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一模前专题练12第一节写作之建议信高考英语应用文书信体的写作,通常都是三段论(多数分为三段:首段、中段和尾段)。考生要想在未来的高考考场上夺取高分,笔者认为考生要力求做到:首段要先声夺人;中段要充实饱满;尾段要锦上添花。如何进行“三段”的写作我们要结合具体的写作题展开。一、首段:先声夺人——精准背景的切入(关切对方的需求)+鲜明态度的表达(传递自己的看法)+核心建议的抛出(一句点击重点)。(建议考生多多背诵建议信开头常用的套句)二、中段:充实饱满——具体建议+细节支撑+逻辑衔接+情感共鸣。二、尾段:锦上添花——强化建议价值(呼应首段)+传递真挚情感(期待/祝福)+礼貌规范收尾(符合书信礼仪)。(建议考生多多背诵建议信结尾常用的套句)1(江西省九校2025-2026学年高三上学期11月期中考试)假定你是李华,你校的英语学习报要组织一项活动以促进同学们口语表达能力的提高。英语报编辑提出英语歌曲比赛和英语演讲比赛两个选项供大家选择。请给你校英语报写一封邮件。内容包括:1.你的提议;2.说明理由。注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.首句已经给出不计入词数。Deareditor,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【详解】【导语】本篇属于应用文建议信的写作。要求考生以李华的身份给校英语报编辑写一封邮件,在英语歌曲比赛和演讲比赛之间做出选择并提出理由。【拓展要点】1.你的提议注意:在写“提议”前要交待写信的背景。①我是一名高三学生。得知《英语学习报》正在开展一项提升同学们英语口语的活动,我强烈推荐举办一场英语演讲比赛,我相信这对提升口语能力非常有帮助。IamaSenior3student.KnowingthatEnglishLearningNewspaperislaunchinganactivitytoimproveouroralEnglish,IstronglyrecommendholdinganEnglishspeechcontest,whichIbelievewouldbeveryhelpful.②作为高三学生,我了解到贵报正组织旨在提升英语口语的活动。在此,我强烈建议举办英语演讲比赛,我坚信它能更有效地助力大家提升口语水平。AsaSenior3student,I’velearnedthatyournewspaperisorganizinganactivityaimedatimprovingspokenEnglish.Here,IstronglyrecommendholdinganEnglishspeechcontest,whichIfirmlybelievecanmoreeffectivelyhelpeveryoneenhancetheiroralEnglishproficiency.③作为高三学生,我了解到贵报正组织旨在提升英语口语的活动。在此,我建议在英语演讲比赛中增设即兴演讲环节(impromptuspeechsegment)——给定话题准备3分钟后演讲,这样能提升同学们的临场(on-the-spot)口语表达技能。AsaSenior3student,I’velearnedthatyournewspaperisorganizinganactivityaimedatimprovingspokenEnglish.Here,IsuggestaddinganimpromptuspeechsegmenttotheEnglishspeechcontest——preparingfor3minutesafterreceivingthetopic),whichcanimprovestudents’on-the-spotoralexpressionskills.2.说明理由注意:需要有序叙述(至少两条理由)。①首先,筹备演讲需要学生自主撰写演讲稿,这能有效锻炼独立思考能力与语言架构能力。Firstofall,preparingforaspeechrequiresstudentstowritetheirowndrafts,whichfostersindependentthinkingandlanguageorganizationskills.更重要的是,英语歌曲演唱更侧重旋律把握与歌词记忆,对自主观点的组织和表达能力提升作用有限。Moreimportantly,singingfocusesonmelodyandmemorization,whichdoeslittletodeveloptheabilitytoorganizeandexpressone’sownideas.因此,我坚信英语演讲比赛能更高效地提升同学们的英语口语能力。Therefore,IamconvincedthataspeechcontestwouldimproveourspokenEnglishmoreeffectively.②一方面,准备演讲的过程要求学生自主构思(conceive)内容、组织语言,这能显著提升逻辑思维与提高你的表达能力。Ontheonehand,theprocessofpreparingforaspeechrequiresstudentstoconceivecontentandorganizelanguageindependently,whichcansignificantlyenhancelogicalthinkingandstrengthenyourexpressioncompetence.而另一方面,唱歌主要依赖对旋律和歌词的熟悉度,学生无需主动组织观点,难以真正提升口语表达的核心能力。However,ontheotherhand,singingmainlyreliesonfamiliaritywithmelodyandlyrics,andstudentsdonotneedtoactivelyorganizeideas,makingitdifficulttotrulyimprovethecoreskillsoforalexpression.所以,英语演讲比赛是提升口语能力的更优选择。Therefore,anEnglishspeechcontestisabetterchoiceforimprovingoralEnglishskills.3.必不可少的结尾套句①若你能考虑我的建议,我将不胜感激。期待你的早日回复。Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.②若你能考虑我的建议,我将不胜感激。期待尽快收到你的回复。Iwouldbeextremelygratefulifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.③我真诚地希望我的建议能对你大有帮助。若你有任何进一步的问题,欢迎随时联系我。Isincerelyhopemysuggestionswillbeofgreathelptoyou.Pleasefeelfreetocontactmeifyouhaveanyfurtherquestions.④若你能考虑我的提议,我将非常感激。我迫切期待尽快收到你的反馈。【答案】Deareditor,IamaSenior3student.KnowingthatEnglishLearningNewspaperislaunchinganactivitytoimproveouroralEnglish,IstronglyrecommendholdinganEnglishspeechcontest,whichIbelievewouldbeveryhelpful.Firstofall,preparingforaspeechrequiresstudentstowritetheirowndrafts,whichfostersindependentthinkingandlanguageorganizationskills.Moreimportantly,singingfocusesonmelodyandmemorization,whichdoeslittletodeveloptheabilitytoorganizeandexpressone’sownideas.Therefore,IamconvincedthataspeechcontestwouldimproveourspokenEnglishmoreeffectively.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【词汇积累】提升,提高:improve→enhance→promote→boost口语:oralEnglish→spokenEnglish建议:recommend→suggest→makeaproposal→putforwardaproposal有帮助的:helpful→beneficial旨在,目的是:aimat→beintendedto→bedesignedto话题:topic→theme→subject→issue表达能力:oralexpressionskills→expressioncompetence→communicativeability筹备,准备:preparefor→makepreparationsfor→getreadyfor撰写,起草:writedrafts→composescripts→draftspeeches锻炼,培养:foster→cultivate→develop独立思考:independentthinking→self-directedthinking语言架构:languageorganization→languagestructuring依赖,依靠:relyon→dependon→counton→bebasedon更有效的:moreeffective→moreefficient逻辑思维:logicalthinking→logicalreasoning→criticalthinking把……考虑:oconsideration→oaccount反馈:feedback→response→comment→reply2(2026届广东省广州市天河区高三一模)假如你是李华。为了提升同学们的英语口语,外教Mr.Smith打算组织一次英语戏剧表演比赛,现征集同学们的意见。请你给他写封邮件,表达你的看法和建议。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearMr.Smith,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【详解】【导语】本篇属于应用文建议信的写作。要求考生给外教Mr.Smith写封邮件,表达你对英语戏剧表演比赛的看法和建议。【拓展要点】1.你的看法①感谢你组织英语戏剧比赛以提升我们的英语口语水平。我认为这是个很棒的主意,因为它提供了一个真实的交流场景,让我们能够练习自信且流利地表达。ThankyoufororganizingtheEnglishdramacompetitiontoimproveourspokenEnglish.Ithinkit’sagreatidea,asitoffersarealcommunicationsituationtopracticespeakingconfidentlyandfluently.②非常感谢你策划这场英语戏剧比赛,这是个很棒的想法!它能让我们在模拟真实的情境中大胆开口,有效提升口语的流利度和表达自信,对口语学习帮助极大。ManythanksforplanningthisEnglishdramacompetition—it’sawonderfulplan!Itallowsustospeakboldlyinsimulatedreal-lifesituations,effectivelyenhancingouroralfluencyandexpressiveconfidence,whichishighlybeneficialforspokenEnglishlearning.③我真心觉得这场戏剧比赛是提升口语的绝佳方式!除了锻炼表达,它还能让我们在角色扮演中自然运用地道的(authentic)句型和词汇,同时培养肢体语言与口语的配合能力,让表达更生动。IsincerelybelievethisdramacompetitionisafantasticwaytoimprovespokenEnglish!Besidespracticingexpression,itenablesustonaturallyuseauthenticsentencepatternsandvocabularyinrole-playing,whiledevelopingtheabilitytocoordinatebodylanguagewithspeech,makingexpressionmorevivid.④感谢你搭建这个英语戏剧平台,我认为它不仅能帮我们克服开口恐惧、提升口语流畅度,还能通过团队合作加深对英语文化的理解,让口语学习更具趣味性和实用性。ThankyouforbuildingthisEnglishdramaplatform.Ithinkitcannotonlyhelpusovercomethefearofspeakingandimproveoralfluency,butalsodeepenourunderstandingofEnglishculturethroughteamwork,makingspokenEnglishlearningmoreinterestingandpractical.2.你的提议注意:需要有序叙述(至少两条提议)。①为了使得比赛更有效、更具包容性,我建议提供一系列难度各异的短剧剧本——比如给初学者准备简单对话类的剧本,给水平高的学习者准备情节驱动型剧本。Tomakeitmoreeffectiveandinclusive,Isuggestofferingavarietyofshortscriptsatdifferentdifficultylevels—likesimpledialoguesforbeginnersandplot-drivenonesforadvancedlearners.其次,允许我们以3-4人小组形式表演,能减轻紧张感,鼓励更多学生参与。Secondly,allowingustoperforminsmallgroupsmightreducenervousnessandencouragemorestudentstojoin.最后,设置小奖品奖励创意、团队协作或出色表现,能极大激励我们的积极性。Lastly,offeringsmallprizesforcreativity,teamwork,oroutstandingperformancecangreatlymotivateus.②为优化(optimize)比赛效果,我提议准备多种不同难度的短剧脚本:基础版适合口语入门的同学,包含常用句型;进阶版适合有一定基础的同学,增加复杂情节和表达。Tooptimizetheeffectofthecompetition,Iproposepreparingvariousshortdramascriptsofdifferentdifficultylevels:basicversionsforbeginnerswithcommonsentencepatterns,andadvancedversionsforstudentswithsomefoundation,featuringmorecomplexplotsandexpressions.此外,支持小组合作表演能降低个人压力,吸引更多人参与。Inaddition,supportinggroupperformancescanreducepersonalpressureandattractmoreparticipants.同时,为创意编排或默契团队设置小奖励,能提升大家的参与热情。Meanwhile,settingsmallrewardsforcreativeperformancedesignorunitedteamscanboosteveryone’senthusiasm.③为避免表演超时或紧张忘词,建议限定单组表演时长在5-8分钟。Toavoidoverlongperformancesorforgettinglinesduetonervousness,Isuggestlimitingeachgroup’sperformancetimeto5-8minutes;同时,提供基础道具(props),降低我们的准备难度。Meanwhile,providingbasicpropscanreducethedifficultyofourpreparation.此外,可设置“最佳口语表达奖”,专门奖励发音标准、表达流畅的同学,这能激励所有同学重视口语核心能力并稳步提升。Furthermore,settinga“MostOutstandingOralExpressionAward”tospecificallyrewardstudentswithstandardpronunciationandfluentexpressioncanencourageallclassmatestofocusoncoreoralskillsandmakesteadyprogress.3.必不可少的结尾套句①我相信这些调整会让这次活动既有趣又有益。期待这场精彩的比赛!Ibelievetheseadjustmentswillmaketheeventbothfunandbeneficial.Lookingforwardtothewonderfulcompetition!②我相信,您的精心组织加上这些小建议,会让这次比赛成为大家的美好体验。期待能在舞台上展现自己的才华!I’mconvincedthatyourcarefulorganizationandthesesmallsuggestionswillmakethecompetitionawonderfulexperienceforeveryone.Lookingforwardtoshowingmytalentonstage!③感谢您为我们提供如此好的提升英语口语的机会。我相信有了这些实用建议,这次比赛一定会大获成功!ThankyouforofferingussuchagreatchancetoimproveourspokenEnglish.I’msurethecompetitionwillbeabighitwiththesepracticaltips.④希望我的建议能有所帮助。愿这次英语戏剧比赛让我们所有人都收获快乐与成长!Ihopemysuggestionsarehelpful.MaytheEnglishdramacompetitionbefullofjoyandharvestforallofus!⑤有了这些调整,我相信比赛不仅会很有趣,还能帮助我们更自信地说英语。再次感谢您的辛勤付出!Withtheseadjustments,IbelievethecompetitionwillnotonlybefunbutalsohelpusspeakEnglishmoreconfidently.Thanksagainforyourhardwork!⑥期待这场精彩的英语戏剧表演。祝比赛圆满成功,所有参赛者都能有出色的表现!I’mlookingforwardtotheexcitingEnglishdramashow.Wishthecompetitionacompletesuccessandallparticipantsagreatperformance!⑦以上这些只是我的个人想法。我相信在您的指导下,这次比赛会成为每个学生难忘的经历!Thesesuggestionsabovearejustmypersonalideas.I’msurethatunderyourguidance,thecompetitionwillbeanunforgettableeventforeverystudent.【答案】DearMr.Smith,ThankyoufororganizingtheEnglishdramacompetitiontoimproveourspokenEnglish.Ithinkit’sagreatidea,asitoffersarealcommunicationsituationtopracticespeakingconfidentlyandfluently.Tomakeitmoreeffectiveandinclusive,Isuggestofferingavarietyofshortscriptsatdifferentdifficultylevels—likesimpledialoguesforbeginnersandplot-drivenonesforadvancedlearners.Secondly,allowingustoperforminsmallgroupsmightreducenervousnessandencouragemorestudentstojoin.Lastly,offeringsmallprizesforcreativity,teamwork,oroutstandingperformancecangreatlymotivateus.Ibelievetheseadjustmentswillmaketheeventbothfunandbeneficial.Lookingforwardtothewonderfulcompetition!Yourssincerely,LiHua【词汇积累】认为:think→believe→beconvincedthat提供:offer→provide→supply交流场景:communicationsituation→interactioncontext搭建:build→establish→setup绝佳方式:fantasticways→excellentmethods→perfectapproaches培养:develop→foster→cultivate配合:coordinate→match→cooperatewith生动:vivid→lively克服:overcome→getover团队合作:teamwork→groupcooperation加深理解:deepenunderstanding→enhance/strengthencomprehension趣味性:interesting→amusing→entertaining实用性:practical→functional有效的:effective→efficient→fruitful难度各异:differentdifficultylevels→variousdifficultygrades情节驱动型:plot-driven→storyline-driven表演:perform→putonaperformance减轻:reduce→lessen紧张感:nervousness→anxiety→tension鼓励/激励:encourage→motivate→inspire→stimulate小奖品:smallprizes→miniawards→smallrewards出色表现:outstandingperformance→excellentperformance→remarkableshow优化:optimize→improve→enhance常用句型:commonsentencepatterns→frequentlyusedsentencestructures进阶版:advancedversions→higher-leveleditions→intermediate-advancedversions复杂情节:complexplots→complicatedplots压力:pressure→stress→burden吸引:attract→appealto默契团队:unitedteams→harmoniousteams提升热情:boostenthusiasm→enhancepassion→arouseenthusiasm基础道具:basic→fundamental重视核心能力:focusoncoreskills→payattentiontocorecompetencies→emphasizekeyskills稳步提升:makesteadyprogress→makegradualprogress→advancesteadily精彩的:wonderful→exciting→splendid展现才华:showone’stalent→displayone’stalent机会:chance→opportunity→occasion实用建议:practicaltips→usefulsuggestions→practicaladvice大获成功:abighit→agreatsuccess→ahugetriumph个人想法:personalideas→personalopinions→myownthoughts指导:guidance→direction→instruction难忘的经历:unforgettableevent→memorableexperience→unforgettableexperience3(云南省部分学校2025-2026学年高三上学期11月联考)假定你是李华,你校将举办首届“英语配音大赛(EnglishDubbingCompetition)”活动,现面向全体学生征集活动方案相关建议。请你给校学生会的负责人Mike写一封建议信。内容包括:1.你的建议;2.你的理由。注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearMike,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【详解】【导语】本篇属于应用文建议信的写作。要求考生以学生李华的身份给校学生会负责人Mike写一封建议信,针对学校首届“英语配音大赛”活动征集方案相关建议这一事件,提出自己的建议并阐述理由。【拓展要点】1.写信背景①得知我校将举办首届英语配音比赛,我感到十分兴奋,想分享一些建议。IamexcitedtohearthatourschoolwillholdthefirstEnglishDubbingCompetitionandwouldliketosharesomesuggestions.②得知我校首届英语配音比赛即将举办,我很激动,想分享一些建议。Thrilledtoknowourschool’sfirstEnglishDubbingCompetitioniscoming,I’dliketosharesomesuggestions.③很高兴得知首届英语配音比赛,这对口语很有帮助。我有几点小建议。GladtolearnaboutthefirstEnglishDubbingCompetition—it’sgreatfororalEnglish.Ihavesomesmallsuggestions.④作为英语爱好者,我对配音比赛很期待,想分享一些想法。AsanEnglishlover,I’mlookingforwardtothedubbingcompetitionandwanttosharesomeideas.⑤很高兴得知我校将办首届英语配音比赛,我想给出一些实用建议。HappytohearourschoolwillholdthefirstEnglishDubbingCompetition.I’dliketogivesomepracticalsuggestions.2.你的建议及理由注意:需要有序叙述(至少两条建议并附理由)。①首先,可选取丰富多样的素材,不仅包括热门电影,还涵盖教育纪录片、经典动画,甚至著名演讲的短视频片段。这能满足不同学生的兴趣,让他们在练习英语的同时拓宽知识面。Forstarters,selectawiderangeofmaterials,includingnotonlypopularmoviesbutalsoeducationaldocumentaries,classiccartoons,andevenshortclipsfromfamousspeeches.Thiscaterstodifferentinterestsandbroadensstudents’knowledgewhiletheypracticeEnglish.此外,可设置团队形式的比赛,这能促进同学间的协作,让大家在发音、语调及情感表达方面取长补短,让活动更具吸引力。Moreover,setupteam-basedcompetitions.Theypromoteteamworkandallowstudentstolearnfromeachother’sstrengthsinpronunciation,intonation,andemotionalexpression,makingtheeventmoreengaging.②首先,将片段时长限制在1-3分钟,节省学生准备时间并减轻压力。Tobeginwith,limitcliplengthto1-3minutes,savingstudents’preparationtimeandreducespressure.其次,让2-3人组队,可帮助他们在发音和表达上互相学习。Secondly,letstudentsformteamsof2-3,whichcanhelpthemlearnfromeachotherinpronunciationandexpression.此外,增设现场投票,让活动更具互动性并活跃氛围。What’smore,addon-sitevoting,whichmakestheeventmoreinteractiveandbooststheatmosphere.③首先,提供电影、动画等推荐片段清单,帮助选择困难的学生。Tobeginwith,providealistofrecommendedclipslikemoviesandanimations.Ithelpsstudentswhofeelconfusedaboutchoosing.其次,邀请英语老师做简短点评,给出实用改进建议。Secondly,inviteEnglishteacherstogiveshortcomments.Theycanofferpracticalsuggestionsforimprovement.此外,允许使用简单道具,让表演更生动且更易传递情感。What’smore,allowsimpleprops.Itmakesperformancesmorevividandhelpsexpressemotionsbetter.④首先,按年级分组,适配学生不同英语水平,让比赛更公平。Tobeginwith,setgroupsbasedongrades.Itfitsstudents’differentEnglishlevelsandmakescompetitionfairer.其次,增设观众喝彩环节,增强表演者信心并烘托现场。Secondly,addaudiencecheeringsessions.Itenhancesperformers’confidenceandwarmsupthescene.此外,使用优质麦克风,保证音质清晰,助力学生展现真实配音水平。What’smore,usehigh-qualitymicrophones.Itensuresclearsoundandhelpsstudentsshowtheirrealdubbingskills.3.必不可少的结尾套句①我希望这些建议能让这次比赛对参赛同学而言既更有益又更有趣。Ihopetheseideascanmakethecontestmorebeneficialandfunforparticipants.②我真诚希望我的建议能有所帮助,也祝愿首届英语配音大赛圆满成功。Isincerelyhopemysuggestionswillbeuseful,andmaythefirstEnglishDubbingCompetitionbeagreatsuccess.③我相信这些建议能为比赛增添更多价值与乐趣。期待见证一场充满激情与创意的精彩活动!I’mconvincedtheseideascanaddmorevalueandfuntothecontest.Lookingforwardtowitnessingawonderfuleventfullofpassionandcreativity!④愿这次比赛不仅能提升同学们的英语能力,还能为他们带来美好的回忆。感谢你考虑我的建议!Maythecompetitionnotonlyimprovestudents’Englishskillsbutalsobringthemjoyfulmemories.Thankyoufortakingmysuggestionsintoconsideration!⑤我希望这些提议能让比赛更有意义、更具吸引力。祝愿英语配音大赛取得圆满成功,所有参赛同学都能收获满满!Ihopetheseproposalscanmakethecontestmoremeaningfulandappealing.WishtheEnglishDubbingCompetitionabrilliantsuccessandallparticipantsgainalot!【答案】DearMike,IamexcitedtohearthatourschoolwillholdthefirstEnglishDubbingCompetitionandwouldliketosharesomesuggestions.Forstarters,selectawiderangeofmaterials,includingnotonlypopularmoviesbutalsoeducationaldocumentaries,classiccartoons,andevenshortclipsfromfamousspeeches.Thiscaterstodifferentinterestsandbroadensstudents’knowledgewhiletheypracticeEnglish.Moreover,setupteam-basedcompetitions.Theypromoteteamworkandallowstudentstolearnfromeachother’sstrengthsinpronunciation,intonation,andemotionalexpression,makingtheeventmoreengaging.Ihopetheseideascanmakethecontestmorebeneficialandfunforparticipants.Yourssincerely,LiHua【词汇积累】兴奋的:excited→thrilled→glad→happy英语爱好者:Englishlover→Englishenthusiast→Englishfan选取:select→choose→pick丰富多样的:awiderangeof→diverse→various素材:materials→clips→resources热门电影:popularmovies→hitmovies→popularfilms满足:caterto→meet→satisfy兴趣:interests→hobbies→preferences拓宽知识面:broadenknowledge→expandhorizons→widenone’sknowledge取长补短:learnfromeachother’sstrengths→drawoneachother’sadvantages情感表达:emotionalexpression→expressionofemotions→affectivecommunication更具吸引力:moreengaging→moreappealing→moreattractive减轻压力:reducepressure→lessenburden简短点评:giveshortcomments→offerbriefremarks改进的建议:suggestionsforimprovement→adviceforimprovement→tipsforprogress传递情感:expressemotions→conveyfeelings按年级分组:setgroupsbasedongrades→divideintograde-basedgroups充满激情与创意:fullofpassionandcreativity→filledwithpassionandoriginality/enthusiasmandinnovation4(北京市朝阳区2025-2026学年高三上学期期中质量检测)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim的学校正在组织“校园文化建设”(ShapingSchoolCulture)的创意征集活动。Jim打算参加,为此发来邮件,就创意内容询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复。内容包括:1.你的建议;2.说明理由。注意:1.词数100左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearJim,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【详解】【导语】本篇属于应用文建议信的写作。要求考生给Jim回信,告诉他一些关于校园文化建设的建议。【拓展要点】1.写信背景①很高兴得知贵校正在举办“塑造校园文化”主题活动,且你正在征求我的意见。我很乐意与你分享我的建议。I’mgladtoknowyourschoolisorganizinganactivityon“ShapingSchoolCulture”andyou’reseekingmyadvice.I’dliketosharemyadvicewithyou.②得知你校正在发起“塑造校园文化”的创意征集活动,且你打算参与其中,我感到无比兴奋。我很乐意给你提供一些实用的建议。I’mabsolutelythrilledtohearthatyourschoolislaunchingacreativeideacollectionfor“ShapingSchoolCulture”andthatyou’replanningtoparticipate.It’smypleasuretoofferyousomepracticalsuggestions.③收到你的邮件,得知你在为贵校“塑造校园文化”活动的创意内容征求建议,我非常乐意与你分享我的想法。Havingreceivedyouremailaskingforadviceoncreativeideasforyourschool’s“ShapingSchoolCulture”activity,I’mmorethanhappytosharemythoughtswithyou.④得知你校高度重视“塑造校园文化”,且正在征集创意方案,真是倍儿棒。作为你的朋友,我很乐意为你的参与提供一些建议。It’swonderfultolearnthatyourschoolattachesgreatimportanceto“ShapingSchoolCulture”andiscallingforcreativeideas.Asyourfriend,I’dbegladtocontributesomesuggestionstoyourparticipation.2.你的建议+理由①首先,我的建议是设立“图书交换角”,学生们可以在这里分享并互换自己喜爱的书籍。这不仅能促进阅读风气的形成,还能推动文化交流——因为不同背景的书籍会带来多元视角,进而丰富校园文化内涵。Tobeginwith,mysuggestionistolauncha“BookExchangeCorner”,wherestudentscanshareandtradetheirfavoritebooks.Thisnotonlypromotesreadingbutalsoencouragesculturalexchangesasbooksfromdifferentbackgroundscanintroducediverseperspectives,whichcanenrichourcampusculture.
此外,定期组织“文化分享会”也将会大有助益:邀请学生或老师分享各自的文化体验,这类活动能加深我们对各类文化的理解,同时营造更具包容性的校园环境。Additionally,organizingregular“CulturalTalks”byinvitingstudentsorteacherstosharetheirculturalexperienceswouldbebeneficial.Suchtalkscandeepenourunderstandingofvariousculturesandfosteramoreinclusiveschoolenvironment.
②首先,我建议设立“校园多元文化角”,用以展示来自各国的传统服饰、手工艺品等。这有助于大家尊重文化差异。Firstly,Isuggestsettingupa“CampusMulticulturalCorner”todisplaytraditionalcostumes,handcrafts,etc.,fromvariouscountries.thishelpseveryonerespectculturaldifferences.此外,你们最好每月举办1-2场文化分享会,让学生们分享各类习俗或节日相关的故事。进而丰富校园生活,提供一个提升沟通能力的平台。Besides,you’dbetterhold1-2monthlyculturalsharingsessionsforstudentstosharecustomsorfestivalstories,whichcanenrichcampuslifeandofferaplatformtoenhancecommunicationskills.③首先,我建议建立“文化墙”,让学生们张贴带有简短背景说明的习俗画作。它能清晰展现多种文化,还能激发大家对不同传统的好奇。Tobeginwith,Isuggestbuildinga“CulturalWall”wherestudentspostdrawingsoftheircustomswithshortbackgroundnotes.Itclearlyshowsvariousculturesandsparkscuriosityaboutdifferenttraditions.此外,每月举办“传统美食日”——学生们带来自制美食并分享背后的故事,助力大家更好地了解文化、增进情谊。What’smore,holdmonthly“TraditionalFoodDays”—studentsbringhomemadedishesandsharetheirstories,helpingeveryoneunderstandculturesbetterandstrengthenbonds.最后但同样重要的是,组织“手工艺品交换活动”,学生们互换具有文化特色的手作,既能培养创造力,也加深他们的友谊。Lastbutnotleast,organizea“HandicraftExchange”wherestudentstradehandmadeculturalworks,whichcancultivatecreativityandstrengthentheirfriendship.④首先,我建议发起“校园文化徽章(CampusCultureBadge)”设计活动。学生们的作品能体现校园精神,我们还可以投票选出最受欢迎的徽章以提高参与度。Firstofall,Iadviselaunchinga“CampusCultureBadge”designactivity.Students’workscanreflectschoolspirit,andwecanvoteforthemostpopularonetoraiseparticipation.另外,每月举办“文化故事会”,邀请师生分享亲身经历,让校园生活更有意义,同时促进相互理解。Inaddition,holdmonthly“CulturalStorySessions”whereteachersandstudentssharepersonalexperiences,makingcampuslifemeaningfulandpromotingunderstanding.最后但同样重要的是,安排“多元文化电影展(MulticulturalFilmScreenings)”——观看来自不同国家的短片既能获得直接的文化体验,也能拓宽视野。Lastbutnotleast,arrange“MulticulturalFilmScreenings”—watchingshortfilmsfromdifferentcountriesoffersadirectculturalexperienceandbroadenshorizons.3.必不可少的结尾套句①希望这些想法能对你有所帮助。同时,我相信你的创意方案定会脱颖而出——祝你取得巨大成功!Ihopetheseideasarehelpfultoyou.Meanwhile,I’msureyourcreativeideawillstandout—wishyouagreatsuccess!②愿你的方案在活动中表现出色,如需更多支持,我随时都在!Hopeyourentryperformswellintheactivity,andI’mhereifyouneedmoresupport!③你的创意定会令人印象深刻。祝你好运!若你还有其他疑问,尽管向我咨询!Yourcreativeideaissuretobeimpressive—wishyougoodluck!Don’thesitatetoaskmeforadviceifyouhaveanyotherdoubts.【答案】DearJim,I’mgladtoknowyourschoolisorganizinganactivityon“ShapingSchoolCulture”andyou’reseekingmyadvice.I’dliketosharemyadvicewithyou.Tobeginwith,mysuggestionistolauncha“BookExchangeCorner”,wherestudentscanshareandtradetheirfavoritebooks.Thisnotonlypromotesreadingbutalsoencouragesculturalexchangesasbooksfromdifferentbackgroundscanintroducediverseperspectives,whichcanenrichourcampusculture.
Additionally,organizingregular“CulturalTalks”byinvitingstudentsorteacherstosharetheirculturalexperienceswouldbebeneficial.Suchtalkscandeepenourunderstandingofvariousculturesandfosteramoreinclusiveschoolenvironment.
Ihopetheseideasarehelpfultoyou.Meanwhile,I’msureyourcreativeideawillstandout—wishyouagreatsuccess!Yours,LiHua【词汇积累】塑造校园文化:ShapingSchoolCulture→BuildingCampusCulture→FosteringSchoolCulture参与:participate→takepartin→joinin→engagein高度重视:attachgreatimportanceto→paymuchattentionto创意方案:creativeideas→creativeproposals→innovativeplans→originalschemes设立:launch→setup→establish→found推动:encourage→promote→facilitate→boost文化交流:culturalexchanges→culturalcommunication→culturalinteraction→cross-culturalcommunication不同背景:differentbackgrounds→diversebackgrounds→variousbackgrounds→mixedbackgrounds多元视角:diverseperspectives→multipleviewpoints→variousoutlooks→differentstandpoints营造:foster→create→build→establish包容性的校园环境/氛围:inclusiveschoolenvironment→inclusivecampusatmosphere尊重文化差异:respectculturaldifferences→valueculturaldiversity节日相关的故事:festivalstories→festival-relatedstories→talesaboutfestivals提升沟通能力:enhancecommunicationskills→improvecommunicationabilities→boostcommunicativecompetence→strengthencommunicationskills张贴:post→putup→display简短背景说明:shortbackgroundnotes→briefbackgroundexplanations激发好奇:sparkscuriosity→arousesinterest→stimulatescuriosity自制美食:homemadedishes→home-cookedfood→self-mademeals→homemadecuisine增进情谊:strengthenbonds→enhancefriendships→deepenrelationships短片:shortfilms→shortmovies→filmclips→brieffilms拓宽视野:broadenshorizons→widensperspectives→expandsone’soutlook→broadensone’svision咨询:ask(sb.)foradvice→consultsb.→turntosb.foradvice5(吉林省吉林市2025-2026学年高三上学期第一次调研)假定你是李华,你的英国好友Chris所在学校的“MusicClub”和“SportsClub”正在招募(recruit)新成员,他想选择其中一个参加,请你给些建议,给他写一封邮件。内容包括:1.你的建议;2.说明理由。注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearChris,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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