Unit3CelebrationsWritingWorkshop课件高中英语北师大版

AnEventDescriptionBook1UNIT3WhatMadeThemSpecial?WhatCelebrationEventsHaveYouAttended?Warmingup.1

Whatdetailsdoyouwanttoinclude?Whatcelebrationdoyouwanttowriteaboutandwhy?PairWorkTime!1

ReadforWriting2Whosebirthdaywasit?Whatdidthefamilydotoprepareforit?Whatgiftdidthewritermake?HowdidGrandpafeelandwhatdidhesay?ItwasGrandpa’s70thbirthday.MumpreparedGrandpa’sspecialbirthdaylunch.ThewritermadeavideoofGrandpa’slifestory.DadinvitedGrandpa’sbestfriendsfromsecondaryschool.ReadforWriting23.AvideoofGrandpa’slifestory.4.Grandpafeltexcited.Hesaid,“ItisawonderfulbirthdaycelebrationandI’vegotthebestgiftIhaveeverreceived.NowIamlookingforwardtomyeightieth,ninetiethandevenonehundredthbirthdaysalready!”Whosebirthdaywasit?Whatdidthefamilydotoprepareforit?Whatgiftdidthewritermake?HowdidGrandpafeelandwhatdidhesay?FocusonStructure.3“Canyouputtheminorder?”“Introductiontotheevent→Preparationsbeforetheevent→Thebestpartoftheevent→Feelingsabouttheevent”“ItwasGrandpa’s70thbirthday...preparingforitforquitesometime.”“Earlyinthemorning...collectingphotosfromthefamilyalbum.”“Justbeforelunchtime...intheirschooluniforms.”“Towardstheend...onehundredthbirthdaysalready!”“Introductiontotheevent”“Preparationsbeforetheevent”“Thebestpartoftheevent”“Feelingsabouttheevent”ExamplesofLinkingWords“First,

Igotdressedquickly.ThenIheadeddownstairs.”“Surprisingly,

theywereGrandpa’sbestfriendsfromsecondaryschool.”Let’sPractice!“First,Icleanedmyroom.Then,Idecorateditwithballoons.”“Nowyoutry!Use‘first,then,surprisingly’tomakesentences.”ShowYourSentences!first,then,afterthat,surprisingly“Canyoufindmorelinkingwords?”FocusonLanguage-LinkingWords3Outline→Draft→EditIntroduction（事件介绍）→Preparations（准备工作）→BestPart（精彩时刻）→Feelings（感受）

ComposeYourWriting4FillinYourOutline4SectionContentExamplefromYouIntroduction事件基本信息（谁的庆祝？何时？何地？）例：My12thbirthdayparty,lastSaturday,athomePreparations你/家人朋友做了什么准备？（装饰/食物/礼物等）例：Mombakedacake;ImadepaperflowersBestPart最难忘的环节（游戏/礼物/发言等）例：Myfriendsangasong;weplayed“PintheTailontheDonkey”Feelings你的感受？想对谁说什么？例：Ifeltwarmandloved;Iwanttothankeveryone!Drafting3WritingTipstoMakeYourDraftShine!事件要素：明确时间（lastSunday）、地点（schoolhall）、人物（classmates/parents）、原因（graduationcelebration）​动作细节：多用动词（ran,laughed,hugged,decorated,prepared）​连接词：First…Then…Afterthat…Finally…;Surprisingly…Luckily…​情感表达：用形容词（excited,warm,touched）或句子（Myheartwasfullofjoy!）​First,myclassmatesandIhungcolorfulflagsinthehall.Then,theteacherbroughtoutahugecakewithournamesonit.“先完成大纲，再扩展成段落！不用担心语法错误，先写出来！”12MinutestoDraft!4PeerEditingChecklistCheckYourPartner’sWriting!​清单（用✅/❌勾选）：​✅

结构完整吗？（4个部分都有吗？）​✅

用了连接词吗？（圈出first/then/surprisingly等）