温馨家庭篇（复习）（解析版）

温馨家庭篇温馨家庭类读后续写是高考英语常考题型，主要围绕家庭亲情主题展开，注重情感表达与细节描写。主要聚焦家庭成员间的关爱互动，如母亲节惊喜、亲子矛盾化解、长辈技能传承等，常以节日惊喜、日常矛盾为情节起点。情节构建主要是：通常包含起因（家庭日常或节日）、发展（冲突或温情事件）、高潮（矛盾解决或情感升华）三部分，需紧密衔接。“爱的和解”是温馨家庭主题中颇为常见的情节之一。故事中的亲人往往因某些事件而产生隔阂，随后通过偶然发生的事件或人为创造的契机实现和解。这一情节通常涵盖“矛盾出现”、“关系修复”和“爱的表达”三个核心部分。在写作中，通常有‌细节描写‌：运用动作细节（如拥抱、抚摸）、环境烘托（阳光、灯光）强化情感，通过物品象征（旧自行车）或行为延续（定期家庭日）深化主题。‌另外，‌情感表达也非常重要。结尾需直接抒发对父母的感激之情，可使用比喻（如“潮水般的内疚”）或环境描写（如“阳光洒满客厅”）渲染氛围。知识点1五大万能句型万能句式1：矛盾出现，情感疏离句式：Eversince________,wehadstoppedtalkingabout.（替换“”为事件+话题，体现关系断裂）例句：Eversincetheargumentaboutmycareerchoice,wehadstoppedtalkingaboutmyfuture.（自从那次关于职业选择的争吵后，我们就不再谈论我的未来了。）仿写句1：自从那次我摔坏了爷爷的旧怀表后，我们之间就再也没提过家族往事。EversinceIbrokeGrandpa’soldpocketwatch,wehadstoppedtalkingaboutfamilystories.仿写句2：自从弟弟被收养后，我就不再和父母分享学校里的事了。Eversincemylittlebrotherwasadopted,Ihadstoppedtalkingaboutschoolwithmyparents.仿写句3：自从妈妈开始加班后，我们家就再也没有一起吃过晚饭了。EversinceMomstartedworkinglate,wehadstoppedhavingdinnertogether.万能句式2：事件契机，触动心弦句式：Itwas________thatfinallymademerealizehowmuchImeantto________.（强调某个具体事件成为情感转折点）例句：ItwasthephotoalbumshekeptunderherbedthatfinallymademerealizehowmuchImeanttoher.（正是她藏在床下的那本相册，让我终于明白我在她心中有多重要。）仿写句1：是爸爸深夜为我缝补校服的背影，让我意识到我对他有多重要。ItwasDad’ssilhouettesewingmyschooluniformatnightthatfinallymademerealizehowmuchImeanttohim.仿写句2：是妹妹偷偷为我画的生日贺卡，让我明白她一直把我当榜样。ItwasthebirthdaycardmylittlesistersecretlydrewformethatfinallymademerealizehowmuchImeanttoher.仿写句3：是奶奶坚持每年都为我织一条围巾，让我感受到她从未说出口的爱。ItwasGrandma’straditionofknittingmeascarfeveryyearthatfinallymademerealizehowmuchImeanttoher.万能句式3：主动修复，打破沉默句式：Itookadeepbreathandreachedfor________,hopingitwasn’ttoolatetosay________.（体现鼓起勇气、主动和解的心理过程）例句：ItookadeepbreathandreachedfortheletterI’dwritten,hopingitwasn’ttoolatetosay“I’msorry.”（我深吸一口气，拿起了那封写好的信，希望说“对不起”还不算太晚。）仿写句1：我深吸一口气，拿起电话拨通了妈妈的号码，希望还能来得及说“我想你了”。ItookadeepbreathandreachedforthephonetocallMom,hopingitwasn’ttoolatetosay“Imissyou.”仿写句2：我鼓起勇气打开了那本日记，希望还能来得及告诉她“我一直都懂”。Itookadeepbreathandreachedforthediary,hopingitwasn’ttoolatetosay“I’vealwaysunderstood.”仿写句3：我拿起那张全家福，走向爷爷的房间，希望还能来得及说“我以你为荣”。Itookadeepbreathandreachedforthefamilyphoto,headingtoGrandpa’sroom,hopingitwasn’ttoolatetosay“I’mproudofyou.”万能句式4：爱的表达，行胜于言句式：Withoutaword,________handedme________,andIkneweverythingwouldbealright.（强调“无声胜有声”的亲情瞬间，极具画面感）例句：Withoutaword,Momhandedmeherfavoriteteacup,andIkneweverythingwouldbealright.（妈妈一句话没说，把她的茶杯递给了我，我知道一切都会好起来的。）仿写句1：父亲默默递给我他珍藏的工具箱，我知道他终于认可了我。Withoutaword,Dadhandedmehistreasuredtoolbox,andIkneweverythingwouldbealright.仿写句2：奶奶轻轻递给我那条旧围巾，我知道她原谅了我。Withoutaword,Grandmahandedmetheoldscarf,andIkneweverythingwouldbealright.仿写句3：妹妹把她的存钱罐抱过来放在我床边，我知道她在用自己的方式说“我爱你”。Withoutaword,mylittlesisterhandedmeherpiggybank,andIkneweverythingwouldbealright.万能句式5：情感升华，亲情永恒句式：Thatmomenttaughtmethatfamilyisn’tabout________—it’sabout________.（用于结尾段，进行主题升华，突出亲情本质）例句：Thatmomenttaughtmethatfamilyisn’taboutneverarguing—it’saboutalwayscomingback.（那一刻让我明白，家人之间不在于从不争吵，而在于永远愿意回归彼此。）仿写句1：那一刻我懂得，家不是没有矛盾的地方，而是无论走多远都想回去的地方。Thatmomenttaughtmethatfamilyisn’taboutavoidingconflicts—it’sabouthavingaplaceyoualwayswanttoreturnto.仿写句2：我终于明白，亲情不在于天天见面，而在于心里永远有对方的位置。Thatmomenttaughtmethatfamilyisn’taboutseeingeachothereveryday—it’saboutalwayshavingaplaceinyourheart.仿写句3：现在我明白，家的意义不在于完美无缺，而在于彼此包容与守护。Thatmomenttaughtmethatfamilyisn’taboutbeingperfect—it’saboutprotectingandforgivingeachother.知识点2高频金句矛盾出现场景1：突发变故1.Dad’sbusinessdidn’tgowell,whichmadeithardforthefamilytomakeendsmeet.爸爸的生意不好，家庭很难维持收支平衡。2.Herheartmissedabeatwhenshefeltherleftringfingerabitlighter.当她感觉到左手无名指轻了一点时，她心里一震。3.Iwasnotinthemoodtobeonstagewiththeonenewlyadoptedbymyparents.我不想和最近被我父母收养的那个人一起上台表演。4.Everythingaboutmovingdaywasapuzzle.Ididn’tknowanythingaboutournewbuildingonthestreet.搬家那天的所有事情都是一个谜。我对街上我们要搬入的新楼一无所知。场景2：弄巧成拙5.Idecidedtomakeupanexcuse.我决定编一个借口。6.OurmotherinformedusthatMrs.Joneshadjustsharedallthedetailswithheroverthephone.Previously,wehadvisitedMrs.Jones’houseandofferedtocleanitforaquarter.妈妈告诉我们，Mrs.Jones刚刚在电话里告诉了她所有的细节。先前，我们去过Mrs.Jones家并提出以25美分的价格为她打扫房子。场景3：不明所以7.Istaredback,stillpuzzledaboutthequestion.我盯了回去，仍然对这个问题感到困惑。8.Meghanwasabsorbed,butasIwatchedthem,Istillthoughtaboutmywork.Meghan全神贯注，但当我看着他们时，我还是惦记着我的工作。9.AlthoughIdidnotknowwhatJudywassaying,Istillgotabsorbedinlistening.虽然不知道Judy在说什么，但我还是聚精会神地听着。10.Gettingannoyedinstantly,hestormedintoourroom.Then,glaringatus,hequestionedwhohadmadesuchamessofhisflowers.他随即生气了，冲进我们的房间，瞪着眼睛质问我们，是谁把他的花弄得这么乱。关系修复场景1：事件契机11.Thenmuchtohisastonishment,hepulledouttwoT-shirts,bothinlightpink.然后，令他非常惊讶的是，他拿出了两件T恤，都是浅粉色的。12.Herusheduptome,pulledupmyskirtandtiedthedrawstringwithabeautifulknot.他冲到我面前，拉起我的裙子，用抽绳打了一个漂亮的结。13.Havingworkedouthowallthepiecesfittogether,hestartedtorebuildthebowl.Wearinggloves,hecautiouslyfilledthecracklineswithspecialpaint.弄清楚所有碎片是如何组合在一起后，他开始修复这个碗。他戴着手套，小心地用特定的油漆填满裂缝。场景2：物件契机14.Asherbrushmovedsmoothlyacrossthepaper,daisiescamealive.当她的画笔平稳地在纸上移动时，雏菊活了起来。15.Hehandedheralargebox,whichshecarefullyplacedonthedesknearmybed.他递给她一个大盒子，她小心翼翼地把它放在我床边的桌子上。16.Iexcitedlyturnedthetapon,brushingthecombwithausedtoothbrushashardasIcould.我兴奋地打开水龙头，用一把用过的牙刷拼命地刷着梳子。爱的表达场景1：大声说爱17.Withhiseyestwinkling,hecriedout,“Iloveyou,Mom.”他眼睛一闪一闪地，大声喊道：“我爱你，妈妈。”18.“Iloveyou,Mom,”Iwhisperedtoherwithtearsstreamingdownmycheeks.“我爱你，妈妈。”我低声对她说，泪水顺着脸颊流下来。19.Ipickedupthereceiver,andontheotherend,atinyvoicecame,“Iloveyou,Daddy.”我拿起听筒，另一端，一个微小的声音说着：“我爱你，爸爸。”20.MomheldthedressupbeforeLucyandsaidinanapprovingtone,“Youknowwhat?Ithinkitlooksnice.”妈妈把这件连衣裙举到Lucy面前，用赞许的语气说：“你知道吗？我觉得它看起来很漂亮。”场景2：行胜于言21.Wesmiledandheldeachother’shands.我们相视一笑，握住了对方的手。22.Deeplytouched,Dadheldontotheflowers,gatheringusintohisarms.爸爸深受感动，紧紧地提着手里的花，将我们揽入怀中。23.Hugginghimtightly,themotherknewthathersonwouldtastethebittersweetnessinhischocolate.母亲紧紧地拥抱着她的儿子，她知道他会尝到巧克力中苦甜参半的滋味。练习一结合以上所学表达，翻译句子。1.听完我的话，爸爸把我揽入怀中。Afterhearingmywords,myfather_______.2.当妈妈看到修复好的碗时，她流下了泪水。Whenmymothersawtherestoredbowl,therewere_______.3.妈妈怒冲冲地盯着我，问我为什么决定退学。_______,mymomaskedwhyIhaddecidedtoquitschool.4.最后，她大声喊到：“我讨厌你！”然后跑出了房间。Finally,she_______,“Ihateyou!”,andranoutoftheroom.5.他冲到我跟前，脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。He_______,withasmileonhisfaceshininglikeadiamond.6.一听到这个令人鼓舞的消息，我们都笑了，并且握住了对方的手。Onhearingthisencouragingnews,we_______.7.听了他的话，我被一种温暖的感觉包围，所以我紧紧地拥抱了他。Hearinghiswords,Iwasoverwhelmedbyafeelingofwarmth,so_______.8.我找了一个借口试图蒙混过关，但是妈妈的眼神似乎在说她已经知道了事实。I_______,tryingtomuddlethrough,butMom’seyesseemedtosayshehadalreadyknownthetruth.二结合以上所学，补全段落内容。On30thJune2021,IwasonmygraduationtripinThailand.MysistercalledmetosaythatGrandmawouldhaveaheartsurgeryon2ndJuly.ThinkingbacktothatdaywhenIquarreledwithGrandma,Ihesitated.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、短语翻译及详解1.gatheredmeintohisarms翻译：把我拥入他的怀中详解：gather有“聚集；收拢”含义，这里形象体现出将人用力抱进怀里的动作，常用来描绘亲人、爱人之间亲昵的肢体互动场景，比如久别重逢时的拥抱。2.tearsstreamingdownhercheeks/face翻译：泪水顺着她的脸颊/脸流淌下来详解：stream作动词有“流动；涌流”意思，tearsstreaming...是独立主格结构，用现在分词streaming体现泪水持续流淌的状态，生动展现人物因情绪（如悲伤、感动等）而流泪的画面。3.Glaringatme翻译：怒视着我详解：glare是“怒目而视；瞪视”，强调带着愤怒、不满的情绪去看，常出现在矛盾、冲突场景里，比如家人间因误会产生争执时的眼神表现。4.criedout翻译：大喊；叫嚷详解：cry本身有“哭；呼喊”意思，cryout更突出“大声喊出”，可用于情绪激动（如焦急、愤怒、惊喜等）时的发声，像发现意外情况、表达强烈诉求等场景。5.rusheduptome翻译：冲向我；朝我奔过来详解：rush是“冲；奔”，upto有“向；朝”指向性，整体描绘出快速、急切地朝着某人移动的动作，比如亲人久别后急切相见，或是遇到紧急情况时的奔赴动作。6.smiledandheldeachother’shands翻译：微笑着握住彼此的手详解：简洁呈现出温馨、和睦的互动画面，常用来表现家人、朋友间化解矛盾后，或是共享美好时刻时的亲昵、友好举动。7.Ihuggedhimtightly翻译：我紧紧地抱住他详解：tightly是“紧紧地”，修饰hug（拥抱）这个动作，突出拥抱时用力的程度，以此传递深厚的情感，像对亲人的不舍、愧疚后的和解等情绪都可用此表达。8.madeupanexcuse翻译：编造一个借口详解：makeup有“编造；虚构”意思，excuse是“借口；理由”，常出现在因不想做某事、掩盖错误等情况而编造理由的语境中，比如家庭里孩子因调皮闯祸后，可能会编造借口。二、段落内容及详解（先呈现原段落，再逐句详解）Afteralongstruggle,Idecidedtotaketheearliestflightbackhome.ItwasmidnightwhenIarrivedatthehospital.IrusheduptoGrandma’sroom.Seeingherpaleface,Iheldherhandswithtearsstreamingdownmycheeks.Grandma,forcingasmile,saidinatinyvoice,“IamOK.It’sapitythatIruinedyourtrip.”Ichoked,“No.Nothingcancomparewithyou.Wecanrestartthistripafteryourrecovery.”•逐句详解：Afteralongstruggle,Idecidedtotaketheearliestflightbackhome.翻译：经过长时间的挣扎后，我决定乘坐最早的航班回家。详解：alongstruggle体现内心纠结、权衡的过程，比如可能在外有事务，但因牵挂家人（这里结合后文是奶奶），经过思想斗争后选择回家，taketheearliestflight突出急切想回家的心情。ItwasmidnightwhenIarrivedatthehospital.翻译：我到达医院的时候是午夜。详解：交代到达时间是midnight（午夜），营造出一种静谧又带着焦急的氛围，也侧面体现赶路的急切，顾不上时间早晚。IrusheduptoGrandma’sroom.翻译：我冲向奶奶的病房。详解：rushupto生动展现出急切奔赴奶奶所在之处的动作，体现对奶奶的担忧、牵挂，想尽快见到奶奶的心情。Seeingherpaleface,Iheldherhandswithtearsstreamingdownmycheeks.翻译：看到她苍白的脸，我握住她的手，泪水顺着我的脸颊流下来。详解：Seeing...是现在分词作状语，体现看到奶奶状态后的即时反应；heldherhands是亲昵又带着安抚、心疼的动作；tearsstreaming...用独立主格展现因心疼、担忧等情绪而流泪的状态。Grandma,forcingasmile,saidinatinyvoice,“IamOK.It’sapitythatIruinedyourtrip.”翻译：奶奶勉强挤出一丝微笑，用微弱的声音说：“我没事。很遗憾我毁了你的旅行。”详解：forcingasmile体现奶奶身体不适仍想让“我”放心的心情，inatinyvoice因身体虚弱所以声音微弱；奶奶说的话体现出她的愧疚，觉得自己影响了“我”的行程。Ichoked,“No.Nothingcancomparewithyou.Wecanrestartthistripafteryourrecovery.”翻译：我哽咽着说：“不。没有什么能比得上你。等你康复后我们可以重新开启这次旅行。”详解：choked体现“我”因情绪激动（感动、心疼、对奶奶的重视等）而哽咽的状态；回应奶奶的愧疚，强调奶奶比旅行重要，康复后再旅行的话，展现家庭中爱的和解与对奶奶康复的期待。高考真题演练2025年6月新高考1卷（狗引发的兄弟风波）MywifeandIwantedtoshareournewhomewithfamilyandfriendsbyhostingasmallgatheringintheearlysummer.Shehadpreparedlotsofsnacks,whilemyjobwastohavethebackyardinorder.Therewasplentyofspaceforthekidstorunandplay.TherewasjustonethingIhadn’tcountedon:MybrotherchosetobringhisdogToby,a50-poundballoffire.Thoughfriendly,hecouldeasilyknockovermyniece’ssmallboysandmysix-month-oldgranddaughter.So,whenmybrothershowedup,IaskedhimtowatchTobyandkeephimoutside.Myplanwasworkingoutjustfine.Tobywasusinguphisenergybyrunningbackandforthinthebackyardandgivingthekidsplentyofroom.Unexpectedly,aftersupper,theweatherchanged.Itstartedtorainandeveryonewentindoors.Itwasanawkwardmoment.Ididn’twantTobytoberunningaroundinthehouse,andmybrotherwasn’thappywithdrivinghomewithawetdog.Eventually,mybrotherdecidedtoleaveratherthanforcetheissue.Afewdayspassed,andIhadn’theardanythingfrommybrother.Itextedhimandexpressedwishesforhimtocomeoutagain.Hisreplycameasasurprise—ashock,actually:“Notachance.”Clearly,hewasunhappyoverthewaywehadparted.Afterall,Ihadlefthimlittlechoice.Well,he’llgetoverit,Ireasoned.Twomonthspassed.MywifesuggestedIgetintouchwithmybrother,butIresisted,thinkingheshouldcallfirst.However,myconscience(良心)keptbotheringme.Itriedtoputmyselfinmybrother’sshoes.Hewasfacinghealthissuesandhiswifeofthirty-fiveyearshadpassedawayafewmonthsearlier.Tobywashisconstantcompanion,theonewhokepthimgoing.注意:(1)续写词数应为150个左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother’sdoor.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.IhadbeensofocusedonkeepingthepartyundercontrolthatIfailedtoconsiderhowimportantTobywastomybrotherduringthisdifficulttime.Mypridehadkeptmefromreachingout,andnowmonthshadpassedwithoutaproperconversation.Oneevening,Ipickedupthephoneandlefthimavoicemessage,apologizingformybehaviorandaskingifwecouldmeet.Tomyrelief,hecalledbackthenextday,andweagreedtogettogethersoon.Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother’sdoor.Heopeneditwithasurprisedsmile,andforamoment,neitherofusspoke.Thenwehugged—somethingwehadn’tdonesincebeforehiswifepassedaway.WesatontheporchwithTobyrestingbesideus,andIhandedhimtheboxofbiscuits.“Thankyou,”hesaidquietly.Wetalkedforhours,laughing,rememberingoldtimes,andslowlyrebuildingwhathadbeenlost.AsIwatchedTobygentlyresthisheadonmybrother’sleg,Iknewwewerefinallyonthepathtohealing.【解析】【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者因担心弟弟的狗Toby影响聚会，要求弟弟看好狗，后因天气变化导致弟弟提前离开并心生芥蒂。两个月后作者意识到自己的过错，主动带着妻子做的饼干登门道歉，最终兄弟俩和解的故事，展现了亲情中理解与包容的重要性。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“我意识到是我错了。”可知，第一段可描写作者反思自己在聚会上只顾控制局面，忽视了Toby对弟弟的重要性，因骄傲迟迟未联系弟弟，最终通过电话留言道歉并约定见面。②由第二段首句内容“带着妻子做的饼干，我来到了弟弟家门口。”可知，第二段可描写弟弟开门时的惊讶与沉默，兄弟俩拥抱和解，坐在门廊上谈心，看着Toby依偎在弟弟腿边，明白亲情修复的意义。2.续写线索：反思过错——电话留言道歉——约定见面——带饼干登门——拥抱沉默——谈心和解——领悟亲情3.词汇激活行为类①道歉：apologize/saysorry/makeanapology②拥抱：hug/embrace③重建：rebuild/restore/reconstruct情绪类：①宽慰：relief/comfort/satisfaction/ease②惊讶：surprised/shocked/astonished【点睛】[高分句型1]IhadbeensofocusedonkeepingthepartyundercontrolthatIfailedtoconsiderhowimportantTobywastomybrotherduringthisdifficulttime.（运用了“so...that...”引导结果状语从句以及how引导宾语从句）[高分句型2]Oneevening,Ipickedupthephoneandlefthimavoicemessage,apologizingformybehaviorandaskingifwecouldmeet.（运用了现在分词短语作状语以及if引导的宾语从句）[高分句型3]AsIwatchedTobygentlyresthisheadonmybrother’sleg,Iknewwewerefinallyonthepathtohealing.（运用了as引导时间状语从句以及省略that的宾语从句）2021年6月新高考卷（母亲节的惊喜）AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISEThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jemafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jefturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJeftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear！Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文1】Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.“Don’tpanic!”hehandedeachoneawettowel,helpingthemcleanthemessquickly.Afterthat,Jeffstammeredouttheirplan,hisfaceflushing.However,Fatherlaughed,“Soundsgreat!Icanteachyoutocook.”Atthis,JennaandJefalmostjumpedtotheirfeet,joyineyes.Underhiscarefulguidance,itdidn’ttakelongbeforetheFrenchtoastandchickenporridgewereready.Everythingsettled,Fatherleftthekitchen,promisingtokeeptheirsecret.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Meetingtheirsmilingeyes,Motherfeltconfuseduntiltheypresentedthebreakfastandsaid“HappyMother’sDay”.Mothergavethematighthug,“Unbelievable!Youcancook!It’sthebiggestsurpriseIhavereceived.”Herfacelitupwithhappiness.“Theyhaveknownhowtotakecareofothers.”Fathersaidinresponsetoherexcitement,winkingatJennaandJef.Theycouldn’thelpgiggling.Itwasasecretonlysharedbetweenthem.【范文2】Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Onelookandheknewwhattheywereupto.Seeingtheirdisappointedfaces,hetoldthemtocleanupthekitchenwhilehehelpedthemmakebreakfastforMother.Thetwinscheeredupanddidastold.Withinanhour,thekitchenwascleaned,andFatherhadmadesomeeggsandwichesandcookedsomeporridge.Thenhewentbacktobedquietly.Thetwinspreparedthebreakfasttrayandaddedacardtheyhadmade.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Theyhuggedherandshouted,“HappyMother’sDay,dearMummy!”Motherhuggedthetwins.Hereyeswidenedatthesightofthebreakfast.SheshookFatherwhowaspretendingtosleep.Hefakedastonishmentwhenhesawthebreakfast.Motherbitintoasandwichandsaiditwasthebestshehadevertasted.Jeffimmediatelywantedtohaveabite.Jennacaughtherfather’seyeandtheysmiledateachothersecretly.2021年6月浙江卷（少年打工记）Mydad,George,onlyhadaneighthgradeeducation.Aquietman,hedidn'tunderstandmyworldofschoolactivities.Fromage14,heworked.Andhisdad,Albert,tookthemoneymydadearnedandusedittopayfamilyexpenses.Ididn'treallyunderstandhisworldeither:Hewasalivestocktrucker,andlthoughtthatIwouldsurpass（超过）anythinghehadaccomplishedbythetimelwalkedacrossthestageathighschoolgraduation.Summersinthemid,70swerespentathomeshootingbaskets,hittingabaseball,orthrowingafootball,preparingformyfutureasaquarterbackonafootballteam.Inpoorweather,Ireadaboutsportsorpracticedmytrombone（长号）.ThesummerbeforemyeighthgradeIwasoneofagroupofboysthataneighboringfarmerhiredtoworkinhisfield.Heexplainedourbasictask,thetractorfiredupandwewereoff,ridingdownthefieldlookingforweedstospraywithchemicals.Afterashortway,thefarmerstoppedandpaintedataweedwhichwemissed.Thenwebeganagain.Thishappenedoverandover,butwesoonlearnedtoidentifydifferentgrasseslikecockleburs,lamb's-quarters,foxtails,andthekingofweeds,theprettypurplethistle.Itwastiringwork,butIlookedforwardtothepay,eventhoughIwasn'tsurehowmuchitwouldamountto.Athome,mydadsaid,"Ajob'sabigsteptogrowingup.I'mgladyouwillbecontributingtothehousehold."Mydad'swordsmademerealizethatmyearningmightnotbeminetodowithaswished.Mylaborslastedabouttwoweeks,andthefarmersaidtheremightbemorework,butIwasn'tinterested.Idecideditwasnotfairthatlhadtocontributemymoney.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Thepaydayarrivedatlast.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文1】Thepaydayarrivedatlast.IwasgladthatIfinallygotthepaymentafterworkinghardfortwoweeks.Whilewalkingbackhomewithanexcitedmind.Iconceivedmanyplansabouthowtodisposeofit.Ineededanewfootballbecausetheoldoneweplayedhadalreadywornout.Iintendedtopurchasemyfavoritechocolates.Uponapproachingthehouse,Inoticedmydadandmomstandingbesidetheoldtruck,lookingsadly.Itseemedasifsomethingunpleasanthappened.“Howmuchdowestillneedtopayforanewtruck?"askedmymother.“Threehundreddollars,butwejusthadtwohundredleft.”Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.Really,thetruckmydaddroveoftenbrokedownontheway,whichmademydadintrouble.Myparentshadintendedtobuyanewtruckbutcouldn'taffordit.Suddenly,IrealizedwhatIshoulddo.Steppingforward,Isaid,“Dad,hereiswhatIreceivedformywork.Ithinkitwouldhelpyoualittle.”AlittlesurprisedatwhatIsaid,mymomhuggedmetightly.Thatnight,beforeIwenttobed,lthoughtIwouldtellthefarmerthenextdaythatIwouldcontinuemywork,afteralllgrewup.【范文2】Thepaydayarrivedatlast.IwasdelightedtofinallygetthepaymentafterIworkedhardfortwoweeks.Onthewayhomefullofexcitement,Ithoughtabouthowtomakeuseofthe“huge”sumofmoney.“Ineededanewfootballinthefuture.”Iwhisperedtomyself.Approachingmyhouse,Inoticedmydadandmomstandingbesidetheoldtruckofmyfamily,lookingsad.Itseemedasifsomethingwronghadhappened.“Howmuchdowestillneedtopayforanewtruck?”askedmymother.“Eighthundreddollars,butwehadlittleleft.”Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.Iknewthattruckalwaysbrokedown,bringalotoftroubletomydad.Myparentshadintendedtobuyanewtruckbutcouldn’tgotenoughmoneytoaffordit.Suddenly,IrealizedwhatIshoulddo.Holdingthemoney,Isaid,“Dad,hereiswhatIgotformywork.Ihopeitwouldhelp.”SurprisedatwhatIdid,mymomhuggedmetightly.Thatnight,beforeIwenttobed,IdecidedtocontinuemyworkifIcouldbecauseIlearnedthetruemeaningofgrowingup.2017年11月浙江卷（和妈妈去旅行）AvacationwithmymotherIhadaninterestingchildhood:Itwasfilledwithsurprisesandamusements,allbecauseofmymother—loving,sweet,yetabsent-mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,David,myeight-year-oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriends.Whoknewifwe’deverseethemagain?Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andatentintothecarandbravelydroveoff.Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe’dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveler’schecksMomhadforgotten.DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdrivingwhileDadslept:“Youstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookout(放哨)whileIgo,andI’llstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo.”Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind:“Honey,wherearethekids?”“What?!Oh,Gosh…Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet.”Wewereneveractuallyleftbehindinastrangecity,butweweren’tabouttotakeanychances.Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforsometime,Momsuddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidn’twefindahousewithalikely-lookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous.Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea.Momnevercouldunderstandourobjections.Ifastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorstep,Momwouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinkseveryoneintheworldisasniceassheis.Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttown.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________