Unit 1 The Changing World（写作提升）（解析版）

PAGEUnit1TheChangingWorld.(写作提升）如何介绍变化的世界⭐典例导引⭐⭐典例导引⭐本单元的话题是“变化的世界”，写作时应围绕着对比人或事物的过去与现在展开。文章通常采用“总一分一总”的结构，开头总领全文，点明人和事物发生了巨大变化；中间部分可从生活环境、交通方式、日常生活等角度分层展开，通过今昔对照凸显变化的具体方面；结尾则结合自己的情况，阐述能采取的行动，或表达对未来的美好展望。描写过去的状态与事件时使用一般过去时，描写当下的情况或过去变化对现在产生的影响时，用一般现在时或现在完成时。人称以第一、三人称为主。[教材典句]①Nowgreatchangeshavetakenplace.②Theroadusedtobenarrowanddirty.③Thismadeitdifficultforlocalstobringproductstothemarketortodevelopindustry.④Thereusedtobesandstormsallthetime,andthefieldsweregettingsmallerandsmaller.⭐典例剖析⭐⭐典例剖析⭐家乡是我们成长的地方，承载着美好的回忆，也见证着时代的变迁。近年来，随着社会的不断发展，你的家乡在生活环境、交通设施以及人们的生活方式等方面发生了哪些变化呢？现在，某英文杂志社正在举办题为GreatChangesinMyHometown的征文活动，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你家乡的变化，并谈谈你的感受。要求：1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80；2.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁。GreatChangesinMyHometown_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________⭐思维导图⭐⭐思维导图⭐GreatChangesinMyHometown开头：总述家乡发生了巨大变化Overthelast...years,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown./Inthepast...years,myhometownhaschangedalot.中间：从三个方面描述变化Firstly,thelivingenvironment...Inthepast,therewas/were...Now,thereis/are...Secondly,thetransportation...Theroadsusedto...Now...streetlightsmakeit...todo...Thehigh-speedrailwayhasmade...Thirdly,people'sdailylives...结尾：总结感受，展望未来。I'mamazedby...It'samazing...Ibelieve/hope...⭐范文介绍⭐⭐范文介绍⭐GreatChangesinMyHometownOverthelastfewyears,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Firstly,thelivingenvironmenthasimprovedgreatly.Inthepast,therewerefewtreesandflowers.Nowtherearemoreparksandgreenplantsinthecity.Secondly,thetransportationhasalsoimproved.Theroadsusedtobenarrowanddirty.Nowtheyhavebecomewider,andnewstreetlightsmakeitsafertowalkatnight.Thehigh-speedrailwayhasmadetravelingfasterandeasier.Thirdly,people'sdailyliveshavechangedwiththedevelopmentoftechnology.Evenmygrandmother,whodidn'tknowmuchaboutphones,cannowmakevideocallsandshoponline.I'mamazedbythechangesinmyhometown.Ibelieveitwillbecomebetterandbetterinthefuture.[亮点点评]①开篇用.greatchangeshavetakenplace,点明家乡发生了大变化。②用Firstly,Secondly和Thirdly条理清晰地描述了家乡在三个方面的变化。③用usedtobe..结构描述道路过去的状况。④用“makeit+形容词+todosth”结构描述新装的路灯的作用。⑤用betterandbetter生动表达对家乡未来的美好期望。⭐素材宝库⭐⭐素材宝库⭐词汇积累词汇积累词汇积累changev.&n.改变；变化developv.发展；成长improvev.改善；提升modernadj.现代的traditionaladj.传统的convenientadj.便利的differentadj.不同的rapidadj.迅速的societyn.社会lifen.生活technologyn.科技communicationn.交流transportationn.交通lifestylen.生活方式progressn.进步hometownn.家乡onlineadj.线上的crowdedadj.拥挤的comfortableadj.舒适的amazingadj.令人惊叹的短语积累①inthepast在过去②atpresent目前；现在③yearsago多年前④takeplace发生⑤greatchanges巨大变化⑥liveabetterlife过上更好生活⑦keepupwith跟上⑧withthedevelopmentof随着……的发展⑨usedtodo过去常常做⑩nowadays如今；现今⑪becomemoreandmore变得越来越……⑫convenientandfast便捷又快速⑬wayoflife生活方式⑭makeprogress取得进步⑮bringmuchconvenience带来许多便利句型积累句型积累开头句Greatchangeshavetakenplaceintheworldaroundus.我们身边的世界发生了巨大变化。Ourworldischangingfasterthaneverbefore.我们的世界变化比以往任何时候都快。Ifwecomparethepastwiththepresent,wecanseemanydifferences.对比过去和现在，我们能发现诸多不同。Timesarechangingandourlifehaschangedalot.时代在变迁，我们的生活也改变了许多。Withtimegoingby,theworldhaschangedgreatly.随着时光流逝，世界发生了巨变。中间句Peopleusedtogooutonfootorbybike.人们过去出门靠步行或骑自行车。Nowmorepeoplechoosecarsandhigh-speedtrainstotravel.如今更多人选择汽车和高铁出行。Inthepast,peoplecommunicatedbyletters.过去人们靠书信交流。Nowadayswechatonlineanytimeandanywhere.如今我们可以随时随地线上聊天。Lifewassimplebuthardmanyyearsago.多年前生活简单却很艰苦。Atpresent,ourlifeismuchmorecomfortableandconvenient.现在我们的生活舒适便捷得多。Technologymakesourdailylifemucheasier.科技让我们的日常生活变得轻松许多。Ourhometownlooksquitedifferentfromwhatitwasbefore.我们的家乡和过去模样大不相同。People’slifestylehaschangedcompletelyovertheyears.这些年人们的生活方式彻底改变了。Therapiddevelopmentbringsusbothadvantagesandnewchallenges.快速发展既带来好处也带来新挑战。结尾句I’mproudofthegreatchangesinourworld.我为世界的巨大变化感到自豪。Ibelieveourworldwillbecomeevenbetterinthefuture.我相信未来世界会变得更加美好。Weshouldacceptchangesandkeeplearningallthetime.我们应接纳变化，坚持终身学习。Changesmakeourlifecolorfulandmeaningful.变化让我们的生活丰富多彩、富有意义。Astheworldchanges,wealsoneedtoimproveourselves.世界在变，我们也要不断提升自我。谚语名句谚语名句Timechangesallthings.时光改变一切。Theworldisalwayschanging.世界永远在变化。Progresscomesfromchange.进步源于改变。Neverstopchangingandimproving.永不停下改变与进步的脚步。Changeistheonlyconstantinlife.变化是人生唯一不变的事。⭐专项训练⭐⭐专项训练⭐1．（2026·湖北孝感·二模）假设你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将开展以“ChangesinMyHometown”为主题的演讲比赛，请根据下图写一篇英文演讲稿。要求：文中不得透露个人真实信息；可适当发挥；词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。ChangesinMyHometownChangeshavegreatlytakenplaceinmyhometowninrecentyears.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ChangesinMyHometownChangeshavegreatlytakenplaceinmyhometowninrecentyears.First,theenvironmenthasbecomemuchbetter.Streetsarewideandcleanwithmanytreesandflowersonbothsides.Tallbuildingsandnewcommunitieshaveappeared.Peopleenjoywalkingintheparksafterdinner.Second,people’slifehasimprovedalot.Morefamilieshavetheirowncars,sotravellingiseasierthanbefore.Somefamiliesevendrivetovisitothercitiesonweekends.Ifeelproudofthesechanges.Ihopemyhometownwillbecomemorebeautifulinthefuture.Let’sworktogethertomakeitbetter.【详解】写作步骤[第一步：审题立意]确定文体：讲稿（家乡变化介绍），用现在完成时和一般现在时明确要点：环境变化（街道宽阔干净、绿化、高楼社区）、人们生活变化（更多家庭拥有私家车）确定人称：第一人称（I）和第一人称复数（we）注意事项：需包含所有要点，开头已给出，词数80左右，注意演讲稿的正式性和号召力[第二步：构思布局]四段式结构：第一段：已给出，总述家乡近年发生巨大变化第二段：环境变化（街道宽阔干净、两边有树有花、高楼新社区出现、饭后在公园散步）第三段：人们生活变化（更多家庭拥有私家车、出行更方便、周末自驾去其他城市）第四段：表达感受（为变化感到骄傲）、期望（希望家乡更美丽）并呼吁行动[第三步：要点展开]要点一：环境变化变化一：streetsarewideandcleanwithmanytreesandflowersonbothsides/roadshavebecomewiderandcleaner等要点二：人们生活变化变化一：morefamilieshavetheirowncars/moreandmorefamiliesowncars/anincreasingnumberoffamilieshavecars等要点三：感受与期望感受表达：feelproudofthesechanges/proudofmyhometown等期望表达：hopemyhometownwillbecomemorebeautiful/becomebetterandbetter等呼吁表达：worktogethertomakeitbetter/buildabetterhometowntogether等2．（2026·贵州黔南·一模）马年春晚一首《来晒秋》不仅唱出了劳动人民的希望与梦想，更唱出了乡村振兴的发展与成果。假如你是李华，你校英语报社正在举行题为“TheChangesinMyHometown”的征文活动。请根据以下思维导图，积极投稿。要求：1.短文需包含思维导图中的所有内容，可适当发挥；2.内容积极向上，不少于80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。TheChangesinMyHometownInrecentyears,myhometownhasgreatchanges.Nowletmesharesomewithyou.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】TheChangesinMyHometownInrecentyears,myhometownhashadgreatchanges.Nowletmesharesomewithyou.Theenvironmenthaschangedalot.Thehousesarenewerandbrighter,andtheroadsarewideandcleanwithbeautifulflowersonbothsides.Asforpeople,theyliveahappierlife.Theyaremoreconfidentandkind.Ourfarmproductsarerichandsellwellonline,bringingmoremoneytous.Iamproudofthesechanges.Ilovemyhometownandhopeitwillbecomemoreandmorebeautifulinthefuture.【详解】写作步骤[第一步：审题立意］确定文体：记叙文，以一般现在时和现在完成时为主明确要点：人们的变化、房屋道路的变化、农产品变化、个人感受确定人称：第一人称（李华）注意事项：不得透露真实人名和校名，内容积极向上[第二步：构思布局]三段式结构：开头段：总起句，引出家乡变化（已给出）主体段：分点描述人们、房屋道路、农产品的具体变化结尾段：表达感受与展望，升华主题[第三步：要点展开]要点一：people变化描述：happier/moreconfident/kinder/morehardworking/moreunited等具体表现：wearnicerclothes/smilemoreoften/helpeachother/worktogether/liveabetterlife等要点二：houses,roads房屋变化：newer/brighter/taller/morebeautiful/modern等道路变化：wider/cleaner/smoother/linedwithtrees/withstreetlights等位置/环境描述：onbothsidesoftheroad/infrontofhouses/aroundthevillage等要点三：farmproducts产品种类：rice/fruits/vegetables/tea/honey/flowers等销售方式：sellwellonline/shippedtobigcities/soldinsupermarkets/exportedabroad等带来好处：bringmoremoney/improvelivingstandards/makefarmersproud等要点四：yourfeelings感受词汇：proud/happy/excited/hopeful/thankful/amazed等3．（25-26九年级上·广西河池·期末）近年来，随着国家乡村振兴政策的实施，中国许多乡村发生了巨大的变化。请根据你的观察和了解，以“ChangesinMyHometown”为题，写一篇90词左右的短文，描述你家乡的变化。内容包括：1.至少写出主要的三点变化；2.简单说说变化的主要原因；3.对于这些变化，谈谈你的个人感受。要求：1.短文须包含所有提示的信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息；3.词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。ChangesinMyHometownMyhometownhaschangedalotinrecentyears.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ChangesinMyHometownMyhometownhaschangedalotinrecentyears.Firstly,theroadswereverynarrowanddirtyinthepast.Butnowtheyarewiderandcleaner.Secondly,thehousesusedtobeoldandlow.Butnowmanytallbuildingshavebeenbuiltinmyhometown.Thirdly,theenvironmenthasimprovedgreatly.Manygreentreesandbeautifulflowerswereplantedeverywhere.ThankstothesupportofthePartyandthehelpofthegovernment,peopleinmyhometownareleadingahappylife.IamverygladtoseethesegreatchangesandI’mgoingtostudyhardtotrytomakemyhometownevenmorebeautiful.【详解】写作步骤[第一步：审题立意]确定文体：记叙文，以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，围绕家乡的变化展开描述明确要点：写出至少三点主要变化，说明变化原因，表达个人感受确定人称：第一人称注意事项：语言流畅，书写规范，不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，词数90词左右[第二步：构思布局]三段式结构开头段：承接给定开头，点明家乡近年发生了巨大变化主体段：分点描述家乡的三点主要变化，包括道路、住房、环境结尾段：说明变化的主要原因，即党和政府的支持；表达个人对家乡变化的感受，以及未来建设家乡的决心[第三步：要点展开]要点一：家乡的三点主要变化道路变化：theroadswereverynarrowanddirtyinthepast/widerandcleanerasphaltroads住房变化：thehousesusedtobeoldandlow/brightandtallresidentialbuildings环境变化：rubbisheverywhereandpoorgreening/lushgreentreesandcolorfulflowers交通变化：onlyslowbicyclesandwalking/convenientsharedbikesandnewbuses生活变化：hardandsimplelife/richandcomfortablelife要点二：变化的主要原因核心原因：thesupportoftheParty/thehelpofthegovernment政策背景：ruralrevitalizationpolicy/nationaldevelopmentstrategy要点三：个人感受与未来打算个人感受：veryglad/proud/deeplymovedandexcited未来打算：studyhard/makehometownmorebeautifulandprosperous4．（23-24九年级上·内蒙古兴安·期末）某英文报举办以“我家乡的变化”为主题的征文活动。请你根据下表提示，以TheChangesinMyHometown为题写一篇短文。词数80个左右。过去1.生活贫困，房屋破旧；2.污染严重，垃圾遍地；3.交通不便，游客很少。现在1.生活：住房宽敞、明亮；许多人有自己的汽车；2.环境：山更绿，水更清，天更蓝……；3.旅游：每年有成千上万来自世界各地的游客。将来请你展望家乡的未来要求:1.文中不得出现具体的地名，否则扣分；2.标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。TheChangesinMyHometownInthepast,myhometownwasverysmall.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】TheChangesinMyHometownInthepast,myhometownwasverysmall.Peoplehadapoorlifeandlivedinoldsmallhouses.Pollutionwasseriouswithrubbisheverywhere.Thetrafficwasinconvenient,soonlyafewvisitorscamehere.Nowgreatchangeshavetakenplace.Theenvironmentbecomesmuchmorebeautiful,withgreenermountains,clearerriversandbluersky.Trees,flowersandgrasscanbeseeneverywhere.Peopleliveinlargebrighthousesandmanyhaveprivatecars.Thousandsofvisitorsaroundtheworldcomeeveryyear.Ibelievemyhometownwillbecomebetterandbetter.【详解】写作步骤：[第一步：审题立意]确定文体：说明文，介绍家乡变化，以一般过去时、现在完成时、一般现在时、一般将来时为主明确要点：从过去、现在、将来三个维度，围绕生活、环境、交通旅游的变化展开写作确定人称：第一人称注意事项：不得出现真实地名，词数80词左右，标题和开头不计入总词数[第二步：构思布局]三段式结构：开头段：已给出，引出家乡过去的面貌主体段：详细对比家乡过去的落后状态与现在的巨大变化结尾段：展望家乡的未来发展[第三步：要点展开]要点：家乡变化过去：verysmallhometown/poorlife/oldandsmallhouses/seriouspollution/rubbisheverywhere/inconvenienttraffic/fewvisitors现在：greatchanges/morebeautifulenvironment/greenermountains/clearerrivers/bluersky/treesflowersandgrasseverywhere/betterlife/largeandbrighthouses/owncars/thousandsofvisitorsfromallovertheworld将来：becomebetterandbetterinthefuture5．（25-26九年级上·山东泰安·期末）自从2021年我国全面建成小康社会以来，我们的家乡在环境、设施、生活和人们的精神面貌上发生了许多美好的变化。请以“ChangesinMyHometown”为题，根据以下提示和要求，用英语写一篇短文。环境变化干净宽阔的道路、漂亮的公园出现在各处，到处是绿树鲜花生活设施建成现代化的超市、医院……生活方便居住条件住进了新房，街道夜晚明亮文化活动去图书馆、各种俱乐部人们状态生活更富裕，笑容更多，乐于助人提示词：方便的convenient要求：1、80-100词左右；2、语法正确，要点齐全；可适当发挥，语意连贯；3、不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。ChangesinMyHometown______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ChangesinMyHometownSince2021,myhometownhaschangedalot.First,theenvironmentisbetter.Therearecleanwideroadsandbeautifulparkswithgreentreesandflowerseverywhere.Second,lifefacilitieshaveimproved.Modernsupermarketsandhospitalsmakeourlifemoreconvenient.Third,peoplenowliveinnewhousesandstreetsarebrightatnight.Besides,wehavemoreculturalactivitieslikegoingtolibrariesandclubs.Finally,peoplearericherandhappier.Theysmilemoreandarealwaysreadytohelpothers.Ilovemyhometownandfeelproudofthesechanges.【详解】［总体分析］①题材：材料作文（家乡变化）；②时态：一般现在时为主，部分用现在完成时；③提示：需涵盖环境、设施、居住、文化、人们状态五方面变化，适当发挥。［写作步骤］第一步：总述变化，引出主题；第二步：按提示分点描述变化（环境→设施→居住→文化→人们状态）；第三步：总结感受。［亮点词汇］①environment环境②facilities设施③convenient方便的［高分句型］①Therearecleanwideroadsandbeautifulparkswithgreentreesandflowerseverywhere.（运用with复合结构作后置定语）②Modernsupermarketsandhospitalsmakeourlifemoreconvenient.（运用make+宾语+形容词补语结构）③Theysmilemoreandarealwaysreadytohelpothers.（运用并列谓语结构）6．（25-26九年级上·福建泉州·期末）作为“晋江经验”发源地——晋江的市民，我们为家乡的蓬勃发展深感自豪。假设你是李华，你的外国好友Judy对晋江很感兴趣，请根据以下信息写一封信给他，介绍家乡的变迁。词数80左右。Basicinformation♥Location:inthesoutheastof…♥History:over1000years♥Population:morethan2.09millionPast♥Cleanrivers,greenmountains♥Apoorlife,narrowroadsNow♥Progress:booming(蓬勃发展的)shoeindustry,morejobs♥Transportation:sharedbikes,cars♥Problemsandsolutions(解决):…Feelings…注意事项：1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。DearJudy,Howiseverythinggoing?I’mpleasedtoknowthatyouareinterestedinJinjiang.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJudy,

Howiseverythinggoing?I'mpleasedtoknowthatyouareinterestedinJinjiang.JinjiangliesinthesoutheastofFujian.Ithasahistoryofover1,000yearsandapopulationofmorethan2.09million.Inthepast,ithadcleanriversandgreenmountains,butpeoplelivedapoorlifeandroadswerenarrow.Now,itsshoeindustryisbooming,creatingmorejobs.Transportationhasimprovedwithsharedbikesandcarseverywhere.However,pollutionhascomealong,sowe’replantingmoretreestoprotecttheenvironment.I’mproudofitsprogressandlovemyhometowndeeply.

Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：电子邮件；②时态：一般现在时（介绍晋江的现状、地理位置、人口等）、一般过去时（描述晋江过去的情况）；③提示：李华给朱迪回信，因对方对晋江感兴趣而介绍这座城市——位于福建东南部，有1000多年历史，人口超209万；过去有青山绿水，但人们生活贫困、道路狭窄；现在制鞋业繁荣带来更多工作，交通改善（共享单车和汽车随处可见），但存在污染问题，因此在多种树保护环境，为家乡的进步自豪且深爱家乡。[写作步骤]第一步：问候对方，表明因对方对晋江感兴趣而进行介绍；第二步：介绍晋江的地理位置、历史、人口，对比过去与现在的状况（环境、生活、产业、交通及存在的问题和应对措施）；第三步：表达对家乡进步的自豪和热爱。

[亮点词汇]①liein位于②population人口③booming繁荣的④transportation交通⑤progress进步

[高分句型]①Inthepast,ithadcleanriversandgreenmountains,butpeoplelivedapoorlifeandroadswerenarrow.（用“but”转折对比过去晋江的自然环境与人们的生活、交通状况，信息全面且对比鲜明）②However,pollutionhascomealong,sowe’replantingmoretreestoprotecttheenvironment.（用“however”转折引出问题，“so”说明应对措施，逻辑清晰，体现对家乡发展的关注）7．（25-26九年级上·重庆永川·期末）蜕变从来都不是瞬间的奇迹，是无数次小改变堆成的惊喜。请以“MyChanges”为题，根据提示，结合自身经历写一篇英语短文，介绍你在外貌、性格等方面的变化和经历，并谈谈你的感受。要求：1.80—120词；2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考信息：_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 MyChangesTimeflies.IhavechangedgreatlysinceIbecameamiddleschoolstudent.Iusedtobeshortandveryshy.Iwasevenafraidofspeakinginfrontofmyclassmates.Butnow,Iamtallandmuchmoreoutgoing.Oneday,Itookpartinaschoolsingingcompetition.Atfirst,Iwasnervous,butmyteacherencouragedmeandtoldmetobelieveinmyself.Shealsohelpedmepracticecarefully.Thankstoherhelp,Ididwellinthecompetitionandwonaprize.Iammoreconfidentnowandabletofacenewchallenges.Ithinkthesechangesarevaluablegiftsformygrowth.Ishouldkeepworkinghardtobemybestselfinthefuture.【详解】写作步骤[第一步：审题立意]确定文体：介绍性记叙文，以一般过去时和一般现在时对比为主明确要点：外貌、性格、爱好的变化；促成变化的具体经历；个人感受与成长规划确定人称：第一人称(I/my)注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，词数控制在80-120词[第二步：构思布局]三段式结构：开头段：总起句，概括自身整体变化，引出过去与现在的对比主体段：详细描述参与活动的经历及他人的鼓励结尾段：抒发当下感受，总结变化带来的意义，提出后续的努力方向[第三步：要点展开]要点一：外貌与性格变化过去状态：short,shorthair,veryshy,afraidofspeakinginfrontofclassmates,quiet,timid,keepsilent,nervouseasily现在状态：tall,longhair,muchmoreoutgoing,makemanyfriends,active,confident,talkwithothersactively,getalongwellwithclassmates要点二：校园成长经历事件选择：tookpartinaschoolsingingcompetition,speechcontest,sportsmeeting,talentshow过程描写：nervous,teacherencouragedme,believeinmyself,helpedmepractice,gavemewarmadvice,practicedoverandoveragain,cheeredmeup结果收获：didwellinthecompetition,wonapriz,madegreatprogress,gainedalot,overcamefear

要点三：成长感悟与未来期许感悟表达：moreconfident,abletofacenewchallenges,valuablegifts,makemeabetterperson,learnalotfromexperience,growupgradually,becomebraver未来展望：keepworkinghard,trytobemybestself,sticktomygoals,facedifficultiesbravely,pursuemydreams8．（25-26九年级上·四川泸州·期中）时光飞逝，转眼间进入中学已经两年多了。随着时间的流逝，你的好朋友李华发生了一些变化，请你根据以下表格内容提示，写一篇英语文章来介绍一下她的变化。LiHua两年前现在体貌特征胖，长卷发瘦，短直发性格安静，害羞幽默，外向爱好玩电脑游戏，看电视打篮球，学英语生活方式常吃汉堡等垃圾食品吃蔬菜、水果等健康食品要点提示：灵活运用所学短语usedto要求：1.词数100词左右；2.短文需包含所有内容要点，可适当发挥，不要逐词翻译。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Timeflies,andit’sovertwoyearssinceweenteredmiddleschool.MygoodfriendLiHuahaschangedalot.Sheusedtobefatwithlongcurlyhair,butnowsheisthinandhasshortstraighthair.Sheusedtobequietandshy,butnowsheishumorousandoutgoing.Inthepast,sheenjoyedplayingcomputergamesandwatchingTV.Now,herhobbiesareplayingbasketballandlearningEnglish.Sheusedtoeatjunkfoodlikehamburgersoften,butnowsheprefershealthyfoodsuchasvegetablesandfruits.I’mgladtoseeherpositivechanges.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：一般过去时和一般现在时；③提示：围绕表格要点（体貌特征、性格、爱好、生活方式）展开，灵活运用usedto短语。[写作步骤]第一步：开头用1—2句话引入主题，说明时间流逝和李华的总体变化；第二步：详细描述四个方面的变化（体貌特征、性格、爱好、生活方式），使用usedto对比过去和现在；第三步：结尾用1句话表达感想或总结。[亮点词汇]①humorous幽默的②outgoing外向的③healthy健康的[高分句型]①Sheusedtobefatwithlongcurlyhair,butnowsheisthinandhasshortstraighthair.（运用了but连接的并列句）②Sheusedtoeatjunkfoodlikehamburgersoften,butnowsheprefershealthyfoodsuchasvegetablesandfruits.（运用了suchas举例）9．（25-26九年级上·山西临汾·期末）成长就像一场奇妙的旅行，我们每天都在悄悄地改变，不管是外貌、性格、习惯、处事方式还是内心想法等。改变的最大意义在于遇见更好的自己，让人生更加精彩。你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“AnUnforgettableChange”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在学习或者生活当中最难忘的一次改变及感受。内容包括：●describeyourunforgettablechange●talkaboutyourexperience●showyourfeelings要求：1.词数不少于80；2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AnUnforgettableChangeThemostunforgettablechangeformewasovercomingmyfearofspeakinginpublic.Iusedtobetooshytospeakupinclass.Lastterm,Ipushedmyselftojoinaschoolspeechcontest.Ipracticedmyspeechdayandnight,infrontofthemirrorandformyfamily.Onthecontestday,IwasnervousbutIdidit.MyvoicewasclearandIfinishedsmoothly.Thisexperiencechangedme.Ilearnedthattrue