回池塘，但是Pinky再次回到家里，Sara激动得紧紧抱着Pinky。

续写时注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右，按要求完成写作任务。

【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如