Unit 7 作文学案 人教版英语七年级上册

Unit7HappyBirthday!作文学案【写作导引】本单元以“HappyBirthday!”为话题，属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“生活仪式与情感表达”这一主题群。单元核心聚焦“谈论生日庆祝方式、用序数词表达日期、用英语进行购物交流、探索生日的意义”，常见写作角度包括：①描述自己的生日庆祝过程；②为生日派对购物的经历；③分享一次有意义的生日体验。单元语法重点为序数词（表示日期顺序）及Wh-疑问句复习（what,when,howmany等），思维技能侧重“清晰描述生日活动，礼貌表达购物需求”，阅读策略聚焦“从文本中提取生日日期、庆祝方式、礼物等关键信息”。【单元话题】“生日是爱的纪念”。请用英语写一篇短文，描述你是如何庆祝生日的，词数80左右，题目为“HowICelebrateMyBirthday”。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】HowICelebrateMyBirthdayMybirthdayison15thSeptember.Ilookforwardtoiteveryyear.Onthatday,myparentsusuallybuymeabigbirthdaycakewithcandles.Iinvitemybestfriendstomyhome.Wesingthe“HappyBirthday”songtogether,andImakeawishbeforeblowingoutthecandles.Mymumcooksdeliciousbirthdaynoodles—theyareasymboloflonglife.Ialsogetnicegiftsfrommyfamilyandfriends.Wetakephotostorememberthehappytime.Birthdaymakesmefeelloved.It’salwaysthemostspecialdayoftheyearforme.【译文】我如何庆祝生日我的生日在9月15日，我每年都特别期待这一天。那天，爸爸妈妈通常会给我买一个带蜡烛的大生日蛋糕。我邀请最好的朋友来家里，我们一起唱《生日快乐》歌，我许愿后吹灭蜡烛。妈妈会做美味的生日面条——它们是长寿的象征。我还会收到家人和朋友送的精美礼物，我们拍照记录这快乐的时光。生日让我感受到满满的爱，它永远是我一年中最特别的一天。亮点词块lookforwardto期待birthdaycake生日蛋糕blowoutcandles吹蜡烛makeawish许愿birthdaynoodles生日面条asymboloflonglife长寿的象征nicegifts精美礼物takephotos拍照高分句子Mybirthdayison15thSeptember.（正确使用序数词表达日期，贴合单元语法重点）Mymumcooksdeliciousbirthdaynoodles—theyareasymboloflonglife.（结合文化习俗，体现单元主题内涵）Birthdaymakesmefeelloved.（升华情感，呼应单元“生日的意义”核心）【拓展1】DearAnna,Mybirthdayiscomingsoon,butIdon’tknowhowtocelebrateit.Couldyoutellme:howyouusuallycelebrateyourbirthday;whatgiftyouwantmostonyourbirthday;whereIcanbuyanicebirthdaycake.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua假定你是Anna，收到李华的邮件，请根据邮件内容回复一封邮件，词数不少于60。DearLiHua,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Anna【拓展1范文】DearLiHua,I’mgladtosharemybirthdaywithyou!Iusuallycelebrateitwithmyfamily.Wehaveabigdinnerathome,andmydadmakesmyfavouritechocolatecake.ThegiftIwantmostisastorybook—Ilovereading.Foryourbirthdaycake,youcangotothebakerynearourschool.Theyhavedeliciouscakeswithfreshfruit,andyoucanchooseyourfavouritecolour.Youcanalsoinvitefriendstoplaygames.Birthdaysareabouthappinessandlove—justdowhatyoulike!Yours,Anna【拓展1译文】亲爱的李华：很高兴和你分享我的生日！我通常和家人一起庆祝，我们在家吃一顿丰盛的晚餐，爸爸会做我最喜欢的巧克力蛋糕。我最想要的礼物是一本故事书——我喜欢阅读。至于你的生日蛋糕，你可以去学校附近的面包店，那里有带新鲜水果的美味蛋糕，还能选你喜欢的颜色。你也可以邀请朋友来玩游戏。生日就是关于快乐和爱——做你喜欢的事就好！你的，安娜【拓展2】假设你度过了一次有意义的13岁生日，请根据以下思维导图提示，写一篇题目为“MyMeaningful13thBirthday”的短文，词数80左右，开头已给出。我有意义的13岁生日1.背景（13岁生日，想过一个特别的生日）2.过程（和家人去公园野餐，帮妈妈准备食物，收到爷爷送的钢笔，一起种树纪念）3.结果（过得很开心，明白生日也是成长的纪念）总结与感悟（生日不只是收礼物，更是和家人的陪伴）MyMeaningful13thBirthdayIhadameaningful13thbirthdaylastmonth.Ididn’twantabigparty—Iwantedtospenditwithmyfamily.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【拓展2范文】MyMeaningful13thBirthdayIhadameaningful13thbirthdaylastmonth.Ididn’twantabigparty—Iwantedtospenditwithmyfamily.Wewenttotheparkforapicnic.Ihelpedmymumpreparesandwichesandfruitinthemorning.Mygrandpagavemeanicepenasagift—hesaiditwouldhelpmestudybetter.Aftereating,weplantedasmalltreetogether.Dadsaiditwouldgrowwithme.Wetookmanyphotosbythetree.ItwasthehappiestbirthdayI’veeverhad.Irealizedbirthdayisnotjustaboutgifts,butabouttheloveandcompanyoffamily.【拓展2译文】我有意义的13岁生日上个月我度过了一个有意义的13岁生日。我不想要盛大的派对——我想和家人一起度过。我们去公园野餐，早上我帮妈妈准备三明治和水果。爷爷送了我一支漂亮的钢笔作为礼物——他说它会帮我更好地学习。吃完饭后，我们一起种了一棵小树，爸爸说它会和我一起成长。我们在树旁拍了很多照片。这是我过得最开心的生日，我意识到生日不只是关于礼物，更是关于家人的爱与陪伴。本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累一、核心主题词汇生日相关（单元重点）birthday生日birthdayparty生日派对birthdaycake生日蛋糕candle蜡烛birthdaygift生日礼物birthdaynoodles生日面条makeawish许愿blowout吹灭singthe“HappyBirthday”song唱《生日快乐》歌symboloflonglife长寿的象征日期表达相关（单元核心）month月份January一月February二月...（十二个月份）ordinalnumber序数词first第一（1st）second第二（2nd）third第三（3rd）fifth第五（5th）tenth第十（10th）thirteenth第十三（13th）twentieth第二十（20th）on+日期（具体日期前用介词on）购物相关（单元基础）buy买bakery面包店cake蛋糕price价格kilo千克；公斤howmuch多少钱delicious美味的freshfruit新鲜水果语法相关（单元重点）序数词用法：表示日期、顺序，前常加the（口语中可省略）Wh-疑问句：Whatdoyoudoonyourbirthday?/Whenisyourbirthday?/Howmanycandlesarethereonthecake?二、实用句型积累日期与生日表达（贴合单元核心）Mybirthdayison+序数词+月份.Iwasbornon5thOctober.It’smy+序数词+birthdaytoday.Wecelebratemybirthdayontheweekend.生日活动描述（贴合单元主题）MyfamilyandIhaveabigdinnertogether.Iinvitemyfriendstomybirthdayparty.Wesingthe“HappyBirthday”songandmakeawish.Mymumcooksdeliciousbirthdaynoodlesforme.Igetanicegiftfrommy...购物用语（贴合单元场景）Howmuchisthisbirthdaycake?Iwanttobuyacakewithfreshfruit.WherecanIgetanicebirthdaygift?Thiscakeis80yuan.情感与感悟（贴合单元内涵）Birthdaymakesmefeellovedandhappy.It’sthemostspecialdayoftheyearforme.Birthdayisnotjustaboutgifts,butaboutfamilylove.Irealizegrowingupmeansmoreresponsibilityonmybirthday.三、基础句式与衔接序数词+日期（单元核心语法）My12thbirthdayison23rdNovember.我的12岁生日在11月23日。Wehadapartyonmygrandpa’s60