高考英语读后续写-背景分析-写作思路-句式总结+-2026届高三英语三轮复习专项

读后续写---背景分析/续写思路/句式整合

TheeventthatstandsoutinTom'smemoryhappenedonemorningwhenTomwasonlytenyearsold.HewasathomewithhiseldersisterJane.Tomwasdoinghishomeworkwhenheheardraisedvoices.Atfirsthethoughtnothingofitsincecustomersinthemotorcycleshopdirectlybelowtheirflatoftenbecameloudbuthesoonrealizedthistimeitwasdifferent."Quick!Quick!Removethemotorcyclesfromtheshop."someoneshouted.Thenathickburningsmellfilledtheair.WhenTomopenedthefrontdooroftheirflattoinvestigate,athickcloudofsmokegreetedhim.Themotorcycleshophadcaughtfireandpeoplewererunningandcrying.Jane,whohadbeenplayingtheviolininherroom,hurriedtothelivingroom.Theyrushedoutofthedoorandalongthecorridor(走廊)throughthesmoke.

题目TheywereheadingtowardsthestairwayatthefarendofthecorridorwhenJanesuddenlystopped.Sheturnedaroundandheadedbackthewaytheycame.Tomhadnoideawhatshewasdoing,buthefollowedher.Janehadsuddenlyrememberedtheladyinher70swholivednextdoortothem,whomtheycalledMakcik.JanebeganbangingonMakcik'sdoor,butgotnoanswer.Asthesmokethickenedaroundthem,Tomcouldseemanyoftheirneighborsrunningforsafety.Thethoughtoffearcrossedhismind.

"Shemighthaverunforsafetylikeeveryoneelse!"Tomcried.However,Janerefusedtogiveup."IknowMakcik'sstillinside."ShesaidshewasfamiliarwithMakcik'sdailyroutineandwascertainshewouldstillbesleeping.Shehitagainstthedoor."Godownstairs.Gonow!Go!"注意：（1）续写词数应为150左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题纸相应位置作答。Para1Tomnoticedtheflamewasreachingup.Para2Luckily,someneighborspassingbystoppedandofferedhelp.

背景分析1.Who：

2.When：

3.Where：

环境状态：4.What：主线事件：________________________，_______________，___________________________________________________关键冲突：浓烟中逃生的紧急性vs救助被困老人的责任感；Tom的恐惧犹豫vsJane的坚定不放弃5.Why：整个事件起因：Jane折返的原因：邻居Makcik年事已高，且根据日常作息判断老人仍在熟睡，无法自行逃生Tom、Jane（Tom的姐姐）Makcik（70多岁的邻居老奶奶）一个早晨公寓楼下摩托车店突发火灾姐弟俩逃生途中Jane折返营救被困的邻居老奶奶Makcik姐弟家的公寓、邻居Makcik的家门口浓烟弥漫、火势蔓延、逃生通道被烟雾笼罩、着火的摩托车店摩托车店突发火情6.How

事件线：

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内容衔接故事结尾：Jane敲门无人应答，浓烟加剧，Tom感到恐惧，劝说姐姐放弃，Jane坚持不放弃，确认老人仍在家中第一段：火焰逼近第二段：幸运的是，邻居帮忙火灾突发姐弟逃生Jane折返救邻居环境：Tom：

做法：

结尾：新人物：

结果：结尾升华：火势快速蔓延，浓烟呛人害怕但配合姐姐合力破门，救出昏迷的Makcik做好防护，艰难出逃邻居帮忙护送老人和姐弟成功脱险

老人感激，Tom内心成长勇敢是恐惧时仍选择善良与责任环境描写：Thefirewasspreadingrapidly,andthethicksmokestungtheireyes,makingitalmostimpossibletobreathe.心里描写：Panictookholdof/sweptover/floodedoverTom,buthesawJane’sdeterminedface,whichgavehimatouchofcourage.Theyknewtheyhadnotimetowaste.具体行为：JanegrabbedTom’shand,shouting,“Wehavetogetheroutnow!”Together,theykickedthedoorwithalltheirstrengthuntilitfinallycrashedopen.Inside,Makcikwaslyingonthebed,barelyconscious,surroundedbysmoke.Janequicklywrappedablanketaroundtheoldlady,whileTomfetchedawettoweltocovertheirmouthsandnoses.However,theywerealmosttrappedinheavysmoke.ItseemeddifficulttoescapewithMakcik.范文新人物及事件：Theneighborswhowererushingoutsawthetwokidsandtheoldladyindanger,sotheycametohelprightaway.TwomencarriedMakcikcarefully,andothersledTomandJaneoutofthesmoke.Withthehelpofneighbors,theyallgotoutofthebuildingsafelyjustbeforethefiregotworse.感激：Later,MakcikrecoveredandheshowedgreatgratitudetoJaneandTomfortheirkindnessandbravery.Tomfeltveryproudofhissister.升华：Helearnedthatbeingbravemeanshelpingothers,evenwhenyouareafraid.1.

动作细节链：

poundonthedoor

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threwtheirweightagainst

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wrappedherownjacket

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foughttheirwaythrough

等连续动作，还原救援紧张感2.

主题升华句：

truecouragewasn’ttheabsenceoffear,butchoosingtoactevenwhenyou’reterrified

3.

环境呼应：

thesmokestinginghiseyes

,

coughingviolently

4.

情绪刻画：

heartraced

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facelitupwithhope

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chestfilledwithpride

句式拓展高考英语读后续写10个万能句式（必背）1.

Itsuddenlyoccurredtosbthat…2.

Withouthesitation,sbdid…3.

Nosoonerhadsbdone…than…4.

So…that…5.

Therewasnotimetodo…,sosbdid…immediately.6.

Tearsfilledone’seyesas…7.

Thanksto…,sbfinallydid…8.

Notonlydid…,butalso…9.

Feeling…,sbdid…10.

Itwas…thatmadesbrealize…

1.

Itsuddenlyoccurredtosbthat…例句：ItsuddenlyoccurredtomethatIcouldhelphimout.我突然想到我可以帮他一把。2.

Withouthesitation,sbdid…例句：Withouthesitation,sherantogivehimahand.她毫不犹豫地跑过去帮他。3.

Feeling+情绪,sbdid…例句：Feelingworried,hetriedhisbesttocalmherdown.感到担心，他尽力让她平静下来。4.

So+形/副+that…例句：Hewassonervousthathecouldhardlysayaword.他太紧张了，几乎说不出话。练一练10.

Itwasthenthatsbrealized…例句：ItwasthenthatIrealizedmymistake.就在那时，我意识到了自己的错误6.

Tearsfilledone’seyes.例句：Tearsfilledhereyeswhensheheardthenews.听到这个消息，她热泪盈眶。7.

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