三年（2023-2025）辽宁中考英语真题分类汇编：专题09 书面表达之人与社会主题 （解析版）

专题09书面表达之人与社会主题（三年中考+一年模拟）三年中考2023年真题1．（2023·辽宁鞍山·中考真题）眼睛是心灵的窗户。假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近为近视感到困扰。请你根据下面表格的提示信息给他写一封电子邮件，说明他近视的原因并提出建议。要求：（1）不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息。（2）根据中文和英文提示，可以适当发挥。（3）内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐。（4）词数：80~100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。近视原因长时间使用电子产品；读书时间过长。建议控制使用电子产品时间；养成好习惯（如饮食、做眼保健操）……希望……参考词汇：视力eyesight；近视myopia；电子产品electronicdeviceDearMike,Howisitgoingwithyou?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiPing【参考范文】：DearMike,Howisitgoingwithyou?I’msorrytolearnthatyoureyesightisgettingweaker.Ithinkyoumayuseelectronicproductsforalongtime,whichisbadforyoureyesight.Andreadingbooksfortoolongmaycausemyopia.Butdon’tworry.I’dliketosharewithyousomewaysofprotectingeyesight.Atfirst,youshouldcontrolthetimeyouspendonelectronicproducts.Youcandomoreoutdooractivities.What’smore,youshoulddevelopsomegoodhabits.Youshouldeatmorevegetablesandfruit.Theyaregoodforyourhealth.Besides,doingeyeexercisesplaysanimportantroleinrelaxingyourtiredeyes.Lastly,youshouldhaveyoureyesexaminedeverytermtomakesureyoureyesstayhealthy.Ihopeyou’llfindmywayshelpful.Yours,LiPing【知识点】青少年问题、意见/建议【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为一般现在时；③提示：根据提示信息给对方一些建议，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题，介绍对方近视的原因；第二步，针对朋友的问题给出相应的建议；第三步，表达自己的希望。[亮点词汇]①wouldliketodosth.想要做某事②begoodfor对……有好处③playanimportantrolein在……中起重要作用[高分句型]①Ithinkyoumayuseelectronicproductsforalongtime,whichisbadforyoureyesight.(which引导的定语从句)②doingeyeexercisesplaysanimportantroleinrelaxingyourtiredeyes.(动名词作主语)2．（2023·辽宁盘锦·中考真题）根据要求完成作文，并写在答题卡的相应位置。假如你是李华，你的朋友Peter来中国旅游，回国前他想给家人买一件代表中国文化的礼物。他通过邮件询问你的意见，请你用英文回复。提示：(1)建议买什么；(2)介绍这个礼物；(3)给出推荐理由。要求：(1)内容包含以上信息，80词左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；(2)语言准确，行文连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；(3)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。DearPeter,Gladtohearfromyou.It’seasytochooseagiftwhichstandsforChineseculture.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopemyadviceishelpful.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【参考范文】DearPeter,Gladtohearfromyou.It’seasytochooseagiftwhichstandsforChineseculture.I’dlovetogiveyoumysuggestionaboutChinesegifts.Frommypointofview,paper-cutisagoodchoicetobespecialChinesegiftsforyourfamily.Paper-cutsareusuallyusedtodecoratethehouse.Theyareputonwindows,doorsandwallstocelebratetheSpringFestival.Paper-cutsareatraditionalChineseculture,fromwhichyoucanhaveabetterunderstandingofChina.Peoplelikethemverymuchbecausetheyareseenassymbolsforgoodluckandahappynewyear.Ihopemyadviceishelpful.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【知识点】中华文化、意见/建议【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据题干中的提示信息介绍一件代表中国文化的礼物，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍推荐的礼物是什么；第二步，介绍这个礼物；第三步，说明推荐理由。[亮点词汇]①frommypointofview依我看来②beusedtodo被用来做某事③beseenas被看成[高分句型]①Paper-cutsareatraditionalChineseculture,fromwhichyoucanhaveabetterunderstandingofChina.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）②Peoplelikethemverymuchbecausetheyareseenassymbolsforgoodluckandahappynewyear.（because引导的原因状语从句）3．（2023·辽宁大连·中考真题）生活中，我们往往会因为某件事而感到烦恼，但是如果我们用积极、正向的态度去面对，可能不但问题迎刃而解，而且我们还会从中懂得做人做事的道理。假如你是李华，班级即将举行以“Donotworry.Behappy!”为主题的英语班会，请你用英语写一篇短文，结合具体事例与同学们分享你在这方面的体会。内容提示：（1）Whatmadeyouunhappy?（2）Howdidithelpyougrowasaperson?要求：（1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。（3）词数80左右。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】：Inourlives,wesometimesbecomeupsetandworriedaboutsomething.However,ifwefacetheproblemswithapositiveattitude,notonlycanwefindsolutionstoourproblems,butwecanalsolearnvaluablelessonsaboutlife.IrememberthedaywhenIfailedamathtest.Iwassadandfeltdisappointedinmyself.However,insteadofcryingovermymistakes,Idecidedtochangethesituationwithapositiveattitude.Ianalyzedmyweakareasandaskedhelpfrommyteacherandclassmates.Withtheirguidanceandsupport,Ihadabetterunderstandingofthesubjectandachievedbetterresultsinthefollowingtests.Thisexperiencehelpedmegrowasaperson.Itmademerealizethateveryfailureisachanceforpersonalimprovement,andthatapositiveattitudecanleadtobetterresultsandpleasure.【知识点】叙事忆旧、哲理感悟【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态综合使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“Donotworry.Behappy!”为主题，结合提示问题进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，引出对下文的介绍；第二步，介绍什么让自己不开心；第三步，介绍它如何帮助你成长为一个人。[亮点词汇]①feltdisappointedin对……感到失望②insteadof而不是③hadabetterunderstandingof有了更好的理解[高分句型]①However,ifwefacetheproblemswithapositiveattitude,notonlycanwefindsolutionstoourproblems,butwecanalsolearnvaluablelessonsaboutlife.（if引导的条件状语从句）②Itmademerealizethateveryfailureisachanceforpersonalimprovement,andthatapositiveattitudecanleadtobetterresultsandpleasure.（that引导的宾语从句）4．（2023·辽宁丹东·中考真题）我们学校篮球队队员刻苦训练，通力合作，在市比赛中取得了好成绩。希望全校学生向他们学习。请根据该信息，代表学校学生会写一封表扬信。文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名：词数：30词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。PraiseDearstudents,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thespiritoftheirteamworkshouldbepraised.StudentUnion【参考范文】PraiseDearstudents,

Ourschoolbasketballteamwonagoodresultinthecitycompetition.Congratulations!Becauseoftheirhardwork,theycanachievesuchexcellentresults.Weshouldlearnfromthem.Ihopetheywillkeepgoingandgetbetterresults.Thespiritoftheirteamworkshouldbepraised.StudentUnion【知识点】体育精神、竞技/比赛【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍篮球队取得的成绩；第二步，介绍需要向他们学习的地方以及表达自己的祝愿。[亮点词汇]①becauseof因为②learnfrom从……中学习[高分句型]①Ihopetheywillkeepgoingandgetbetterresults.（宾语从句）②Thespiritoftheirteamworkshouldbepraised.（含有情态动词的被动语态）5．（2023·辽宁锦州·中考真题）俗话说“众人拾柴火焰高”，团队合作（teamwork）是成功的关键。近日，学校正在开展以“ManyHandsMakeLightWork”为题的征文活动。请你根据下面所提示的内容，用英文写一篇短文投稿。（用你生活中的一次经历。例如一次活动，一场比赛等）Thesaying“Manyhandsmakelightwork”YourunderstandingofthesayingAnexperienceinyourlifeYourfeeling要求：1.不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息；2.请包含表格内所有英文提示内容，可以适当发挥：（参考词汇可以选用：prepare,discuss,overcome,pulltogether,comeupwith,tryone’sbest,playapart）3.内容完整、思维连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐；4.词数：80-100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。ManyHandsMakeLightWorkHaveyouheardofthesaying“Manyhandsmakelightwork”?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】：ManyHandsMakeLightWorkHaveyouheardofthesaying“Manyhandsmakelightwork”?Ithinkitmeansthatwhenwemeetdifficulties,wecanovercomethemsuccessfullyonlybypullingtogether.Lasttermourschoolheldatugofwar.Itwasdifficultforourclass,becausethestudentsinourclassdidn’tlookstrongenoughtowinthegame.Beforethegame,theteacherandthestudentssattogetheranddiscussedhowtowinthegame.Astudentcameupwithagoodidea.Hethoughtthateachofusshouldtryourbestinthegame.Intheend,wewonthegame.Everyoneplaysapartinthisgame.Teamworkisthekeytosuccess.【知识点】合作与交流、个人经历【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时；③提示：写作要点已给出，根据题干中提示，介绍自己对于“众人拾柴火焰高”的理解、自己的经历及感受。[写作步骤]第一步，首先阐述自己对于“众人拾柴火焰高”的理解；第二步，围绕“团队合作”，介绍自己与之相关的生活经历；第三步，表达个人感悟。[亮点词汇]①pulltogether齐心协力②comeupwith想出③tryone’sbest尽某人最大努力④intheend最终[高分句型]①Itwasdifficultforourclass,becausethestudentsinourclassdidn’tlookstrongenoughtowinthegame.（because引导原因状语从句）②Hethoughtthateachofusshouldtryourbestinthegame.（that引导宾语从句）6．（2023·辽宁抚顺·中考真题）初中三年生活转瞬即逝，如今即将毕业离开母校，此时此刻，你是否还记得升入初中第一天的情景呢？请以“MyFirstDayintheMiddleSchool”为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述一下你入校当天的所见所闻、经历感受，再次体验曾经的美好时光，满怀信心地去迎接新的未来！词数：80~100词。要求：（1）语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。（3）短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。MyFirstDayintheMiddleSchoolWhenIfirstwalkedintothemiddleschool,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________NowIwillleavemyschool.I’mgoingtoworkhardinthefuturetomakemyschoolproudofme.【参考范文】MyFirstDayintheMiddleSchoolWhenIfirstwalkedintothemiddleschool,Iwasexcitedaswellasworried.IwasexcitedbecauseIwasastudentofjuniormiddleschoolnow.IwasworriedbecauseIdidn’tquiteknowabouttheteachersandstudentsinthisschool.IwasafraidIcouldn’tfitinwell.However,whenIsatdownatmydeskandbegantoknowaboutmyteachersandclassmates,Ifoundeveryonewasreallynicetome.Teacherswereverykindandreadytohelpus.Myclassmateswereactiveandeasytogetalongwith.Afterclass,Iplayedsoccerwithmynewly-madefriendsontheplayground.Lookingatthebeautifulcampus,Igraduallyforgotmynervousness.Ifeltathome.Attheendofthatfirstschoolday,IfeltnomorefearandIbelievedIwouldhavelotsoffunatthisnewschool.NowIwillleavemyschool.I’mgoingtoworkhardinthefuturetomakemyschoolproudofme.【知识点】叙事忆旧、学校人员、个人经历【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于话题作文写作；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：文章开头以及标题已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，承接短文开头，描述你入校当天的感受；第二步，结合自身经历，描述你入校时的所见所闻和经历感受，可列举具体的事例；第三步，抒发毕业感悟并书写结语。[亮点词汇]①aswellas也，又，和②fitin适应③feelathome感觉自在[高分句型]①IwasexcitedbecauseIwasastudentofjuniormiddleschoolnow.（because引导的原因状语从句）②IwasafraidIcouldn’tfitinwell.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）③Lookingatthebeautifulcampus,Igraduallyforgotmynervousness.（现在分词短语作状语）7．（2023·辽宁沈阳·中考真题）为了传承和弘扬中华民族的优良家风，学校英文社团开展主题为“孝亲敬长”的英语征文比赛。假定你是李华，请你写一篇征文参加比赛。内容包括：1.尊重的对象和原因；2.具体做法；3.发出号召。【注意】1.词数80-100，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2.短文须包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。ShowrespectforeldersShowingrespectforeldersisoneofthefamilytraditionsthatChinesepeoplehavekeptforthousandsofyears.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】：ShowrespectforeldersShowingrespectforeldersisoneofthefamilytraditionsthatChinesepeoplehavekeptforthousandsofyears.Wearesupposedtoshowrespectforourparentsbecausetheyarethemosttrustedeldersandhelpussolveproblemswhenweareintrouble.Herearesomethingswecandotoshowourrespect.First,wecanoffertohelpwithhouseworksuchasleaningthedishesorsweepingthefloorsothattheycanhavearestafteraday’swork.Second,don’tmakethemangryandtrytotaketheiradvicewhenwedisagreewitheachother.Third,shareyourhappinessandsorrowwiththemastheywereoncelikeyouandhavemoreexperiencethanyouexpect.Smallactionscanmakeagreatdifference.Let’sshowrespectforourparentsfromnowon!【知识点】意见/建议、中华文化【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，开头已给出，介绍敬老是很重要的优良传统；第二步，介绍应该尊敬父母的原因以及如何表现自己的尊敬；第三步，发出号召。[亮点词汇]①besupposedto应该②suchas例如③eachother彼此[高分句型]①First,wecanoffertohelpwithhouseworksuchasleaningthedishesorsweepingthefloorsothattheycanhavearestafteraday’swork.（sothat引导目的状语从句）②Third,shareyourhappinessandsorrowwiththemastheywereoncelikeyouandhavemoreexperiencethanyouexpect.（as引导原因状语从句）8．（2023·辽宁营口·中考真题）假设你是李华，你所在城市将举办以“MyCountry，MyPride”为主题的中学生英语演讲比赛。请你写篇演讲稿，简要阐述中国这些年在环境、文化传播以及太空科技方面的发展与变化（至少阐述以上两个方面），并谈谈你的感受。写作要求：（1）包含所给要点，80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；（2）条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；（3）文中不得出现真实地名、校名和人名。MyCountry,MyPrideHi,everyone.It’smygreathonortogiveaspeechhere.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thanksforlistening.【参考范文】MyCountry,MyPrideHi,everyone.It’smygreathonortogiveaspeechhere.

Obviously,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinChinatheseyears.Forexample,theenvironmenthaschangedforthebettersincethegovernmenttooksomeusefulmeasures.Clearriversandblueskyreturntoourlife.Atthesametime,Chineseculturespreadsquicklyaroundtheworld,whichmakesmoreforeignersinterestedinit.What’smore,Chinahasmadegreatprogressinitsspacesuccessfullylaunched,makingChina’sspacedreamareality.I’mproudofourcountryandIhopeI’llbetheprideofourcountryinthefuture.That’sall.Thanksforlistening.【知识点】国家与民族、社会发展【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍中国这些年在环境，文化传播以及太空科技方面的发展与变化；第二步，以自己的国家为傲，希望在未来能成为国家的骄傲。[亮点词汇]①takeplace发生②forexample例如③atthesametime同时④beproudof以……为傲[高分句型]①Forexample,theenvironmenthaschangedforthebettersincethegovernmenttooksomeusefulmeasures.（since引导时间状语从句）②I’mproudofourcountryandIhopeI’llbetheprideofourcountryinthefuture.（宾语从句）一年模拟1．（2025·浙江·模拟预测）

人工智能（AI）技术的快速发展，给人们的学习和生活带来了巨大的变化。假如你是李华，学校英语报“TeenagerSays”栏目正在开展以“人工智能与我们的生活”为主题的征文。请你就该主题进行投稿。注意：（1）文中必须包括全部内容要点，可适当发挥；（2）词数80～100；（3）短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。AIandOurLifeFromclassroomstooffices,AIischangingourwayoflearningandliving.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】：AIandOurLifeFromclassroomstooffices,AIischangingourwayoflearningandliving.TherearemanycommonAIapps,likeDeepSeek,DoubaoandKimi.AIbringsnumerousadvantages.It’stime-saving.Forexample,itcanquicklysummarizeinformationforus.Italsohelpssolveproblems.However,ithasdrawbacks.UsingAImeanswemayhavenoprivacy,asitcollectsmuchdata.Andsomepeopledependtoomuchonit,losingtheabilitytothinkindependently.TouseAIwell,weshouldprotectourprivateinformation.Also,weshoulduseittolearn,notjustcopyanswers.Inthisway,wecanmakethemostofAI.【知识点】科学技术、意见/建议【详解】［总体分析］①题材：本文是一篇材料作文②时态：主要运用一般现在时。③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。［写作步骤］第一步，引出话题，点明AI正在改变学习与生活方式。第二步，分析利弊，论证AI的实用性和潜在风险。第三步，给出使用AI的建议。［亮点词汇］①drawback弊端②summarizeinformation总结信息③creativesolutions创造性解决方案④independentthinking独立思考⑤privacy隐私⑥collectdata收集数据⑦dependon依赖⑧makethemostof充分利用⑨privateinformation私人信息［高分句型］UsingAImeanswemayhavenoprivacy,asitcollectsmuchdata.（as引导原因状语从句）2．（2025·云南昆明·三模）AFestivalThatI’llNeverForget提示：你校校报正在进行以“AFestivalThatI’llNeverForget”为题的英语征文活动。请你用英文写一篇短文，向校报投稿，分享一次令你难以忘怀的节日经历，并分享它给你带来的感悟，或简单谈谈某个特定节日的重要性。要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个；2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；3.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】AFestivalThatI’llNeverForgetLastyear,IcelebratedtheMid-AutumnFestivalwithmyfamily.ItwasadayIwillalwaysremember.Duringthisfestival,peopleenjoythefullmoonandeatmooncakes.Myfamilyhadapicnicinthepark.Theweatherwasnice,andthemoonwasverybright.Weatemooncakesanddrankteawhilesittingonthegrass.Itwasahappytime,fullofloveandlaughter.Thisdayremindedmehowimportantfamilyis.Thefestivalisnotjustaboutfoodbutaboutspendingtimewiththoseyoulove.Itmademerealizethatweshouldalwaysmaketimeforourfamily.Iwillneverforgetthisspecialfestival,andIlookforwardtocelebratingitwithmyfamilyeveryyear.【知识点】假日活动、个人经历、传统节日【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是话题作文；②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：要求介绍分享一次令你难以忘怀的节日经历，并分享它给你带来的感悟，或简单谈谈某个特定节日的重要性。可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述清晰并突出重点。[写作步骤]第一步：开头点明难以忘记的是中秋节经历；第二步：具体介绍经历；第三步：带来的感悟及期望。[亮点词汇]①hadapicnic野餐②lookforwardtodoing期望做某事[高分句型]①Itmademerealizethatweshouldalwaysmaketimeforourfamily.(宾语从句）②ItwasadayIwillalwaysremember.(定语从句)3．（2025·天津红桥·三模）假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的英国笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件，向他讲述你班同学王亮传递爱心的故事，并谈谈感受。（1）上周日下午，天气炎热，王亮路过街边一个冰柜时感到口渴。（2）于是走到冰柜前，从里面取了一瓶水。（3）准备付款时发现这是爱心冰柜。（4）几分钟后，他折返回来，将一提瓶装水放进冰柜。（5）你认为……要求：（1）词数：80～100词。（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。参考词汇：爱心冰柜KindnessFreezer

一提瓶装水apackofbottledwaterDearPeter,Howiseverythinggoing?IhaveaheartwarmingstorytosharewithyouaboutoneofmyclassmatesWangLiang,whichtaughtmethepowerofkindness.LastSundayafternoon,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Doyouhaveanysimilarstories?Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours,LiHua【参考范文】：DearPeter,Howiseverythinggoing?IhaveaheartwarmingstorytosharewithyouaboutoneofmyclassmatesWangLiang,whichtaughtmethepowerofkindness.LastSundayafternoon,theweatherwasveryhot.WhenWangLiangpassedbyastreetfreezer,hefeltverythirsty.Sohewalkedtothefreezerandtookoutabottleofwater.Ashewasabouttopay,hefounditwasaKindnessFreezer—freewaterforthoseinneed.Afewminuteslater,hecamebackandputapackofbottledwaterintothefreezer.Iwastrulytouched.Hissmallactionshowedbiglove.Weshouldalllearntogivebackwhenwereceivekindness.Doyouhaveanysimilarstories?Lookingforwardtoyourreply!

Yours,

LiHua【知识点】志愿服务、叙事忆旧【详解】[总体分析]①题材：应用文，讲述同学的爱心故事；②时态：以一般过去时为主，讲述具体事件；③提示：包含要点提示，注意上下文的衔接。[写作步骤]第一步：开头引出话题，说明写信目的；第二步：按时间顺序讲述故事全过程；第三步：表达自己的感受；第四步：结尾提出问题并期待回复。[亮点词汇]①wasabouttodo将要做某事②inneed需要帮助的③apackof一包④giveback回报⑤lookforwardto盼望[高分句型]①Ashewasabouttopay,hefounditwasaKindnessFreezer.（as引导时间状语从句）②Weshouldalllearntogivebackwhenwereceivekindness.（when引导时间状语从句）4．（2025·四川自贡·模拟预测）九年级的学习生活紧张又忙碌，掌握科学学习方法对同学们至关重要。为此，你校英文校报针对九年级学生开展了相关调查，以下是调查结果，请据此为校报撰写一篇英文报道。要求：1.报道内容须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；2.词数80左右，开头已给出，但不计入总词数。Recently,ourschoolEnglishnewspaperdidasurveyonthelearningmethodsofGrade9students.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Recently,ourschoolEnglishnewspaperdidasurveyonthelearningmethodsofGrade9students.Amongthem,90studentspreferdoingexercisestoimprovetheirgrades.However,doingtoomanyexercisescanstopthemfromdoingdeeperthinking.20studentsenjoywatchingeducationalvideos.Whilethesevideoshelpwithdifficultpoints,theycanalsomakeitchallengingtostayfocused.25studentsthinklearningappsareuseful.Theseappsallowthemtostudyfreely.Butspendingtoomuchtimelookingatscreenscanhurttheireyes.60studentsfindreviewingtheirnoteshelpfulfororganizingtheirknowledge,buthowusefulitisdependsonhowgoodtheirnotesare.What’smore,30studentsreportedusingotherlearningmethodslikejoiningstudygroups.Inaword,it’simportantforGrade9studentstochoosetherightlearningmethodstomanagetheirbusyschoollife.【知识点】学习策略、青少年问题、意见/建议【详解】[总体分析]①题材：说明文，基于调研结果的报道，客观总结并分析学生的学习方法；②时态：以一般现在时为主（描述事实和习惯），也使用一般过去时（表述调查行为）；③结构：逻辑清晰，按调查结果逐条列出，最后做出总结。[写作步骤]第一步：引出背景，说明调查目的和对象（九年级学生学习方法）；第二步：按照数据分类描述四种主要学习方法的优缺点（做题、看视频、学习App、复习笔记）及其他方法；第三步：总结观点，强调选择合适方法的重要性。[亮点词汇]①preferdoingsth.更喜欢做某事②stopsb.fromdoingsth.阻止某人做某事③helpwith帮忙做……④spend...doing花……做……⑤dependon取决于……⑥what’smore另外⑦inaword总之[高分句型]①Amongthem,90studentspreferdoingexercisestoimprovetheirgrades.（介词短语+动词不定式表目的）②Whilethesevideoshelpwithdifficultpoints,theycanalsomakeitchallengingtostayfocused.（while引导让步状语从句）③25studentsthinklearningappsareuseful.（宾语从句）④It’simportantforGrade9studentstochoosetherightlearningmethods.（It作形式主语结构）5．（2025·四川宜宾·二模）2025年初，贺岁片《哪吒2》热播。哪吒精神“若前方无路，我便踏出一条路（Ifthereisnopathahead,Iwillcreateone.）”极大地鼓舞了许多人。假如你是李华，请结合题目中对哪吒精神的介绍，写一篇励志发言稿在班会课上鼓励同学们以积极的状态应对九年级繁忙的学习生活。要点提示：1．你的学校生活是什么样的？比以前更忙碌；做更多的作业；参加许多考试；……（补充）2．放松方式：去看电影；加入体育俱乐部；……（补充）3．建议：永不放弃！我们应该不断尝试。……（补充）要求：1．词数不少于100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2．文中不能出现真实的人名和校名；3．根据要点提示，适当拓展，以使行文连贯。Hello,everyone!Asweallknow,themovie“Nezha2”hasbeenahugehitthisyear._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________