读后续写之助人篇梦想的戏服课件高一英语作文复习专项

ContinuationWriting——Howtoreadandcompletestories2024.11第一师第二中学

田秀丽读后续写八大话题：助人篇、救人篇、亲情篇、动物篇、成长篇、趣事篇、友情篇、旅途和历险篇之助人篇1.不随意增加主要人物2.不添加与原文脱节的细节3.避免频繁使用对话4.段落与两段首句保持一致性，衔接有逻辑，第一段内容与文章衔接紧密，第一段最后一句与第二段开头呼应衔接，第二段最后一句总结升华主题5.续写内容传播正能量弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如迷路了但最终一定回到了家；失败了或遇到困难了，但最终一定成功了；吵架了但最后一定是言归于好,和睦相处；犯错了，最后一定会改过自新，重新做人；贼逃了，最后一定是绳之以法等等。DaysofJanuarywerepassingandeverygirlofthegirls'schoolwasveryhappyastheselectionsforplaysanddancesfortheannualfunctionwerestarted.Sneha’sclassteacher,Pravina,askedSneha,herfavoritestudent,toplaytheleadingcharacterinaplay.Becauseshewasneverallowedtoplayamalecharacter,Snehajumpedwithjoy,but

suddenlyshebecamesoseriousaboutthecostumes.HowmanytimesIhavetotellyounottoparticipateinplaysanddances!Can’tyouunderstandthatwecan’tbuyorborrowthecostlycostume?Youcantakepartindebates,quizes,oressaycompetitionsinwhichyoudon’thavetospendmoneyandyoucanenrichyourknowledge,”hermothersaidangrilywhenSnehatoldheraboutit.Thereasonbehindallthiswastheirfinancialcondition.SnehaalwayshadanideaaboutitinherhomeandshewasmatureenoughtosayNOtoanymoneydemandingcondition.Thistime,however,thedesireoffameandtheexcitementoftheactivitywereovercomingherfear.Snehawentinherroomhidinghersadnessdeepinherheart.ShewassonervousaboutwhatwasgoingtohappenwhenshewouldtellPravinaaboutleavingtheplay.Wouldshewarnhernottoallowherinanycompetition?Nowitwasclearthatshehadtoleavetheplay.Thenextday,downheartedSnehaactedlikenothinghadhappenedandgotreadyforschool.HermomorderedhertosayNOfortheplay.SnehaalwayslovedPravinabecausewhenevertherewasaplayordance,thegirlsdidnotneedtobeworriedaboutanythingrelatedwithmoney.Shewouldfindawaytohelp.ButSnehadidn’twanttotellherthetruth.1.阅读所给文章，以及两句段首句，整理补充主要情节线。WhenWhereWhoWhatWhyHowJanuary，Thenextday学校、家Sneha，Pravina，Sneha’smom退出演出Snehacan’tbuyorborrowthecostlycostumeintroductionbuild-upproblem/dilemmaresolutionending学校戏剧和舞蹈选拔开始。为戏服的事发愁。退出这次演出。续写部分Pravina帮助解决没钱买戏服的难题我顺利参加演出。Snehawenttotheteacher,“Idon’twanttotakepartintheplayandI’mleaving.”Pravinastoodpatiently,waitingfortheperformancetobegin.老师帮忙解决没钱买戏服的难题。表演过程，表演结果，升华主题。续写的主要内容Para1:Snehawenttotheteacher,“Idon’twanttotakepartintheplayandI’mleaving.”Para2:Pravinastoodpatiently,waitingfortheperformancetobegin.老师皱眉并温柔的询问原因。对话，加表情Sneha暗自激动，她知道自己终于可以参加这次演出了。场景一（承上）场景二（过渡）场景三（启下）最后一句衔接下一段Sneha忍不住掉眼泪，承认买不起戏服。老师向Sneha伸出援手，借给她戏服。对话加表情加动作描写加心理描写场景四（承上）场景五（结局）场景六（点题）Sneha穿着戏服走上舞台，自信、充满热情，把角色演活了加动作描写，衔接第二段第一句观众台上，所有人欢呼鼓掌。那一刻，喜悦感向她袭来。从众人表现写表演成功感受的变化表演过后，Sneha向老师表达了她的感谢。老师说永远不要放弃自己的梦想。点明主题+主题升华Snehawenttotheteacher,“Idon’twanttotakepartintheplayandI’mleaving.”HervoicewassodeterminedthatPravinawonderedwhyshehadsuchachangeinherattitude.“MumsaysIcanlearnmoreifItakepartinadebate,”shelookedaway,tryingtohideherunwillingness.Soon,PravinamadeoutwhatreallywasshoutinginSneha’sdeepheart.Withasmileonherface,Pravinapromisednotonlycouldsheperformintheplaybutshewouldgetthechancetojoininthedebate.Sheofferedahandtoher,sayingtherehappenedtobeacostumeathomewhichcouldbelenttoher.Excitedsecretly,sheknewshewasgoingtoattendtheshow.Snehawenttotheteacher,“Idon’twanttotakepartintheplayandI’mleaving.”Hearingthis,Pravinawasshocked.ShepulledSnehaasidegentlyandaskedwhatwaswrong.Atfirst,Snehahesitated,buttheteacher’swarmeyes

encouragedhertopouroutherfamily’sfinancialtroubleandherfearofnotbeingabletoaffordthecostume.Tohersurprise,Pravinasmiledsoftlyandtoldhernottoworry.Shehadalreadypreparedasparecostumeforher,whichwaspasseddownfromformerstudentsandfreetouse.Overjoyed,Snehahuggedhertightlyandpromisedtopracticehardeveryday.Snehawenttotheteacher,“Idon’twanttotakepartintheplayandI’mleaving.”Pravinafrowned,sensingsomethingwaswrong.ShesatSnehadownandaskedsoftlywhatwastroublingher.Unabletoholdbackhertears,Snehaadmittedshecouldn’taffordthecostume,eventhoughshe’ddreamedofplayingtheroleformonths.Insteadofbeingangry,Pravinasqueezedherhandandpromisedtohelp.Thatnight,shestayeduplatealteringanoldcostumesheowned,adjustingittofitSnehaperfectly.Onthedayoftheshow,shehandedittoSnehawithawarmsmile.Pravinastoodpatiently,waitingfortheperformancetobegin.ShewaswaitingforthepreciousmomentwhenSnehaappearedinthecostumesheboughtforSneha’sdream.Asthelightfadedout,theleadrolecameonstageandcaughttheattentionofalltheaudience.Confidentandbrave,shevividlybroughtthecharactertolife.EveryonecheeredandapplaudedwhentheshowendedasSneha’sfirstmalecharacterturnedoutabigsuccess.WhenSnehawasreadytogivebackthecostumetoPravina,shewastoldtokeepitasareminderofnoteasilylettinggoofdreams.Pravinastoodpatiently,waitingfortheperformancetobegin.WhenSnehasteppedontothestageinthewell-fittedcostume,hereyesshonewithconfidence.Shedeliveredherlinesperfectlyandmovedtheaudiencewithhervividacting.Thewholeschoolcheeredloudlyasshetookabow.Aftertheshow,SneharantoPravina,tearsofgratituderollingdownhercheeks.Theteacherpattedher