专题03（课件）纯干货-惊险类读后续写精彩表达积累+专题训练-“勇者无惧”

纯干货——

“惊险类”读后续写精彩表达积累+专题训练

Learningobjectives:1.Trytoaccumulateusefulexpressionsabout“fright”and“nervousness”;2.Learntovividlyusetheexpressionsadventurousstory.本专题包括：第一部分：输入——夯实基础

（一）“恐惧”情感的精彩描写

（二）烘托“恐惧”氛围的环境描写（三）体现“恐惧”的动作描写第二部分：操练——熟能生巧

1.单句操练2.提升表达——一句多译第三部分：语篇输出——学以致用

输入Back1.惊慌失措

beseizedwithpanic2.充满了恐惧

beseizedbyfear

3.吓得半死

behalfdeadwithfear4.害怕地

inpanic5.恐惧地

interror6.感到害怕

fearcreepsoversb.7.从心底感到害怕

afloodoffearwellsupinsb.8.

不知所措

ataloss（一）“恐惧”情感的精彩描写Back1.惊慌失措

beseizedwithpanic2.充满了恐惧

beseizedbyfear

3.吓得半死

behalfdeadwithfear4.害怕地

inpanic5.恐惧地

interror6.感到害怕

fearcreepsoversb.7.从心底感到害怕

afloodoffearwellsupinsb.8.

不知所措

ataloss（一）“恐惧”情感的精彩描写1.astormynight(暴风雨之夜)2.beburiedinsnow(深埋在雪中)3.unbearablyhot(难以忍受的热)4.Thenightsettledin.(夜幕降临。)5.Thestormisatitsheight.(暴风刮的正猛。)6.Thereisanipintheair.(空气寒冷刺骨。)7.asmallvillageoffthemap(一个偏僻的小村子)8.thethinlypopulatedruralarea(人烟稀少的农村地区)

（二）烘托“恐惧”氛围的环境描写1.astormynight(暴风雨之夜)2.beburiedinsnow(深埋在雪中)3.unbearablyhot(难以忍受的热)4.Thenightsettledin.(夜幕降临。)5.Thestormisatitsheight.(暴风刮的正猛。)6.Thereisanipintheair.(空气寒冷刺骨。)7.asmallvillageoffthemap(一个偏僻的小村子)8.thethinlypopulatedruralarea(人烟稀少的农村地区)

（二）烘托“恐惧”氛围的环境描写1.心跳得厉害

heartbeatviolently

2.深吸一口气

takeadeepbreath3.有点惊讶

comeassomethingofasurprise4.吓得透不过气来

bechokedbyfear5.全身颤抖

tremblefromheadtotoe6.因害怕/恐惧而发抖

tremblewithfear/terror7.因为害怕而哽咽

chokewithfear8.脸色变白

faceturnspale9.一跃而起

jump/springtoone'sfeet10.挣扎着站起来

struggletoone'sfeet

（三）体现“恐惧”的动作描写1.心跳得厉害

heartbeatviolently

2.深吸一口气

takeadeepbreath3.有点惊讶

comeassomethingofasurprise4.吓得透不过气来

bechokedbyfear5.全身颤抖

tremblefromheadtotoe

6.因害怕/恐惧而发抖

tremblewithfear/terror7.因为害怕而哽咽

chokewithfear8.脸色变白

faceturnspale9.一跃而起

jump/springtoone'sfeet10.挣扎着站起来

struggletoone'sfeet

（三）体现“恐惧”的动作描写

句子操练Iturnedtohim,withhiseyesfulloffear.1.我转向他，眼里充满了恐惧。Myeyeswerewidewithhorror.2.我吓得睁大了眼睛。Myheartwasbeatinghard.3.我的心怦怦跳。Awaveofpanicflooded/sweptoverme.4.我感到恐慌袭来。5.我双膝发抖地走上楼梯。第二部分：1.单句操练Iwalkedupthestairswithmykneestrembling.

BackThesoundthrewmeintoapanic.6.那个声音使我害怕。Iwasoutofbreathwithfear.7.我吓得喘不过气来。Iwasfrightenedatthesightofthesnake.8.一看见那条蛇，我吓坏了。Theunexpectedandsuddenchangemademeataloss.9.突如其来的变故使我不知所措。10.我浑身发抖，感到坐立不安。Ishookallover,feelinglikesittingonpinsandneedles.

提升表达

Back（1）Atthesightofthesnake,thegirlfelt______.a.herchesttightenedwithfear.(她的胸口发紧)b.

herheartracedwildlyinherchest.(她的心脏狂跳)c.

acoldwentupherback.（她后背一阵寒意）2.一句多译——提升单句表达力

Back2）我完全被恐惧控制，寸步难行了。a.Aburstofhorrorseizedmetotally,andIwasunabletomoveaninch.b.Iwastotallyheldbyhorror,unabletomoveaninch.c.Overwhelmed/Heldcompletelybyhorror,Icouldhardlymoveaninch.2.一句多译——提升单句表达力

Back3）站在悬崖边上，

我害怕极了。a.Standingattheedgeofthecliff,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch.b.

Standingattheedgeofthecliff,Ifeltbutterfliesinmystomachandmykneesfeltweak.

c.Istoodattheedgeofthecliff

withmyheartinthroatandmypalmssweating.2.一句多译——提升单句表达力

语篇

输出

Back阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。(2021·湖北省七市(州)教科研协作体高三3月联考)Gradyandhisfamilygocampingeverysummer.Asitwasbecominghotter,herecamethecampingtime.Havingplannedthecamplong,thefamilyfinallydecidedthedestination—theGreatNationalForest.Withfood,necessityandcookersloadedontothecar,thefamilysqueezedintothecar.Thecardoorclosed,heatwasshutoutside.Inthecar,Jared,Grady'syoungerbrotherwasplayingwithatoydinosaur,makinggreatnoise.Grady'smothertalkedexcitedlywithhisfather.Onsettlinginthecar,Gradyputontheearphoneandturnedonthemusic.Heneitherwantedtojoinhisbrothernorjoinedanytalk.Afterwhatseemedtobehours,thecarstoppedwheretheyheaded.Gradythrewdownhisbackpackandslammedthecardoor.

Back“Thiswillbealengthyweek”hesaidunhappilytonooneinparticular.Helookedaroundthecampground.Hundredsoftallandgreenfirtrees,someastallaschurchtowers,coveredthemountainsidelikeagreencarpet.Thesunwouldbesettingsoon.Gradythoughtmaybetheheatwouldn'tbeunbearable.Butactuallynowinthemountain,thehotstickinessofJulywascloselyattachedtohim.Gradyhatedcamping,butitwassomethinghisfamilystucktoeverysummer.Hisfatherlikedcookingoveranopenair,tellingstoriesabouthowtosurvivethingslikebearattacksandbitesofbees.HismotherandJaredlikedtohikeandtakepicturesofanimals.Jaredhadacollectionofbugpicturesthathehadpinnedtothewallsinhishalfoftheirroom.GradythoughttheywerejustscaryandproofthatJaredwasastrangekid.Theysetupcamp—twotents,oneforhisparentsandoneforhimselfandJared.Whileeveryoneelsestartedpreparingdinner,Grady,lookingforsomeplacetocooldown,setoffforthenearbystream,whichwasdeepenoughtoswimin.

Back注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。AsGradygotclosetothestream,anadorablebearcubcaughthiseye.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Turningaround,hesawanangrybearmovingswiftlytowardshim.

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Back1.读懂材料

2.理清人物事件本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Grady(格雷迪)和他的家人每年夏天都去露营。经过长期的营地计划，这家人最终决定了目的地——大国家森林。Grady讨厌野营，帐篷搭好后，当其他人都开始准备晚餐时，Grady走向了附近的小溪。3．根据段落开头语，确定续写内容(1)由已给段首句可知，第一段描写Grady由于好奇靠近小熊。(2)由第二段首句“他转过身来，看见一只愤怒的熊迅速向他走

来。”可知，第二段可以描写Grady遇到了一只愤怒的大熊后

逃生的过程。学生原作

Back学生佳作赏析：AsGradygotclosetothestream,anadorablebearcubcaughthiseye.Itwasplayingprettyjoyfullyattheedgeofthestream.Soabsorbedwasthebearcubinplayingthatitdidn’tnoticethatsomeonewasapproaching.Drivenbycuriosity,Gradywalkedontiptoe,movingclosertohavealookatit.Suddenlyheheardasoundbehindhim.Turningaround,hesawanangrybearmovingswiftlytowardshim.Shockedanddumb,Gradywasrootedontothegroundforseconds,andthendashedtotheircampdesperately,shoutingforhelpinthemeantime.Atthescene,Grady’smotherfeltallherbloodfroze,tooscaredtoshoutout.Fortunately,Grady'sfatherwhoheardtheshoutintimesprangtohisfeetanddashedtocometohisrescue.Totheirrelief,realizingthedangerwasaway,thef