2014届高考英语二轮复习突破：短文改错（5）及答案

【备课大师网】-在线备课，全站免费！无需注册，天天更新！//2014届高考英语二轮复习突破：短文改错1.假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。TodayIwashavingaPElessonwhileIfelldownandhurtmyfoot.Iwasingreatlypainatthatmoment,butItriedtoactasifnothinghashappeneduntiltheclasswasover.ThoughIhaddifficultywalkbacktomyclassroom,Istilldidn’ttellanyonebutevenrefusedtheofferofhelpofmyclassmates.Asresult,thehurtinmyfootbecameworse.NowIknowIwaswrong.Wecantellothersourneedforhelpandaccepthishelp.Somedaywecannothelpothersinreturn.Inthisway,wecangetalongtoeachotherhappilyandpeacefully.2.此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。短文中有10处错误，每句最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Lookingatthemapoftheworld,andwecanseethatthreequartersoftheeartharecoveredbywater.However,weareshortofwater,itsoundsstrangetoyou.Butitistrue.Yousee,97%ofthetotalwaterintheworldisseawater,whichissosaltthatmancandrinkit.Soonly3%ofthewatercanbedrunkorusedforman.Andthedrinkablewatercomesfromrivers,lakesandunderground.Manevencan’tusethemcompletely,becausethewatercontainsicebergsandglaciers.Allwhatistheworstisthatwaterinsomepartshasbeenpollutedorisbeingpolluted.Howcanwedrink?Sosomethingmustbedonetoprotectwaterfrompolluted.3.短文改错Onedayachildwasplayingwithavaseingreatvalue.Hecarelessputhishandintoit.Hardashetried,hecouldnotpullitout.Hisfathertriedhisbest,too,buttheireffortswereinavain.Theywerethinkingofbreakingthevasewheneverthefathersaid,“now,myson,whyhaveonemoretry?openyourhandorholdyourfingersstraightasyousawIdoing,andthenpull.”tohissurprise,thechildsays,“Ican’tholdmyfingersstraightlikethat,becauseIdon’twanttodropmypenny.”Thousandofussometimesaresobusyholdontotheworld’sworthlesspennythatwecannotachieveliberation.4. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Healthismoreimportantthanwealth．Goodhealthmakesitispossibleforustoenjoyourlifeandachievewhatwehopeinourcareer．Tokeepfit,firstly,itismuchimportantforustotakemorefruitsandvegetablebecausetheyprovidevitamins．Andweshouldkeepabalancingdietandavoidfoodwhatisrichinsugarandfat．Secondly,we'dbetterexerciseeverydaytomakeourbodiesasstronglyaspossible．Beside,weshouldavoidtoomuchworkpressure．Finally,weshouldgetridofbadhabitsthatdamagedourhealth,suchasdrinkingandsmoking．Ifwesticktotheadvicegivenup,wewillleadahealthylife．5.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误和修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Stevewastenyearsold.Hewasaverygoodpupil,nordidhelikedoinghishomework.Whenhedidhishomework,healwaysmadealotofmistake.Oneday,hismathsteacherwentoverSteve’shomework,seeallhisanswerswereright.Hewasverysurprisedinsteadbeingpleased.HeaskedStevetoexplainwhathashappened,“Youhavegotallyouranswerscorrectlythistime,Steve.Didanyonehelpyou?”Asthematteroffact,Steve’smotheroftenhelpedhimwithherlessons.Andthatevening,shewasnotabletobecauseshewasn’tin.SoSteveanswered,“No,sir,mymotherwasbusylastnight,soIhadtodothehomeworkallformyself.”6.增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。3．必须按答题要求做题。否则不给分。ItwassnowingheavilyMondaymorning.LiHuawasatthebusstop,waitedforBusNo.601togotoschool.Afterthewhile,thebuscameandshegotonit.Therearemanypassengersinthebus.Someweretalkingbutsomewerelookingoutofthewindows.Suddenlythebusstopped.Thedriverturnedaroundandsaid,“Sorry.Thebushasbeenbrokendown.Pleasegetoffandhelppushthebus.”Whenweheardthis,LiHuaandtheotherpassengergotoffthebus.Theyworkedhardlytogether,pushingthebusslowlybackward.Soonthebuswasrunningagain.Allthepassengersweresmilingandthesunwasshining.

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