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第第页参考答案1.例文SunshineinmylifeAsthesayinggoes,“Rosesgiven,fragranceinhand.”Inourdailylife,wewillmeetwithalotoftroubles.However,I’velearnedthatevensmallactsofkindnesscanbringsunshineintoourlives.Onerainyafternoon,Isawanelderlyneighborstrugglingwithheavygroceries.Withoutthinking,Iofferedtohelpcarrythem.Shesmiledgratefully,andwetalkedbriefly.Hersimplewords,“Thankyou,dear.Youmademyday,”warmedmyheart.Thatexperiencetaughtmethattruehappinessoftencomesfromhelpingothers.Itmademerealizehowbeautifullifecanbewhenwesharekindness—likesunshinethatbrightensboththegiverandthereceiver.Now,Ialwaystrytobesomeone’ssunshine,too.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;②时态:时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时;③提示:围绕“生活中的阳光”展开,结合帮助邻居的经历,阐述善意之举能为生活带来温暖的感悟,注意字数要求。[写作步骤]第一步,引用谚语引出主题,点明微小的善举能为生活带来阳光;第二步,讲述一个雨天帮助年迈邻居提重物的具体经历;第三步,总结这次经历的感悟,表达自己也要成为他人生活中阳光的愿望。[亮点词汇]①actsofkindness善举②strugglewith吃力地做某事③warmone’sheart温暖某人的心[高分句型]①Withoutthinking,Iofferedtohelpcarrythem.(介词短语作伴随状语)②Itmademerealizehowbeautifullifecanbewhenwesharekindness—likesunshinethatbrightensboththegiverandthereceiver.(how引导的宾语从句)2.例文TherearemanydifferentformsoftraditionalChinesearts.Amongthem,paper-cuttingholdsaspecialplaceinmyheart.Paper-cutting,mainlymadeofredpaper,isknownforitsintricatepatterns—suchaspeoniesanddragons—thatsymbolizegoodluckandjoy.Lastsummer,Ijoinedacommunityclasstolearnit.Myfirstattemptturnedoutalopsidedbutterfly,buttheinstructorguidedmepatiently.Afterhoursofpractice,Ifinallymadeavividpeony.NowIoftencreatepaper-cutsforfamilygatherings;theyaddwarm,festivevibestoeveryoccasion.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主;
③提示:围绕选择一种中国传统艺术、描述其特点以及分享个人经历展开。[写作步骤]第一步:介绍所选艺术形式,描述其特点;第二步:讲述个人经历;第三步:表达对传统艺术的喜爱。[亮点词汇]①paper-cutting剪纸
②intricate复杂精美的
③lopsided不对称的[高分句型]①Paper-cutting,mainlymadeofredpaper,isknownforitsintricatepatterns—suchaspeoniesanddragons—thatsymbolizegoodluckandjoy.(运用了that引导的定语从句)3.例文TheBestChoiceI’veMadeLifeisfullofchoices,bigorsmall.Someareeasy,whileothersrequirecarefulthought.Lookingback,IfindthatthebestchoiceI’vemadeisjoiningtheschoolvolunteerteamlastyear.Lastterm,myclassmatesandInoticedthatthenursinghomenearourschoolneededhelp.ThoughIwasworriedaboutbalancingstudyandvolunteerwork,Idecidedtojointhem.EverySaturday,wevisitedtheelderly,cleanedtheirrooms,andsharedstorieswiththem.Once,anoldladynamedGrandmaLiwasill,andIstayedwithherallafternoon,readingherfavoritepoems.HersmileasIleftmademerealizehowmeaningfulthiswas.Thischoicehaschangedmealot.Ihavelearnedtobemorepatientandresponsible.Moreimportantly,Iunderstandthatsmallactsofkindnesscanbringhugewarmthtoothers.WheneverIseetheelderly’shappyfaces,I’msureitwasthebestchoiceI’veevermade.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;②时态:时态主要为“一般过去式”;③提示:文章应该包括所有提示要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。[写作步骤]第一步,通过概括性描述引出文章核心——“加入学校志愿者团队”是最佳选择;第二步,通过具体事例说明这个选择为何重要,突出行动和情感影响;第三步,阐述这一选择对“我”的个人成长和价值观的改变。[亮点词汇]①befullof充满②beworriedabout担心[高分句型]①Moreimportantly,Iunderstandthatsmallactsofkindnesscanbringhugewarmthtoothers.(宾语从句)②ThoughIwasworriedaboutbalancingstudyandvolunteerwork,Idecidedtojointhem.(though引导让步状语从句)4.例文:Hello,everyone!
I’mLiHuafromClass1,Grade9.TodayIwouldliketoshareastorythathappenedinmyclass.
Oneday,ourteacherannouncedthattherewouldbeamathtestthenextday.Everyonewasworried,exceptforTom.Hewasalwaysconfidentandhadasmileonhisface.Whentheteststarted,IfoundthequestionsverydifficultandIwasstuck.IlookedaroundandsawTomstillsmiling.Hissmilewaslikearayofsunshine,makingmefeellessnervous.Afterthetest,Iaskedhimhowhecouldbesocalm.Hesaid,“Asmilecanmakeeverythingbetter.Yousmile,youfeelmoreconfidentandyoucanthinkmoreclearly.”Hiswordsmademerealizethepowerofasmile.
Sincethen,Ihavetriedtosmilemoreoften.WhenImeetdifficulties,Ismileandtellmyselftobebrave.WhenIseemyclassmates,Ismiletoshowmyfriendliness.Asmilecanreallymakeadifference.
Doyouoftensmile?Thankyou!【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”;③提示:写作要点已给出,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,介绍自己将分享发生在班上的故事;第二步,具体阐述这个故事;第三步,表达自己的感受;第四步,书写结语。[亮点词汇]①exceptfor除了②lookaround环顾四周③sincethen从那以后④makeadifference产生影响[高分句型]①Oneday,ourteacherannouncedthattherewouldbeamathtestthenextday.(宾语从句)②WhenImeetdifficulties,Ismileandtellmyselftobebrave.(when引导的时间状语从句)5.Onepossibleversion:Asweallknow,scienceandtechnologyisdevelopingfasterandfaster.AIhaschangedourdailylifegreatly.Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,wecanseeallkindsofAlproductsinourdailylife.Forexample,smartphonescanmakeitmucheasiertoworkandstudywhilecleaningrobotscanhelpwithhousework.Theyallplayanimportantroleinourdailylife.However,asAItechnologyiswidelyused,manyworkersislosingtheirjobs.Also,somestudentsdependonAltoomuchsothattheylosetheirabilitytodothingsbythemselves.Allinall,justaseverycoinhasitstwosides,Alproductshaveadvantagesaswellasdisadvantages.IbelievethatifweuseAlproperly,itwillbringusmorecomfortablelifeinthefuture.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇议论文,讨论了AI对我们生活的影响;②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”,用于描述现状和观点;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生需要涵盖AI的好处、AI在生活中的应用、人类对AI过度依赖的影响以及个人看法,并适当运用句型表达观点。[写作步骤]第一步,表明写作意图。借用“科技发展日新月异,AI成为热门话题”来引出重点讨论的内容,即AI对我们生活的影响;第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“AI的好处、AI在生活中的应用(学习、生活等方面举2-3例)、人类对AI过度依赖的影响(举例说明)”几个方面重点介绍AI对我们生活的影响;第三步,书写结语。表达自己对AI的看法。[亮点词汇]①developfasterandfaster发展得越来越快②allkindsof各种各样的③playanimportantrolein在……中扮演重要角色④dependon依赖⑤loseone’sabilitytodosth.失去做某事的能力⑥aswellas也,和[高分句型]①Allinall,justaseverycoinhasitstwosides,Alproductshaveadvantagesaswellasdisadvantages.(justas引导方式状语从句)6.Onepossibleversion:Mr.MoneySmartoncetoldme,“Truewealthisn’twhatyoukeep,butwhatyougive.”ThischangedhowIseemoney.Igetmypocketmoneymainlyfromhelpingwithhouseworkorluckymoneyduringholidays.Atfirst,Ispentallmymoneycarelesslyonsnacksorgames.Lastmonth,Idecidedtodividemymoneyintothreeparts50%forsavings,30%fordailyneeds,and20%forcharity.IusedmysavingstobuyavaluableEnglishdictionary,anddonatedtheresttoachildren’scharity.Seeingthechildren’shappyfacesmademeprouderthaneverbefore!NowIunderstandthatmanagingmoneywiselybringsrealhappiness.Inthefuture,Iwillkeepthisgoodhabitandlearntomakemysavingsgrowevenmore.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;②时态:主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;③提示:文章要点已经给出,按照话题展开阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,说明零花钱来源;第二步,讲述理财经历;第三步,表达感受与未来目标。[亮点词汇]①luckymoney压岁钱②o...把……分成……③dailyneeds日常所需[高分句型]①Truewealthisn’twhatyoukeep,butwhatyougive.(表语从句)②NowIunderstandthatmanagingmoneywiselybringsrealhappiness.(宾语从句)7.例文HowtoManageYourWeightWisely
2025istheWeightManagementYear,andeveryoneshouldtakeactiontoimprovetheirhealth.Weightmanagementmattersbecauseithelpsusavoidillnesseslikediabetesandfeelmoreconfident.Herearemysuggestions:First,keepabalanceddiet.Eatmorevegetables,fruits,andhigh-fiberfoodsinsteadofsnacksfullofsugarandfat.Drinkingenoughwateralsohelpscontrolcalories.Second,exerciseforatleast30minuteseveryday.Activitieslikejoggingorplayingbasketballcanburnenergyandbuildmuscles.Third,followaregularschedule.Goingtobedbefore11p.m.andwakingupearlykeepsyourmetabolismworkingwell.Avoidstayinguplate,asitmayleadtoovereating.Lastly,staypositive.Ifyoufeelstressed,talktofriendsorwriteadiarytorelax.Acheerfulmindisthekeytobothphysicalandemotionalhealth.Let’sacttogether!Shareworkoutvideosonsocialmediatoinspirepeers.Smallstepsleadtobigchanges!【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;②时态:全文主要运用“一般现在时”;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,点明2025年体重管理年背景及体重管理的重要性;第二步,从键康饮食、坚持运动、规律作息、积极心态四方面撰写短文;第三步,结尾号召大家共同行动,营造积极向上的氛围,增强文章的感染力和号召力。[亮点词汇]①balanceddiet均衡饮食②high-fiberfoods高纤维食物③burnenergy燃烧能量④regularschedule规律作息[高分句型]①Goingtobedbefore11p.m.andwakingupearlykeepsyourmetabolismworkingwell.(动名词作主语)②Ifyoufeelstressed,talktofriendsorwriteadiarytorelax.(if引导条件状语从句)8.例文DiscoveringMyParents’HiddenLoveIusedtothinkthatmyparentsdidn’tcareaboutme.ButIhavediscoveredtheirhiddenloveonmywaytoschool.Everyday,afterbreakfast,myparentssaid,“Goodbye!”andwenttowork.Theydidn’tgivemealift.Myhomeisfarfrommyschool.Ithoughttheywouldn’tmeetmeatmyschoolgate.Buttomysurprise,everytimeIreachedtheschoolgate,Icouldseemyfatherormymotherstandingthere.Ipretendednottoseethemandhurriedtotheclassroom.Ofcourse,Inevertoldthemaboutit.Thissmallacttouchedmealot.Icametoknowthattheylovedme.IfeltsosorryforwhatIhaddonetothem.Idecidedtorespectthemandcommunicatewiththem.IamhappytofindthatIhavegrownup.Icanunderstandtheirlove.IwillsharemoretimewiththemandtellthemmoreaboutwhatIthink.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;②时态:时态综合使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,介绍父母隐藏的爱;第二步,介绍自己对于父母隐藏的爱的感受;第三步,介绍如何用行动回报父母的恩情。[亮点词汇]①careabout关心②farfrom远离③decidetodosth决定做某事④growup长大[高分句型]①Buttomysurprise,everytimeIreachedtheschoolgate,Icouldseemyfatherormymotherstandingthere.(时间状语从句)②IfeltsosorryforwhatIhaddonetothem.(宾语从句)9.范文Ourschooldidasurveyamongstudentslastweek,askingwhyweplaysports.Theresultsarequiteinteresting.Accordingtothesurvey,35%ofstudentsplaysportssimplytohavefun,makingitthemostpopularreason.Another30%exercisetokeepfit,while20%usesportsasawaytoreducestress.Only10%takepartinlearningnewskills,and5%haveotherreasons.Personally,Iplaysportsformultiplereasons.Likemanyclassmates,Ienjoytheexcitementofbasketballgameswithfriends—it’strulyfun!Atthesametime,asastudentfacingdailyhomeworkpressure,Ifindrunninghelpsclearmymind,justasthe20%stress-relieversreported.Mostimportantly,throughconsistentpractice,I’verealizedsportsaren’tjustabouthealthormood;theyteachteamworkandperseverance.Thesevaluablelessonsaren’tshowninthesurvey,butthey’rewhyI’llkeepplayingsportsforever.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;②时态:主要使用一般现在时;③提示:需包含调查结果的三条信息和个人看法,注意词数控制。[写作步骤]第一步,介绍调查结果;第二步,结合自身经历谈谈你对该问题的看法。[亮点词汇]①takepartin参与②consistentpractice持续练习③valuablelessons宝贵的经验[高分句型]Thesevaluablelessonsaren’tshowninthesurvey,butthey’rewhyI’llkeepplayingsportsforever.(表语从句)10.例文
Nowadays,withthepopularityofChinesestyle,manypeopleshowgreatinterestintraditionalChineseculture.Amongallthesewonderfulpartsofourculture,Chinesecalligraphyismyfavorite.
Calligraphyisamazingbecauseitusessimplethingslikeabrush,ink,paper,andaninkstone.Youcanwriteindifferentways.Somestyleslookwildandfree,whileothersareneatandformal.Everylineyoudrawshowsyourfeelings.WhenIwatchcalligrapherswrite,Ifeellikethey’redancingwiththebrush!
IstartedlearningcalligraphyinGrade6.Atfirst,itwassohard!Icouldn’tholdthebrushright,andmycharacterslookedmessy.Myteachersaid,“Don’tworry.Justpracticeslowlyandwatchhowthecharactersareshaped.”Daybyday,Ifoundjoyinwriting.ItwaslikeaquietgamewhereIlearnedtomakelinesandshapeslookbalanced.
Calligraphyisn’tjustahobbyforme.It’slikeakeytounderstandingChina’slonghistory.WhenIcopyoldpoems,IfeellikeI’mtalkingtopeoplefromthepast.Lastmonth,ItaughtmyAmericanfriendLilytowrite“peace.”Shewassoexcitedandsaid,“Thisislikedrawingstories!”Thatmademeproudtoshareourculture.
Inshort,calligraphyismorethaninkonpaper.It’saspecialgiftfromourancestors.Ihopemorepeoplewilltryitandhelpthisamazingartliveonforever!【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;②时态:时态为一般现在时和一般过去时;③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。[写作步骤]第一步,开篇点明随着中国风流行,引出自己最喜爱的中国传统文化——中国书法。第二步,阐述中国书法的魅力,包括书写工具和多样风格。第三步,讲述自己从六年级开始学习书法,克服困难并从中获得乐趣的过程。第四步,说明书法对自己的意义,不仅是爱好,更是了解中国历史的钥匙,还分享了教外国朋友写书法的经历。第五步,总结升华,强调书法的文化价值,呼吁更多人传承这门艺术。[亮点词汇]①showgreatinterestin对……表现出极大兴趣②lookwildandfree看起来狂放自由③findjoyin在……中找到乐趣④morethan不只是;超过[高分句型]①WhenIwatchcalligrapherswrite,Ifeellikethey’redancingwiththebrush!(when引导时间状语从句,feellike引导表语从句)②Calligraphyisn’tjustahobbyforme.It’slikeakeytounderstandingChina’slonghistory.(运用比喻的修辞手法,将书法比作了解中国历史的钥匙,凸显书法的文化意义)11.例文Dearfellows,Howtimeflies!I’mnowinthefinaltermofmyjuniorhighschool.Inthepastthreeyears,I’vehadagreattimeatschool.I’vemetlovelyfriendsandexcellentteachers.However,I’vealsometsomeproblems.Forexample,Iusedtohavetoomuchhomeworkandhadnotimeformyhobbies.I’vebeenworriedaboutit.Atthemoment,I’mbusygettingreadyforthehighschoolentranceexam.Here,I’vegotsomeadviceforyou.First,manageyourtimecarefullyanduseyourtimewisely.Second,trytokeepabalancebetweenstudyandplay.Finally,don’tgiveupandbelieveinyourself.I’msureyouwillenjoyyourschoollifeandachieveyourdreams.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;②时态:时态综合使用“一般现在时”,“现在完成时”和“一般将来时”;③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,介绍自己初三对学习生活的感受;第二步,介绍自己遇到的问题;第三步,具体给出建议。[亮点词汇]①hadagreattime玩得开心②Forexample例如③beworriedabout关心④keepabalance保持平衡[高分句型]①Forexample,Iusedtohavetoomuchhomeworkandhadnotimeformyhobbies.(并列结构)②I’msureyouwillenjoyyourschoollifeandachieveyourdreams.(宾语从句)12.例文Inmyhome,wehavesomestrictrules.Forexample,I’mnotallowedtocomebackhometoolate.Andmyparentspaytoomuchattentiontomyexamresults.Ihavetodosomeextraexercises.SometimesIdon’tthinktheyunderstandme.Ithinkit’snecessaryformetolistentomyparents.ButIshouldbeallowedtomakemyowndecisionsinsomeways.In
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