2026-2027学年外研版英语九上 Unit 2 On the money 4.写作指导

如何写与合理使用金钱相关的文章

本单元以“金钱”为话题，主要围绕金钱的用途、与金钱相关的故事及明智支配金钱等内容展开。与其相关的写作通常涉及以下几个方面：①描述个人对压岁钱或零花钱的支配情况；②阐述对“正确金钱观”的理解；③给出合理使用金钱的建议；④写一个关于金钱的故事或为相关图书写一篇书评。典例

你是如何合理使用压岁钱的呢？某英语报社的微信公众号最近围绕此内容推出一期活动，以“我的压岁钱我做主”为主题向全市中学生征稿，请你写一篇英语短文投稿。

写作要点：

1.Do

you

manage

money?

2.What

do

you

do

with

your

lucky

money?

3.Your

advice

on

how

to

use

lucky

money

better.

要求：1.短文应包括所有写作要点，可适当发挥；2.文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3.词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。What

do

you

do

with

your

lucky

money？

As

middle

school

students,

it’s

important

for

us

to

learn

to

manage

money

and

spend

it

wisely.

___________________________________________________________审主题：合理使用压岁钱审人称：以第一人称为主审时态：一般现在时审要点：压岁钱的用途、合理支配压岁钱的建议写作框架词句积累词汇金钱用途lucky

money压岁钱

moneybox存钱罐

savings存款

bank

account银行账户school

supplies学习用品

daily

needs日常需求

donate

to

charities向慈善机构捐款self-improvement自我提升

spend...

on...把……花在……上

save

for

a

rainy

day未雨绸缪词汇消费建议manage

money

wisely明智地管理金钱

keep

a

record做记录allocate

lucky

money

properly合理分配压岁钱make

a

budget制订预算save

for

long-term

goals为长期目标存钱make

a

shopping

list列购物清单词汇消费建议develop

good

money-managing

habits养成良好的理财习惯make

a

wise

decision做出明智的决定句子开头句①As

teenagers,

we

should

learn

how

to

use

our

lucky

money

properly.作为青少年，我们应当学会如何合理使用自己的压岁钱。句子②It’s

important

for

us

to

learn

to

spend

money

wisely.对我们来说，学会理性消费很重要。中间句①We

should

divide

our

money

into

different

parts

for

daily

use,

hobbies

and

savings.我们应该把钱分成不同的部分，用于日常开销、爱好和储蓄。句子②We

are

supposed

to

save

some

money

for

sudden

needs

instead

of

spending

it

all.我们应该存一些钱以备不时之需，而非全部花光。③It’s

meaningful

to

donate

some

money

to

charities

to

help

people

in

need.捐一些钱给慈善机构来帮助有需要的人是很有意义的。句子④Don’t

spend

money

on

things

you

don’t

really

need.不要把钱花在你并不真正需要的东西上。结尾句①Let’s

start

by

developing

small

habits

of

wise

consumption—like

making

a

budget,

thinking

twice

before

buying,

and

focusing

on

practical

value.让我们从培养明智消费的小习惯开始——比如制订预算、购物前三思以及关注实用价值。句子②In

a

word,

we

should

spend

money

on

what

is

necessary

and

helpful

to

our

growth.总之，我们应该把钱花在必要且有益于成长的事情上。_________A

penny

saved

is

a

penny

earned.省一分钱等于挣一分钱。_________Put

your

hand

no

further

than

your

sleeve

will

reach.量入为出。佳作展示

What

do

you

do

with

your

lucky

money？

As

middle

school

students,

it’s

important

for

us

to

learn

to

manage

money

and

spend

it

wisely.

I

do

manage

my

lucky

money

well.

①When

I

receive

my

lucky

money

each

year,

I

divide

it

into

three

教材原句When

the

tins

are

ready,

put

all

your

money

into

them.（教材P20）parts.

②I

spend

some

on

daily

needs

such

as

textbooks

and

school

supplies,

some

on

my

hobbies

like

collecting

science

magazines,

and

I

save

the

rest.

③I

also

keep

some

money

to

donate

to

animal

shelters,

as

I

care

about

homeless

pets.Here

are

some

tips

on

using

lucky

money

properly.

First,

make

a

budget

before

spending.

Second,

save

apart

regularly

for

sudden

needs.

④Finally,the

more

we

spend

on

self-improvement,

the

morewe

can

grow.

⑤By

doing

so,

we

can

form

good

money-managing

habits.教材原句Because

the

more

we

get,

the

more

we

spend.（教材P20）名师点评

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