Unit4Sharing话题写作之应用文写作课件高中英语人教版

Unit4SHARING人教版2019选择性必修第四册WriteaSpeechaboutaid应用文：写一演讲稿读话题写作文高二下

LearningobjectivesAttheendofclass,youwillbeableto：1.Toanalysethetextstructureandgraspthewritingcharacteristicsofaspeech.2.TolearntowriteaspeechaboutChina’saidtoothercountries.3.Tobeawareoftheimportanceofgivinghelptoothercountries.

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引出话题01⑴Volunteeringdoesn'tonlyimproveyourlife，butalsothelivesofothers.志愿活动不仅能改善你的生活，还同样改善别人的生活。⑵Ajoythat'ssharedisajoymadedouble.与人分享快乐，喜悦会加倍。⑶Atroublesharedisatroublehalved.与人分担烦恼，忧愁会减半。⑷Compassion,helpinghands,toleranceofbosom,willmakeyoumorebeautiful.怜悯之心、助人之手、宽容之怀，会让你变得更美丽。⑸Helpotherstostartfromdailythingsnotbecauseofthegoodlittle.助人要从日常小事做起，勿因善小而不为。名言潮语Asachildgrowingup,Ihaveveryfewmemoriesofthetimeswhenwegatheredasafamilytositdownandeatdinnertogether.Igrewupinahomewherebothofmyparentsworked.Mymothertaughtschool,andmyfatherworkedduringthenightatalocalchemicalplant.Therewasnotmuchtimeavailableforustositdowntoeatdinnertogetherduetomyparents’conflictingworkschedulesandtheextracurricularactivitiesinwhichmysisterandIparticipated.Itwasn’tuntilIgotmarriedandhadtwochildrenofmyownthatIbegantorealizetheimportanceofeatingdinnertogether.Inmyfamilythereareelementsthattakeusawayfromeachother,dayinanddayout,butasamotherIfeelitismyresponsibilitytobringusallbacktogetheragainattheendoftheday.Inmyhouse,dinnertimeisatimeofthanks.Igivethanksforthefoodweshare,butIammorethankfulforthefamilyIshareitwith.Dinnertimeisatimeforustoshareourday,andreflectonourthoughts.Itisalsoatimewhenwelearnabouthonesty,perseverance,courage,sympathyandfriendship.Aboveallitisatimewhenmyfamilyareabletoconnectwiththeonestheylove.美文欣赏[探索发现]1.Whatistheauthor’spurposeinwritingthepassage?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________.

Totellusitisimportanttohavefamilydinnertogether语言输入:

跟着课文练布局02ThestructureofthespeechRhetoricalquestion（设问）TopicofthespeechTellapersonalstoryContentofthespeechMakeanappealRestatethethemeToattractattentionoftheaudiencetothetopic

TomakethespeechconvincingandinformativeTomakethespeechinspiringandimpressive演讲主要表达个人或群体的主张、看法。演讲一般由称呼语、正文和结束语三部分组成。演讲①简单介绍，表示荣幸，提出主题（方法：开门见山/引用名言或谚语/设问...)②阐述主题（方法：叙述自己的经历或故事/举例子/引用...)③（进行总结），表达期望Summary活用课文：

跟着课文学词汇031.________________________________________inviteyoutoattendtheprogram.我很荣幸能邀请您参加节目。(privilege)(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷邀请信)2.Heisaresponsibledoctor,andhe__________________________________.他是一个有责任感的医生,值得受人尊敬。(deserve)(2020·全国卷Ⅰ参赛短文)3.He_________________________wheneverIamintrouble,forwhichIappreciategreatly.每当我有困难时，他总是愿意帮助我，对此我非常感激。(helpout)(2020·全国卷Ⅰ参赛短文)4.___________________,wearingschooluniformsisbeneficialtostudentsinmanyways.如上所述，穿校服在许多方面对学生是有益的。活用写作词汇Iam/feelprivileged/It’saprivilegeformetodeservesrespect/respecting/toberespectedisalwayswillingtohelpoutAsmentionedabove5.Thefilm_______________whatisbeingdiscussedinclass.(relevant)＝Thefilm_____________whatisbeingdiscussedinclass.(relate)＝Thefilm__________________________whatisbeingdiscussedinclass.(connect/associate)这部电影与课堂上正在讨论的事情有关。6.Theself­disciplineisrequiredto_________________elevenminutesearlierthanusual.我需要这种自律——比平时早11分钟把自己从床上拽起来。(drag)7.Moreandmoreparents_____________________theirgrandparentsathomewhileworkinginthecity.越来越多的父母在去城市打工时把孩子托付给家里的爷爷奶奶照顾。(resign)8.Hegavemetwosuggestionsand_________________________________.他给了我两个建议，后一个比前一个好。(late)活用写作词汇isrelevanttodragmyselfoutofbedresigntheirchildrentothelatterisbetterthantheformerisrelatedtoisconnected/associatedwith活用课文：

跟着课文学佳句03细节描写原：I'vebeendyingtohavesomeofmyfavouritesweets,andit'salwaysnicetogetmail！我一直非常渴望吃一些我最喜欢的糖果，而且收到邮包总是令人开心不已！1.我听说你渴望得到一些如何交朋友的建议。Iheardyou______________________________________howtomakefriends.原：Doyouthinkstudentsdoingvolunteerworkisofanyuse?你认为学生做志愿者工作有用吗？2.毋庸置疑，海洋保护至关重要。(2022全国甲卷满分作文)Undoubtedly,oceanconservation_____________________.原：manyofthepeoplearequitepoorandlivewithoutthingswetakeforgranted,suchaselectricity,runningwater,carsandgoodtransportsystems,andsupermarkets.…我们认为理所当然的东西，在他们的生活中都没有，比如电、自来水、汽车和便捷的交通系统，以及超市。3.我们中的有些人总是理所当然地认为父母或者祖父母应该照顾我们。Someofusalways________________________ourparentsorgrandparentsshouldtakecareofus.weredyingforsomeadviceonisofvitalsignificancetakeitforgrantedthat细节描写4.海洋不仅为我们提供了充足的食物，而且还保持了自然的平衡。(2022·全国甲书面表达)_____________________________________,butalsoitmaintainsthebalanceofnature.5.我们的迷路给我的冒险假期增添了一分特别的滋味，我将终生难忘。Ourbeinglostaddedaspecialtastetomyadventurousvacation____________________________.原：Now,notonlyareTanzanianshelpedbythehospital,butpeopleinneighbouringcountriesarehelpedaswell.现在，有了医院，不仅坦桑尼亚人得到了帮助，而且周边国家的人们也因此受益。原：ManydangerousdiseaseswhicharerareinChinaarequitecommonlycontractedinTanzania.许多在中国很罕见的危险疾病在坦桑尼亚仍有众多患者。NotonlydoesoceanofferussufficientfoodwhichIwouldrememberallmylife03技法点拨：

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①Iamhonoredtohaveachancetospeaktoyoutoday.今天我很荣幸能有机会跟大家讲几句。②MynameisLiPing.TodayIamverygladtohavetheopportunitytomakethispresentation.Ishallbespeakingaboutwhatwecandotoprotecttheenvironment.我是李萍，今天很高兴能有机会做这个演讲。我演讲的内容是我们能为保护环境做些什么。③It'smyhonortostandhereandsaysomethingabouthowtostudyEnglishwell.站在这里，谈谈关于如何学好英语的话题对我来说是件荣耀的事情。1.夺人眼球开头句①(2021·全国乙满分作文)Itsadvantagesareobvious.Itallowsustolearnatanytimewhereverweare.Besides,wecanabsorballkindsofresourcestolearnmoreefficiently.它的优点是显而易见的。它让我们可以随时随地学习。此外，我们可以吸收各种资源来更有效地学习。②(2021·全国乙满分作文)However,itsdisadvantagescannotbeignored.Staringatthescreenisharmfultooureyes.Worsestill,wedon'thavemanyopportunitiestointeractwithourteachersandclassmates.然而，它的缺点也不容忽视。盯着屏幕对我们的眼睛有害。更糟糕的是，我们没有很多机会与老师和同学互动。③Weareveryproudofourselves,believingwecanmakemorecontributionstoabetterworld.我们为自己感到自豪，相信我们会为一个更加美好的世界做出更大的贡献。④Itisapitythatmanypeopledon'trealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotection.遗憾的是，很多人意识不到环境保护的重要性。⑤Asisknowntousall,failureisthemotherofsuccess,butfewpeoplecanreallyunderstandwhatthesayingmeans.我们都知道失败是成功之母，可是很少有人能真正理解这句格言的真谛。2.亮点出彩篇中句①(2021·3月天津满分作文)Allinall,BeijingpossessesakindofpowerthatmakesusfeelthelonghistoryofChinesecultureover5,000years.IfyouvisitBeijing,youwillbeamazedateverythinghere.总而言之，北京拥有一种力量，让我们感受到中国五千多年的悠久文化历史。如果你来北京，你会对这里的一切感到惊奇。②Inconclusion,torealizeadreamisnotthateasy,sowemuststudyhardtofulfillourdreams.总之，实现梦想不是那么容易的，所以我们必须努力学习来实现我们的梦想。③Theearthisourcommonhome.Let'stakeactiontobuildabetteroneforallofus!地球是我们共同的家园。让我们采取行动，为我们所有人建立一个更好的世界！④Thankyouforyourlistening(tomyspeech)．感谢大家倾听(我的演讲)。3.韵味无穷结尾句Boysandgirls/Ladiesandgentlemen,It'snicetoseeallofyouhere.Ifeelhonouredtohavetheopportunitytogive/make/deliveryouaspeech./Itisagreatpleasureformetospeakhere.Thetopicofmyspeechis_______./TodayIwilltalkabout__________.(演讲的主题)Firstofall,______.Secondly,____.What’smore,_____(具体内容)AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion,_______.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wecansafelydrawtheconclusionthat________.That’sallIwanttosayaboutthispoint,thanksforyourattention/listening.(总结演讲)4.写作模板05写作实践：

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假设你是新华中学的李华，将参加主题为“China’saidtoothercountries”的演讲比赛，请撰写一份演讲稿，内容主要包括：1.近年来，非洲频繁遭遇自然灾害，引发疾病流行。2.中国向受灾国家伸出援助之手；3.提供医疗用品；4.加强医疗方面的合作：不仅分享了治疗方法，还向一些国家派遣了医疗队。参考词汇：医疗用品medicalsupplies注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Goodmorning,everyone.IamLiHuafromXinhuaSeniorHighSchool.Itismygreathonortogiveaspeechhere.Mytopicis“China’saidtoothercountries.”_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforyourlistening!典例赏析1、审题定调

本写作要求请撰写一份以“China’saidtoothercountries”为主题的演讲稿，内容主要包括非洲频繁遭遇自然灾害，引发疾病流行、中国向受灾国家伸出援助之手、提供医疗用品以及加强医疗方面合作等。此类文章一般用第一、三人称，时态为一般过去时和一般现在时，但有时要根据实际情况有所变化。2、谋篇布局

针对本篇写作任务，我们可以列出以下提纲：

第一部分：点名演讲的主题；

第二部分：具体介绍中国对其它国家的帮助；

第三部分：总结及升华。第一步：明确要求、布局谋篇1.灾害

2.干旱

3.值得；应受

4.合作

5.转达给……第二部：搜索话题词汇n.disastern.droughtv.deserven.cooperationrelayto（一）完成句子1.中国正在尽力帮助遭受洪涝及干旱的国家。Chinahas__________________________othercountriesthataresufferingfloodsanddrought.2.一方面，中国自愿给他们提供大量的医疗用品。Ontheonehand,China____________________alargequantityofmedicalsuppliesforthem.3.另一方面，中国加强了同他们的医疗合作。________________，Chinastrengthenedmedicalcooperationwiththem.4.中国不仅分享了对付因受灾而引发的疾病的治疗办法，而且还向一些国家派遣了医疗队。China____________________________todealwiththedisastersbutalsosentmedicalteamstosomecountriestohelptreatthediseasescausedbythedisasters.第三步：巧用话题词汇句式madegreateffortstoaidvolunteeredtoprovideOntheotherhandnotonlysharedtheways（二）斟酌词句，靓化表达5.用含有现在分词作定语的句子改写句1。_____________________________________________________________.6.用部分倒装改写句4。________________________________________________________________