高一英语（人教版）教学课件 必修二 UNIT 4 Section Ⅵ Writing

SectionⅥWriting目录写作项目——Describeaplacethatyoulikelike课时跟踪检测写作项目——Describeaplacethatyoulike本单元的写作项目是“描述一个你喜欢的地方”，属于“景物描写类”说明文。这类文章的写作要求是能比较生动、细致地描写所熟悉地点的景物，并恰当地表达自己的感受。为突出“描写”，建议从视觉、听觉、触觉、嗅觉等角度进行描写。好的景物描写不仅能引导读者和作者一起欣赏美丽的风景，使读者产生身临其境的感受，还能启迪人的思想，陶冶人的情操，给人以美的享受。由教材学写作一、学文体架构二、学逻辑组材1．开头结尾交相呼应。文章开门见山：爱尔兰美丽的乡村对当地人民和传统有着深远的影响。在结尾处作者讲到亲身体验当地文化和习俗的感受，呼应了开头，也给读者留下了深刻的印象。2．主体部分描述生动。主体部分作者生动地描述了乡村美景和风土人情，从视觉、嗅觉、味觉、听觉和触觉等多种感官的角度惟妙惟肖地描写了爱尔兰的优美的自然风光以及浓郁的文化气息。三、学亮点表达1．Itsbeautifulcountrysideexcitesandinspiresall,offeringsomethingforeachofthesenses.赏析：本句作者使用了现在分词短语作状语，介绍了爱尔兰美丽的乡村给人以激情和灵感，满足各种感官享受，为下文细节描写做好铺垫。2．Thepeacefullandscapeofthe“EmeraldIsle”anditsmanygreencountiesisatruefeastfortheeyes,withitsrollinggreenhillsdottedwithsheepandcattle.赏析：作者运用了with复合结构，描述了“绿宝石岛”的风光，连绵起伏的山丘上点缀着牛羊，让读者仿佛置身其中，流连忘返。3．Withallthisbeauty,itisnotsurprisingthatIrelandhasdevelopedstrongtraditionsthatincludemusic,dancing,anddining.赏析：作者使用了itisnotsurprisingthat句型，表达了正是有了这些自然美景，爱尔兰具有浓厚的民间传统就顺其自然了。第二个that引导定语从句，补充说明了传统的具体内容，即音乐、舞蹈和餐饮。4．Betteryet,enjoyadelicioustraditionalIrishBeefStew.赏析：Betteryet用得非常灵巧，yet是副词，与比较级连用加强比较程度，意思是“更好的是”，突出了爱尔兰传统特色美食——炖牛肉。针对练笔/完成句子①Themusicmovesthroughtechnicallydifficultsectionswithease,____________________________.即使技术难度很高的段落，音乐也都轻松流过，展现了他作为作曲家的天赋。②____________________,

theweatherisgettingcolderandcolder.随着冬天的来临，天气变得越来越冷。showinghisgiftasacomposerWiththewintercoming③____________,

ifyoudon'tfindany,createthem!更好的是，如果你找不到的话，那就创作出来吧！Betteryet四、学细节描写Anddownbythesea,theroaroftheoceanwavesandcriesoftheseabirdsmakeupthemusicofthecoast.Onaquietmorninginthemountains,feelthesunonyourskin,andbreatheinthesweetscentoffreshflowerswhilebirdsgreetthenewdaywiththeirmorningsong.赏析：作者从多种感官角度，生动地描写了爱尔兰优美的风景。在海边，海浪的咆哮和海鸟的叫声(听觉)构成了海岸的音乐。在山上一个宁静的早晨(视觉)，感受阳光照射在你的皮肤上(触觉)，呼吸鲜花的芳香(嗅觉)，而鸟儿则用清晨的歌声迎接新的一天(听觉)。作者运用了拟人的修辞手法，用寥寥数笔勾勒出一幅乡村清晨充满鸟语花香的风景画。针对练笔/翻译并体会景物描写的句子Theleavescrunched(发出嘎吱声)beneathmyfeetasIstrolleddownthestreet.Occasionally,onewouldfallpastme,lightlyswaying(摇晃)astheairgentlycarriedittotheground.我在街上漫步时，_______________________。偶尔，有叶子会从我身边掉下来，____________，慢悠悠地落到地面上。树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响轻轻地摇晃写作项目指导Howtodescribeaninteresting,exciting,orsurprisingplace——如何描述一个有趣、激动人心或令人赞叹的地方第一步：构思谋篇Part1IntroduceaplacePart2DescribetheplaceyoulikeindetailPart3Expresspersonalfeelings第二步：要点表达第一部分引出要介绍的地方

1．多角度描述一个地方2．选取某角度引出这个地方(以坐落的位置为例)①be________________in

位于……②lie______

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neighborhood第二部分进行风景等细节描写

1．常用的词汇①tourist__________

旅游景点②_______

ofinterest 名胜古迹③athomeand________

国内外④befamous/well-known_____

因……闻名⑤________thearchitecture/scenery 欣赏建筑/风景attractionsplacesabroadforadmire

⑥_________/breathtaking/________/excellent惊奇的/令人惊叹的/独特的/极好的⑦leavea_______________onsb. 给某人留下深刻印象⑧___________agreatreputationas 享有……盛誉amazinguniquedeepimpression

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weweredeeplyattractedbythebeautifulsceneryhere.一到达山顶，我们就深深地被这里的美丽风景吸引住了。②Moreover,thescenery_______________________,

withmanywell-knownsightseeingspots.而且，沿江的景色令人惊奇，有很多著名的游览景点。arrivingatthetopofthehillalongtheriverisamazing③Iwas______________________,

whichwaskissingmyskin.我沐浴在阳光下，阳光亲吻着我的肌肤。④Mist-coveredmountainsweredottedwith________________________.雾蒙蒙的山上点缀着小农场和小村庄。bathedinthesunlightsmallfarmsandvillages⑤Asaphotographer,Ilovethe_____________andamazingcolours:redrocks,greenplants,blue-greenwatersandblueskies.作为一名摄影师，我钟爱那里明亮的光线和绚丽的色彩：红岩绿树，碧水蓝天。brightlight第三部分表达个人感受

①Byvisitingthiscity,notonlycanyouknowmoreabouttraditionalChineseculture,butyoucanalso_______________________________.游览这座城市，你不仅能更多地了解中国传统文化，还能欣赏到令人惊奇的风光。admiretheamazingscenery②Whenvisitingthisexcellentcity,youcannotonlyhaveanopportunitytosatisfyyourappetite,butalso_____________________.当你游览这座优秀的城市时，你不仅有机会满足胃欲，还能拓宽眼界。③Youaresuretoenjoyyourselfby_________________________andfascinatingtraditionsofthisplace.通过体验这个地方深厚的文化和迷人的传统，你一定会玩得开心。broadenyourhorizonsexperiencingthedeepculture④I'mfullyconvincedthatthisplace_________________________.我深信这个地方最好地满足了我的要求。meetsmyrequirementsbest[随堂针对练笔]暑假里，妈妈带你去江南旅游。江南美丽的风景至今令你无法忘记。请对江南美景进行描述，让读者跟随你一起去欣赏。根据提示完成下面习作，选择合适的句子并认真抄写在文中空白处。JiangnanSunriseSceneryInthesummervacation,mymothertookmetotraveltoJiangnan,whichisreallybeautiful!Istillcan'tforgetthebeautifulscenery.Onemorning,①

.Atthattime,thedeepblueoftheriverseemedtobetheblueeyes.Inalittlewhile,agoldenlightappearedatthecrossingoftheskyandthewater,andthentheskybecameveryred.②

.Inthesky,thesunseemedtobecarryingaheavyburdenwhenrisingbitbybit,andfinallyjumpedoutofthewater.Atthistime,aslongasweraisedourheads③

.Theflowersbytheriverseemedtohavebeenpaintedbythesun:orange,red,pink.④

.Jiangnansunrisesceneryissobeautifulandcharming.Whatalastandunforgettableimpressionitleftonme!A．wecouldseethewildgeeseflyingfreelyintheskyB．IwaswatchingthesunrisebytheriverC．TheyopeneduptouswithabigsmileD．Thewhitecloudswerealsodyedred答案：①～④

BDAC写作素材储备(一)介绍北京ABeautifulPlaceinChinaAsthecapitalandtheeconomicandpoliticalcenterofChina,BeijingisoneofthemostdevelopedcitiesinChina,withlotsofplacesofinterest,suchastheTian'anmenSquareandtheForbiddenCity.TheForbiddenCityiswheretheemperorsandtheirroyalfamilylivedduringtheancienttimes,whichisofgreathistoricalandculturalsignificance.Also,itreflectsthewisdomandhardworkofChinesepeople.AsfortheTian'anmenSquare,withthenationalflagswinginginthewind,oncepeoplearrivethere,afeelingofrespectwouldriseintheirhearts.AsfarasIamconcerned,BeijingrepresentstherapiddevelopmentofChinainthepastfewdecades.I'msureChinawillbecomemorepowerfulandbeautifulinthefuture.(二)介绍四川ABeautifulPlaceinChinaAsweallknow,SichuanProvinceislocatedinsouthwesternpartofChina,whichenjoysmanyworld-famousplacesofinterest,suchasJiuzhaigouValleyandDujiangyanIrrigationProject.JiuzhaigouNationalParkisanaturereserveinthenorthofSichuanProvince.Whatisthemostimpressiveisitsmulti-levelwaterfallsandcolorfullakes.Besides,walkinginthenaturereserve,youhaveachancetoseerareanimalslikegiantpandas,goldenmonkeys.Therearealsomanyspeciesofrareplantsprotectedthere.AnotherfamousscenicspotisDujiangyanIrrigationProject.Itdatesfromover2,000yearsago.Amazingly,itisstillplayinganimportantpartinlocalirrigationtoday.I'msurevisitorswillbeamazedbythebeautifulsceneryinJiuzhaigouandtheconstructionofDujiangyanIrrigationProject.课时跟踪检测[写作专项训练]Ⅰ.完成句子1．TherearethreeplacesIwantto__________________.我想向你推荐三个地方。2．Youcan_________________________Chineseculturefromitsstory.你可以从中国故事中对中国文化有一个很好的了解。recommendtoyouhaveagoodknowledgeof3．ThenyoucangotovisittheShaanxiHistoryMuseum,which____________a“Chinesetreasurehouse”！

然后你可以去参观陕西历史博物馆，它被称为“华夏宝库”！4．YoucanalsogototheXi'anCityWalland____________________________.你也可以去西安城墙和其他一些著名的景点。isknownasafewotherfamoussights5．Ican_______yourguideandIam_________________meetingyou.我可以当你的向导，并期待与你见面。actas

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Ⅱ.完成语段Lastweekend①______________________________________

(见证了我们难忘的经历)ofattendingtheactivity②________________

(以……为主题)promotingtraditionalChineseculture.ThewonderfulperformanceofPekingOpera,theflexibilityofTaiChi③__________

(以及)thevividdesignsofpapercutting④_______________________

(给……留下深刻的印象)me.However,witnessedourunforgettableexperience

withthethemeofaswellasleftadeepimpressionon⑤____________________________

(最吸引我的是)ourhands-onexperienceofpapercutting.Istillrememberthefishyoucut.Ithinkthisactivityisagreatsuccess,whichprovidesusaplatformwherewecan⑥___________________(拓宽我们的视野)andappreciatetheprofoundChineseculture.Ihopeyoucan⑦______________________

______(对……有更好的理解)Chinesecultureafterthisactivity.whatappealedtomemostwas

broadenourhorizonshaveabetterunderstandingofⅢ.读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。TwoCanadianboys,AlderandGreg,bothof13,hadtheirfriendshiptestedonarecenttriptotheRockyMountains.OnSundaymorning,thetwoboysdecidedtoclimbthemountainnearthecampbythemselveswhiletheirparentspreparedlunchatthecamp.Aftertwohours,theyreachedthetopandenjoyedthebreathtakingview,completelyrelaxedandfeelinglikebirds.However,troublebeganwhentheystartedtheclimbdown.Gregaccidentallyfelldownandtwistedhisankle(脚踝).Hecouldmovebutithurt.GregtoldAldertoleavehimandgobacktotheirparentstogethelp.“Butisitsafeforyoutobealone？”AldercleanedthedirtfromGreg'shandsandtriedtohelphimstandup.“IsitOK？”Alderasked.“Abittroublesome,Iguess.”Gregforcedasmile.Alderdidnotwanttoleavehisfriend.“WhatshouldIdo？”hethoughttohimself.MountainclimberspassedbyandAlderwasnotsureiftheywouldliketobedisturbedonthewaytotheirdestinations.注意：1.续写词数应为80左右；2．重点描写Alder的心理活动，要求逻辑合理。Alder

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wait.HeloweredhimselfandaskedGregtoclimbontohisback.AlthoughGregrefused,Alderinsistedoncarryinghimonhisback.Finally,theystruggledontheirway.ThewaydownthehillwasnotsoeasyastheyexpectedandafewminuteslaterAlderwasexhausted.Theysatonthegroundlookingateachother.“AreyouOK？”Gregasked.“Whateverhappened,Iwillnotleaveyoualone！”Aldersaidfirmly.Withtearsdownhischeek,GregclimbedontoAlder'sbackagainandtheymovedwithdifficultydownthehill.Whenthetwoboyswerefoundbytheirparents,theyheldtheirhandstogether.AldersmiledtoGregandsaid,“Atleastwearetogether！”[阅读拓展训练]阅读七选五Travellingisagreatwaytointeractwithaculturewhichmightbecompletelydifferentfromyourown.1BeforeImovedtoSicilyIhadtravelledaroundthewholeofItaly,thesouthandthenorth,andIabsolutelyfellinlovewiththecultureandthelanguage,soIwasinspiredtolearnthelanguageandalsotomovehere.AndhereIamnow,livinginSicily.2Whenyougetbackhome,you'llhavelotsofstoriestotellyourfriendsandfamily.Evenifsomethingisn'tveryfun,itwillbefunnytolookbackandlaughatthoseawkwardorharshmoments.Forexample,IwastravellingwithagroupoffriendsinPisaandwetookthewrongbustogettothebeacharea,soweendedupbeingstuckintherainandhavingtowalkback.Whenyoutravel,youexposeyourselftodifferentpeople.3It'sagreatlearningexperienceforbothyouandtheotherpersonbecauseyoucanshareandexchangeyourownideasandopinionsonarangeoftopics.Forexample,ImetanIranianphilosopherandwetalkedaboutthemagicofnature.AlotofhisideaswereshapedbyhisIranianbackgroundandIranianphilosophy.4Travellingistherealizationofhome.5SinceI'vebeenawayfr