专题09书面表达16篇（期中真题汇编）七年级英语下学期

专题09书面表达16篇（期中真题汇编，上海专用）一、书信作文1．(2425七下·上海奉贤区·期中)时刻拥有一颗感恩的心最为可贵。感恩是中华民族的传统美德。在你成长的过程中，一定有人帮助过你。请根据要点提示，给你最想感谢的人写一封信，表达你对他/她的感激之情，作文中不得出现自己的真实姓名。Usethefollowingpointsasreference:(1)Saythankyoutoaparticularperson(某个人).(2)Whatdidhe/shedotohelpyou?(3)Howdidyoufeelaboutthehelp?AthankyouletterDear______________,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,XXX【答案】例文AthankyouletterDearMs.Lee,

Iwanttosay“thankyou”toyou.Inmyjuniorhighschoollife,youhelpsmealot.

YoutakegoodcareofmeandoftenhelpmewithmyEnglish.WhenIamintrouble,youalwaysencouragemetofacemydifficultiesandgivemegoodadvice.IstillrememberthatonceIfailedinanimportantEnglishexamandwasupset.YoucheeredmeupandtoldmesomegoodwaystoimprovemyEnglish.Thankstoyou,IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglishandambeingmoreandmoreinterestedinit.

I’mverythankfulforallthatyouhavedoneforme.Ihopethatyouarehealthyandhappyeveryday.Yourssincerely,XXX【来源】上海市奉贤区20242025学年七年级下学期期中练习英语试卷【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。[写作步骤]第一步、点明感谢对象（直接点题）；第二步、通过具体事例说明感恩原因；第三步、表达感恩之情和表达美好祝愿。[亮点词汇]①takegoodcareof好好照顾②encouragesb.todosth.鼓励某人做某事③cheersb.up使某人振作起来[高分句型]①WhenIamintrouble,youalwaysencouragemetofacemydifficultiesandgivemegoodadvice.(when引导时间状语从句)2．(2425七下·上海崇明区正大中学、东门中学、实验中学·期中)Writeatleast60wordsonyour“Thankyouletter”accordingtothegiveninformation.(根据以下情境写一封不少于60个词的“感谢信”）请写一封感谢信给那位曾在你生命中留下深刻印记，给予你无私帮助的人。Thefollowingaspectsshouldbeincluded:1.Whowouldyouliketothank?2.Whatdidhe/shedoforyou?3.Howdoyoufeelaboutthehelp?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：DearMissSmith,I’mwritingtothankyouforyourhelpwhenIwasintrouble.WhenIlostmyconfidenceinEnglishlearningbecauseofalowscore,you,whoalwaysencouragedme,spentyourfreetimetutoringme.Youtaughtmeusefullearningmethodsandhelpedmeimprovemyskills.Thankstoyou,I’vemadegreatprogress.I’mreallygratefulforyourkindness.Yours,Linda【来源】上海市崇明区正大中学、东门中学、实验中学20242025学年七年级下学期期中考试英语试卷【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇书信作文。②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”，穿插“一般现在时”、“现在进行时”、“现在完成时”。③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要点齐全，可适当补充。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。用“我写信是为了感谢您在我遇到困难时给予的帮助”引出下文。第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体描述对方做了什么以及影响。第三步，书写结语。表达“我真的很感激您的好意”，进行情感升华。[亮点词汇]①introuble处于麻烦之中②confidence信心③becauseof因为[高分句型]①WhenIlostmyconfidenceinEnglishlearningbecauseofalowscore,you,whoalwaysencouragedme,spentyourfreetimetutoringme.(When引导的时间状语从句；who引导的定语从句)3．(2425七下·上海闵行区五四制·期中)假设你是王一鸣，某英语网站Teenlandforum(青少年园地论坛)正在举办以“感恩父母”为题的征文活动。请根据提示中的内容用英文写一封感谢信，不少于60字，标点符号不记字数。提示：1.Whoistheperson?2.Whathasheorshedoneforyou?(Giveoneortwoexamples)3.Whathaveyoulearnedfromhimorher?(注意：1.文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)Dear________,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Allthebest,WangYiming【答案】例文DearMom/Ded,

Myjuniorschoollifeisingtoend.Iwanttoshowmythankstoyouforthedevotiontometheseyears.SinceIwasborn,youhavingbeentakingcareof

me.Whenrelax.Youg,youwerethefirsttogetupandpreparebreakfastforme.WhenIfailedandfeltverydisappointed,youencouragedmetostaycalmandrelax.Youshowedmehowtodotheexperimentpatiently.Ilearnedthepatiencefromyou.Forme,nothingismorevaluableformethanthewarmthyouhavegivenandI’llspendmoretimestayingandmunicatingwithyou.

【来源】上海市闵行区五四制20242025学年七年级下学期期中考试英语试卷【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；③提示：语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条里清楚，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表达自己对父母的感激之情；第二步，说明父母为自己的付出，如照顾，陪伴，鼓励等；第三步，说明自己对父母的回报，如陪伴，沟通，理解等。[亮点词汇]①beborn出生②takegoodcareof仔细照顾③getup起床④onone’swayto在去……的路上⑤encouragesb.todosth鼓励某人做某事[高分句型]①SinceIwasborn,youhavingbeentakingcareofme.(Since引导的时间状语从句)②WhenIfailedandfeltverydisappointed,youencouragedmetostaycalmandrelax.(when引导的时间状语从句)二、电子邮件4．(2425七下·上海宝山教会学校·期中)假如你是李华，上周日你校师生去幸福敬老院(HappinessNursingHome)开展志愿活动。请用英语给你的笔友Mary写一封邮件，介绍一下本次活动。TimelastSundayHowtogettherebyschoolbusActivities…Feelingstired/happy/…要求：1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；4.词数：不少于60词。DearMary,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sincerely,LiHua【答案】例文DearMary,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutourvolunteeractivitylastSunday.OurteachersandstudentswenttoHappinessNursingHomebyschoolbus.Whenwearrived,westartedtohelp.Someofuscleanedtheroomsandmadethebeds.Sometalkedwiththeoldpeopleandreadnewspapersforthem.Wealsogavesomegiftstotheoldpeople.Theywerereallyhappy.Wewerealittletiredbuthappybecausewecouldbringhappinesstotheold.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Sincerely,LiHua【来源】上海市宝山教会学校20242025学年七年级下学期期中考试英语试题【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍开展志愿活动的时间和地点；第二步，具体介绍活动情况；第三步，表达个人感受并书写结语。[亮点词汇]①makethebeds整理床铺②lookforwardto期盼③hearfrom收到……的来信[高分句型]①Whenwearrived,westartedtohelp.(when引导的时间状语从句)②Wewerealittletiredbuthappybecausewecouldbringhappinesstotheold.(because引导的原因状语从句)三、材料作文5．(2425七下·上海七宝中学附属鑫都实验中学·期中)以“如何与他人有效地沟通”为主题写一篇不少于60个词的短文。Suggestedquestions:1.Whattipswillyougivetomunicatewithotherseffectively?2.Howdoyoumunicatewithothers?_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文HowtomunicatewithOthersEffectivelyGoodmunicationiskeytobuildingstrongrelationships.Herearesometips:First,listenactivelyandshowinterestinothers’words.Second,speakclearlyandpolitely,usingsimplelanguage.Third,keepeyecontacttoshowrespect.Finally,bepatientandavoidinterrupting.Ialwaystrytounderstandothers’feelingsandexpressmyideaskindly.Byfollowingthesesteps,wecanmunicatebetter!【来源】上海市七宝中学附属鑫都实验中学20242025学年七年级下学期期中英语试题【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。③提示：根据提示写作。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。[写作步骤]第一步：点明交流的好处，引出下文交流的技巧；第二步：介绍一些交流技巧，包括倾听、清楚地说、眼神交流和耐心等；第三步：写出总结。[亮点词汇]①showinterestin表现出对……的兴趣②keepeyecontact保持眼神交流③trytounderstand试着理解[高分句型]First,listenactivelyandshowinterestinothers’words.(祈使句)6．(2425七下·上海浦东新区惠南学区·期中)Writea60wordpositionaboutthetopic“Ahelpinghand”.Pleasedescribeatimewhenyouhelpedothersorreceivedhelpfromsomeoneelse.以“Ahelpinghand”为题写一篇60词左右的短文。请描述一次你帮助他人或者接受他人帮助的经历。Youmaythinkaboutthefollowingquestions.(以下问题仅供参考)1.Whenandwheredidithappen?2.Whatwastheproblem?Howdidthehelpeabout?3.Whatwastheresultoftheact?4.Howdidyoufeelafteryouofferedorreceivedhelp?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AhelpinghandLastterm,atschool,myclassmateLilywasbadatmath.Shefeltreallysad.Iwantedtohelpher.Soeverydayafterclass,westudiedmathtogether.Iexplainedthehardpartstoherpatiently.Wedidmanyexercises.Afterweeksofhardwork,Lilymadegreatprogressinthemathexam.Shethankedmehappily,andIfeltastrongsenseofachievement.Thisexperienceletmeknowthatgivingahelpinghandnotonlyhelpsothersbutalsomakesmyselffeelgood.【来源】上海市浦东新区惠南学区20242025学年（五四制）七年级下学期期中考试英语试题【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：考生注意写作需涵盖事件发生的时间、地点，遇到的问题，帮助是如何开展的，结果怎样，以及帮助或被帮助后的感受。[写作步骤]第一步，先描述问题以及介绍事情发生的时间和地点；第二步，具体介绍帮助的过程及结果；第三步，书写结束语，表达助人的感受。[亮点词汇]①bebadat不擅长②makegreatprogress取得巨大的进步③astrongsenseofachievement一种强烈的成就感[高分句型]Thisexperienceletmeknowthatgivingahelpinghandnotonlyhelpsothersbutalsomakesmyselffeelgood.(that引导的宾语从句)7．(2425七下·上海外国语大学附属浦东外国语学校·期中)Writeatleast80wordsbasedonthetopic“AFrustratingExperience”.Youshouldincludethefollowingelementsinyourposition:1.Whatwastheproblem?2.Whatdidyoudoaboutit?3.Whatwastheresult?4.Howdidyoufeelaboutit?5.Whathaveyoulearnedfromthisexperience?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：AFrustratingExperienceLastweek,Iplannedtogototheparkwithmyfriend.ButwhenIarrivedatthemeetingplace,myfrienddidn’tshowup.Iwaitedforalongtime,gettingmoreandmoreworried.Itriedcalling,butthephonewasoff.Finally,Iwenthomealone,feelingreallysadandfrustrated.Later,myfriendexplainedthattherewasafamilyemergency.Ilearnedthatweshouldmunicateintimewhenproblemshappen.AndIalsoknewthatIshouldnotjumptoconclusionseasily.Thisexperiencetaughtmetheimportanceofunderstandingandpatience.【来源】上海市上海外国语大学附属浦东外国语学校20242025学年七年级下学期期中英语试卷【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题，讲述上周遇到的问题以及自己的处理方式；第二步，描述事情的结果和自己的感受；第三步，书写结语，此次经历自己的收获。[亮点词汇]①showup出现，露面②trydoingsth.试图做某事③frustrated沮丧的④jumptoconclusions仓促下结论[高分句型]①ButwhenIarrivedatthemeetingplace,myfrienddidn’tshowup.（when引导时间状语从句）②AndIalsoknewthatIshouldnotjumptoconclusionseasily.（that引导宾语从句）四、话题作文8．(2425七下·上海长宁区延安初级中学·期中)Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothetitle“________addedspicetomylife”.我们的生活因为很多美好的事物而多姿多彩。请以“________让我的生活有滋有味！”为题，结合自己的经历，写一篇不少于60词的短文。标点符号不占格；照抄阅读语篇不得分。请在答题纸上将标题写完整，文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：ReadingaddedspicetomylifeReadingmakesmylifecolorful.Everydayafterschool,Ispendhalfanhourreadingbooks.LastmonthIreadTheLittlePrince.Thestorytaughtmetovaluefriendship.WhenIfeellonely,readingcheersmeup.Ialsoshareinterestingstorieswithmyclassmates.Throughbooks,Icanvisitdifferentcountriesandmeetvariouscharacters.Readingislikeaddingspicestomylife.Itmakesordinarydaysspecial!【来源】上海市长宁区延安初级中学20242025学年七年级下学期期中练习英语试卷【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：以一般现在时为主，穿插一般过去时描述具体事件；③提示：需结合自身经历，突出所选事物如何丰富生活，避免空洞描述。[写作步骤]第一步：补全标题并点题。直接表明“阅读”让生活多彩，呼应标题；第二步：具体阐述。通过日常习惯(每日阅读)、具体事例(《小王子》的启示)、情感体验(驱散孤独)、社交分享(与同学互动)和想象拓展(书中世界)多角度展开；第三步：升华主题。用比喻总结阅读的作用，强调其改变生活的力量。[亮点词汇]①cheersb.up使某人振作②valuefriendship珍视友谊③throughbooks通过书籍④variouscharacters多样的人物⑤ordinarydays平凡的日子[高分句型]①Thestorytaughtmetovaluefriendship.(动词不定式作宾语补足语)②WhenIfeellonely,readingcheersmeup.(when引导时间状语从句)9．(2425七下·上海金杨中学·期中)生活中，总有某些事物令人难以忘怀：也许是一首触动心灵的音乐，一次与同伴的有效沟通，或是帮助他人、接受他人帮助的温暖瞬间。请以“________ImpressedMeMost”为题，写一篇英语短文。要求如下：1.具体描述让你印象深刻的事物或事件，并说明原因；2.补全标题（参考示例:TheSong“…”/ThatMatch/HelpingothersImpressedMeMost等），字数不少于60字。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文TheKindnessofaStrangerImpressedMeMostLastwinter,Islippedonanicyroadandhurtmyankle.Astrangerquicklystoppedtohelpmestandupandevenwalkedmetoanearbystore.Herwarmsmileandselflessactdeeplymovedme.Thisexperiencemademerealizehowsmallactsofkindnesscanbrightensomeone’sday.Sincethen,I’vetriedtopayitforwardbyhelpingothersinneed.【来源】上海市金杨中学20242025学年七年级下学期期中测评英语试题【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：写作提示已给出，考生注意按照提示写作，并注意时态。[写作步骤]第一步，补全题目；第二步，具体介绍自己印象深刻的事物或事件，并说明原因；第三步，书写结尾，介绍自己的收获。[亮点词汇]①immediately迅速地②standup站起[高分句型]①Thisexperiencemademerealizehowsmallactsofkindnesscanbrightensomeone’sday.（宾语从句）一、书信作文1．(2425七下·上海闵行区莘松中学·期中)Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Athankyouletterto…”.（以“给……的一封感谢信”为主题写一篇不少于60个词的短文。信件格式已给，标点符号不占格。）在日常生活与学习中，我们得到过很多人的帮助，令我们时常心存感激。请选择一个对象，结合你们之间的一次真实经历，写一封感谢信，谈一谈你为何要感谢他/她，说一说你当时的感受。（注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：DearMrsWang,Nowordcandescribemythankstoyou,myEnglishteacher.WhenIfirstcameintothemiddleschool,IwaspooratmyEnglish.Oneday,youaskedmetogotoyourofficeafterschool.Youlistenedtomyproblempatientlyandencouragedmetokeepstudyinghard.WemadeaplanformyEnglishstudy.Afterthat,youstartedtohelpmefromtimetotime.Finally,ImadegreatprogressinEnglish.Iamverygratefulforallthehelpyouhavegivenme.【来源】上海市闵行区莘松中学20242025学年下学期七年级英语期中卷【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一封书信；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明要感谢的人；第二步，具体阐述因为什么事情要感谢英语老师；第三步，书写结语，再次表达感谢之情。[亮点词汇]①asksb.todosth.叫某人做某事②encouragesb.todosth.鼓励某人做某事③fromtimetotime不时地[高分句型]①WhenIfirstcameintothemiddleschool,IwaspooratmyEnglish.

(when引导的时间状语从句)②Iamverygratefulforallthehelpyouhavegivenme.(省略that的定语从句）2．(2425七下·上海崇明区九校·期中)假设你是张鹏，你的美国朋友Peter下个月将作为交换生来中国学习，请用英文写信，向他介绍中西文化差异，并提出相关建议。信件需要包含以下内容：相关建议（2点）注意：（1）词数不少于60（文章开头和署名已给出，不计入总词数）；（2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。DearPeter,IamgladtoknowthatyouareingtoChinaasanexchangestudentnextmonth._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,ZhangPeng【答案】例文DearPeter,IamgladtoknowthatyouareingtoChinaasanexchangestudentnextmonth.Atthesametime,IwanttotellyoutherearemanydifferencesbetweenChineseandWesterncultures.Whenyouhaveamealwithothers,youshouldn’teatuntiltheoldpeoplesitdown.It’simpolitetotalkwhenyourmouthisfulloffood.Asforlanguages,youcantalkabout“ifyouhaveeatenameal”or“whereareyougoing”whenyoumeetyourfriend.Forstudents,wemustwearschooluniformsonschooldays.Thegirlsarenotallowedtohavetheirearspierced.Ithinkyoushouldpaymoreattentiontothetraffic,becauseyouwillheardrivershonkingtheirhornstowarnpedestrianstopayattentiontoroadconditions,whileitisimpoliteinUS.Ithinkthesesuggestionscanhelpyouandhopeyoucanenjoyyourself.Yourssincerely,ZhangPeng【来源】上海市崇明区九校20242025学年七年级下学期期中联考英语试题【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一封书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，开头已给出；第二步，从饮食，语言，学校仪表以及交通等方面介绍差异性；第三步，表达自己的希望和祝愿。[亮点词汇]①atthesametime同时②sitdown坐下③talkabout谈论[高分句型]①IamgladtoknowthatyouareingtoChinaasanexchangestudentnextmonth.（宾语从句）

②Whenyouhavemealawithothers,youshouldn’teatuntiltheoldpeoplesitdown.（时间状语从句）③Ithinkyoushouldpaymoreattentiontothetraffic,becauseyouwillheardrivershonkingtheirhornstowarnpedestrianstopayattentiontoroadconditions,whileitisimpoliteinUS.（宾语从句；原因状语从句；时间状语从句）④Ithinkthesesuggestionscanhelpyouandhopeyoucanenjoyyourself.（宾语从句）二、材料作文3．(2425七下·上海静安区西初级中学·期中)助人为乐是一种良好的品格。在你的成长过程中，一定接受过来自父母、老师、同学、朋友的帮助或者帮助过其他人。请结合自身经历，以“Ahelpinghand”为题，写一篇不少于50字的短文。(文章中不得出现真实信息以及照抄阅读文章，否则无分)要求：1.讲述一次他人帮助你或你帮助他们的经历。2.谈谈当时的情况以及你的收获或感受。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

AHelpingHand

Oneday,myclassmateLiHuaforgotherEnglishbook.Shelookedworriedbeforeclass.Isharedmybookwithher,andwereadtogether.Afterclass,shethankedmewithasmile.Ifelthappybecauseasmallhelpcanmakeabigdifference.Fromthis,Ilearnedthatkindnessconnectshearts.【来源】上海市静安区市西初级中学20242025学年七年级下学期期中考试英语试卷【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为一般过去时态；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，无语法和拼写错误。[写作步骤]第一步：开门见山，引出帮助同学的故事。第二步：具体阐述事件经过，包括李华忘带书、作者与她共用书本一起阅读、课后李华的感谢等；第三步：书写结语，表达帮助他人的感悟和意义。[亮点词汇]①sharesth.withsb.与某人分享某物②afterclass下课后③makeadifferenc有影响、起作用[高分句型]①Ifelthappybecauseasmallhelpcanmakeabigdifference.（原因状语从句）②Fromthis,Ilearnedthatkindnessconnectshearts.（宾语从句）4．(2425七下·上海宝山实验学校·期中)生活中处处充满温暖，帮助他人不仅能带给别人快乐，也能让自己收获感动与成长。请以AnUnforgettableExperienceofOfferingHelp为题，根据以下要点，描述一次你帮助他人的难忘经历，字数不少于60词。(1)Whowasinneedofhelpandwhatwashisorherproblem?(2)Howdidyouhelphimorherandhowdidyoufeelaboutit?(3)Whathaveyoulearned/gainedfromyourexperience?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：AnUnforgettableExperienceofOfferingHelpLastmonth,mynewclassmateTomhaddifficultywithhismath.Hefailedhisfirsttestandfeltupset.Ispenthalfanhoureverydayhelpinghimwithmathproblems.Whenhegotagoodgradeinthenextexam,hewashappyandthankedmealot.Ifeltreallyproud.Thisunforgettableexperiencemademerealizethathelpingotherscanbringhappiness.【来源】上海市宝山实验学校20242025学年七年级下学期期中英语试题【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：主要为“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，无语法和拼写错误。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍需要帮助的人和问题。第二步，介绍主动提供帮助的过程；第三步，表达感悟。[亮点词汇]①havedifficulty有麻烦②feelreallyproud感到非常骄傲[高分句型]①Whenhegotagoodgradeinthenextexam,hewashappyandthankedmealot.(when引导时间状语从句)②Thisunforgettableexperiencemademerealizethathelpingotherscanbringhappiness.(宾语从句)5．(2425七下·上海浦东新区四校联考·期中)Writeapassageofatleast50wordsonthetopic“Asmallactofkindness”.（以“一个小小的善举”为题，写一篇不少于50字的短文，标点符号不占格。）亲爱的同学，在你的生活中，你一定帮助过他人或者被他人帮助过。请描述一段你的真实经历。Suggestedquestions:1）Whodidyouhelp?/Whowasinneedofhelp?2）Whatwastheproblem?3）Howdidyouhelphim/her?/Howdidhe/shehelpyou?4）Howdidyoufeelabouttheactofkindness?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】参考范文：ASmallActofKindnessLastweekend,Isawanoldladystandingatthecrossroads,lookingveryworried.Sheseemedtobelost.Iwentuptoherandaskedifsheneededhelp.Shetoldmethatshecouldn’tfindherwayhome.SoIdecidedtohelpher.Iaskedforheraddressandthenledhertotherightbusstop.Ievenacpaniedheronthebusandmadesureshegotoffatthecorrectstop.Theoldladywasverygratefulandkeptthankingme.Atthatmoment,Ifeltreallyhappy.Asmallactofkindnesscanbringsomuchwarmthtoothers.Itmakesmeunderstandthathelpingothersisawonderfulthing.【来源】上海市浦东新区四校联考20242025学年七年级下学期期中考试英语试题【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，描述自己帮助了谁；第二步，描述帮助人的过程；第三步，谈谈自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①decidetodosth决定做某事②leadsbtosp带某人去某地③getoff下车[高分句型]Ievenacpaniedheronthebusandmadesureshegotoffatthecorrectstop.（宾语从句）三、话题作文15．(2425七下·上海风华初级中学·期中)Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“I’dliketogivemythanksto________”.(请以“我想要感谢________”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。)提示：在日常生活中，很多人给了我们无微不至的关怀，如家人、老师、朋友等，有时也帮助我们克服小小的烦恼和矛盾。请谈谈你想要感谢的人，并阐述理由，结合你的经历谈谈体会。(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分)___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________