2025年中考考前冲刺必背英语作文学案(六)（含写作详解）

试卷第=page11页，共=sectionpages33页试卷第=page11页，共=sectionpages33页2025年中考考前冲刺必背英语作文（六）简介：《2025年中考考前冲刺必背英语作文》系列文档：中考英语写作备考的专业之选。精准贴合考纲：深度剖析中考英语写作考纲要求，涵盖记叙文、议论文、应用文等全题型，精准匹配考试场景，助力考生有的放矢地备考。专业范文引领：由资深英语教育专家精心编撰范文，语言地道、结构严谨，词汇与句式丰富多样，为考生提供高质量的写作范例，引领写作方向。深度写作指导：深入解析写作思路，精准点拨要点，标注亮点词汇与高分句型，助力考生领悟写作精髓，提升语言运用与表达能力。高效背诵积累：考前冲刺必备，篇幅精炼，便于考生快速背诵，积累实用词汇与句式，灵活运用到考试写作中，提高答题效率与质量。专业打造，助力考生在中考英语写作中脱颖而出，轻松斩获高分。一、书面表达1．外教Edward爱好美术，喜欢运动。他想在任教期满前再体验一次中国文化。假设你是李雷，请根据下面的要点，写一封邮件，邀请他到你家过周末。weekendplan内容要点参考词汇sportsordrawingplaybasketball,paint,...experienceChineseculturemakejiaozi,writewithaChinesebrush(毛笔),...注意：1.文中必须包含上表中的两个要点，可适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等相关信息；3.词数：不少于70词；开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。ToEdward@SubjectWeekendPlanHi,Edward!I’mLiLei.IhearthatyouwouldliketoexperiencemoreaboutChineseculturebeforegoingback.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiLei【答案】例文：Hi,Edward!I’mLiLei.IhearthatyouwouldliketoexperiencemoreaboutChineseculturebeforegoingback.Sowhynotcometomyhomefortheweekend?Ihaveagoodplan.Asbothofuslikesportsanddrawing,let’splaybasketballandpaintinthemorning.Afterthat,wecanpractisewritingwithaChinesebrushtogether.It’snoteasybutmakesuspeaceful.YoucanalsosensethebeautyofChinesecharacters.Toexperiencemore,wearegoingtomakejiaoziwhichisoneofthemosttraditionalfoodsinChina.Itmustbemeaningfultohavejiaozimadebyyourself.I’msureyouwillhavegreatfun.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiLei【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏内容提示中周末计划的信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，邀请外教Edward到家里过周末；第二步，具体阐述周末计划安排；第三步，书写总结，表达“希望外教到家里过周末”的愿望。[亮点词汇]①sensethebeautyof感受……的美②meaningful有意义的③lookforwardto期待[高分句型]①IhearthatyouwouldliketoexperiencemoreaboutChineseculturebeforegoingback.（that引导宾语从句）②Toexperiencemore,wearegoingtomakejiaoziwhichisoneofthemosttraditionalfoodsinChina.（不定式表目的；which引导定语从句修饰“jiaozi”）2．假如你是李磊，即将初三毕业。你的外国笔友Tom对你初中三年的学习和生活很感兴趣。请你结合以下问题回一封电子邮件：1.Whatdidyoulikebestaboutyourschoollife?2.Whatwasthebiggestproblemforyouasajuniorstudent?3.Whohelpedyoumost?Andhow?4.Whatdoyouthinkofyourschoollife?要求：1.参考以上问题，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3.文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4.词数：不少于70词（开头已经给出，但不计入总词数）。DearTom,I’mgoingtograduatefromjuniorhighschoo1.Iknowyou’reinterestedinhowIfeelaboutthosethreeyearsofschoolyear.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiLei【答案】范文：DearTom,I’mgoingtograduatefromjuniorhighschoo1.Iknowyou’reinterestedinhowIfeelaboutthosethreeyearsofschoolyear.I’mveryhappytotellyouaboutmyschoollife.IliketheFootballClubbestbecauseI’vemadequiteafewfriendsbyjoiningtheclub.Moreover,it’sanexcellentchancetolearnteamspirit.However,I’vealsometsomeproblemsoverthethreeyears.Thebiggestoneishowtoachieveabalancebetweenmyschoolworkandmyhobbies.WheneverI’mingreatneed,myEnglishteacheralwayscomestome,sosheisthepersonwhohashelpedmemostinthejuniorhighschool.Allinall,Ienjoymyschoollifebecauseit’scolorfulandmeaningful.Howaboutyourschoollife?Writetomesoon.Yours,LiLei【详解】[总体分析]题材：本文是一篇应用文；时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”的内容，可适当再添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。借用“就要初中毕业”引出重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“在学校生活中最喜欢的事情、自己最大的问题、谁帮助自己最多、怎么帮以及自己认为初中生活怎么样”等几个方面进行介绍。第三步，书写结语。表示希望收到对方的来信。[亮点词汇]①quiteafew相当多②between…and…两者之间③writetosb.给某人写信[高分句型]①IliketheFootballClubbestbecauseI’vemadequiteafewfriendsbyjoiningtheclub.（because引导的原因状语从句）②Thebiggestoneishowtoachieveabalancebetweenmyschoolworkandmyhobbies.（特殊疑问词+动词不定式结构）3．为配合我区开展“创建文明城区（buildacivilizedcounty）”活动，学校举办以“HowtoBehaveWell”为主题的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇参赛短文。提示：1.衣着整洁；2.保护环境；3.待人有礼，乐于助人；4.遵守交通规则；5.要求：1.词数80-120左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。HowtoBehaveWellInordertobuildacivilizedcounty,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：HowtoBehaveWellInordertobuildacivilizedcity,weshouldtryourbesttobehavewellintheactivities.It’sagoodhabittokeepourclothescleanandtidy.Ourcityshouldbekeptcleaneveryday.Don’tthrowlitterorspitabout.It’sgoodmannerstosay“Thankyou”and“Please”andsoon.Weshouldneversaydirtywords.Befriendlytoothersandalwaysreadytohelpthepeopleinneed.Forexample,whenweareonabus,weshouldofferourseatstotheoldandthewomenwithbabies.Weshouldalsoobeytrafficrules.Whenthetrafficlightsarered,weshouldstop.Andwe’dbetternottalkorlaughloudlyinpublic.Ifeveryonebehaveswell,ourcitywillbemorebeautifulandmoreattractive.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，点题，说明文章主题是介绍如何表现良好；第二步，按照提示所给内容介绍如何成为行为良好的人；第三步，呼吁大家成为一个行为良好的人，让城市更美丽。[亮点词汇]①tryone’sbest尽某人最大的努力②befriendlytosb.对某人很友好③bereadytodosth.乐意做某事④hadbetternotdosth.最好不做某事[高分句型]①It’sagoodhabittokeepourclothescleanandtidy.（it固定句式）②Forexample,whenweareonabus,weshouldofferourseatstotheoldandthewomenwithbabies.（when引导的时间状语从句）③Ifeveryonebehaveswell,ourcitywillbemorebeautifulandmoreattractive.（if引导的条件状语从句）4．在你的学校生活、家庭生活、社会活动及兴趣爱好等方面，一定发生过让你引以为豪的事情。请以“OneThingI’mProudof”为题，根据以下要求，用英语写一篇短文，记述一件令你感到自豪的事情。要求：1）介绍这件令你感到自豪的事情以及你感到自豪的原因；2）语言表达准确,语意通顺、连贯,书写工整、规范；3）词数100左右；4）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。OneThingI’mProudof__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文OneThingI’mProudofIstillrememberhowIbecamegoodatEnglish.EveryEnglishclassusedtobelikeabaddreamforme.Ididn’tunderstandmyteachermostofthetime.Oneday,theteachertalkedwithmeandgavemesomeusefuladvice.Ibegantoreviewnewwordsfromtimetotime,evenonthewaytoschool.Ireadaloudtopracticepronunciation.IwatchedEnglishvideosandkeptadiaryinEnglish.WheneverImetnewwords,Ilookedthemupinadictionary.IkeptusingEnglisheveryday.Practicemakesperfect.Abouttwomonthslater,Igotan“A”onthefinalexam.Iamreallyproudofthisexperiencebecauseithelpsmerealizethateveryonecanachievetheirgoalsthroughhardwork.【详解】［总体分析］①题材：本文是一篇话题写作；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，要求记叙让自己感到骄傲的一件事，写作时要紧扣题目，适当添加细节，使文章内容更加丰富。［写作步骤］第一步，开篇点题，说明记忆深刻的让自己骄傲的事；第二步，详细介绍令自己骄傲的事——是如何擅长英语的；第三步，表达这段经历给自己的感受。［亮点词汇］①usedtodo过去常常做……②lookup查阅③keepdoing持续做……［高分句型］①WheneverImetnewwords,Ilookedthemupinadictionary.（时间状语从句）②Iamreallyproudofthisexperiencebecauseithelpsmerealizethateveryonecanachievetheirgoalsthroughhardwork.（复合从句，because引导原因状语从句，realize后跟宾语从句）5．你校学生会正在筹办一个在线阅读社团。你想让更多人了解并加入社团。请根据以下表格提示内容，给你们学校的英文报写一篇短文，介绍开办社团的原因以及社团成员发展计划等。Reasonstoruntheclub①thewideuseofsmartphones②developpeople’sreadinginterestTheplanofincreasingmembersaskfriendstointroducetheclubtoothersandaskthemtojoin要求：1.参考表格提示内容，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3.文章不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4.词数：不少于70词。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Asweallknow,readingisbeneficialtous.Recently,ourschoolisplanningtorunanonlinereadingclub.Ontheonehand,withthewideuseofsmartphones,moreandmorepeoplelikereadingonline,soit’snecessarytorunanonlinereadingclub.Ontheotherhand,theonlinereadingclubcanalsodeveloppeople’sreadinginterest.Sohowcanweincreasemembers?Youcanaskfriendstointroducetheclubtoothersandaskthemtojoinit.Ifyoubecomeoneofthemembersoftheclub,youcanshareanddiscussyourideaswithothermembersanddevelopthehabitofreadingeveryday.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为介绍在线阅读社团；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“表格”中的提示要点，注意要点要齐全，文章不得出现你的任何真实信息。[写作步骤]第一步，开篇点题。表明“阅读对我们有益，我们学校正筹办一个在线阅读社团”，并介绍开办社团的原因；第二步，介绍社团成员发展计划；第三步，介绍成为社团成员的好处：与其他成员交流和讨论阅读想法和观点并能养成每天阅读的习惯。[亮点词汇]①bebeneficialto对……有益②ontheonehand...ontheotherhand...一方面……另一方面……③discuss...with...与……讨论④developthehabitof...养成……的习惯[高分句型]①It’snecessarytorunanonlinereadingclub.（It作形式主语）②Ifyoubecomeoneofthemembersoftheclub,youcanshareanddiscussyourideaswithothermembersanddevelopthehabitofreadingeveryday.（If引导条件状语从句）6．三年的初中生活即将结束，你一定有许多心里话想对父母、恩师、同学或者朋友说。某校广播站正在举行“我想对你说”为主题的征文活动，请根据以下问题提示，用英语完成征文。提示：(1)Whodoyouwanttosayto?(2)Whatwillyousaytohimorher?(3)Whydoyouwanttosayso?注意:1.词数:100词左右；2.文中不得出现真实姓名、班级等信息；3.文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。Iwanttosay“________”to________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Iwanttosay“Iloveyou”tomydadDad,youarethebestdadintheworld.Withyourcareandlove,Ihadthreehappyyearsofmyjuniorschoollife.AndtodayIjustwanttosay“Iloveyou”toyou.Dad,youarealwaystakingsogoodcareofmethatIgrowuphappilywithoutgettinghurt.WheneverIneedyourhelp,youwillbethere.Moreover,youalwaysencouragesmeintimesothatIcanregainconfidence.Aboveall,youareagoodlistener.Thankyouforlettingmebemyself.Itisyourhelp,encouragementandlisteningthatmakeagreatdifferencetome.Onthewaytomygrowth,youremainthesunshineallthetime,whichwarmsme,especiallywhenintrouble.Ihopethatoneday,justlikeyou,whenIhavechildrenofmyownIcanbetherockonwhichtheystand.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，突出写作重点；注意使用一些连接词，使得上下文逻辑连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，补充题目，点明想对谁说以及说什么；第二步，阐述为什么想说这句话，主要介绍这个人在成长路上对自己的帮助、爱护等；第三步，书写结语，表达自己的希望和决心。[亮点词汇]①takegoodcareof好好照顾②growup长大③encourage鼓励④sothat以便；所以⑤aboveall最重要的是，尤其是[高分句型]①Moreover,youalwaysencouragesmeintimesothatIcanregainconfidence.（sothat引导结果状语从句）②Itisyourhelp,encouragementandlisteningthatmakeagreatdifferencetome.（强调句）③Onthewaytomygrowth,youremainthesunshineallthetime,whichwarmsme,especiallywhenintrouble.（which引导非限制性定语从句）7．2022年“设计激活世遗”国际文创大赛作品征集活动即将开始。该活动面向全球征集以世界文化遗产为主题，兼具艺术性与实用性的文创产品。假设你是以下某一件文创产品的设计者，请你用英语为你的作品写一篇推介短文，简要介绍该产品并阐述其文化内涵。要求：（1）文中不得出现校名、人名等真实信息；（2）词数：110词左右；________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Fansarewidelyknown,amongwhichfoldingfansarethemostfamousandmostChinese.Inthefoldingfanculture,itcanbesaidthatitisthestandardconfigurationoffamousfamiliesandscholarlychildren.Today,Irecommendfoldingfans.Foldingfansareeasytocarrybecausetheyarefoldable.Theyarethemostpopularandalmosteveryonehasoneinancienttimes.Thefoldingfancanbeopenedandclosedfreely.Whenitisopened,itcanbeused.Whenitisclosed,itcanbehidden.Ithasthemeaningofadvancingandretreatingfreelyandbeingcarefree.Becausethefoldingfanisbothartisticandpractical,itcannotonlycoolthefan,butalsowatchandplay.Itsshapeissimpleandsmooth,easytocarry,hiddeninthesleeve,flyingbetweenthefingers,gentlyshakingthefanbone,whichisunspeakablyelegantandindifferent.Foldingfansisrefinedandelegant,withintegrity.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为产品推介；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：注意选择其中的一个作品作为自己的产品进行推介，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步：表明写作意图。从所给的产品中选择一件作为自己的产品，然后介绍该产品并阐述其文化内涵。第二步：具体阐述写作内容。首先提出自己要推介的产品——折扇；其次具体介绍折扇的文化内涵；接着介绍折扇的作用。第三步：书写结语。表示“折扇是儒雅风流，气节风骨”。[亮点词汇]①themostfamous最著名的②themeaningof……的含义③notonly…,butalso…不但……而且……

[高分句型]①Inthefoldingfanculture,itcanbesaidthatitisthestandardconfigurationoffamousfamiliesandscholarlychildren.（that引导的宾语从句）

②Foldingfansiseasytocarrybecausetheyarefoldable.（because引导的原因状语从句）

③Itsshapeissimpleandsmooth,easytocarry,hiddeninthesleeve,flyingbetweenthefingers,gentlyshakingthefanbone,whichisunspeakablyelegantandindifferent.（which引导的定语从句）8．初中三年，或兴奋，或失落，一切过往，皆为序章。毕业之际，学校将举办以“Sharing”为主题的演讲活动。请根据下面的要点提示，与一篇演讲稿：1.分享心情：高兴、激动、不舍；2.分享心得：在学习、人际交往、克服困难方面的心得；3.分享未来：暑假安排、未来目标。注意:1、文中不能出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息；2、词数在80-100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数。SharingGoodmorning,mydearteachersandfriends!Itismygreathonortomakeaspeechhere.Iwillgraduatefrommyschoolsoon.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sallformyspeech.Thankyouforlistening!【答案】例文SharingGoodmorning,mydearteachersandfriends!Itismygreathonortomakeaspeechhere.Iwillgraduatefrommyschoolsoon.It’shardtosayfarewelltoallofyou.Duringthepastthreeyears,Irealizethatweshouldtakestudyseriously.Formyself,Ialwaysworkhardinclass.Ilistentoteacherscarefullyandtakenotes.Ifinishhomeworkontime.Myclassmatesoftenhelpwithmyschoolwork.Withtheirhelp,Iovercomelotsofdifficultiesandbecomemuchbetter.Iwanttosaythankyoutoallthepeoplewhohavehelpedme.Thissummerholiday,Iplantovisitmygrandparentsinanothercity.Andinthefuture,I’llkeeponstudyinghardandsticktomydream.Iwillnevergiveuponmynewjourney.That’sallformyspeech.Thankyouforlistening!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为演讲稿；②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；第二步，介绍过去三年在学习、人际交往、克服困难方面的心得；第三步，分享暑假安排、未来目标。[亮点词汇]①takenote记笔记②ontime按时③keepondoingsth继续做某事④giveup放弃[高分句型]①It’shardtosayfarewelltoallofyou.（动词不定式作主语）②Iwanttosaythankyoutoallthepeoplewhohavehelpedme.（who引导定语从句）9．在我们的学习和生活中，能够全身心地投入到一件事情中去，享受做事情的过程，是一种幸福！但求耕耘，不问收获！某英文网站正在以”全身心投入（Devotion)”为主题的征文活动。假如你是慧洁，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，包含下列问题：1.Whatdidyoudevoteyourselfto?2.Howdidyoudoit?3.Whathaveyoulearntfromtheexperience?...注意：1.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；2.词数100词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。Devotion________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：Fiveyearsago,Istartedtodevotemyselftopainting,whichturnedouttobeoneofthemostimportantexperiencesinmylife.Oneday,Isawsomeofmyschoolmatespaintingintheartroom.Thecolorfulpicturescaughtmyattentionimmediately.IwassodrawntothebeautyinfrontofmethatIjoinedthePaintingClub.Afterthat,nomatterwhateverhappened,Istillwasontimetoeachartlessonandfinishedeachpaintingcarefully.Bydoingthis,IdevelopedmyabilityanddecidedthatIwantedtocompletelydevotemyselftopainting.NotonlydidIwincountlessawardsbutalsomypaintingjourneyhelpedmegrowintoabetterperson.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生要注意不要遗漏信息提示，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。表明自己全心投入到画画中去的观点。第二步，具体阐述写作内容。讲述自己是如何爱上绘画的以及自己的做法是怎样的。第三步，书写结语。简单地阐述自己在这次经历中的收获。[亮点词汇]①devoteoneselfto全身致力于②infrontof在……之前③ontime按时④notonly…butalso…不仅……而且……[高分句型]①Fiveyearsago,Istartedtodevotemyselftopainting,whichturnedouttobeoneofthemostimportantexperiencesinmylife.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）②NotonlydidIwincountlessawardsbutalsomypaintingjourneyhelpedmegrowintoabetterperson.（倒装句）10．“研学旅行”是以组织中小学生集体旅行的方式走出校园，以各种不同的形式亲近社会与自然而开展的研究性学习与旅行体验相结合的教育活动。每个学期学校都会组织类似活动，大部分学生会参加，他们认为通过研学活动可以增加不一样的体验，也有小部分学生不参加，他们认为学习时间过于紧张，不如在学校自习。对此，你的看法是什么？请根据以下要点提示为校刊写一篇英语短文。1、要点提示：①介绍一次你的研学旅行经历以及你的感受；②表明你对研学旅行活动的观点及