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Ilivedinanoldapartmentcomplexwherethewallswerethin.Forweeks，mynewneighborupstairswaskeepingmeawakeeverynightbetweentenandmidnight.WhatIheardwasslow，forcefulfootstepsmixedwithcrying,asifsomeonewerepacingwiththeweightoftheworldonshoulders.Tocopewiththenoise，Iwouldsinkintotheoldrockingchair（摇椅）bythewindow.

Therhythmsomehowquietedmymind.Buttonight，thenoisewasjustunbearable.Ipostedinthebuilding'sgroupchat，“

Canthe3Cneighborkeepitdownafter10?

”

Almostimmediately，Lena，acashieratalocalmarket，replied，“Samehere.

Haven'tsleptwellforweeks.”

AndTom，whoranthesecondhandshoponthecorner，added，“

Don'ttheyrealizehowlouditis?

”

Afewothersresponded，but3Cneverdid.I'dhadenough.“

That'sit

”

Ithoughtaloud，pullingonmyslippers.“

I'mgoingupthere!

”

Istormedtothethirdfloor，playingmyangryspeech

inmyhead，“Keepitdown!Someofusneedtoworktomorrow!”

Themomentthedooropened，Iblurtedout（脱口面出），“Doyouhaveanyideahowmuchnoiseyou'remaking?”

Buttherestofmypreparedspeechgotstuckinmythroat.

Ayoungwomanstoodthere，eyesred，swaying（摇晃）gentlybackandforthinadesperateattempttocomfortacryingbaby.Theapartmentbehindherwashumble－nodiningtable，nochairs，notevenalamp，onlyamattress（床垫）andafewemptybabyfoodpacketsonthefloor.“

I'msosorry，Madam，”

shewhispered，managingaweaksmile，“I'mjusttryingtogethertosleep.”

Thatwaswhenmyangerdisappeared.AfamiliarrhythmsurfacedinmymindasIsawherswaythebabytiredly.

“Ihaveachairdownstairsthatmightcalmyourbaby，”Ismiledsoftly.

Shelookedup，eyeswideningindisbelief.

读懂无声守护，写好邻里温情Para1：“Letmefetchitforyou，”Isaidandrusheddownstairs.Para2:Theneighborsrespondedtomypostandagreedtogatherat3Cinstantly.plot1:Ifetchedtherockingchair.plot2:Thechairworked.Linkingsentence:Ipostedthewoman’sdifficultsituationinthegroupchatplot1:Theneighborsbroughtnecessities.plot2:ThewomanextendedthanksEnding:Baby’scryingwasreplacedbytherhythmofthechair.

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shecouldn’twaittounwraphergiftbox.Confusedasshewas,shestillunwrappedhergiftbox.

Astonishedandoverjoyed,thegirlunwrappedherdelicatelydecoratedgiftbox

whichshehadbeenlongingforwithgreatcaution,hereyessparklingwithexcitement.句子扩写Sentenceexpansion2.0Thegirl

unwrapped

hergiftbox.技巧1：分解动作holdbreath→untietheribbon→liftthelidgraspthebox→tearoffthepaper→pulloutreachfor→tearopen→takeout...

Thegirl

unwrapped

hergiftbox.技巧1：分解动作1.Thegirlreachedforthegiftbox,toreopenthewrappingpaper,andtookoutthelong-awaitedpresentinside.2.Holdingherbreath,thegirlcarefullyuntiedtheribbonontheboxandslowlyliftedthelidtoseewhatwasinside.v1+v2+v3doing,v1+v2v1+v2,doingThegirl

unwrapped

hergiftbox.技巧2：心理描写1.wondering/guessing/expecting/praying/feeling/imagining/doubting/picturing/realizing/hoping/assuming...2.emotions+consumed/overtook/seized/overwhelmed/sweptover/washedover/tookholdof....+sbThegirl

unwrapped

hergiftbox.技巧2：心理描写wonderingwhatwasinsideguessingwhohadsentthisspecialgiftexpectingabigsurpriseawaitingherprayingherwishwouldcometrue.feelingwarmthfloodingherheart.awaveofdelighttookholdofherafloodofthrillswellingupinsideherheartamixtureofexpectationandcuriosityovercameher...Thegirl

unwrapped

hergiftbox.技巧3：语言描写说：exclaim/whisper/murmur/declare/gasp/cheer/laugh/scream...自言自语：say/talk/think/murmur/whispertooneself/thinkaloud...Thegirl

unwrapped

hergiftbox.技巧4：环境烘托1.thesurroundings2.thepeoplenearbythesun/sunlight/breeze/wind/birds/flowerstheroom/thelight/thesmell..theirreactionsThegirl

unwrapped

hergiftbox.技巧4：环境烘托warmsunlightstreaming/shiningthroughthewindowtheroombathedingoldensunlightbirdssingingsweetlyoutsideagentlebreezeblowingsoftlycheerfullaughterechoing/lingeringinthewarmroomanticipationwrittenonlovedone’sfaceeagereyesfixedonher

句子扩写Sentenceexpansion2.0技巧1：分解动作技巧2：心理描写技巧3：语言描写技巧4：环境烘托Holdingherbreath,thegirlreachedforthegiftbox,carefullytoreopenthewrappingandtookoutthegift,wonderingwhatexactlywasinside.“ThisisArtie,”sheexclaimedinsurprise,hersmilelightingupthewarmroom.Withherhandstremblingsli