外研八下英语Unit 1 Presenting ideas-Reflection《单元写作》课件

不同类型的职业或工作单元写作写作维度本单元的写作项目是“不同类型的职业或工作”。相关内容包含以下几个方面：（1）时间变迁下的职业改变；（2）科技与未来生活；（3）未来职业/梦想职业/职业规划。写作支架/模版不同类型的职业与工作开篇点题具体介绍总结黄金语料（从教材内外积累好句）开头段①WhatdoIwanttobeinthefuture?Mydreamistobecomea...②I’mgladtoshare...withyou.③People’sjobshavechangedthroughouthistory.中间段①Asweallknow,DeepSeekhasbecomeaglobalsensationintheAIfield.②Toturnmyhobbyintoacareer,Iplantotakeprofessionalcourses.③Ithinkourlifeinthefuturewillbemoreinterestingandwonderfulbecauseoftechnology.④However,...bringsworriesandchallenges.⑤Manypeoplewilllosetheirjobsbecauseof...⑥SomestudentsrelyonAIsomuchthattheylosetheirabilitytodothingsbythemselves.结尾段①Itisameaningfuljobbecause...②Eventhoughitwilldisappear,itonce...③AlthoughIknowitisnoteasytobeateacher,Iwillredoublemyeffortstorealizemydream.经典例题（从经典例题学会审题）[山东临沂中考]假定你是李平，请根据该邮件内容，用英语给Eric回复。HiLiPing,Youmentionedyourdreamjobinyourlastletter.I’mreallyinterestedinit.Whydidyouchooseit?What/Whoinfluencedyoutomakethedecision?Tellmeyourexperience,please.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyousoon!Eric审人称：第一人称；第三人称审体裁：应用文（电子邮件）审时态：一般现在时；一般过去时审要点：职业、选择原因、影响因素、经历要求：1.词数不少于80，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。DearEric,Thanksforyoure-mail._______________________________LiPing精彩范文展示DearEric,Thanksforyoure-mail.I’mverygladtotellyousomethingaboutmydreamjob.IhavedreamedofbeingateachersinceIwasachild,becauseIthinkteachingisasacredprofessionandIenjoystayingwithchildren.Besides,Iwanttobeateacherbecauseofthepowerofanexample—MissLi,myEnglishteacher.①Thecityshinesbrighterbecauseofus,...（教材P5）SheoftenhelpsmewithmyEnglish,andsheinfluencesmealot.IstillrememberthatonceIfailedinanimportantEnglishexamandwasupset.ShecheeredmeupandtoldmesomegoodwaystoimprovemyEnglish.Withherhelp,ImadegreatprogressinEnglish.IhavemadeupmymindtobeagoodteacherlikeherwhenIgrowup.②Istillremembermyfirstsummerasa“spiderman”.（教材P4）AlthoughIknowitisnoteasytobeateacher,Iwillredoublemyeffortstorealizemydream.Bestwishes!LiPing【亮点词块】begladtodosth.乐于做某事thepowerofanexample榜样的力量failin在……方面失败cheersb.up使某人振作起来makeupone’smindtodosth.下定决心做某事【高分句子】IhavedreamedofbeingateachersinceIwasachild,becauseIthinkteachingisasacredprofessionandIenjoystayingwithchildren.（since引导的时间状语从句，because引导的原因状语从句）我从小就梦想成为一名教师，因为我认为教学是一项神圣的职业，我喜欢和孩子们在一起。IhavemadeupmymindtobeagoodteacherlikeherwhenIgrowup.（when引导的时间状语从句）我下定决心长大后做一个像她一样的好老师。实战演练少年强则国强，青年兴则国兴。青少年是祖国的未来，家庭的期待。你校英语社团正在开展对青少年未来职业梦想的讨论。假如你是李华，请根据下图中的要点写一篇发言稿。要求：（1）文中不能出现真实的人名，地名和校名；（2）语言通顺，表达正确，要点齐全，适当补充；（3）词数为80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：makecontributionsto为……做贡献Hello,everyone!I’mLiHuafromClass2003.________________________________________________________________Thankyouforyourlistening!范文参考Hello,everyone!I’mLiHuafromClass2003.Everyonehashisowndreamjob.Somepeoplewanttobeengineers,somepeoplewanttobescientistsandotherswanttobecooks.Asforme,myparentswantmetobeadoctorbecausetheythinkitisagoodjob.ButIwanttobeateacher.Inordertomakemydreamcometrue,Imuststudyhardandgetgoodgrades.IfImeetdifficulties,Iwillcomeupwithwaystosolvethem.Ofcourse,Ishouldgetalongwellwithothers.Afterall,teachersshouldbegoodwiththeirstudents.