2026届新高考英语热点冲刺复习：读后续写

2026届新高考英语热点冲刺复习读后续写Learningobjectives1.学会用六要素概括续写的故事线。2.会运用五五拍戏法根据所提供的内容预测故事情节，写出五个关键的句子。3.增强学生对于读后续写的解题信心。假如你是一个编剧，那么，读后续写对你来说，就等同于丢给你一个没写完的剧本，让你创作。"剧本"写作指南1.原文一致原则内容要前后衔接，上下连贯语言表达风格一致，结局合理。2.正能量原则故事内容一定要正能量，弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如迷路了但最终一定回到了家；失败了或遇到困难了，但最终一定成功了，吵架了但最后一定是言归于好，和睦相处；犯错了，最后一定会改过自新，重新做人；贼逃了，最后一定是绳之以法。3.曲折性原则凡是故事都应有跌宕起伏，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但最终能解决。阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。①MywifeandIwantedtoshareournewhomewithfamilyandfriendsbyhostingasmallgatheringintheearlysummer.Shehadpreparedlotsofsnacks,whilemyjobwastohavethebackyardinorder.②Therewasplentyofspaceforthekidstorunandplay.TherewasjustonethingIhadn'tcountedon:MybrotherchosetobringhisdogToby,a50-poundballoffire.Thoughfriendly,hecouldeasilyknockovermyniece'ssmallboysandmysix-month-oldgranddaughter.So,whenmybrothershowedup,IaskedhimtowatchTobyandkeephimoutside.③Myplanwasworkingoutjustfine.Tobywasusinguphisenergybyrunningbackandforthinthebackyardandgivingthekidsplentyofroom.Unexpectedly,aftersupper,theweatherchanged.Itstartedtorainandeveryonewentindoors.④Itwasanawkwardmoment.Ididn'twantTobytoberunningaroundinthehouse,andmybrotherwasn'thappywithdrivinghomewithawetdog.Eventually,mybrotherdecidedtoleaveratherthanforcetheissue.⑤Afewdayspassed,andIhadn'theardanythingfrommybrother.Itextedhimandexpressedwishesforhimtocomeoutagain.Hisreplycameasasurprise-ashock,actually:"Notachance."Clearly,hewasunhappyoverthewaywehadparted.Afterall,Ihadlefthimlittlechoice.Well,he'llgetoverit,Ireasoned.⑥Twomonthspassed.MywifesuggestedIgetintouchwithmybrother,butIresisted,thinkingheshouldcallfirst.However,myconscience(良心)keptbotheringme.Itriedtoputmyselfinmybrother'sshoes.Hewasfacinghealthissuesandhiswifeofthirty-fiveyearshadpassedawayafewmonthsearlier.Tobywashisconstantcompanion,theonewhokepthimgoing.Para1:Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.______________________________________Para2:Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother'sdoor._______________Task1.Fillintheblanks.WhoWhenWhereWhatHowWhyElementsofthestoryI,mywife,mybrother,Tobyintheearlysummeratournewhome;atbrother'shomerestoretherelationshiptheimportanceoflove,understandingandempathy？MywifeandIhosted_____________,butmybrother___________________,whichcould___________________children,soTobywaskeptoutside.Thesuddenrainforcedusto_________except______.UnwillingtogetTonywet,mybrother_________.Later,I__________butgota"____________"replyAfterputtingmyselfinmybrother’sshoes,Ithoughtthathe___________________and__________Task2.Fillthestorymountainandanalysetheemotion.goindoorsTobyleftangrilyfrustrated,angry，uncaringsympathetic,guiltyasmallgatheringchosetobringhisdogTobyeasilyknockovertextedhimNotachancewasfacinghealthissueshiswifehadpassedawayexcitedworried？1234512345Para.2:Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother'sdoor.

Para.1:IrealizeditwasIwhowasatfault.承上承上故事结局演员：I&mywifeTip3：戏份不够，细节/环境来凑。演员：mybrother，I，Toby启下情感态度价值观升华Tip1：确定演员Tip2：确定出场顺序五五拍戏法——情节线/情感线我错在哪里？我下定决心要修复我们的关系，于是拿着饼干去道歉到门口-----敲门坚冰融化，关系和好直到那时，我意识到，唯有爱、互相理解和同理心，才能缩小人与人之间的差距我想了什么？做了什么？妻子有什么作用？我的心理？我做了什么？哥哥的反应是什么？狗的反应？Task3.Shareyourthoughts12345Para.1:IrealizeditwasIwhowasatfault.承上I:我当时太自私了，满脑子只想着孩子们的安全，却忽略了狗的重要性Mywife：她建议我带哥哥喜欢吃的饼干去和他道歉。I;向妻子求助，询问该如何解决这一窘境I：一想到那天哥哥孤独的身影，一股懊悔和内疚之情油然而生演员：I&mywifeTip3：戏份不够，细节/环境来凑。启下Tip1：确定演员Tip2：确定出场顺序五五拍戏法——情节线I：我下定决心要修复我们的关系，于是拿着饼干去道歉Mybrother:听到敲门声，哥哥开门，狗摇尾巴12345Para.2:Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother'sdoor.

反思：直到那时，我意识到唯有爱和互相理解，才能缩小人与人之间的差距Mybother：拍拍我的肩膀,接受我的道歉。I:我递上饼干道歉（心理：紧张+语言）I：(伴随着手抖，脸白，喉咙发紧.....)虽然很紧张，但我还是深吸一口气，敲响了门语言表达微技能：点线面升级法总结

精准用词动词名词形容词副词点线将动作进行拆解形成一条动作链动作描写面部描写环境描写心理描写语言描写面句式回顾1.无灵主语：Awaveof+情绪名词tookholdof/seized/floodedover/sweptoversb.2.倒装：So+adj+wassbthatsbdidsth3.adjandadj,sbdidsth.4.abandoningoneselfto/bathingherselfin+情绪名词，sbdidsth5.fullof/filledwith/consumedwith/overcomeby+情绪名词，sbdidsth

6.With+n+doing/donesth，sbdidsth(主语不一致)1._____________________（我当时是如此的自私以至于）Ionlyfocusedonthechildren'ssafety,2._________________________________（忽略了狗的重要性）---especiallyafterhelosthiswife.3.______________________________________________（一想到那天哥哥孤独的身影，一股懊悔和内疚之情油然而生。）4._______________________________________________(我突然意识到Toby不仅仅是一只狗，它还是)hisspiritualsupport.5._____________________与妻子商量后,shesuggestedItakesomebiscuitstovisitmybrother.6.____________(决定)fixthecracksbetweenusandbreakthesilence,Inoddedandheadedformybrother'shouse.SoselfishwasIthatoverlookingtheimportanceofthedogAtthethoughtofhislonelyfigurethatday,asenseofregretandguiltflooded/washedoverme.ItoccurredtomethatTobywasnotjustadogbutHavingdiscusseditwithmywifeDeterminedtoPara1:Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.Task4.WritingPara2:Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother'sdoor._______________请找出文本中的升级句式和连接成分连句成篇Para1:IrealizeditwasIwhowasatfault.Overwhelmedbyremorse，Isigheddeeply,rubbedmyforeheadandcouldn’thelpbutreflectonthetruemeaningoffamily.IrecalledmanymomentswhenTomwasbymybrother’sside.“Neverhadweconsideredthatweignoredmybrother’sfeelingsbyleavinghisclosestcompanionoutside,”mywifeadmitted.Afterwards,Ipacedbackandforth,clenchingmyfistsinfrustration.Regretclawedatmyheart,andmymindwentblank—Iwasatalosswhatto.ItwasatthatmomentthatshesuggestedthatIshouldbringhimthebiscuitshelikesandapologize.Para2:Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybroth