新高考高分-高中英语读后续写片段描写限时练05（解析版）

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高中英语读后续写片段描写限时练05

一、紧张缓解类(动作+心理)

•紧张表现:Sb/shands+动作(shook/fumblcd)+assb.+具体行为(reachedfor/unfolded)

+物品,throatgoingdry

,缓解转折：Until+触发事件(sb.spoke/asoundcame)+,andawaveof+舒缓情绪

(calm/relief)+动作(washed/settled)+oversb.

1.原句：.throatgoingdryatthethought

ofhowmuchthistestmattered.

翻译：她伸手去拿试卷时，双手在发抖；一想到这场考试有多重要，她的喉咙就发紧。

2.原句：Untilherdeskmatewhispered"You'vegotthisM>and

翻译：直到同桌轻声说“你可以的"，一股平静的感觉涌上心头，让她稳稳地握住了笔。

答案：

1.Herhandsshookasshereachedfortheexampaper

2.awaveofcalmwashedDverher,helpinghergripherpensteadily.

段落一(紧张表现+缓解转折)

Lunastoodbackstage,herfingerstwistingtheedgeofherdancecostume.Tonightwasher

firstsoloperformance,andeverytimeshethoughtaboutsteppingontothestage,herheartraced.

Herhandsshookasshereachedforthewaterbottleonthetable,(1)

(一想到成百上千双眼睛盯着自己，她的喉咙就发紧).She

tookatinysip,butherhandsstilltrembled-whatifsheforgotthesteps?(2)

(直到舞蹈老师走过来，把温暖的手放在她肩上)，

andsaid,veseenyoupracticeahundredtimes-you'reready."(3)

(一股平静的感觉涌上心头，让她稳稳地握住了水

瓶).Shetookadeepbreath,feelingthetensioninhershouldersmeltawayasthestagelights

flickeredtosignalherturn.

答案：

(1)throatgoingdryatthethoughtofhundredsofeyeswatchingher

(2)Untilherdanceteacherwalkedover,placingawarmhandonhershoulder

(3)Awaveofcalmwashedoverher,helpinghergripthebottlesteadily

段落二(紧张表现+缓解转折)

Tomsatinthewaitingroomofthemusiccompetition,hisguitarcaserestingonhislap.He'd

practicedthemelodyformonths,butnowthathisnamewasabouttobecalled,hismindwent

blank.Hishandsshookasheunfoldedthesheetmusiche'dbroughtforalast-ininute

review/1)(-*想到要在评委面前演奏，他的

喉咙就发紧).Hestaredatthenotes,buttheyjustlookedlikemessylines一hadhereally

memorizedallofthem?(2)(宜到坐在旁边的小女孩

递给他一根棒棒糖)，saying,“Mymomsayscandymakesnervesgoaway.”(3)

__________________________________________(一-股平静的感觉涌上心头,让他稳稳地握住

T乐谱)Hesmiled,takingthelollipop,andsuddenlythenotesstartedtomakesenseagain-he

knewthissong,andhecouldplayit.

答案：

(1)throatgoingdryatthethoughtofplayinginfrontofthejudges

(2)Untilalittlegirlsittingnexttohimhandedhimalollipop

(3)Awaveofcalmwashedoverhim,helpinghimgripthesheetmusicsteadily.

二、温暖传递类(动作+环境)

•传递动作:Sb.+轻柔动作(handed/wrapped)+物品(ablanket/acup)+tosb.else,

saying+简短话语

•环境烘托:With+环境细节(thefirecrackling/thesunshining)+,thewarmthof+物

品/行为+动作(spread/seeped)+intosb/sbones

1.原句：.saying"Don'tstayout

luolong—yourhandsarcfirczing.M

翻译：妈妈把一条厚毯子裹在她肩上，说“别在外面待太久，你的手都冻僵了”。

2.原句：Withthefirecracklinginthefireplace,.

chasingawaythewinterchill.

翻译：壁炉里的火除啪作响，毯子的暖意渗进她的骨子里，驱散了冬日的寒冷。

答案：

1.Momwrappedathickblanketaroundhershoulders

2.thewarmthoftheblanketseepedintoherbones

段落一(传递动作+环境烘托)

Lilyhuddledbythewindow,watchingthesnowfalloutside—herfingerswereredfrom

pressingagainstthecoldglass,andshe'dforgottentograbasweaterbeforecomingdownstairs.

Justthen,hergrandmawalkedover,holdingaknittedscarfinherhands.(1)

(奶奶把围巾绕在莉莉脖子上),tuckingtheendsgentlyunderherchin,

saying“Thiswasyourmom'swhenshewasyourage-il'IIkeepyouextrawarm."With(he

snowflakesdancingoutsideandthehotcocoagrandmahadsetonthewindowsillsteaming,

(2)(围巾的暖意渗进莉莉的骨子里),chasingawaythe

coldthathadclungtohershoulders.Lilyleanedagainsthergrandma*sside,smilingasshe

breathedinthescarf'ssoft,woollyscent.

答案：

(I)GrandmawrappedthescarfaroundLily'sneck

(2)(hewarmthofthescarfseepedintoherbones

段落二(传递动作+环境烘托)

Afterwaitingforthebusinthewindfor20minutes,Tom'shandsweresocoldhecould

barelyflexhisfingers.Herubbedthemtogether,(1)

(往掌心哈着热气)，whentheoldladynexttohimpulledapairofthickgloves

fromherbag.(2)(她把手套

递给汤姆，轻轻拍了拍他的胳膊),sayinguTakethese—myhandsdon'tgetcoldeasily,andyou

looklikeyouneed(hemmore."Withthebusfinallyroundingthecomerand(heafternoonsun

peekingthroughtheclouds,⑶(手套的暖意渗进汤姆

的骨子里)，makinghisfingerstingleasfeelingcameback.Hethankedtheladyrepeatedly,and

wiicnhepulonthegloves,heIcllnotjustphysicalwannlh,(4)

(还有一份温柔的善意，让这段寒冷的等待也变得值得)

答案：

(1)blowingwarmaironhispalms

(2)Shehandedthegloves(oTom,pattinghisarmlightly

(3)thewarmthoftheglovesspreadintoTom'sbones

(4)butasoftkindnessthatmadethecoldwaitfeelworthit.

三、失落振作类(心理+动作)

•失落状态:Sb.+消极动作(slumped/sat)+,staringat+触发物(thebrokentoy/theempty

seat)+,eyescloudedwith+情绪(sadness/disappointment)

•振作契机：Then+触发事件(sb.appeared/somethingcaughtsb.'seye)+，andaspark

of+积极情绪(determination/hope)+动作(lit/sprung)+insb/schest

I.原句：Heslumpedonthebench,____________________________________________________

—he'dpracticedsohardforthegame.

翻译：他瘫坐在长椅上，盯着坏掉的篮球框，眼里满是失望一一为了这场比赛，他已经练了

好久。

2.原句：Thenhiscoachwalkedoverwithanewball,and

翻译：这时教练拿着一个新球走过来，他心中燃起一丝决心，站起身准备再试一次。

答案：

1.staringatthebrokenbasketballhoop,eyescloudedwithdisappointment

2.asparkofdetenninationlitinhischest,makinghimstanduptotryagain.

段落一(失落状态+振作契机)

Lilysatonthestepsoftheartstudio,hercrumpledpaintinginhand.Thecontestjudgesnad

saidherworkulackedheart,nandshe'drunoutbeforehearingtherest.(1)

(她盯着那幅画得模糊的家乡湖泊水彩画，眼里

满是悲伤)一she'dwokenupat5a.m.everyweekendforamonth(opaintthatscene,tryingto

capturethewaythesunriseturnedthewaterpink.Hershouldersdrooped,andshewasaboutto

crumplethepaintingfurtherwhen(2)(身后传来一个

温柔的声音)."ThatskylooksjustliketheoneIsawlastsummerinyourtown,“saidMs.Hale,

herartIcachcr,bundingdowntolook,althepaper.ThenMs.Halepoiiiludtoasmalldulail—an

olddockLilyhadadded-and(3)(她心

中燃起一丝决心，身子一下子坐直了),suddenlyeagertofixthepaintinginsteadofgivingup.

答案：

(1)Shestaredat(hesmudgedwatercolorofherhometown'slake,eyescloudedwithsadness

(2)asoftvoicespokebehindher

(3)asparkotdeterminationlitinherchest,makinghersitupstraight

段落二(失落状态+振作契机)

Tomslumpedagainstthebookstorewall,hishandsempty.He'dsavedupforweekstobuy

thelatestsciencefictionnovel,(1)(结果发

现最后一本在他到店前十分钟就卖完了).Hestaredattheemptyshelfwherethebookshould

havebeen,(2)(眼里满是失望)一he，dplannedtoread

itover(heweekend,sharinghisfavoritepartswithhislittlesisterlater.Hekickedasmallstoneon

theground,(3)(觉得所有的等待都白费了).

Thenthebookstoreclerkwalkedout,holdingawrappedbookandwavingtohim."Acustomer

reservedthisbutjustcalledtocancel—saidakidwho'sbeenwaitingdeservesitmore,"theclerk

said,handingittoTom.(4)(他

心中燃起一丝希望，咧嘴笑了起来，把书紧紧抱在胸前)，alreadyimagininghowexcitedhis

sisterwouldbe.

答案：

(I)onlytofindthelastcopyhadbeensoldtenminutesbeforehearrived

(2)eyescloudedwithdisappointment

(3)feelinglikeallhiswaitinghadbeenfornothing

(4)Asparkofhopesprunginhischest,makinghimgrinwidelyasheclutchedthebooktohis

chest

四、陌生熟悉类(感官+心理)

,陌生感:Sb.+观察动作(lookedaround/staredat)+the陌生场景(newclassroom/strange

street)+,feelinglike+比喻(anoutsider/alostbird)

,熟悉触发:Until+感官刺激(ascenthitsb/snose/avoicereachedsb.Jsears)+,and

arushof+情绪(recognition/comfort)+动作(flooded/washed)+oversb.

1.原句：Shelookedarouiidthenewschooluafcleiia,

翻译：她环顾新学校的食堂，看着其他人都和朋友聊天，感觉自己像个局外人。

2.原句：Untilthescentofvanillacookieshithernose-justlikehermombaked-and

翻译：直到香草饼干的香吠飘进她的鼻子一一和妈妈烤的味道一模一样一一一股安心的感觉

涌上心头，让她稍微放松了些。

答案：

I.feelinglikeanoutsideraseveiyoneelsechattedwiththeirfriends.

2.arushofcomfortwashedoverher,makingherrelaxalittle.

段落一(陌生感+熟悉触发)

Lunadraggedhersuitcasealongthenarrowstreetofthesmalltown,hereyesdartingfrom

oneunfamiliarstorefronttothenext.She'dmovedherewiihherfamilyjustlastweek,and

everythingstillfeltforeign-fromthewaylocalsgreetedeachotherwithslowsmilestothe

old-fashionedlamppostsliningtheroad.Shelookedaroundihequietsquare,

(1)(感觉自己像一只迷路的小鸟)asgroupsofkids

laughedandchasedeachothernearthefountain,noneoftheirfacesrecognizable.Hershoulders

droopedalittle,andshekickedasmallstone,wishingshecouldfindevenonethingthatfeltlike

home.(2)(直至l|口琴声传入耳中)一playingthesame

folksonghergrandpausedtohumeverynightbeforebed-and(3)

(一股安心的感觉涌上心头)Forasecond,thestrange

towndidn'tfeelsoscaryanymore.

答案：

(1)feelinglikealostbird

(2)Untilthesoundofaharmonicareachedhercars

(3)arushofcomfortwashedoverher,ma