2026届新高考英语考前冲刺最后一课思辨类应用文写作

2026届新高考英语考前冲刺最后一课思辨类应用文写作

（广东深圳市罗湖区2025-2026学年第一学期期末）假定你是李华，你校外教Jason计划广泛使用AI智能批改系统来评阅学生英语作文，以提升批改效率。你认为这样批改存在问题。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1.说明问题；2.提出建议。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。

参考词汇：AIintelligentcorrectionsystem

AI智能批改系统Task1Readforinformation作者身份：李华（学生）交际对象：外教Jason语气礼貌、委婉、建设性事件：外教Jason想用AI智能批改系统评阅英语作文，以提高效率任务：指出AI批改存在的问题→提出合理建议topic+purposeBodyViews+ReasonsPracticalsuggestionsClosingExpectationOpeningGreetingTask2ReadforstructureAIintelligentcorrectionsystems

StudentsTeachersWhoisinvolvedinthisevent?DisadvantagesWhatareyoursuggestions?

Task3CriticalThinking（groupwork）AIintelligentcorrectionsystems

Whoisinvolvedinthisevent?DisadvantagesWhatareyoursuggestions?

Task3CriticalThinkingspotbasicmistakeslikegrammarandspellinghardlyjudgethelogic,contentdepthandcreativityofourwritinguseAIforpreliminary/prɪˈlɪmɪnəri/checking初步检查Students

Whoisinvolvedinthisevent?DisadvantagesWhatareyoursuggestionsonthepossibleproblems?

Task3CriticalThinkingfailtogetpersonalizedsuggestionsTeachers

Whoisinvolvedinthisevent?DisadvantagesWhatareyoursuggestions?

Task3CriticalThinkingfailtofullygraspstudents'actualwritingabilitiesreviewthecontentandstructureaddsomecommentsoradvice

Task4Readforusefulexpressions(2026广东一模）你将参加英语课上“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对学校羽毛球社团在招收新成员时设定技术门槛，不接收零基础新成员的做法写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：（1）陈述看法；（2）提出建议。

注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Goodmorning,everyone.Itismygreathonortodeliveraspeechonwhetherthebadmintonclubshouldsettechnicalentryrequirementsfornewmembers.

Ifirmlyholdtheviewthatthebadmintonclubshouldn’tsetstricttechnicalthresholdsfornewmembers.Thoughitmayensuresmoothgrouptraining,itreducestheenthusiasmofpotentialbeginners.Worsestill,byclosingthedooronnewmembers,theclubriskslosingvitality,whichnotjustpreventstheclub’slong-termdevelopment,butgoesagainsttheschool’soriginalpurposeofpromotinginclusivesportsculture.Tobalancethedevelopmentandpopularity,itissuggestedthatthecluborganizetailoredtrainingsessionsand“seniorleadsjunior”programswithskilledmembersguidingbeginnersstepbystep.Meanwhile,theschoolcanplayapartinofferingadequatetrainingresourcestoboostbeginners’growth.Onlybyloweringentrybarriersandofferingtargetedguidancecantheclubattractmorestudents,expanditsinfluenceandachievesustainabledevelopment.Thankyouforlistening!ShouldtheBadmintonClubSetEntryRequirements

Task5Createyourwriting

Task6Self-assessmentandpeer-assessment框架内容是否符合体裁特点？☆☆☆☆☆是否详略得当？☆☆☆☆☆建议是否与指出的问题关联性强？☆☆☆☆☆建议是否具体可行？☆☆☆☆☆语言表达词汇、语法是否准确？☆☆☆☆☆词汇、句式是否丰富？☆☆☆☆☆是否使用衔接词使得上下文连贯？☆☆☆☆☆卷面书写书写是否工整美观？☆☆☆☆☆

Task7AversionforappreciationDearJason,I’mLiHua,oneofyourstudents.HearingthatyouplantouseanAIintelligentcorrectionsystemtoassessourEnglishcompositions,I’mwritingtosharesomeofmythoughtssincerely.

Ifirmlyholdtheviewthat

thesystemshouldbeusedwisely.Thoughitcanimprovecorrectionefficiency,ithassomeproblems.First,itcanonlyspotbasicmistakeslikegrammarandspellingbuthardlyjudgethelogic,contentdepthandcreativityofourwriting.Worsestill,wefailtoget

personalizedsuggestions,which

makesuslessmotivated.Finally,

youcan’tfullygraspouractualwritingabilities.Tomakegradingbothefficientandmeaningful,itissuggestedthat

youuseAIforpreliminarycheckinganddothefinalreviewyourself.Meanwhile,addingpositivecommentsorspecificadvicewillhelpusalot.

Ibelievewewillmakegreaterprogresswithyourpatientguidance.Yourssincerely,LiHua我是李华，您的一名学生。听说您计划使用人工智能批改系统评阅我们的英语作文，我特此写信真诚地分享一些我的想法。我坚定地认为，该系统应当被合理使用。尽管它能提升批改效率，但也存在一些问题。首先，它只能找出语法、拼写等基础错误，却难以评判我们写作的逻辑、内容深度和创意。更糟糕的是，我们无法获得个性化建议，这会降低我们的积极性。最后，您也无法全面掌握我们真实的写作水平。为了让评分既高效又有意义，建议您利用AI进行初步批改，由您亲自完成最终评阅。同时，附上积极的评语或具体的建议会对我们大有帮助。