2026-2027学年外研版英语九上 Unit 1 Teenagers today 4.写作指导

如何写与模范青少年相关的文章

本单元以“当代青少年”为话题，主要围绕青少年应有的品质、职责担当和在国家发展中的作用等方面展开。与其相关的写作通常涉及以下几个方面：

1.介绍一个青少年模范人物。

2.介绍一部关于青少年的作品。

3.阐述自己作为青少年应担当的使命。

写作时，人称多用第三人称和第一人称，时态以一般过去时、一般现在时为主。结构多为“总—分—总”：开头引出话题，中间部分具体介绍/阐述，最后进行总结。典例

为了树立榜样，创建优良的校风，你校英语俱乐部近日开展主题为“A

role

model

around

me”的英语演讲大赛，写一篇演讲稿介绍你心目中的“模范少年”（Role

Model）全红婵。要求：（1）须包含提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥，条理清晰；（2）词数：不少于80（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。参考词汇：中国跳水运动员

Chinese

diver

奥运会

Olympic

Games冠军

champion

金牌

gold

medal

世界纪录

world

record

Hello

everyone!

Today,

I’m

glad

to

introduce

my

role

model

to

you.

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________审人称：以第三人称为主审时态：以一般过去时和一般现在时为主审要点：全红婵的基本信息、个人经历、获得的成就以及对她的看法审主题：介绍模范少年全红婵审体裁：应用文（演讲稿）写作框架词句积累词汇基本情况be

born

into

出生于

birthplace/hometown出生地/家乡 at

the

age

of

在……岁时teenage

player少年选手

Chinese

diver

中国跳水运动员词汇经历和成就start

diving

training

开始跳水训练

join

the

national

team

加入国家队take

part

in

various

competitions参加各种比赛overcome

difficulties

克服困难keep

on

practising

坚持训练

shoulder

the

responsibility

for...

承担……责任词汇经历和成就win

many

gold

medals

获得许多金牌break

a

record

打破纪录品质responsible

有责任心的

confident

自信的strong-willed

意志坚强的positive

积极的never

give

up

从不放弃

spare

no

effort

全力以赴句子开头句①I’m

glad

to

introduce

my

role

model

to

you.我很高兴向你们介绍我的榜样。②I’d

like

to

recommend...as

a

role

model.

我想推荐……作为榜样。句子中间句①She

was

born

into

a

poor

family

in

Zhanjiang

on

28

March

2007.

她于2007年3月28日出生于湛江的一个贫穷家庭。②She

began/started

to

receive

diving

training

in

2014

at

Zhanjiang

Sports

School.

2014年，她在湛江市体育运动学校开始接受跳水训练。句子③She

joined

the

national

team

in

2020.

2020年她加入了国家队。④She

has

won

many

gold

medals

in

various

competitions,

such

as

the

19th

Asian

Games

in

Hangzhou...她在各种比赛中赢得了许多金牌，例如在杭州举办的第19届亚运会……句子⑤She

shoulders

the

responsibility

for...她肩负着……的责任。结尾句①I

believe

we

can

all

learn

a

lot

from...我相信我们都能从……身上学到很多。②She

sets

a

good

example

for

us...

她为我们树立了好榜样……佳作展示

Hello

everyone!

Today,

I’m

glad

to

introduce

my

role

model

to

you.

Her

name

is

Quan

Hongchan.

She

is

a

Chinese

diver.

①She

was

born

into

a

poor

family

in

Zhanjiang

on

28

March

2007.

She

began

to

receive

diving

training

in

教材原句

I

was

born

into

a

family

of

Minnan

puppet

performers.（教材P4）2014

at

Zhanjiang

Sports

School.

②Since

she

joined

the

national

team

in

2020,

she

has

won

many

gold

medals

in

various

competitions,

such

as

the

19th

Asian

Games

in

Hangzhou,

the

32nd

Olympic

Games

in

Tokyo

and

the

33rd

Olympic

Games

in

Paris.

③It

is

her

hard

training

and

strong

will

that

make

her

so

excellent.

④She

shoulders

the

responsibility

for

carrying

out

our

country’s

sports

honour.⑤I

believe

we

can

all

learn

a

lot

from

her.

I

will

never

give

up

when

I

meet

difficulties

in

my

life.

And

I

should

achieve

my

goals

through

hard

work.教材原句...he

called

on

young

people

to

shoulder

the

responsibility

and

take

action

to

make

China

strong

and

energetic.（教材P12）名师点评

本文按照题目要求，介绍了自己心中的模范少年全红婵，条理清晰，要点齐全。①用be

born

in