Unit+1+People+around+us+Period+5+Writing课件-2025-2026学年沪教版英语七年级下册

Unit1PeoplearoundusPeriod5Writing一、写作词组(汉译英)1.在我们社区里 ___________________2.帮忙 ___________________3.教某人做某事 ___________________4.在去……的路上 ___________________5.英语演讲比赛 ___________________inourcommunityhelpoutteachsb.todosth.onthewayto...EnglishspeakingcompetitionLearnhowtowritethepersonIlovefromothers’works;Learningobjectives

Learntowritedetailstosupportthetopic;Writinganarticleaboutapersonyoulike

写一篇关于你喜欢的人的文章Theschoolwebsiteiscallingforarticlesonthetopic“apersonIlike”.Whichpersonwouldyouwriteabout,andwhatareyougoingtowriteabouthim/her?

学校网站正在征集主题为“我喜欢的人”的文章。你想写哪一个人？你打算写关于他/她的什么内容。1WangYaoorganizedherideasbyaskingherselfsomequestions aboutthetopic.Lookatthequestionsandreadherarticle.aWhoamIgoingtowriteabout?(e.g,afamilymember/ateacher/someoneinthecommunity)bWhatishe/shelike?eWhatdoeshe/shedo?dWhatdoeshe/sheoftensay?eWhatdothinkofhim/her?characteristicsactionswordsWhatIlikeabouthim/her.1.范文及写作技巧学习MyniceneighbourYaoYuan

YaoYuanismyneighbourandschoolmate.Heiskindandhard-working.YaoYuanisveryactiveinourcommunity.Attheweekend,heoftenhelpsoutatalocalretirementhome.Heteachesretiredpeopletousecomputersandsmartphones.Hesays,“I’malwayshappytohelp!”WhopersonalityoftensayWritingtip1:Usesupportingdetailstoenrichyourarticle!举例证明观点！Writingtip2:Usewordstoenrichyourarticle!引用话语证明观点！YaoYuanalsouseshistimewisely.Everyday,hegetsupatsixandexercisesforhalfanhourbeforebreakfast.ThenhelistenstoEnglishprogrammesonthewaytoschool.HewontheschoolEnglishspeakingcompetitionlastyearYaoYuanisanamazingperson,andIwishIcouldbelikehim!MyopinionWritingtip1:Usesupportingdetailstoenrichyourarticle!举例证明观点！Writingtip3:Useadj.andexclamationtoshowyouropinion!使用形容词和感叹语气来表明评价/观点！1.CircletheadjectivesusedtodescribeYaoYuan.2.HowdoesWangYaoshowhowkindandhard-workingYaoYuanis?topicsentencesupportingdetails2.写作技巧训练Haveatry!MyteacherMrZhangisavery_____person.helpfulpatientbravefriendlyeasy-going…Write1or2examplestosupportthetopicandshareinclass.Haveatry!Write1or2examplestosupportthetopicandshareinclass.MyteacherMrZhangisaverypatientperson.Henevergetsangrywhenwemakemistakes.Instead,heencouragesustolearnfromthem.Heisalsocreative,andhisclassesarealwaysfulloffun.3.写作语言提升技巧Ilikemyfather.Heis1.73metrestall.Hehasshortblackhair.Hetakescareofourfamily.Heisstrictwithme.Heisabusyengineer.Hesometimesgoestoworkalldayandallnight.Heoftentellsjokes.Ourfamilyareoftenfulloffun.IalwayswatchTVandplaywithhim.Ilovemyfatherverymuch.Let’smakesomecomments!评一评AboutthelanguageAboutthelanguageIlikemyfather.Heisa1.73metrestall.Hehasshortblackhair.Hetakescareofourfamily.Heisstrictwithme.Ilikemyfather.Heisa1.73-metre-tallmanwithshortblackhair.Hetakescareofourfamily,andheisstrictwithme.Problem：句式单调！Solution：使用连词；

改变表达方式AboutthelanguageHeisabusyengineer.Hesometimesgoestoworkalldayandallnight.Heoftentellsjokes.Ourfamilyareoftenfulloffun.IalwayswatchTVandplaywithhim.Heisabusyengineer.Hesometimesgoestoworkalldayandallnight.Heoftentellsjokes,soourfamilyareoftenfulloffun.Whenheisfree,healwaysspendstimewatching

TVorplayinggameswithme.Solution：使用过渡词、句（时间、when，if）;

使用更多的词组，丰富语言表达。Canyougiveabetterending?Ilikemyfather.Heisa1.73-metre-tallmanwithshortblackhair.Hetakescareofourfamily,andheisstrictwithme.

Heisabusyengineer.Hesometimesneedtoworkalldayandallnight.Heoftentellsjokes,soourfamilyareoftenfulloffun.Intheweekend,/Whenheisfree,healwaysspendstimewithmewatchingTVorplayinggames.

Ilovemyfatherverymuch.Mydadishard-workingandhumorous.HelovesmeandIlovemygooddad!4.写作任务实战训练主题：人与社会——社会服务与人际关系

文体：说明文

人称：以_____________人称为主

时态：以_____________为主第三一般现在时Step1:题干细审Appearance:020103Characteristics:Hobbies:Step2:谋篇布局Comment:…Who:Step3:句子提升

常用的连接词：________________(不仅……而且……)高分表达：inone’sfreetime;what’smore;makesth.+adj.When/Wherever…If…encouragesb.todo…She….with…notonly...butalso...ThepersonIlike

ThepersonIlikeismybestfriendLily.Sheisatallgirl.Shehasbigeyesandshortblackhair.Shelikesplayingthepiano.Andshealsolikestoplaysoccerwhensheisnotbusy.

Lilyisverykindandpatient.SheisgoodatEnglish.WhenIhaveproblemswithmyEnglishhomework,shealwaysexplainseverythingtomepatiently.Andsheishelpful.Sheoftenhelpsherteachersandclassmatesafterschool.Sheisalsofunnyandoftenmakesmelaugh.

Lilyisanicegirl.Ihopewecanremainfriendsforever.基础版范文:ThepersonIlike

ThepersonIlikeismybestfriendLily.Sheisatallgirlwithbig,brighteyesandshortblackhair.Sheenjoysplayingthepi