PEP小学英语六年级写作示范大全

PEP小学英语六年级写作示范大全一、写作基础：好文章的“敲门砖”在开始具体的写作示范前，我们先来回顾一些写作的基本要素，这些是写出好文章的基础。1.词汇积累：巧妇难为无米之炊*主题词汇：针对不同的写作主题，积累相关的名词、动词、形容词和副词。例如，写人物时，要想到描述外貌（tall,short,strong,kind）、性格（active,quiet,friendly,helpful）和爱好（likedoingsth.,enjoydoingsth.）的词汇。*同义词替换：避免重复使用同一个词，比如“good”可以根据语境换成“great”,“wonderful”,“excellent”等。2.句型运用：搭建文章的“骨架”*基本句型：熟练掌握五种基本句型：主谓、主谓宾、主系表、主谓双宾、主谓宾补。*常用句式：*介绍自己/他人：Mynameis.../Thisis.../He/Sheis...*表达喜好：Ilike...(doingsth.)/Myfavorite...is...*描述能力：Ican.../He/Shecan...*谈论时间：Inthemorning/afternoon/evening,I.../Onweekends,Iusually...*表达观点：Ithink.../Ibelieve...*简单连接词：学会使用and,but,so,then,first,second,finally等连接词，让句子之间的过渡更自然。3.语法正确：保证文章的“准确性”*时态：重点掌握一般现在时、现在进行时、一般过去时和一般将来时的用法。写日常习惯用一般现在时，写正在发生的事情用现在进行时，写过去发生的事情用一般过去时，写计划或将要发生的事情用一般将来时。*人称和数的一致：主语是第三人称单数时，动词要加-s或-es（一般现在时）。*名词单复数：注意可数名词复数形式的变化。*标点符号：正确使用句号(.)、问号(?)、感叹号(!)、逗号(,)等。4.书写规范：给文章“锦上添花”*字母书写要规范、美观，注意大小写。*单词之间要有适当的距离。*句子开头首字母要大写。二、常见写作类型及示范（一）介绍人物类(IntroducingPeople)写作要点：通常包括姓名、年龄、身份（如学生、老师）、外貌、性格、爱好、能力等。可以介绍自己、朋友、家人、老师等。常用句型：*Mynameis[Name]./Thisismy[friend/classmate],[Name].*He/Sheis[年龄]yearsold.*He/Sheisa[身份].*He/Sheisvery[kind/active/helpful...].*His/Herfavoritefoodis.../His/Herfavoritesubjectis...*He/Shelikes[doingsth.]./He/Sheoften[doessth.]onweekends.*He/Shecan[dosth.well].范文1：介绍自己(IntroduceMyself)Iamanactivegirl.Ilikesportsverymuch.Myfavoritesportisswimming.IusuallygoswimmingwithmyfatheronSundays.Ialsolikereadingbooks.Ithinkreadingcanmakemesmartandhappy.MyfavoritesubjectatschoolisEnglish,becauseit'sinterestingandIcanlearnmanynewwords.IwanttobeanEnglishteacherinthefuture.Doyouwanttobemyfriend?写作小贴士：介绍自己时，可以加入一些个人梦想或愿望，使内容更丰富。范文2：介绍朋友(IntroduceaFriend)Ihaveagoodfriend.HisnameisTom.HeisfromAmerica,butnowhelivesinChinawithhisparents.Heisthesameageasme,twelveyearsold.Tomlikesplayingfootballverymuch.Heisgoodatit.HealsolikesChinesefood,especiallydumplings.Hethinkstheyaredelicious.Onweekends,weusuallygototheparktoplayfootballorgotothelibrarytoreadbooks.Tomisagoodfriend.Iamveryhappytohavehimasmyfriend.写作小贴士：介绍朋友时，可以突出你们一起做的事情，体现友谊。（二）介绍事物/动物类(IntroducingThings/Animals)写作要点：介绍物品时，可以描述其名称、颜色、形状、用途、你对它的感受等。介绍动物时，可以描述其名称、外貌特征、生活习性、喜好、你对它的看法等。常用句型：*Thisismy.../It'sa...*Itis(color)./Ithas(features).*Iuseitto.../Itcan...*Ilikeitbecause.../Itismyfavorite...*(Animal)livesin.../Iteats...*Itcan...(abilities,e.g.,runfast,fly,swim)*Itis...(character,e.g.,cute,lovely,strong)范文1：介绍我的宠物(MyPet)Ihavealovelypet.Itisacat.ItsnameisMimi.Itistwoyearsold.IloveMimiverymuch.Itismygoodfriend.写作小贴士：写宠物时，可以加入一些宠物的趣事或它和你之间的互动，让文章更生动。范文2：介绍我最喜欢的玩具(MyFavoriteToy)Myfavoritetoyisatoybear.Mymothergaveittomeonmytenthbirthday.Ilikeitverymuch.Mytoybearisbrown.Itisabout30centimeterstall.Ithastwobigroundeyes,asmallblacknose,andasmilingmouth.Itsearsaresoftandround.Ioftenputaredbowonitshead,soitlooksverybeautiful.Ioftenplaywithmytoybear.WhenIdomyhomework,itsitsonmydesk,lookingatme.WhenIfeelsad,Ihugit,andIfeelbetter.Ialsotakeittobedwithmeeverynight.Itislikemygoodfriend.Thistoybearisveryspecialtome.Iwillkeepitforalongtime.写作小贴士：写物品时，可以说说它的来历和对你的特殊意义。写作要点：描述日常活动时，要说明时间、做什么事情、和谁一起做、感觉如何。写计划时，要说明计划做什么、什么时候做、和谁一起做、为什么想做。常用句型：*Iusually/often/sometimes...(dosth.)at...(time).*Inthemorning/afternoon/evening,I...*OnMondays/Sundays/weekends,I...*First,I...Then,I...Afterthat,I...Finally,I...*Iamgoingto...(dosth.)+(time).*Iwill...(dosth.)with...(someone).*Iwantto...because...*Itisinteresting/relaxing/fun.范文1：我的一天(MyDay)Mydayisbusybuthappy.Iusuallygetupatsixthirtyinthemorning.ThenIwashmyfaceandbrushmyteeth.Ihavebreakfastatseveno'clock.Afterbreakfast,Igotoschoolatsevenforty.Schoolstartsateighto'clock.Ihavefourclassesinthemorning.Ihavelunchatschoolattwelveo'clock.Intheafternoon,Ihavetwoclasses.Schoolfinishesatfouro'clock.Afterschool,Igohome.Idomyhomeworkfirst.ThenIhelpmymomwithsomehousework.SometimesIplaybasketballwithmyfriendsinthepark.Ihavedinneratsixthirty.Afterdinner,IreadbooksorwatchTVforalittlewhile.Igotobedatnineo'clock.Thisismytypicalday.Ifeelhappyeveryday.写作小贴士：按时间顺序描述一天的活动，使用first,then,afterthat等词使条理更清晰。范文2：我的周末计划(MyWeekendPlan)OnSaturdaymorning,Iamgoingtodomyhomeworkfirst.Ithinkit'simportanttofinishmyhomeworkearly.Intheafternoon,Iplantogotothebookstorewithmybestfriend,Lily.Iwanttobuysomestorybooks.Ilikereadingstoriesverymuch.Intheevening,myfamilyandIaregoingtovisitmygrandparents.Wewillhavedinnertogether.OnSundaymorning,Iamgoingtohelpmymomcleanthehouse.Then,Iamgoingtolearntoplaythepiano.Ilikemusic.Intheafternoon,Iamgoingtotheparktoflyakitewithmyfather.Flyingkitesisinteresting.Intheevening,IwillpreparemyschoolbagforMonday.IthinkIwillhaveabusybuthappyweekend.Iamlookingforwardtoit.写作小贴士：写计划时，用begoingto或will来表达将来的动作，说明计划的原因会让内容更充实。（四）看图写话题(WritingfromPictures)写作要点：仔细观察图片，看清图片中的人物、景物、动作、时间等信息。根据图片内容，合理组织语言，写出一段连贯的话。可以写图片上正在发生的事情，也可以写图片让你想到的事情。常用句型：*Lookatthepicture./Inthepicture,Icansee...*Thereis/are...(inthepicture).*Theyare(doingsth.)./He/Sheis(doingsth.).*Theylook(happy/excited).范文：看图写话(周末公园)（假设有一张图片：公园里，一些孩子在放风筝，一些老人在散步，有树有花，天气晴朗）Lookatthispicture.ItisasunnySundaymorning.Theparkisverybeautiful.Therearemanygreentreesandcolorfulflowers.Manypeopleareinthepark.Somechildrenareflyingkites.Thekitesareflyinghighinthesky.Theylookveryhappy.Overthere,someoldpeoplearewalkingslowly.Theyaretalkingandlaughing.Alittlegirlisplayingwithadognearthelake.Thedogisrunningafterabutterfly.Itisalovelydayinthepark.Everyoneisenjoyingthemselves.Ilikethispicturebecauseitshowsahappyweekend.写作小贴士：看图写话时，先总体描述图片场景，再具体描述人物活动，最后可以表达自己的感受。注意使用正确的时态，通常用现在进行时描述图片中正在发生的动作。写作要点：书信或邮件有特定的格式。包括称呼、正文、结束语、署名。正文内容根据写信目的而定，可以是介绍自己、询问情况、发出邀请、表达感谢等。常用格式与句型：*称呼(Salutation)：Dear[Name],/Hi[Name],(朋友间)*开头(Opening)：*Iamwritingtotellyouabout...*Howareyou?Ihopeyouarefine.*正文(Body)：根据具体内容展开，条理清晰。*结尾(Closing)：*Pleasewritetomesoon.*Ihopetohearfromyousoon.*Bestwishes./Yourssincerely,/Love,*署名(Signature)：[YourName]范文：给笔友的一封信(ALettertoaPenPal)DearAmy,Hi!MynameisLinTao.IamfromChina.Igotyournameandaddressfromapenpalwebsite.Iwanttobeyourpenpal.IamtwelveyearsoldandIaminGradeSix.IliveinBeijingwithmyparents.Myfatherisadoctorandmymotherisateach