冀教八下英语Unit 7《单元写作》课件

单元写作介绍如何理财Unit7Thevalueofmoney写作维度本单元的写作项目是“货币与理财”，相关内容包含以下几个方面：(1)树立正确的金钱观和消费观，合理利用压岁钱(2)描述如何理财或一次记忆深刻的消费(3)给出理财建议。写作支架/模板介绍如何理财第一步，指明中学生应该树立正确的金钱观和消费观，合理利用压岁钱，引出下文；第二步，介绍自己如何使用自己的压岁钱；第三步，给出关于更好地使用压岁钱的建议。黄金语料(从教材内外积累好句)开头段①Everyonehashis/herownwayofspendingthemoney.②Asamiddleschoolstudent,it’simportantforustolearnaboutmoneyandspenditwisely.③Whatdoyoudowithyourluckymoney?中间段①Iusuallydividemyluckymoneyintoseveralparts.②Iusesomeofittobuybookswhichcanenrichmyknowledge.③Isetasidesometobuygiftsformyparentsonspecialdays,...④Touseluckymoneybetter,Isuggestwemakeaplanbeforespendingit.⑤Wecanthinkaboutwhatwereallyneed.⑥Managingmoneyisimportantforme.⑦First,makeaplanatthestartofeachmonth.结尾段①Bydoingthese,wecandevelopagoodhabitofmanagingmoney.②Thisway,you’llalwaysknowwhereyourmoneygoes.③It’sabouthowIcanusemoneytocreateabetterlifeformyselfandothers.经典例题(从经典例题学会审题)你是如何合理使用压岁钱(luckymoney)的呢？作为中学生，我们应该树立正确的金钱观和消费观。某英语报社的微信公众号最近推出一期以“我的压岁钱我做主”为主题的活动，向全市中学生征稿。写作要点：1.Doyoumanagemoney?2.Whatdoyoudowithyourluckymoney?3.Youradviceonhowtousetheluckymoneybetter.审人称：第一人称审体裁：记叙文（夹叙夹议）审主题：我的压岁钱我做主审时态：一般过去时、一般现在时审要点：管压岁钱的经历、建议要求：1.短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3.词数80-120，短文题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。Whatdoyoudowithyourluckymoney?Nowadays,mostparentsgivechildrensomeluckymoney,andeveryonehashis/herownwayofspendingthemoney.Asamiddleschoolstudent,it’simportantforustolearnaboutmoneyandspenditwisely.

____________________________________________________________精彩范文展示Whatdoyoudowithyourluckymoney?Nowadays,mostparentsgivechildrensomeluckymoney,andeveryonehashis/herownwayofspendingthemoney.Asamiddleschoolstudent,it’simportantforustolearnaboutmoneyandspenditwisely.①It’simportanttomakesmartchoiceswithourmoney.（教材P92）Idomanagemymoney.Iusuallydividemyluckymoneyintoseveralparts.Iusesomeofittobuybookswhichcanenrichmyknowledge.Readingdifferentkindsofbooksbroadensmyhorizons.Also,Isetasidesometobuygiftsformyparentsonspecialdays,becausetheyhavedonesomuchforme.Touseluckymoneybetter,Isuggestwemakeaplanbeforespendingit.Wecanthinkaboutwhatwereallyneed.Moreover,wecansavesomeinthebanksothatwecanuseitwhenthereisanurgentneedformoney.Bydoingthese,wecandevelopagoodhabitofmanagingmoney.②Byunderstandingthedifferencebetweenneedsandwants,sheknewthatshecouldmakebetterdecisionsaboutmoney.（教材P92）【亮点词块】divide...into...把……分为……differentkindsof不同种类的developagoodhabitof...养成……的好习惯【高分句子】Iusesomeofittobuybookswhichcanenrichmyknowledge.(which引导的定语从句)我会用其中一部分(钱)去买那些能丰富我知识的书籍。Moreover,wecansavesomeinthebanksothatwecanuseitwhenthereisanurgentneedformoney.(sothat引导的目的状语从句)此外，我们可以把一部分(钱)存进银行，以便在急需钱的时候取用。实战演练假如你是李华，最近你的笔友Tony发来邮件求助。请你根据下面邮件的内容给他写一封电子邮件。To:LiHuaFrom:TonySubject:Givemeahand!DearLiHua,Myparentsgivemeafixedamountof(固定数量的)pocketmoneyeverymonth,butIalwaysspenditallatthebeginningofamonth.IoftenregretwhatI’vebought,becauselater,Idon’thaveenoughmoneyleftforthingsIreallyneed.HowcanIlearntousepocketmoneybetter?Tony要点：1.表示理解；2.给出建议；3.表达希望。注意：1.词数为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；4.邮件的格式已给出，不计入总词数。To:TonyFrom:LiHuaSubject:Re:Givemeahand!DearTony,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiHua范文参考To:TonyFrom:LiHuaSubject:Re:Givemeahand!DearTony,Iknowhowyoufeel!Iusedtospendallmypocketmoneyquicklytoo.AndthenIworriedaboutnothavingenoughlater.Don’tworry—Ihavesomeusefulideasforyou.First,makeaplanatthestartofeachmonth.Writedownwhatyouneedtobuy,likeschoolsuppliesorbusfares,andhowmuchtheycost.Second,thinkcarefullybeforebuyingsomethingnew.Waitforadayortwo—maybeyou’llrealizeyoudon’treallyneedit.Finally,keepasmallnotebooktowritedownevery