高考英语写作教学建议课件

汇报人：张馨元时间：2026年4月高考写作教学建议如何提升语言表达质量写作教学的理论依据如何做到内容完整丰富1目录23写作教学理论依据1指向英语学科核心素养的写作教学新课标对“写”的要求高中英语新课标对表达性技能提出明确要求，其中与写相关表述：指向英语学科核心素养的写作教学新课标对“写”的要求高中英语新课标对表达性技能提出明确要求，其中与写相关表述：如何做到内容完整丰富2应用文重审题，翻译二字是精髓；我是谁写给谁，写信目的见动词内容完整提升审题能力【2025年全国高考I卷】

假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教

Jenny

提出“Funatmyschool”和“GuesswhoIam”两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件，内容包括：(1)你的选择；(2)说明理由。写作背景写作对象写作目的应用文重审题，翻译二字是精髓；我是谁写给谁，写信目的见动词内容完整提升审题能力写作目的：向外教推荐并阐释栏目内容和推荐原因；（暗含）希望推荐成功并造福学生写作背景：了解题目背景信息；英文报栏目内容的读者是学生；增设栏目；推荐给外教；写作对象：外教；确定写作的口吻用语礼貌友好应用文重审题，翻译二字是精髓；我是谁写给谁，写信目的见动词内容完整提升审题能力【练习题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国笔友Jenny即将高中毕业，因为选择大学专业问题和父母发生矛盾，向你寻求建议。请你给他写封邮件，1.表示理解2.提出建议和理由。写作背景写作对象写作目的应用文重审题，翻译二字是精髓；我是谁写给谁，写信目的见动词内容完整提升审题能力写作目的：对朋友的矛盾问题表示理解；提供建议；并说明理由；（隐含）能帮助解决问题，化解矛盾写作背景：高中毕业选专业和父母产生矛盾；向朋友求助；写作对象：好友伙伴，写作口吻用语真挚友好非正式9类信件对应的目的动词内容完整提升审题能力推荐/建议信：recommendsth.tosb.=makearecommendationofsth.

suggest/recommendsb.(should)dosth./suggestdoingsth.

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[U]邀请信：invitesb.todosth.咨询信：inquiresth.=askforinformationabout申请信：applyforsth.=makeanapplicationforsth.介绍信：introducesth.tosb.=makeanintroductiontosth.祝贺信：congratulatesb.onsth.感谢信：thanksb.forsth./doingsth.

expressmygratitude

[U](toyou)forsth.道歉信：apologize(tosb.)forsth.=makeanapologyforsth.投诉信：complainaboutsth.=makeacomplaintaboutsth.内容丰富主题复习扩展思路以主题写作：校园活动为例【典型训练1】

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校正在为高三毕业典礼征集活动方案。你有意参加。请你给英国好友Jim写一封邮件询问他的建议。内容包括：

1.介绍活动方案和设计理由；

2.询问建议。

内容丰富主题复习扩展思路以主题写作：校园活动为例DearJim,Myschooliscollectingdesignsforthegraduationceremony.I’mwritingtosharemyideawithyouandaskforyouradvice.First,theceremonyshouldbeheldinourschoolauditoriumonweekend,thusallowingalltheparentsandteacherstobepresent,makingthiseventlivelier.Itwillkickoffwithaninspiringspeechdeliveredbytheprincipal,followedbyavideofeaturingthoseunforgettablemomentsofourschoollifeandthepresentationofdiplomas.Weneedtosetupa“gratitudewall”,wherewecanexpressourgratitudetoourteachers,friendsandparents,withoutwhosehelpwecouldhardlysucceed.Duringthelastsession,studentscanopenthefloortotalkabouttheirfuture,sharingtheirambitionswitheachother.Sowhatdoyouthinkofmyplan?Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,内容丰富主题复习扩展思路以主题写作：校园活动为例我们学校正在为毕业典礼收集设计。我写信是为了与您分享我的想法并征求您的建议。Myschooliscollectingdesignsforthegraduationceremony.I’mwritingtosharemyideawithyouandaskforyouradvice.首先，仪式应该在学校礼堂周末举行，这样所有的家长和老师都可以出席，使这个活动更加热闹。First,theceremonyshouldbeheldinourschoolauditoriumonweekend,thusallowingalltheparentsandteacherstobepresent,makingthiseventlivelier.它将以校长的鼓舞人心的演讲拉开序幕。然后是一段视频，介绍我们学校生活中那些难忘的时刻和颁发文凭。内容丰富主题复习扩展思路以主题写作：校园活动为例Itwillkickoffwithaninspiringspeechdeliveredbytheprincipal,followedbyavideofeaturingthoseunforgettablemomentsofourschoollifeandthepresentationofdiplomas.我们需要建立一堵“感恩墙”，在那里我们可以向我们的老师、朋友和父母表达我们的感激之情，没有他们的帮助，我们几乎无法成功。Weneedtosetupa“gratitudewall”,wherewecanexpressourgratitudetoourteachers,friendsandparents,withoutwhosehelpwecouldhardlysucceed..在最后，学生们可以开始谈论他们的未来，彼此分享他们的抱负。Duringthelastsession,studentscanopenthefloortotalkabouttheirfuture,sharingtheirambitionswitheachother.内容丰富主题复习扩展思路以主题写作：校园活动为例【典型训练2】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你们学校将要举办“图书漂流”活动—将自己喜欢的图书放在学校任意公共场所，感兴趣的同学读完后将书放回到原处，让其继续漂流。请你给交换生Chris写一封邮件，邀请他参加此次活动，内容包括：活动意义具体安排发出邀请内容丰富主题复习扩展思路【【参考答案】DearChris,

Ican'twaittoshareapieceofgoodnewswithyou.Sinceyou'reanenthusiastaboutreading,IbelieveyouwillbeofgreatinterestinthismeaningfulactivitynamedBookCrossing.

BookCrossingisthepracticeofleavingabookinapublicplacetobepickedupandreadbyothers,whothendolikewise.Foronething,theBookCrossingcanmotivateustofurtherdevelopourreadinghabitsandhelptobroadenourhorizons.Foranother,itprovidesagoodchancetomakefriendswithlike-mindedpeople.

OurBookCrossingstartsthisMondayandwilllastforaweek.Whenthetimecomes,you'llbesurprisedtofindsatisfyingbooksatanyplacesoncampus.Ofcourse,ifyouarein,youaresupposedtoshareseveralbooksthatarevaluableandbeneficial.Tohelpothersgetageneral

knowledgeofyourbook,yourthoughtfulintroductionandhelpfulcommentsarewarmlywelcomed.内容丰富主题复习扩展思路以主题写作：校园活动为例【迁移训练】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，最近学校即将举办“校园读书节”系列活动，向全校学生征集活动方案，你校交换生想参加征集活动，并向你寻求建议，请你给他写一封回信：1.表示鼓励2.活动方案举办书市活动，学生可以浏览购买不同体裁的图书。Youcanorganizestudentstohostabookfaironcampuswherestudentscanbrowseandpurchasebooksfromdifferentgenres.2.设置阅读挑战活动，号召大家读书，追踪读书进程，组织形式，活动的目的和好处OrganizeanactivitycalledReadingChallengeFor10Days,wheretheysetreadinggoalsandtracktheirprogressovertime.Thiscanbedoneindividuallyorinteams,tobooststudents’motivationtoread.3.邀请当地的书籍的作者来进行新书讲座，讲述创作过程，线上大声朗读活动Invitelocalauthorstocometospeakabouttheirnewbooksandwriting

process.Alternatively,youcanhaveavirtualauthorread-aloudsession.4.化装舞会或者比赛，扮演书籍角色。Wecancelebrateitbyhostingacostumeparadeorcompetition,encouragingstudentstodress

upastheirfavoritebookcharacters.5.图书漂流活动，或者图书交换活动Organizeabookswap

eventwherestudentscantradeorexchangetheiroldbookswiththeirpeers.6.图书书签活动，或者图书社团举办活动Bookmarkmaking:Havestudentsdesignandcreatetheirbookmarksfeaturingquotesfromtheirfavoritebooks.Bookclub:Formabookclubwherestudentscancometogethertodiscusstheirfavoritebooksandshare

insights.内容丰富主题复习扩展思路以主题写作：校园活动为例【典型训练3】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校英国留学生Jim暂时留在英国不能回校，但是他邮寄来的摄影作品“桃花（peachblossom）”在你校“春天（Spring）”摄影展获得一等奖，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括

1.祝贺获奖2.介绍展出情况。内容丰富主题复习扩展思路DearJim,

HowareyougettingalongintheUKthesedays?Iamwritingtotellyousomegoodnews:yourphotograph

“peachblossom”

haswonfirstprizeinthephotographyexhibition“

Spring”!Congratulations!

Itwasyourcreativecompositionandthevividcolorthatmadeyourphotographstandout.Moreover,thebirdonthebranchwasespeciallyimpressivebecauseitdemonstratedtheenergeticspringinyourhometownandrevealedasenseofvigorandhope.

Allthephotographsarenowondisplayintheschoolgallery,eachcapturingauniqueaspectofspring:somepresentvibrantscenes;somestressnewhopeandlifeandotherscelebratetruehumanemotion.Whatasuccess!

Itisreallyunfortunatethatyoucan'tcometoappreciatealltheexquisitephotographsinperson.Toremedythis,I'llattachthreepicturestoshowwhattheexhibitionislike.Yours,LiHua内容丰富主题复习扩展思路以主题写作：校园活动为例【典型训练4】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校将举办主题为“创意点亮校园”学生手工作品展。请给你校的交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参观展览。内容包括:1.介绍展览信息(例如：时间、地点、内容等)；2.询问对方意向。DearJim，Howareyoudoing?I’mwritingtoinviteyoutovisitahandicraftsexhibitioninourschool,whosethemeis“CreativityLightsUptheCampus”.Theexhibitionaimstoenrichourschoollifeandpromoteourcreativityandhands-onability.ItisscheduledtobeheldinthelecturehallfromMay15toJune1.Dozensofhandicraftswithuniquedesignsandvariousthemeswillbeondisplay,suchasclaysculptures,papercuttingsandsoon.Theyareallcreatedbystudents.Manyworksaremadefromunwantedmaterialsinourdailylife,whichshowshowstudentsturnwasteintotreasure.I’msureyouwillbeamazedatthestudents’creativityandimagination.Wouldyouliketocome?I’mlookingforwardtomeetingyouattheexhibition.Yours,LiHua【2025年全国高考I卷】

假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教

Jenny

提出“Funatmyschool”和“GuesswhoIam”两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件，内容包括：(1)你的选择；(2)说明理由。内容丰富主题复习扩展思路学生能够将栏目“fun

at

my

school”和训练过的关于校园活动话题相迁移联想

IreallyliketheideaofaddinganewcolumntoourEnglishnewspaper.Ofthetwooptionsyouproposed,Ifirmlychoose“Funatmyschool”.

Comparedwith“GuesswhoIam”,whichfocusesonintroducingstudentsordailyobjectsoncampus,“Funatmyschool”wouldactasamorevibrantwindowintothedailyhappeningswithinourschoolcompound.Itwouldcoverawidespectrumofactivitiesgoingoninourschool,rangingfromdiversesportseventstoengagingculturalandartisticactivities.Byfeaturingthesehighlightsinthecolumn,wecangivemorestudentsaplatformtoberecognized,inspireotherstoparticipateandforgeacloselyknittedcommunity.

Inconclusion,“Funatmyschool”cantrulybringourschoolcommunitycloserandmakeourEnglishnewspapermoreengaging.Isincerelyhopeyoucantakemysuggestionintofavorableconsideration.Yours,LiHua内容丰富主题复习扩展思路记录校园活动的意义和丰富多彩的活动都可以基于平时练习中得到过的积累，并易于迁移运用内容丰富主题复习扩展思路主题写作复习不仅限于写作题目限时训练；应触及主话题下的各方面内容表达的训练【练习1】假定你是红星中学学生李华，你的美国朋友Jim将来你校交换学习。Jim来信咨询学校体育运动开展情况并想了解你的体育爱好。请给他回信，内容包括：1.表示欢迎；2.学校体育运动开展情况（体育设施，体育课程或活动等）；3.你爱好的体育运动。体育运动开展情况我们学校提供各种体育课程，包括游泳，滑冰，跑步和网球。AvarietyofPEcoursesareprovidedinourschool,includingswimming,skating,runningandtennis.学校非常重视学生的健身。每年我们都会举办运动会和夏令营，以增强身心。Myschoolattachesgreatimportancetostudents'fitness.Everyyearweholdsportsmeetingsandasummercamptostrengthenthebodyandmind.新足球场建于2017年，可容纳/容纳400多名学生。

Builtin2017,thenewsoccerfieldcanhold/accommodatemorethan400students.体育场已成为我们学校的地标，建于多年前，但最近配备了全新的设施。Thefabulousstadium,whichhasbecomethelandmarkofourschool,wasbuiltmanyyearsagobutwasrecentlyequippedwithbrand-newfacilities.我们做一些传统的中国运动，如中国功夫和太极拳。WedosometraditionalChinesesports,likeChineseKungFuandTaiChi.我校运动日历上最大的亮点是篮球比赛。我们的团队去年获得了最高荣誉。Thebiggesthighlightofmyschool'ssportscalendaristhebasketballgame.Ourteamwonthetophonorlastyear.C.喜爱的体育运动Ofthephysicalexerciseprovidedinourschool,Ilikebadmintonthemostforthefollowingreasons.Immersingmyselfinswimmingisagoodwaytoletgoofstress.Iaminto/keenon

yogasinceithelpsmetokeepfitandcalmmyself.Plus,yogaisanalternativecourseinmyschool；youcantryityourselfifitinterestsyou.I'mabigpingpongfan,whichtakesalotofhand-eyecoordination.Volleyballismypersonalfavorite,sinceitisgreatfunandgoodexercise.内容丰富主题复习扩展思路主题写作复习不仅限于写作题目限时训练；应触及主话题下的各方面内容表达的训练【练习2】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，得知2020年第18届世界中学生运动会(WorldMiddleSchoolGames)将在中国福建晋江举行，组委会正面向全国招募志愿者。请写一封申请信，内容包括：1.申请理由；2.自身优势；3.表达期待。

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表达申请意图得知招募，想申请Learningthatyouarerecruitingvolunteersforthecoming18thWorldMiddleSchoolGamesinJinjiang,Fujian,in2020,Iamwritingtoapplyforthisposition.知道这个活动在中国举办，我十分兴奋，想为这次体育盛会做出贡献。HavingknownthatitwillbeheldinChina,Iamthrilledandwillingtocontributetothissplendidevent.现代与传统因素相结合，这次体育盛会特别,开阔视野，扩展见解Combiningthetraditionalandmodernelements,thesportseventissouniqueformetoparticipatewhichcanexpandmyoutlooksandgaininsights.对体育活动的热爱和擅长我热衷体育运动，对体育运动有深刻理解，能帮我很好完成志愿工作。Iamverykeen

onsportssinceIwasachild.So,IhaveaclearandgoodcomprehensionofmanysportsthroughwhichIcanfinishthevolunteeringtaskverywell.作为一个热爱运动的女孩，我丰富的体育知识和纯熟体育技能，能帮我更好的完成工作。Asanathleticgirl,Iamsoavidtodothevolunteerjobtothissplendidsportsgame.Myrichknowledgeofdifferentsportsandproficientsportsskillscanhelpmegainanedgeforthisvolunteeringjob.内容丰富主题复习扩展思路要重视二稿写作和迁移训练【迁移训练】假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华。你从报纸上得知英国人ChristopherJ.A.Smith先生骑自行车从英国抵达北京，创下了新的世界纪录。请你用英文给他写一封邮件，邀请他近期到你校做一次演讲。1.发出邀请并说明原因；2.告知演讲内容和注意事项；

IamthepresidentoftheStudentUnionattheHongxingMiddleSchool.Onbehalfofourschool,Iwouldliketocongratulateyouonthenewworldrecordyouhaveset.Meanwhile,Iamdelightedtoinviteyoutogiveaspeechinourschoolaboutwhatyouexperiencedbecauseyouareverypopularinourschoolandyourstoriespublishedinthenewspapersareagreatsourceofencouragementtomanypeople.TheactivitywillbeheldinourschoolauditoriumonNovember17th.Itwillstartfrom15:30andlastfor2hours.Theaudiencemayincludeallthestudents,staffandsomeparents.Wereallyhopeyoucancometomakeit.Ifyouareinterestedinthis,pleasewritebacktomeatyourearliestconvenience.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.SincerelyYours,LiHua提出邀请我得知了您的骑行壮举，从英国一路到北京，破了世界纪录。Ihaverecentlyreadaboutyourepiccyclingjourneyfromnewspaper,crossing

continentsfromtheUKtoBeijing,settinganoutstandingworldrecord.请允许我代表学校祝贺您创下世界纪录。Onbehalfofourschool,Iwouldliketocongratulateyouonthenewworldrecordyouhaveset.您在我校人气很高，您的故事鼓舞了我们。Youareverypopularinourschoolandyourstoriespublishedinthenewspapersareagreatsourceofencouragementtomanypeople.我得知了您的壮举，赞叹不已。想借此机会邀请您给我校学生做演讲。Iwouldliketotakethisopportunitytoinviteyoutogiveaspeckinourschool.Ihaveknownaboutyourbrilliant

deedsfromthenewspaper,andIwasdeeplyimpressed

byit您坚强的意志和决心让我们赞叹不已。Yourstrong

willanddeterminationshowedbycyclingfromtheUKtoBeijingaregreatlyadmiredbyus.所以我们诚邀您来演讲，分享您的经历，给予我们更多的启示。Sowesincerely

hopethatyoucancometoourschooltoshareyourexperiencesandgiveussomeinspiration.演讲的内容和注意事项自从您的故事校报刊登之后，学生会收到很多学生反馈，尤其是高三学生，奋战高考，渴望听到励志故事的更多细节。Eversinceyourstoriesposted,thestudentsunionhasreceivednumerousfeedbacks,especiallyfromtheseniorswhoaregoingthroughaprettytoughtimeinstudy,eagertolistentoyourinspiringexperienceformoredetails.我们仰慕您的成就，希望聆听您讲讲骑行路上的甘苦，让我们备受鼓舞。Wealladmiredyouraccomplishment,withthegreatexpectationtoshareyourexperienceofsweatsandtears/wealandwoealongthecyclingway,whichwilldefinitelyfurthermotivateus.内容丰富主题复习扩展思路可以进一步补充句段层面的子主题话题语料体育锻炼的意义体育对身心都好Sportsareofgreatvalue,goodformind,bodyandspirit.

减轻学业压力，焕发活力。Withallourclassesandhomework，wemayfeeldrainedafteralongschoolday.Butifwecanmaketimeforaworkoutbeforeorafterschool.Chancesarethatwewillfeelrefreshedandenergeticagain.减轻压力，强身健体Weneedtobefittodealwiththepressureofhighschool.Sportscannotonlystrengthenourbodiesbutalsorelaxourminds.Exercisingisanaturalwaytoletgoofstress.Exercisecutsdownonpressureandstress.提升自尊心和自信心，提高成就感Sportsbuildsself-esteem.Exercisecanhelpyoulookgoodandfeelgoodaboutyourself.Watchingyourhardworkpayoffandachievingyourgoalbringstonsofself-confidence.提升自律，毅力和目标规划能力。Sportshelpdevelopdisciplineandshapeourcharacter.Throughsportswelearntosetgoalsandworkhardtoachievethem.Thedeterminationandgoal-settingskillssportsrequirecanbetranslatedtotheclassroom.正确看待成败和荣辱，变得坚强Experiencingwinsandlosseshelpspeoplelearntobetough,abletodealwithdisappointments,andabletodealwithpastglories.合作精神，解决问题的能力Fightingforacommongoalwithothermembersteacheshowtobeagoodteamplayerandhowtoeffectivelycommunicatetosolveproblems.人生就像马拉松，需要勤奋和毅力Lifeislikeamarathon（马拉松）.1tcallsfordiligenceandpersistence.Astrongbodyisessentialinfightingforourdreams.内容丰富主题复习扩展思路体育运动精神投入和自律精神Tosucceedinsports,onemustcommittoconsistentpracticeandtoughtraining.Thisdisciplineanddedicationcancarryoverintootheraspectsoflife,suchasourlearning.合作精神在很多团队项目学习中很重要，体育锻炼体现合作精神。Manysportsrequirecollaborationandcommunicationwithteammatesinordertoachievesuccess.Theseskillscanbeappliedtogroupprojectsorprofessionalsettings.毅力和坚忍不拔精神Perseveranceandresilience:Sportsofteninvolvesetbacksandchallenges,suchasinjuries.Learninghowtoperseverethroughthesedifficultiescanhelpbuildresilienceforfacingchallengesinotherareasoflife.雄心壮志和成就感内容丰富主题复习扩展思路体育运动精神Settingandachievinggoalsisacrucialcomponentofsports.Thisskillcantranslatetopersonalandprofessionaldevelopment,allowingindividualstostrivetowardstheiraspirationsanddreams.人格塑造和人际关系Character-building:Participatinginsportscanalsoteachimportantvaluessuchasgoodsportsmanship,integrity,andrespect.Thesetraitscanhelpshapecharacterandcreatepositiveinterpersonalrelationships.内容丰富主题复习扩展思路如何进行体育锻炼专业技巧Focusontechnique:Practicingthetechniqueisessentialforimprovingyourperformanceandavoidinginjuries.Takethetimetolearnthepropertechniqueforeachexerciseormovement.寻求专业建议和反馈Getfeedback:Gettingfeedbackfromothers,suchascoachesormoreexperienc