Unit 2 传统节日为主题的写作讲练 九年级英语全一册同步课件（人教版）

Unit2ChineseTraditionalFestivalsWriting写作目标壹贰叁能描述某个节日的时间，庆祝活动，意义以及感受。能在写作过程中最好能用到本单元所学的重要语法知识——宾语从句。掌握写作微技能——列提纲（makeaoutline）Brainstorm(头脑风暴)WhatChinesefestivalsdoyouknow?(你知道有哪些中国节日吗？)Let’swatchavideoaboutChinesetraditionalculture!LeadinWhatisyourfavoriteChinesefestival?Why?LeadintheSpringFestivaltheLanternFestivalQingmingFestivaltheDragonBoatFestivaltheDouble7thDay/theChineseValentine’sDaytheMid-AutumnFestivaltheDouble9thDayLunarNewYear’sEveWhenonthefirstdayofthefirstlunarmonthonthe15thdayofthefirstlunarmonthApril5thonthe5thdayofthefifthlunarmonthonthe7thdayoftheseventhlunarmonthonthe15thdayoftheeighthlunarmonthonthe9thdayoftheninthlunarmonthonthelastnightofthelastlunarmonth…iscelebratedon…ChineseFestivalsHowcanwewriteanarticleabouttraditionalfestivals？

Readthefollowingpassageanghaveasummary.MyfavoriteChinesefestivalistheDragonBoatFestival.

Itfallsonthefifthdayofthefifthlunarmontheveryyear.It’sadaytorememberQuYuan,agreatpoet.Onthisdaypeopleusuallyeat

zongzi

andholddragonboatraces.Theyalsodrinkrealgarwine,hangChinesemugwort(艾草)aroundthedoorsandcarryaspicebagaroundwiththem.Whatmakesthefestivalspecialformeisthedragonboatrace.Themembersofthedragonboatteamhavesuchgreatteamspirit—everybodytriestheirbesttowintherace.Itisveryexcitingandinteresting.SomyfavoriteChinesefestivalistheDragonBoatFestival.Para1name,date,Para2thingstoeat,thingstodoPara3feelings，reasonsSummary

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Para1Para3name,date,significance（庆祝意义）thingstoeat,thingstodo，feelings，reasonsTraditionalFestival语言积累name，date，

significancea.liesonthe15thdayofthe1stlunarmonth.b.liesonthe5thdayofthe5thlunarmonthc.liesonthefirstdayofthe1stlunarmonth.d.isonthe15thdayofthe8thlunarmonthe.isonApril4thor5th1.TheDragonBoatFestival（

）2.TheLanternFestival（

）3.TombSweepingDay（

）4.ChineseSpringFestival（

）5.Mid-AutumnFestival（

）Matchthefollowingfestivalnameswithdates.baecdnamesofthefestivals1、EveryyearthereisaSpringFestivalinChina.2、Mid-AutumnFestivalisoneofthemostpopularfestivalsinChina.3、ItisatraditionalChinesefestivalcalled…4、MyfavoriteChinesefestivalis...Howcanweexpresswhenthefestivalis?如何表达节日时间？Itiscelebratedin/on...Whendopeoplecelebrateit?1、ThingstoeatHowdopeoplecelebrateit?2、ThingstodoDuringthisfestival,people...ChineseSpringFestival

Itrepresentsanewbeginningwhenpeoplesendofftheolddaysandwelcomethenewones.Mid-AutumnFestival

Itrepresentspeople’sgoodwishestobereunitedwith(与...团聚)theirfamilies.TheLanternFestival

ItrepresentsthelastdayoftheLunarNewYearcelebration.TheGragonBoatFestival

PeoplecelebratethefestivaltohonorthegreatpoetQuYuan.TombSweepingDay

Itisaspecialdayforthelivingtoshowloveandrespecttotheirdeadfriendsorrelatives.语言积累thingstoeat,thingstodo.ChineseSpringFestivalthingstoeatthingstodoDumplings;Niangao;Fish;ChickenBeforetheSpringFestival:

cleanthehouse,sweepthefloor,putupcoupletsgoshopping,prepareforfamilydinner，watchtheSpringFestivalGalaDuringtheSpringFestival:

wearnewclothes,visitrelativesandfriends,getsomeluckymoneythingstoeatthingstodoMid-AutumnFestivalmooncake，desserts，fruit，crabsadmirethemoon，haveafamilyreuniondinner，flyskylanternTheLanternFestival

thingstoeatthingstodowatchthelanternshow，guessthelanternriddles，watchthefirework,watchliondancesweetdumplings/YuanXiao/TangYuanTheGragonBoatFestival

thingstoeatthingstodoZongzi,

RealgarWine(雄黄酒)hangingpicturesofZhongKui,hangingCalamusandMoxa(挂菖蒲和艾草)dragonboatraceTombSweepingDay

thingstoeatthingstodocleanthetomb，cherish(怀念)thememoriesoftheirdeadfamilymembers，plantwillowtrees（插柳）springout（踏青）QingTuan佳句积累1.我们有很多方式庆祝春节，比如放烟花和贴春联。________________________________________________________________________________________________.2.在春节期间，我们中国人总会友好热情地招待亲戚朋友。______________________________________________________________________________________________________.3.在泼水节的时候，人们会走到街上互相泼水。___________________________________________________.__________.WecelebratetheSpringFestivalwithmanykindsofactivities,suchassettingfireworksandputtingupredcouplets.WeChinesealwaystreatourrelativesandfriendswithkindnessandwarmthduringtheSpringFestival.PeoplegoonthestreetstothrowwaterateachotherduringtheDaiWaterFestival.佳句积累4.人们有赏月和与家人分享月饼的传统。_________________________________________________________________________________________.5.在元宵节的时候人们会团聚在一起吃汤圆。____________________________________________________.6.在端午节那天，人们经常吃一种叫做粽子的特殊食物。____________________________________________________.7.在除夕，家人们聚在一起吃一顿大餐。__________________________________________________.PeoplehavethetraditionofadmiringthefullmoonandsharingmooncakeswithfamiliesPeopleoftengettogetherandeatsweetdumplingsonLanternFestival.PeopleofteneataspecialkindoffoodcalledzongzionDragonBoatFestival.ThefamiliesgettogetherandhaveabigdinneronNewYear’sEve佳句积累8.那一天，有很多活动，如龙舟比赛和把粽子扔进河里。_________________________________________________________________________________________.9.中国人已经庆祝中秋和吃月饼好几个世纪了。__________________________________________________________________________________________.10.晚饭过后，人们会坐在一起看春节联欢晚会。______________________________________________________.Onthatday,therearemanykindsofactivities,suchasthedragonboatracesandthrowingzongziintotherivers.ChinesepeoplehavebeencelebratingMid-AutumnFestivalandenjoyingmooncakesforcenturies.Afterdinner,peoplesittogetherandwatchtheSpringFestivalGalaonTV.语言积累Feeling，ReasonsFeeling感叹句表达情感1.What

awonderfultimewehave!2.HowexcitingandhappyweareduringtheSpringFestivals!表达情感的不同表达1.IthinkthatgettingtogetherwithmyfamilyduringthespringFestivalisthemost__________.2.Itmakesmefeel_______.3.Notonlydowegetlotsofhappeninessandfun,butwecanfeelrelaxed.Reasons句子仿写。（选择一个节日，模仿下面这句话）BehindallthesethingsliestheturemeaningofChristmas：theimportanceofsharingandgivingloveandjoytopeoplearoundus.Andthatisthetruespiritsofchristmas.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________BehindallthesethingsliestheturemeaningofMother’sDay：theimportanceofshowingourlovetoourparents.Reasons其他表示意义的句子。1.Becausethenewyearisatimeforcleaningandwashingawaybadthings.Thenyou’llhavegoodluckinthenewyear.2.Theycarrypeople’swishestothefamiliestheyloveandmiss.3.It’smyfavoritefestivalbecause...写作注意点：Aboutwriting...1.

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多使用短语3.

句式多样4.

衔接词句式多样感叹句：1.What

awonderfultimewehave!2.HowexcitingandhappyweareduringtheSpringFestival!宾语从句：1.IthinkthatgettingtogetherwithmyfamilyduringthespringFestivalisthemost__________.2.IhopeIcanwatchthedragondanceagain.并列关系：and,or,either...or,both...and,not

only...but

also,as

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转折关系：but,however,yet,although

条件关系：if,

whether,unless

时间关系：when,as,before,after,while,until,since,as

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原因关系：because,as,since,for衔接词写作范例Writing

在这么多的中国传统节日当中，你最喜欢哪一个？请你从中选取你最喜爱的一个节日,以”MyfavoriteChinesetraditionalfestival”为题写一篇80词左右的文章。体裁：_______时态：_______人称:_______布局:Drawanoutline(提纲)forwritingWhenthingstodothingstoeatfeelingWhyWhatHowTask1、读自己的文章，并从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修正。Task2、①欣赏与修正

请交换习作欣赏，用红笔划出对方的亮点词、句,

并运用改错符号找出不足，进行适当修改。

②评分

以满分15分为标准，给同伴的习作打分。

③点评

由亮点欣赏到不足的修正（篇章结构

分析-细

节点评)欣赏角度：写作基本要求:人称,时态；2.要点齐全；3.结构:开头，正文，结尾；4.好词好句。Step1:审◆定体裁：议论文◆定人称：第一人称◆定时态：一般现在时◆定要点：1.介绍你喜欢的节日和庆祝时间；2.人们在节日期间做什么、吃什么；3.你喜欢这个节日的原因，对节日的感受。Step2:列DragonBoatFestival点明主题节日习俗认识与感受MyfavoriteChinesefestivalis……isoneofthetraditionalfestivalsinChina.Itiscelebratedin/on…Chinesepeoplehavebeencelebratingitfor…Duringthefestival/Onthatday,peopleusually…Atnight,Familywill…/Children…Oneofthemostexcitingthingsis…It’sexcitingto…It’smyfavoritefestivalbecause…Itmakesmefeelhappyand…Howinteresting/fantastic…!Inmyopinion,weshould…Step3:美在有把握的情况下多使用短语和复合句来为文章增色。1.MyfavoriteChinesefestivalistheDragonBoatFestival.TheDragonBoatFestivalisoneofmyfavoritefestivals

inmymind.2.Itmakesmefeelhappyandwarm.Itcannotonlymakemefeelloveandhappiness,butalsoletmeknowtheimportanceofhomeandfamily.Step4:查用词方面:代词主格，宾格；名词单复数；动词搭配；副词位置句子方面:篇章方面:细节方面:句子完整；主谓一致；动词时态；连词使用内容完整；要点齐全；布局合理字数；单词拼写；标点符号；大小写DragonBoatFestivalDragonBoatFestivalisatraditionalfestivalinChina.ChinesepeoplehavebeencelebratingDragonBoatFestivalinJuneinmemoryofthegreatChinesepoetQuYuan.Wehadathree-dayholidaythisyear.Myparentstookmetovisitmygrandmainthecountryside.Weatezongziandwatcheddragonboatracethere.ZongziisakindoftraditionalfoodinChina.Dragonboatraceisthemostexcitingpartofthefestival.

DragonBoatFestivalismyfavoritefestivalbecauseitmakesmefeelhappyandIreallylikeeatingzongzi.Howwonderfulthefestivalis!

假设你是刘伟，你的美国朋友Mike想通过你了解中国的传统节日。请你根据提示，给Mike写一封e-mail，向他介绍我国传统节日春节的情况。内容提示：1.春节是中国最重要的传统节日;2.春节期间人们的主要活动(节前、除夕、节日期间)（SpringFestival,traditional,decorate,ontheeveofthe

festival,gettogether,setofffireworks,luckymoney）要求：1.80词左右，书信格式；

2.内容合理，要点齐全；句子及篇章结构正确、连贯；书

写规范。注意：不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息（除所给身份外）。写作指导列提纲写好句审题成篇章

假设你是刘伟，你的美国朋友Mike想通过你了解中国的传统节日。请你根据提示，给Mike写一封e-mail，向他介绍我国传统节日春节的情况。内容提示：1.春节是中国最重要的传统节日;2.春节期间人们的主要活动(节前、除夕、节日期间)（SpringFestival,traditional,decorate,ontheeveofthe

festival,gettogether,setofffireworks,luckymoney）要求：1.80词左右，书信格式；

2.内容合理，要点齐全；句子及篇章结构

正确、连贯；书

写规范。注意：不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息（除所给身份外）。审题1.审主题：______.2.审体裁：________.3.审人称：_______.4.审时态：_______.5.审要点

：_______.介绍传统节日春节书信第一人称一般现在时

介绍春节，春节(节前，除夕，过节期间）的主要活动列提纲Para2

Para1Para3SpringFestivalSpringFestival,themostimportanttraditionalholidaybeforethefestival：cleanourhouses,decorateourhousestheeveofthefestival：gettogether，duringthefestival:

getluckymoney,happyDearJim,

Howareyou?

I’mreallygladthatyouareinterestedintraditionalChinesefestivals._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua

SpringFestivalisthemostimportanttraditionalholidayin

China.Beforethefestival,wecleanourhouses.Wedecorateourhouses.On

theeveofthefestival,familymembersgettogether.Duringthefestival,kidsgetluckymoneyfromoldpeople.Weareveryhappy.范文赏析你如何评价这篇范文？字数不够内容简单词汇和语句比较简单如何提升这篇范文？写好句DearJim,

Howareyou?

I’mreallygladthatyouareinterestedintraditionalChinesefestivals.

SpringFestivalisthemostimportanttraditionalholidayin

China.提升(第一段内容较少，可适当添加内容）TherearemanytraditionalfestivalsinChina,suchas

SpringFestival,Mid-AutumnDayandsoon.I’dliketointroducetheSpringFestivaltoyou.SpringFestivalisthemostimportanttraditionalholidayin

China.Itliesonthethefirstdayofthe1stlunarmonth.

假设你是刘伟，你的美国朋友MIKE想通过你了解中国的传统节日。请你根据提示，给Mike写一封e-mail，向他介绍我国传统节日春节的情况。写好句Beforethefestival,wecleanourhouses.Wedecorateourhouses.On

theeveofthefestival,familymembersgettogether.Duringthefestival,kidsgetluckymoneyfromoldpeople.提升①1.在①句子增加内容，使用到that引导的宾语从句。

wecleanourhouses,wethinkcleaningcansweepsbadthings.2.在②句子增加内容，充实句子。Wedecorateourhouses

withpapercuttings.②写好句Beforethefestival,Wecleanourhouses.Wedecorateourhouses.On

theeveofthefestival,familymembersgettogether.Duringthefestival,kidsgetluckymoneyfromoldpeople.提升①1.在①句子增加要点，充实句子.On

theeveofthefestival,familymembersgettogetherandhaveabigdinner.还可以增加:ThenwewatchtheSpringFestivalGalaonTV.Atmidnight,wesetofffireworkstowelcometheNewYear.

写好句Beforethefestival,wecleanourhouses.Wedecorateourhouses.On

theeveofthefestival,familymembersgettogether.Duringthefestival,kidsgetluckymoneyfromoldpeople.提升①1.在①句子增加要点，充实句子.Wevisitourrelativesandfriends.Wewisheachahappyyearandgoodluck.写好句Weareveryhappy.提升用感叹句表达情感HowexcitingandhappyweareontheSpringFestivals!DearJim,

Howareyou?

I’mreallygladthatyouareinterestedintraditionalChinesefestivals._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,