外研八下英语Unit 4 Presenting ideas-Reflection《单元写作》课件

写传递帮助的故事单元写作写作维度本单元的写作项目是“写传递帮助的故事”。此类话题的书面表达一般涉及：（1）自身受到帮助的故事；（2）帮助别人的故事。写作支架/模版写传递帮助的故事开篇引出故事或事件具体描述故事或事件发生的经过表达感受（将帮助传递下去）黄金语料（从教材内外积累好句）开头段①Helpisimportantinourlife.Nowletmetellyouastoryabouthelpingothers.②Ithasbeentwoweekssinceyouwrotetome.I’mwritingtotellyouastoryaboutmyclassmate...③Whenyouseesomebodyisintrouble,whatshouldyoudo?Letmetellyouastory.④We’renotaloneinoursociety.Whenweareintrouble,someoneelsealwayscomestohelpus.中间段①Heofferedtohelptheoldmancrosstheroad.②Themanwasmovedanddecidedtohelpothers.③Hedecidedtopassonthehelp.④Whensomeoneelseisintrouble,Ishouldhelphim.⑤WiththehelpofZhangLan,theoldmancrossedtheroadsafely.结尾段①Ishouldlearnfromherandtrymybesttohelpothers.②Ithinkit’sourdutytopassonhelp.③Loveleadstolove,andsocreatesacircleofgoodwillandkindness.④Ithinkeveryoneshouldhelpthepeopleintrouble.经典例题（从经典例题学会审题）假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的朋友Peter用英文写一封邮件，向他讲述你班同学王红所做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。审体裁：应用文审人称：第三人称审时态：一般过去时审要点：事件经过与感受（1）上周四，王红在回家途中看到一位上年纪的盲人在街角徘徊。（2）王红与老人交流后，主动帮他过马路。（3）路上的司机都停下车耐心等候。（4）王红将老人安全地带过了马路。（5）你认为……参考词汇：盲人blindman徘徊wander要求：1.词数：80~100；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。DearPeter,Ithasbeentwoweekssinceyouwrotetome.I’mwritingtotellyouastoryaboutmyclassmateWangHong.LastThursday,_____________________________________Whatdoyouthinkofthestory?Waitingforyourreply!Yours,LiHua精彩范文[从教材内外积累好句]DearPeter,Ithasbeentwoweekssinceyouwrotetome.I’mwritingtotellyouastoryaboutmyclassmateWangHong.LastThursday,WangHongsawanelderlyblindmanwanderingaroundthestreetcorneronherwayhome.WangHongofferedtohelphimcrosstheroadaftertalkingwiththeoldman.Whentheycrossedtheroad,thedriversontheroadstoppedtheircarsandwaitedpatiently.WiththehelpofWangHong,theoldmancrossedtheroadsafely.IthinkWangHongisaverywarm-heartedandkindgirl.Icanneverforgetheractions.Ishouldlearnfromherandtrymybesttohelpothers.Whatdoyouthinkofthestory?Waitingforyourreply!Yours,LiHua①Withthehelpofherfamilyandfriends...（教材P53）②Icanneverforgetthosesoldiers...（教材P60）【亮点词块】

seesb.doingsth.看到某人在做某事onone’swayto...在某人去……的路上waitpatiently耐心地等待【高分句子】WiththehelpofWangHong,theoldmancrossedtheroadsafely.(withthehelpof在……的帮助下)在王红的帮助下，老人安全地过了马路。

Ishouldlearnfromherandtrymybesttohelpothers.(should情态动词)我应该向她学习，尽力去帮助他人。实战演练赠人玫瑰,手有余香。帮助别人自己会感到快乐，得到别人的帮助更是一种幸运。假设你校正举办以“我身边的好人好事”为主题的英语征文比赛，请根据以下内容提示，以“AnUnforgettableDay”为题用英语写一篇记叙文。内容提示：1.时间2.地点3.人物4.事件5.感受写作要求：1.内容必须包括所给内容提示，可适当发挥一至两点。2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和地名。3.不少于90词（题目不计入总词数）。AnUnforgettableDay_______________________________________________________范文参考AnUnforgettableDayAsthesayinggoes,“Rosesgiven,fragranceinhand.”Inourdailylife,itisnecessaryforustohelpthosewhoareinneedofhelp.Here’smyunforgettabledayofhelpingothers.MyclassmateJasonwasillinhospitallastweek.Imadeupmymindtohelphim.YesterdaywasSaturday,andmyclassmatesandIwenttoseehimtogether.Wegavehimsomeflowerstomakehimfeelgoodandhappy.JasonaskedmesomequestionsaboutstudyandIbroughthimmynotebooks.Iwaspatienttoanswerhisquestionsallthetime.Jasonwassomovedanddecidedtohelpotherslater.Ithink