读后续写- Davids run-高考英语一轮复习

读后续写-David'srun

试题呈现：

Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferent

primaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingthe

route（路线）throughthickevergreenforest.

IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothe

sidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsent

today.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn'twiththeotherchildren.He

hesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.

Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!

Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschool'scoachandaskedhimwhathad

happened."Iwasafraidthatkidsfromotherschoolswouldlaughathim,"he

explaineduncomfortably."Igavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlethimdecide."

Ibitbackmyfrustration（懊恼）.Iknewthecoachmeantwell-hethoughthewas

doingtherightthing.AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedto

findhimcomingtowardsme,hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswung

hisfeetfonvard.

Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglike

otherchildren,butatschoclhisclassmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healways

participatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.Thatwaswhy

noneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhe

cross-countryteam.Itjusttookhimlonger-that'sall.Davidhadnotmissedasingle

practice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,hedid

alwaysfinish.Asaspecialeducationteacherattheschool,Iwasfamiliarwiththe

challengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisstrongdetermination.

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Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.

IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.

范文1：

Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn/tlookatme.Hishead

Stooped,spiritlessandheseemedtobecrying4,Youknowtheteamneeds

you,don*tyou,David?rmywordsbrokethesiience/'Idon'twanttolet

themdown,sir.Icouldn'tlivewithmyselfhewhispered,stillhanginghis

headinfrustration.MYouknowthatbynotrunningyouwilldisappointthem

all?Don'tyouwanttorun?”Iasked°Morethananythingbutthe

conditionsaresodifficultandtheforestsodensethatI*mafraidIwon't

makeit,“heanswered,stilllookingattheground."You'llneverknowunless

youtry!HDavidstoodupandwalkedawaystillwithoutlookingatmea

determinedlookonhisface.

IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.The

startinggunfired,andtheywereoff.Alltherunnerscontestedforthelead

justwithDavidstrugglingtokeepup.Unluckilyheslippedover.Without

hesitation,hepickedhimselfupandploddedoffaftertheothersintotheforesttrail.I

waitedatthefinishingline.AlltherunnersracedinbutnosignofDavid.Oneofthe

boyssaidDavidhadfallenacoupleoftimes.Afteralongtime,Davidemergedfrom

theforest,mud-splattered,bruisedandclearlysuffering.Herefusedanyhelpand

madehiswaytothefinishline.Tohisastonishmentalltheotherrunnershadwaited

andapplaudedandcheeredhim.Thenforthefirsttimethatdayhisbigtoothysmile

brokeacrosshismud-streakedfaceashewassurroundedbyhisteam.

范文2：

Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.Afloodof

sympathyandsadnessemergedinmyheart.Itappedhimontheshoulder

andpulledhimintomyarm.Atthatmoment,Davidsclassmates

approachedhimandsaid,"Let'sruntogether^WhenDavidsawthem

memoriesofplayingandexercisingwiththemflashedintohismind.Thereis

nodenyingthattheya'lregardDavidastheirfriend.Davidlookedupatus

apleasurableandrelaxingsmileappearedatthecornersofhismouth.

IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.

Asthegunrangout,Davidandotherrunnersbegantorun.Hissmallbody

rockedfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.Hislegswere

tremblinganddropsofsweatwererunningdownhischeeks.Heheldhis

fists,grittedhisteethandkeptrunning.Whenhefinished,everyonecheered

forhimandexpressedtheirrespect.NeverhadIexpectedthatmyactscould

makesuchadifferencetohimAlampislightedandmyheartiswarmedas

well.

范文3

Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.Staringathis

shoesstiffly,Davidsatsilentlywithhisonehandrubbingtheother.knowyouwant

therun/Iputmypalmonhisback,pattedwithpatienceandpersuadedhim,“Isaw

youhavebeenpracticingsohardforitandIbelieveyoucandoit!"Hearingmy

confirmation,Davidbeamedwithpleasureandstumbledtowardsthestartingline.

IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeother

runners.Myfrustrationwasreplacedbysatisfaction."Onyourmark!,>Everyrunner

wasinhisposition,andthenrushedforwardlikeaflashafterhearingthestarting

pistol.OnlyDavidwasleftfarbehind.However,hesparednoefforttocatchupwith

theothers,dropsofsweatstreamingdownhischeeks,showingnosignofgivingup.

Tenminuteslaterthanthelastrunner,Davidreachedthefinishinglineandallthe

studentscheeredupforhim."That'smyboy!”Thecoachcamecloserandproudly

claimed.Davidshowedhisusualbigtoothysmile.

范文4：

Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.Hiseyes

deliberatelyavoidedmine,andhissmilealsodisappearedontheface,withhislimbs

shakingasweakasleaves."It"snottherealyou,David”,1brokethesilence,walked

tohisfront,holdinghisshouldersandcontinued,(rListen,David,youhaveprepared

somuchforthisrunning,ifyouwanttoquit,Iwillbeforyou."Davidburstinto

tears.Suddenly,agroupofkidsemergedaroundus.ThecameuptoDavid,and

embracedhimandshouted“Cheerup.David,youcandoit!”Davidstoppedcrying

andhisfacelitupbytheirencouragementTuringaround,hegavemeasmileand

walkedtothestartinglinewhereotherkidswerereadytostart.

IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeother

runners.Start!Allthekidsdisappearedswiftlylikelighteningintotheforest,leaving

Davidstaggeringandstrugglinghisstepsforward.Buthisbodywasuncontrollable,

soonhisheelswerebleeding,becausehisshoeswerewornout.Afteralongtime,

Davidwasstill100metersawayfromthefinishingline.Thepathwaslinedwiththe

coachandotherkidsintears,whowereinformedofthepoorbodyconditionofDavid.

Noonelaughedathim,butcheeredupandclappedforhim.Davidwastouchedand

hewassteppingforwardwhenhewastrippedbyabigrock."Heisbleeding!”cried

theotherkids."David!David!David!nthevoicebecamelouderandlouderuntilDavid

draggedhislegsurpassingtheterminal.Hedidit,withhisbeliefandencouragement

andlovefromeveryonepresent.Itwasamiracle.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewould

notbeabsentforever.

范文5：

Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn,tlookatme.Iquietlysaid,

°David,ifyoudon'twanttoruntoday,noonewillforceyouto.Butifyou'renot

runningbecauseyou'reafraidsomeoneisgoingtolaugh,thafsnotagoodenough

reason.Therewillalwaysbesomeonewhowilllaughandsaymeanthings.Thereare

peoplelikethat,andthat'sjustthewayitis.Therealquestioniswhetheryouare

goingtoletthosefewpeoplestopyoufromdoingsomethingyoureallywantto.Are

yougoingtoletthemgetinyourway?Ifyoureallywanttorun,David,thenyou

run!nIheldmybreathasDavidtookthisin.Thenhelookedatthefieldandsaidwith

afiercebutquietdetermination/Letmetry.”

IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.With

thegunsounding,Davidlurchedforwardwiththeotherkids.Hardlyhadherunafew

metresbeforehetrippedandfellflatontheground.Myheartsank.AsIshouted

encouragement,othervoicestookupthecall,evenkidsfromotherschools,who

quicklyunderstoodhiscourage.Hearinghisnamecalled,Davidsoonpickedhimself

upandcontinued.Timepassingquickly,therunnersfinishedoneafteranother.

Finally,asmallfigureemergedonthehomestretch.Withhisbodyrocking,David

raisedhisarmsintriumphtowildcheersandapplauseashecrossedthefinishline.It

wasanamazingmomentwhenIfeltthepowerofcourage,goodwilland

perseverance.

范文6：

Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.Hisnervousness

anddepressionwereobvious,spreadingacrosshisface.1pattedhimgentlyonthe

shoulderandsaid,“Iknowyouloverunning,whichhasbecomepartofyour

life.HDavidnodded,withhislipsquivering."Lifeisanuncertainrun.Wecanchooseto

embraceandenjoyit,joyfullylearningfromexperiencesalongtheway;orwecan

choosetoquitduetothefearofbeingmocked.Butthelatterrobsusofanygrowthor

happiness.Whynottakethechallengeandenjoyit,mybraveboy!Icontinued.With

thesewords,Istrokedhishair,waitingforhispositivereply.Seeminglyencouraged,

Davidraisedhishead,lookedintomyeyesandrespondeddeterminedly/*!willnever

quit!”

IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.Asthe

startinggunblasted,alltherunnersranofftowardstheforest.Davidwasrunning

withheelskickingsideways,whenhestumbledoverastoneandfell.Heartinthroat,

1yelledencouragementathim.Soon,morepeopleevenfromotherschoolsjoinedas

iftheyknewthehardshipandcourageDavidhadinhisattempt.Cheeredbythe

crowd,Davidcreptupandpersistedonthecountrytrails.Twohourspassing,the

runnersfinishedsuccessively.WefinallyspottedDavidploddingdownthelastpart,

whenrapturouscheersandapplauseresounded.Davidwavedandfinishedtherace

withexcitedtears.Davidprovedthatitdidn'tmatterhowslowlyheranaslongashe

neverstopped.

范文7：

Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.1askedtenderly,

"Youdesiretotry,don'tyou?”Davidnodded,stillloweringhishead.Icontinued,**But

youfearbeingmockedbyotherpeers.Ihavebeenimpressedbyyourlovefor

running,letaloneyourcommitmenttoit.So,focusonwhatyouloveandfulfilit

regardlessofanythingoranybodythatgetsinyourway."Davidlookedintomyeyes,

withhisbigtoothysmilecomingback.havedecidedtorun.whesaidinadetermined

voice.Ipattedgentlyonthebackandwishedhimgoodluck!

IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.Asthe

gunfired,alltheparticipantsscrambledtowardstheforest.Davidwasrunningwith

heelskickingouttothesideandhisbodyrocking,makinghimveryspecial.Low

murmurspervadedonthesideline.Gradually,Davidlaggedbehindandwas

struggling.Ipassionatelyshouted,“Comeon,David.YouarethebesCUnexpectedly,

themurmursofthecrowdstransformedintoencouragement.Davidrefreshed

himselfandmadeeveryendeavortomoveon.Eventually,Davidfinishedtherace

withroaringapplause.IwasgladthatDavidfoundconfidencebackandproudofhis

courageandperseverance!

范文8：

Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.Staringat

David,"Younevermissedasinglepractice,andIfirmlybelievedthatyouwillfinish

yourrunifyoubravelyfacethischallenge/*!saidgently.Hetookarelaxedbreath.

“Thereasonwhyyoushouldshowupisthatyouhavemadefullpreparationsforthis

event",Iaddedinasincerevoice.Atmywords,withtearsrollingdownhischeeks,

Davidturnedtomeandfirmlyexpressedhisdeterminationtofinishthe

cross-countryrun.

IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.The

racestarted.Itwasdifficultfortheyoungtorunsolongadistance,nottomention

Davidwithabraindisease.However,Davidkeptrunningashepracticedagainand

again,thoughhewasoutofbreathwithinafewkilometers.Healwayspickedhimself

upagainandcontinuedhisrunning.Toourdelight,Davidreachedthefinishlineand

wonamedalforhispersistence.Itwashisstrongdeterminationthatmadea

difference.

范文9：

Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.Infrontofme

washisdroopingheadwithhiseyesfixedonthefloor.Seeingthefrustratedboy,Ifelt

myheartwasbrokenanddecidedtochangethesituation.Igentlystrokedhishair,

heldhishandtightly,andcomfortedhiminasoftvoice,^Justbelieveyourselfandgo

forit!Everyonewillcheerforyou."OncehearingwhatIsaid,Davidslowlylookedat

mewithhiswateryeyes,murmuring,^Really?",whichwasrespondedtowithanod

ofencouragement.Itseemedthatacurrentofstrengthranthroughhim.Hewrapped

hisarmsaroundmeandtookadeepbreath,thenstoodupandheadedforthe

competitionvenue.

IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeother

runners.Awkwardlyashewalked,hemarchedforwarddeterminedly.Whentherun

started,hepattedhischeeksslightlyandbeganhisrunning.Thoughhewasgradually

leftbehindbyotherrunners,hekeptmovingforward.Astimewentby,everyother

runnerhadarrivedatthefinishingline,andIwasstillwaitingforhimwhenhe

eventuallyappeared.Puffingandpanting,hedashedthroughthefinishinglinewith

thunderousapplauseandcheers.Lookingathisbigtoothysmileflashingacrosshis

face,Iwassoproudofhim.Itwashisconfidenceanddeterminationthatmadehima

perfectrunner.

范文10：

Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.Withsilence

hangingheavilyintheair,heduckeddownhishead.Itseemedthathewantedtojoin

therunfromthebottomofhisheart.SoIpattedhimontheshoulderandsaid,"You

wanttorun,right?,fUpsetandhesitant,henoddedslowly.Toencouragehim,I

whisperedtohimthathewoulddefinitelydoagoodjobsincehehadpracticedso

hard.Hearingthesewords,heraisedhishead,withhiseyeswet.Igavehimabig

thumb-up,whichmadehimgatherhiscourageanddecidedtorun.Hewipedouthis

tearsandstoodup,straighteninghissmallbodyandmovingthroughthecrowds.

IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.When

hesethisfootontheline,Iwasworriedthatotherchildrenwouldlaughathim,since

somanykidsgazedathimwithcuriouseyes.However,sodeterminedwasDavidthat

heignoredeverythingaroundhim,onlywatchingforward.Whenthewhistlerang,he

triedhisutmosttorunasfastaspossible.Movedbyhisspirit,Ifollowedhimand

cheeredhimupalongtheway.Thoughthecross-countryrunwastough,hemadeit.

Tooursurprise,whenhecrossedthefinishingline,thecrowdsburstintoapplause.

Davidgavemeabearhug,revealinghisusualtoothysmile.ItwasthenthatIrealized

thatdespitehisdisease,noonelaughedatsuchabeautifulsoul,sinceheshonelikea

diamondwithdeterminationrootedinhisheart.

故事原结尾

Wesatdowntogetheronsomesteps,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.I

quietlysaid,"David,ifyoudon'twanttoruntoday,nooneisgoingtomakeyou.Butif

you'renotrunningbecauseyou'reafraidsomeoneisgoingtolaugh,thafsnotagood

enoughreason.Therewillalwaysbesomeonewhowilllaughandsaymeanthings.

Therearepeoplelikethat,andthafsjustthewayitis.Therealquestioniswhether

youaregoingtoletthosefewpeoplestopyoufromdoingsomethingyoureallywant

todo.Areyougoingtoletthemgetinyourway?Ifyoureallywanttorun,David,then

yourun!”IheldmybreathasDavidtookthisin.Thenhelookedatthefieldandsaid

withafiercebutquietdetermination,,rrmgonnarun.”

IstoodonthesidelineswiththeexcitedcrowdasDavidmoveduptothe

startingline.Thestartefsgunsounded,andDavidlurchedforwardwiththeother

children.ButhehadonlygoneafewmetresbeforeheTrippedandfellflatonthe

ground.Myheartsank.AsIstartedtoshoutencouragement,othervoicesaroundme

tookupthecall."ComeonDavid,youcandoit!”Iknewwithoutevenlookingthat

thesevoiceswerenotjustthoseofhisschoolmates.Theycamefromparents,

teachersandkidsfromotherschools,whoquicklyunderstoodthecourageittook

Davidtoattemptthisrun.Davidpickedhimselfupandstartedagain.Alltheother

runnershaddisappearedoverthehill.Butitdidn'tmatter.ThiswasDavid'srun.He

hadworkedforit,andhewouldn'tgiveup!Aslongashewasinsight,Davidheard

peoplecallinghisname.Iwaitedanxiouslybythefinishlineasthefirstrunners

completedthetwo-and-a-halfkilometresofforesttrails.Soonalloftheotherrunners

hadcomeinandanotherracehadbegun.StillnoDavid!Istartedtofeelsick.HadI

donethewrongthing?Hehadn'tcheckedoutthetrailwiththeotherrunners.Could

hehavebecomelost?Finally,asmallfigureemergedfromtheforest.Withheels

kickingouttothesideandhisbodyrockingwiththerhythmofhisrun,David

ploddedtowardthehomestretch.Heraisedhisarmsintriumphashecrossedthe

finishlinetowildcheersandapplause.Then,whenDavid'scoachslappedhimonthe

backandsaidproudly,°Goodjob,David!”hecaughtmyeye,flashedmeatoothygrin

andsaid,**Thatwaseasy!”Attheendoftheyear,thetrackcoachaskedtheclassto

nominateoneoftheirclassmatesfortheathleticawardfortheirgrade.Without

hesitationthewholeclassvotedforDavid,sayingthatnoonehadworkedharderfor

thatawardthanhe.ltwasanamazingmomentatouryear-endassembly.The

auditoriumresoundedwithcheeringandapplausewhenDavidcameforwardand

receivedhisawardforoutstandingathleticachievement—fromhisbeamingcoach.

原文本：ChickenSoupfortheCanadianSoul

Perseveranceisnotalongrace;itismanyshortracesoneafteranother.

-WalterElliot

Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferent

elementaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownof100-MileHouse,British

Columbia,werewarmingupandwalkingtheroutethroughthickevergreenforest.In

thefiveyearsIhadbeenteachingatHorseLakeElementarySchool,Ihadcometo

respectthetoughpioneerspiritofthelocalpeople.Namedforitslocation100miles

fromLillooet,(milezeroontheoldCaribooGoldRushTrail),anddottedwithactive

cattleranches,100-MileHousesometimesseemedlikeaplaceoutoftime,withits

horses,cowboysandcattledrives.Atanelevationof930metres,100-MileHouseisa

communityinwhichspringcomeslate,snowcomesearlyandwintersportsarea

localpassion.

ItwasnowlateMayandthegroundhadonlyjustdriedenoughfromthemelting

snowtoholdtherace.IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,standingbyhimself

offtothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold,withfrecklesandunrulyred

hair.Buthisusualbigtoothygrinwasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhim

whyhewasn'twiththeotherchildren.Theonlyresponsehegavemewashehad

decidednottorun.

Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!

IquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschooFsphysicaleducationteacherand

askedhimwhathadhappened."Iwasworriedtheotherkidswouldlaughathim,"he

explaineduncomfortably.4,Ithoughttheremightbeafightifourkidstriedtodefend

him.1gavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlethimdecide?

Ibitbackmyfrustration.Iknewthecoachmeantwellandsincerelythoughthe

wasdoingtherightthing.AfterbeingassuredDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturned

tofindhimcomingtowardsme,hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswung

hisfeetforward,awkwardlywalkingonhistoes.

David'scerebralpalsypreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeother

children,butatschoolhispeersthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healways

participatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.Whichiswhynone

ofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecross-country

team.Itjusttookhimlonger,thafsall.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,and

althoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren——hedidalways

finish.Hehadstubbornlyrunatotaloftwenty-threekilometresinpracticerunsto

prepareforthatday'stwo-and-a-half-kilometre(1.5-mile)run,andhehadaskedme

tocomeandwatch.Asaspecialeducationteacherattheschool,Iwasfamiliarwith

thechallengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisdoggeddetermination.

Wesatdowntogetheronsomesteps,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.Iquietly

said,“David,ifyoudon'twanttoruntoday,nooneisgoingtomakeyou.Butifyou're

notrunningbecauseyou*reafraidsomeoneisgoingtolaugh,thafsnotagood

enoughreason.Therewillalwaysbesomeonewhowilllaughandsaymeanthings.

Therearepeoplelikethat,andthat'sjustthewayitis.Therealquestioniswhether

youaregoingtoletthosefewpeoplestopyoufro