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StoryContinuationWritingILeadinHaveyouevertakenpartinareadingprogram?IIReadtosetthetoneWhenandwhere,whodidwhatforwhatpurpose?mainidea：Onedayinthirdgradeinthelibrary,theauthorwaspairedwithEvan,astrugglingbutphysicallybiggerreader,foratwice-weeklyschoolreadingprogramthroughcreativetricks.toimprovehisreadingkeyelementsofastory:WhenWhereWhoWhatWhyTipsforwriting:#1Bearthemainideaandthewritingpurposeinmindwhensettingthetoneofyourwriting.IIReadtosetthetoneWhydoestheauthorwritethisstory?Toshowhowasimpleactofhelpingotherscanleadtomeaningfulfriendshipandpersonalgrowthforbothsides.writingpurpose：setthetoneIIIReadtoplantheplot"My-mydadhaslongpassed,"Evanreply.AfterEvanlethisinnerstrugglesout,heslowlybegantochange.IIIReadtoplantheplot"My-mydadhaslongpassed,"Evanreplied.AfterEvanlethisinnerstrugglesout,heslowlybegantochange.HowdidEvanfeel?Whatdidhedo?Whatwastheauthor’sreaction?Whatdidtheauthordo?IIIReadtoplantheplotIfinthefirstactyouhavehungagun

onthewall,theninthefollowingactitshouldbefired.Otherwisedon’tputitthere.Tipsforwriting:#2Findoutthegunsandfirethem!(Respondtothedetailsmentionedinthegivenmaterial.)IIIReadtoplantheplotInthelastsentenceofthisparagraph,youshouldmentiontheinnerstruggles.HowdidEvanfeel?Whatdidhedo?Whatwasmyreaction?WhatdidIdo?"My-mydadhaslongpassed,"Evanreplied.AfterEvanlethisinnerstrugglesout,heslowlybegantochange.前文出现的细节(TheGunontheWall)续写中需要回应(FireIt)①"我"擅长用创意方法教Evan记忆单词(connectingwordswithmemorablephrases)Evan可能用这些方法自己尝试阅读，或②午餐对比：妈妈的爱心便当vsEvan的食堂餐盒可能"我"分享午餐，或Evan解释家庭情况，或友谊加深后的互动③衣服不合身(threesizestoobig)可能涉及家庭背景，或"我"如何更理解他的处境④父亲已去世(dadhaslongpassed)Evan敞开心扉后的心理变化，对阅读/生活的态度转变⑤Evanbegantochange具体描写他在阅读、性格、社交方面的进步IIIReadtoplantheplot⑧AfterEvanlethisinnerstrugglesout,heslowlybegantochange.Howdidtheauthorfeelafterseeinghischanges?Whatdidtheauthorlearnfromtheexperience?WhatspecificchangesdidEvanshowinhisreading?Hisreadingability(Howdoesheimprove?)Hisconfidence(Howdoeshebehavedifferentlyinsessions?)Hisemotionalstate(Howdoesheinteractwiththenarrator?)IVReadtofixthetenseSimplePastTipsforwriting:#3Makesurethetenseisconsistentwith(与…一致)thegivenmaterial.⑦"My-mydadhaslongpassed,"Evanreplied.⑧AfterEvanlethisinnerstrugglesout,heslowlybegantochange.VWriteyourstory!"My-mydadhaslongpassed,"Evanreplied._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________AfterEvanlethisinnerstrugglesout,heslowlybegantochange.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________directspeech—“…”hesaid.+indirectspeech—hesaidthat…SimplePastInthelastsentenceofthisparagraph,youshouldmentiontheinnerstruggles!HowdidEvanfeel?Whatdidhedo?Whatwasmyreaction?WhatdidIdo?Howdidtheauthorfeelafterseeinghischanges?Whatdidtheauthorlearnfromtheexperience?WhatspecificchangesdidEvanshowinhisreading?VIAppreciateapossibleversion"My-mydadhaslongpassed"Evanreplied.Tearswelledupinhisbigeyes,andhisvoicetrembledasheadded,"HeleftuswhenIwaslittle,andMomworkstwojobstosupportus."Myfaceburnedwithshame-l'dneverrealizedmycarelesswordshadhurthimsodeeply.Iquicklyapologized,pattinghisshouldergently.Evanfinallybrokedown,sobbingoutallhisloneliness:noonehelpedhimwithreading,noonemadehimlunch,andhe'dbeenhidinghispainforyears.Thelibrarywasquiet,onlythesoundofhissoftcriesechoing.AfterEvanlethisinnerstrugglesout,heslowlybegantochange.Hestoppedbeingshyinourreadingsessions,raisinghishandtoaskquestionsactively.Iadjustedmymethods,usinghisfavoritesportsstoriestoteachwords,andevensharedmymom'shomemadecookieswithhimatlunch.Monthslater,Evancouldreadpicturebooksfluently,andabrightsmileoftenlituphisface.Thisexperiencetaughtmethattruekindnessisnotjusthelpingsomeoneread-it'sseeingtheirpainandwalkingwiththemthroughit.Thing`swillget