2026届新高考英语考前冲刺最后一课十句话搞定读后续写

2026届新高考英语考前冲刺最后一课十句话搞定读后续写

十句五定法第二节(满分25分)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。(2025浙江一月考)Kevinwasprettybored.Hismotherwasatwork,andhisfatherhadbeenawayonbusiness.Therefore,hewasleftinthecareofMrs.Hill,anoldladywholivednextdoor.Hisparentshadraisedthe12-year-oldtobeagoodboy.Henevergotintotrouble,thoughsometimeshewantedtodoriskythings.Mrs.Hillwasasleep.Kevinsighedandhopedsomethingexcitingwouldhappen.Suddenly,amovementoutsidecaughthiseye.Mrs.Hill’sfrontwindowfacedMr.andMrs.Green’shouseacrossthestreet.Thecouplehadbothgonetowork,soitwasstrangethatsomeonewasoverthere.Kevinstaredatthemanattheirfrontdoor.Suddenly,themanjumpedthroughanopenwindowintothehouse.Withhisheartinhismouth,KevingrabbedMrs.Hill’shomephoneandcalledthepolice.Thinkingthatthemanmightgetawaywithwhateverhewantedbeforethepolicearrived,Kevindecidedtodosomething.HerushedoutofMrs.Hill’shouseandcrossedthestreetquickly.Grabbingabranchfromacut-downtree,hejumpedinthroughthewindow.“Stoprightthere!Youmustleaverightnow!”hecalledout,holdingthebranchwithbothhands.Themanfrozeforasecond,butwhenhesawtheskinnyboyhebreathedasighofrelief.“Hey,kid,putthatdown.Itwasmyhome.Myparentsusedtolivehereandmyfather’swatchwashere,”heexplained,tryingtoliftafloorboard.Atthatmoment,thesoundsofapolicecarechoedintheair.Themanstoodupinapanic,thenranthroughthehousetowardthewindowandjumpedout.Kevinfollowedoutandtoldthearrivingpoliceofficerswhathadhappened.Theypursuedandarrestedtheman.

KevinwentbacktoMrs.Hill’shouse.Somehowhewasn’tsurehehaddonetherightthing.“Whatifhehastoldthetruth?”hethoughttohimself.Theman’swordssoundedprettyconvincing.注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。

WhenMr.andMrs.Greengothome,Kevinwenttotalktothem.

KevinandMr.Greentookthewatchtheyhadfoundtothepolicestation.

[前文大意]

本文讲述了12岁男孩Kevin因父母不在家，被邻居Hill太太照看。他感到无聊，渴望发生点刺激的事。突然，他看到一名男子跳窗闯入对面Green夫妇的家中。Kevin立刻报警，并持树枝跳窗制止。男子声称自己是为了找回已故父亲藏在地板下的手表，但警察赶到后还是将他逮捕。事后Kevin陷入自我怀疑：万一男子说的是真话呢？他不知道自己是否做对了。[简要分析]

这篇读后续写延续了浙江高考对“个人成长”与“道德抉择”类话题的关注，主题为“勇寻真相并学会理解与共情”。故事核心在于Kevin在“见义勇为”之后产生了道德困惑---被他阻止并报警抓走的人可能并未说谎。续写需要解决这一矛盾:既要证实男子说法的真伪，又要让Kevin从中获得成长。提供的两个续写段落开头明确指向了“澄清真相一寻找手表一送往警局一解除内心疑虑”这一叙事路径。读一、读什么：读材料（一般是记叙文）＋读提示句（读关键词）。

时间不够读首尾段二、怎么读：1.找信息——who/where/when/what/why/how2.思考——readforcharacters人物/plot情节/conflict冲突/emotionalchange情感变化/theme主题3.读的过程中圈画关键信息，重要细节内容（用以细节呼应），好的句式（用以仿写）三、读完之后要明白：文章主人公是谁，文章主要情节，待解决的问题，人物情绪变化与文章主题。故事人物

情节发展

核心冲突

情感变化

Kevin，anunknownman,thepolice,Mr.＆Mrs.Green见义勇为的冲动vs

对真相的追求和同理心

无聊+紧张+怀疑+羞愧+释然、欣慰环节内容起因Kevin被交给邻居照顾，他感到

。发展1Kevin看到一名陌生男子跳窗闯入

的家，他

。发展2男子声称自己是来找

，警察赶到逮捕了男子。转折格林夫妇回家后，Kevin向他们说明情况，大家一起

。承接Kevin和格林先生将手表送到警局，真相大白，Kevin学会了

。很无聊格林夫妇父亲留下的手表找到了一块旧手表勇气、真相与同理心打电话报警十句五定法paragraph11衔接para1提示句（接着para1首句往下写）2345衔接para2提示句（根据para2首句倒推写）paragraph26衔接para2提示句（接着para2首句往下写）789

结尾（正能量）10

升华主题写剩余五句补齐细节情绪动作心理语言环境描写[续写思路]1．段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“当格林夫妇回到家时，凯文去找他们谈话。”可知，第一段可描写_________________________________

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②由第二段首句内容“凯文和格林先生带着他们找到的手表去了警察局。”可知，第二段可描写_______________________________________________________________________________________2．续写线索：凯文讲述经过——格林夫妇半信半疑——检查地板——发现旧手表——一起去警察局——归还手表男子感谢——凯文获得成长主题升华

凯文向格林夫妇说明事情经过，格林夫妇起初怀疑,但决定检查男子所说的地板位置，结果真发现了一块旧手表，凯文感到内疚和愧疚。

凯文把手表交给警察，男子得知后表达感谢。警察对男子进行批评教育，男子承认错误，凯文也意识到自己的错误，学会了理解和共情。第一句话：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二句话：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________承接段首句“凯文去找他们谈话”，凯文讲述事情经过。格林夫妇的反应。基础版：He

toldMr.andMrs.Greeneverythingthathadhappened.进阶版：Hetwistedthehemofhisshirtnervouslyandthenspilledoutwhathadhappened---fromthemanjumpingthroughthewindowtothepolicearrest.十句五定法：基础版：Mr.andMrs.Greenlookedateachotherindisbelief.进阶版：Mr.andMrs.Greenlookedateachotherwithamixtureofshockanddisbelief.第三句话：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第四句话：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________他们找到那个位置，发现手表。基础版：Toghther,theywalkedtothespot.Mr.Greenopenedtheboardandfoundanoldwatch.进阶版：Mr.Greenpriedopenthelooseboard,andtoeveryone’sastonishment,anolddustywatchlayhiddenbeneath.格林先生让凯文指出地板的位置。基础版：Then

Mr.GreenaskedKevintoshowwherethemanhadtriedtoliftthefloorboard.进阶版：SuddenlyMr.Greenrememberedsomething.“Wait,thefloorboard----Kevin,couldyoushowuswhichfloorboardthemanwastryingtolift?第五句话：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第六句话：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________承接第二段段首句，他们带着手表去了警局。基础版：Kevin

andMr.Greentookthewatchtothepolicestationandhandedittoapoliceman.进阶版：KevinandMr.Greentookthewatchtheyhavefoundtothepolicestation.Theofficerondutyrecognizedthemandsmiledwhenhesawthewatch.凯文感到内疚和羞愧。基础版：Kevin

sawthewatchandrealizedthemanhadtoldthetruth.Hefeltguiltyandashamed.进阶版：WhenKevinsawthewatch,hisheartsank---themanhadbeentellingthetruth.Awaveofguiltandshamewashedoverhim.第七句话：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第八句话：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________警察确认手表归属并指出男人的错误。基础版：Thepoliceofficerconfirmedthewatchbelongedtotheman’sfather,butsaidbreakingintoahomewasstillwrong.进阶版：Whenthepoliceofficerconfirmedthatthewatchhadindeedbelongedtotheman’sdeceasedfather,Kevinloweredhishead.“Butbreakingintosomeone’shomeisstillwrong,”theofficeraddedfirmly.凯文承认自己的错误。基础版：Kevinadmittedthathehadmistakenthemanforathiefandfeltembarrassed.进阶版：Kevinblushedwithembarrassment,admittingthathehadmistakenthemanforathief.第九句话：___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第十句话：__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________