高中英语读后续写片段描写限时练11（解析版）

高中英语读后续写片段描写限时练11一、环境描写（渲染氛围）1.高分句式：The+自然景物+动词（ed/ing）,casting+光影/气息+over地点2.高分句式：Alight+感官形容词+自然现象+filledtheair,making地点+状态3.高分句式：As+时间/天气变化,地点+gradually+呈现的动态变化描写练习1：夕阳染红天空，在安静的校园长椅上投下长长的影子。英文翻译1：Thesettingsundyedtheskyred,___________________________________.描写练习2：一阵带着花香的微风弥漫在空气中，让整个花园都显得温柔起来。英文翻译2：__________________________________________,makingthewholegardenfeelgentle.描写练习3：随着夜幕降临，小镇的灯光渐渐亮起，像撒在黑布上的碎星。英文翻译3：________________________,thelightsofthesmalltowngraduallylitup,likebrokenstarsscatteredonablackcloth.答案：castinglongshadowsoverthequietcampusbenchAlightbreezewiththescentofflowersfilledtheairAsnightfellParagraph1Thesettingsundyedtheskyred,(1)__________________________________(在安静的校园长椅上投下长长的影子).Afewstudentswalkedslowlyalongthetree-linedpath,theirlaughterfadingintothesoftglowofdusk.(2)__________________________________(一阵带着花香的微风弥漫在空气中),makingthewholegardenfeelgentle.Somebirdschirpedtheirlastsongsbeforereturningtotheirnests,andthesoundofadistantbelladdedatouchoftranquilitytothispeacefulevening.答案：castinglongshadowsoverthequietcampusbenchAlightbreezewiththescentofflowersfilledtheairParagraph2(1)__________________________________(随着夜幕降临),thelightsofthesmalltowngraduallylitup,likebrokenstarsscatteredonablackcloth.Theoldstreetlampsflickeredsoftly,paintingwarmstreaksoflightonthewetpavementleftbytheafternoonrain.(2)__________________________________(一阵带着花香的微风弥漫在空气中),makingthewholegardenfeelgentle.Children’splayfulshoutsfromthesquaredieddown,andthetownslippedintoaquietslumber,wrappedinthecoolnessofthenight.答案：AsnightfellAlightbreezewiththescentofflowersfilledtheair二、动作刻画（凸显细节）1.高分句式：主语+核心动作+方式状语（with短语）,伴随动作（doing）2.高分句式：With+身体部位+状态,主语+连贯动作1+andthen+动作23.高分句式：主语+快速动作+,身体部位+反应（shaking/trembling）描写练习1：她握着妈妈的手慢慢走，泪水无声地从脸颊滑落。英文翻译1：Shewalkedslowlyholdinghermom’shand,_____________________________.描写练习2：手指紧紧攥着录取通知书，他深吸一口气，然后推开了家门。英文翻译2：_________________________________________,hetookadeepbreathandthenpushedopenthedoor.描写练习3：他冲过去抱住久别重逢的朋友，肩膀因激动而微微颤抖。英文翻译3：Herushedovertohughislong-lostfriend,_______________________________.答案：withtearsslidingsilentlydownhercheeksWithhisfingerstightlyclutchingtheadmissionletterhisshoulderstremblingslightlywithexcitement段落一：HomecomingHugTheairportarrivalshallbuzzedwiththechatterofreunions,butheonlyhadeyesforthefamiliarfigureattheendofthecorridor.Hepushedthroughthecrowd,(1)__________________________________(心跳得飞快，几乎听不到广播声).Herushedovertohughislong-lostfriend,(2)__________________________________(肩膀因激动而微微颤抖).Thefriendpattedhisbackgently,whispering"Imissedyou"inhisear,andforamoment,alltheyearsapartfeltliketheyhadneverpassed.Theystoodthereforawhile,(3)__________________________________(周围是大厅的嘈杂声),butintheirlittleworld,onlythewarmthofthehugandthequietjoyofseeingeachothermattered.答案：hisheartpoundingsoloudhecouldbarelyheartheannouncementshisshoulderstremblingslightlywithexcitementsurroundedbythenoiseofthehall段落二：TheAdmissionMomentAfterwaitingforweeks,thedayofthecollegeadmissionletterfinallycame.Hecheckedthemailboxthreetimesthatmorning,(1)__________________________________(每次打开时手心都在冒汗).Whenhefinallysawthethickenvelopewiththecollege’slogo,hefrozeforasecond,thengrabbeditandranbackhome.(2)__________________________________(手指紧紧攥着录取通知书),hetookadeepbreathandthenpushedopenthedoor.Hisparentslookedupfromthekitchen,andwhenhehelduptheletterwithabigsmile,(3)__________________________________(房间里瞬间充满了欢呼声)—allthelatenightsstudyingandanxiouswaitshadfinallypaidoff.答案：hishandssweatingeachtimeheopeneditWithhisfingerstightlyclutchingtheadmissionlettertheroomfilledwithcheers三、心理描写（传递情绪）1.高分句式：Asenseof+情绪名词+welledupin主语,makingsb.+心理引发的动作2.高分句式：主语+felt+情绪形容词+,asif+心理联想（虚拟语气）3.高分句式：Themoment+触发事件,主语+情绪反应（心跳/呼吸变化）描写练习1：一阵愧疚感在他心中涌起，让他忍不住向老师道歉。英文翻译1：______________________________,sohecouldn’thelpapologizingtotheteacher描写练习2：看到满分试卷时，她觉得无比开心，仿佛所有努力都有了回报。英文翻译2：Shefeltextremelyhappywhenseeingthefull-markpaper,________________________________.描写练习3：听到比赛获胜的消息那一刻，他的心跳瞬间加速，呼吸也变得急促。英文翻译3：___________________________________________,hisheartbeatfasterinstantlyandhisbreathingbecamerapid.答案：AsenseofguiltwelledupinhimasifallhereffortshadpaidoffThemomentheheardthenewsofwinningthecompetitionParagraph1LilyhadforgottentohelpherbestfriendEmmapreparefortheimportantspeechcontest.WhenshesawEmmastandingnervouslyonthestage,stutteringandstrugglingtofindtherightwords,(1)__________________________________(一阵愧疚感在她心中涌起),soshecouldn’thelpapologizingtotheteacher.Theteacherpattedhershouldergentlyandsaid,“It’sgoodthatyourealizeyourmistake.GocomfortEmmaafterthecontest—sheneedsherfriendrightnow.”Lilynodded,hereyesfixedonEmma,(2)__________________________________(希望比赛能快点结束)soshecouldmakeupforhercarelessness.答案：asenseofguiltwelledupinherhopingthecontestwouldendsoonParagraph2Tomhadbeenpracticingthepianoforthreemonthsstraightfortheschooltalentshow.(1)__________________________________(他紧张得几乎要放弃)onthemorningoftheshow.Butwhenhefinishedplayinghispieceandtheaudienceburstintoloudapplause,(2)_____________________________________________(听到主持人宣布他获得一等奖的那一刻),hisheartbeatfasterinstantlyandhisbreathingbecamerapid.Hewalkedontothestageagain,(3)__________________________________(紧紧握着奖杯),andsmiled—allthelate-nightpracticesessionshadfinallybeenworthit.答案：Hewassonervousthathealmostgaveupthemomentheheardthehostannouncehehadwonfirstprizeholdingthetrophytightly四、情节转折（推动故事）1.高分句式：Justas+主角状态/动作,突发情况（sb.didsth./sth.happened）2.高分句式：主语+hadjustdonesth.when+意外转折3.高分句式：Itwasnotuntil+时间/事件,that主语+发现/意识到（强调句）描写练习1：就在他要跨上公交车时，一个陌生阿姨喊住了他——他的书包落在了便利店。英文翻译1：_________________________________,astrangerauntstoppedhim—hehadlefthisschoolbagintheconveniencestore.描写练习2：她刚把做好的蛋糕放进烤箱，突然想起自己忘了加鸡蛋。英文翻译2：_____________________________________________shesuddenlyrememberedshehadforgottentoaddeggs.描写练习3：直到看到桌角的便签，他才意识到今天是妈妈的生日。英文翻译3：______________________________________________________herealizedtodaywashismom’sbirthday.答案：JustashewasabouttogetonthebusShehadjustputthemadecakeintotheovenwhenItwasnotuntilhesawthenoteonthecornerofthedeskthat段落一Tomhadbeenlookingforwardtotheschoolpicnicallweek.Hepackedhisfavoritesandwiches,abottleoforangejuice,andafrisbeeintohisschoolbag,thenhurriedtothebusstop.(1)__________________________________(就在他要跨上公交车时),astrangerauntstoppedhim—hehadlefthisschoolbagintheconveniencesto